大学英语四级考试作文评分原则
四级作文的分数是怎样得的？
一、作文最低分的规定
（1）根据学生目前的作文分均值，将作文的最低分定为6分；
（2）作文分为0分，总分若高于60分，最后报导一律按59分不及格处理；若低于60分则报导时一律再减6分；
（3）作文分大于0分，小于6分，则按下面的公式计算成绩：
最后报导分=原计算总分-6分+实得作文分
例1：原计算总分为63分，实得作文分为2分，最后报导分=63-6+2=59分。
例2：原计算总分为80分，实得作文分为4分，最后报导分=80-6+4=78分。
二、评分原则
1.大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。
2.大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而贴切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
三、评分标准
1.短文写作部分满分为15分。
2.阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。
3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)，但不得加或减半分。
给分档：
14分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。11分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
四、作文点评
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……
上面是最新的2003年9月份的四级作文,我们通过对一篇范文的点评,来加强大家对上述四级作文特点及应对策略的认识。括号内为笔者的点评。
Model Answer:
The Day My Classmates Fell Ill (or Got Injured)
During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003,one of my classmates, Li Ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.
(第一段，开篇点题，同学是如何生病的)
The news spread quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too，However. through our government’s publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try our best to help her.
Some teachers provided daily necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li Ming could not be left behind .With our care and concern, Li Ming recovered quickly.
(第三段，详细叙述同学、老师是怎样帮助生病的同学的，条理清晰句式丰富)
Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, worm and peaceful, in which people —from man to woman, from individual to individual—lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes,“the world will turn into heaven only if everyone contributes a little”.And I do believe that it’s my great honor to live in this love—filled paradise!
(第三段，结尾叙述人与人之间的这种相互关爱关系给“我”的感受，引用歌词，很有说服力)
总的说来，本文切题，论证丰富生动，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。打分：14分。
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Nowadays，there are more and more XX in some big cities．It is estimated that (1). Why have there been so many XX? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows．The first one is that (2)．Besides，(3)．The third reason is (4)．To sum up，the main cause of XX is due to (5)． It is high time that something were done upon it．For one thing, (6)．On the other hand, (7)．All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX. 注释:l (1) 用具体数据说明XX现象I (2) 原因一 (3) 原因二 (4) 原因三 (5) 指出主要原因 (6) 解决建议一 (7) 解决建议二
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2006年6月四级作文题目 1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师 2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素 3. 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题 On Students Selecting Lectures At present, as educational reform finds its way into campuses, some universities and colleges begin to permit students to select their lecturers freely. Students base their selection on a great variety of factors. For some, the first thing they bear in mind is if the professor excels at his or her field and conveys his or her idea with humor and passion, etc. For others, the crucial factor is that if the teacher is mild in grading their essays or papers. The strengths of selecting your favorite teacher on a free market are that the best teachers potential could be fully made use of and students could find more enjoyment in their study. The weakness, however, is that teachers who hand out higher marks maybe popular with some students, which will definitely have negative impacts. 2006年12月题 许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会；2、但有的人认为应该取消；3、你的看法It has been a hot topic for a long time whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not. Many people advocate that CCTV Spring Festival Gala offers a wonderful opportunity to celebrate this traditional festival, for the Chinese all over the world can share the same happiness and excitement brought by the TV program. In addition, many performances are very impressive, and some can even positively affect our life value. However, every coin has two sides. Some people hold that CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled. One of the most significant reasons may be that this form of celebration force people to spend the eve more passively. What’s more, a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough. As to me, my favor goes to the former opinion, because spring CCTV Spring Festival Gala gives us another option to celebrate this important moment. But it is really essential to improve the quality of the programs. And I hope some better forms of celebration will be created in the near future. 2007年6月题 申请加入一个社团An announcement to welcome students to join to a club 1、本社团的主要活动内容 2、参加本社团的好处 3、如何加入本社团 Welcome to our club Welcome to English Club! It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills. You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions and watching Oscar-winning movies. These extra-curricular activities could offer you ample opportunities. First, your active participation is helpful to strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations. Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English. A good command of English empowers you to enjoy decided competitive edge over your peers.