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英语书面表达之建议信ppt课件
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which
means 10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语: for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example 11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语: instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; similarly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner
B.
表达建议（body） 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．
写作要点： 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目
高中英语作文 如何写建议信课件
article.
Avoid aggressive language
Avoid using aggressive or negative language to avoid unnecessary conflicts
or misunderstandings. Maintain a calm and objective attitude, with the goal of
Specific
Provide specific examples or details to illustrate your suggestion
Ending
1 2
Conclusion Summarize your suggestion and reiterate your recommendation
Unclear expression
• Summary: Unclear expression is a common mistake made by students in writing, which may lead to ambiguity in the content of the article.
Specifically clear
When explaining the purpose, avoid using vague or vague language. Specific explanations of issues, needs, or areas for improvement can help improve the readability and persuasiveness of the letter.
高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件 PPT
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
（1）should • Sb ought to do sth. • Sb be supposed to do sth. • Why not do sth? • It is beneficial for you to do sth. • If I were you, I would do sth. • It is high time that sb did sth.
Secondly, you ought to make proper 定语从句 schedules for your studies and life.
.倒装 Thirdly, you need to learn to solve your problems actively. When faced with 状语从句 difficulties in your life, you can always ask your teachers or classmates for advice,
写一封信
建议：如何解除对高三 生活的担忧
一般现在时
开门见山，表明写作意图。在本 段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自 己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的 目的及原因。
高中英语建议信写作PPT课件
试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你 才能很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt
3. I sincerely hope that my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高 中学好英语，我写信给你建议。
3. I have received your letter saying… Here
are some suggestions which I hope will be
of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信，信上说…。这里是一些建议， 希望会对你有帮助。/ 可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
4. I sincerely hope that my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如 果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
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范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
高一英语建议信课件
高中英语建议信课件
高中英语建议信课件Slide 1:Title: Writing a High School English Advice LetterSlide 2:Introduction:- Introduce the topic of writing an advice letter in high school English- Explain the purpose of an advice letter and its importance in communicationSlide 3:Structure of an Advice Letter:- Addressing the recipient: include the recipient's name and position- Salutation: use formal language and appropriate titles- Opening paragraph: introduce yourself and your relationship to the recipient- Body paragraphs: provide detailed advice and suggestions- Conclusion: summarize the advice and offer any additional support if needed- Closing: use appropriate formal language and sign offSlide 4:Language Tips:- Use formal language: avoid slang, contractions, and abbreviations - Avoid personal pronouns: focus on the recipient's needs and use the appropriate noun/pronoun- Be specific: provide specific examples, suggestions, and experiences to strengthen your advice- Use transition words: to organize your ideas and create coherence in your writingSlide 5:Content Tips:- Identify the purpose of your advice letter: is it to provide support, offer solutions, or give suggestions?- Assess the recipient's needs: write advice that is relevant and helpful to the recipient- Offer alternative perspectives: consider different viewpoints to present a well-rounded image of the situation- Be empathetic and supportive: show understanding and offer encouragement- Avoid judgment or criticism: focus on constructive feedback and positive solutionsSlide 6:Example: IntroductionDear Mr. Johnson,I am writing to you as a concerned student at XYZ High School. I have been aware of the challenges faced by students when preparing for college entrance exams, and as I recently went through this process myself, I wanted to offer some advice and guidance on how to navigate these stressful times.Slide 7:Example: Body Paragraphs1. Create a study schedule: Develop a routine that allows for dedicated study time while also including breaks for rest and relaxation. This will help you manage your time effectively andavoid burnout.2. Seek support from teachers: Approach your subject teachers for additional help and clarification on challenging topics. They have valuable experience and can provide guidance tailored to your needs.3. Practice previous exam papers: Familiarize yourself with the exam format and style by practicing previous years' papers. This will improve your confidence and help you identify areas that require extra attention.4. Stay motivated: Surround yourself with supportive friends who share similar goals. Organize study groups, join online forums, or form discussion groups to discuss difficult concepts and keep motivation levels high.Slide 8:Example: ConclusionIn conclusion, I believe that with careful planning, support from teachers, and focused practice, you can successfully tackle the challenges of college entrance exams. Remember to stay positive and believe in yourself. If you have any further questions or need additional guidance, please do not hesitate to reach out to me. Slide 9:ClosingSincerely,[Your Name]Slide 10:Tips for Proofreading:- Check for grammar and spelling errors- Ensure the flow of ideas is logical and coherent- Verify that the advice is clear and relevant- Edit for clarity and conciseness- Use appropriate punctuation and capitalizationSlide 11:Conclusion:- Recap the key points discussed in the presentation- Emphasize the importance of writing an advice letter in high school English- Encourage students to practice writing advice letters as a means of improving communication skillsSlide 12:Thank you!。
高中英语建议信写作ppt课件
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假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政府应采取措施, 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)最新版整理ppt
一般现在时
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适当运用 模板
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Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on how to
(引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is
important to . Then, it also helps to .
Besides, it should be a good idea to . You
can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)
As to , I suggest
(有时根据需要
具体到某一反面). In addition,
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写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建
议和忠告。
2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个
问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给
某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或
忠告。
3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提
出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语
高中英语建议信模版PPT课件
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So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first. Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize the importance of saving. Do you agree with me?
_________________________________ _____________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
yours sincerely,
Lihua
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Dear Editors,
I am a student in class 17, Grade Three. My name is Lihua. Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste of water, food and electrical energy.
建议信的写作指导
建议信是就某一问题给对方提出建议或者 忠告。建议信可以写给某个组织或机构， 也可以写给某个人。
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1.合理安排建议信的内容结构
写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问 题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己 的建议能够对对方有所帮助）
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高考英语写作之建议信课件
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
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建议信写作训练 Letter of
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I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
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开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
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我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
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高二英语作文建议信公开课课件
Rubrics and grading criteria
Provide clear rubrics and grading criteria for students to understand how their work will be evaluated, allowing them to focus on improving specific areas
The structure of the suggestion letter
Introduction
Start with a brief introduction of the purpose of the letter, including the background and reason for writing
The language used is formal and appropriate for the purpose of a suggestion letter
Possible tone
The letter is written in a way that encourages t made
Outlook
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Course import
Course Background Introduction
The course is designed to provide students with an introduction to English composition and the writing of suggestion letters
Share model essays with students, demonstrating effective organization, language use, and essay structure
高中英语作文 如何写建议信课件
When making suggestions, the feasibility and implementation difficulty of the suggestions should be taken into consideration. Overly idealistic or unrealistic suggestions may be seen as unrealistic or impractical, thereby reducing the persuasiveness of the letter.
Conclusion
Clear ask for a response or action from the recipient
Request Action
Provide appropriate closing meetings, depending on the formality of your letter
Helping students develop their communication and interpersonal skills in English
Building students' confidence and ability to express their ideas in English
Summary: Unclear expression is a common mistake made by students in writing, which may lead to ambiguity in the content of the article.
Practice and Feedback
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写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very g3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
高中英语作文建议信公开课(共17张PP T)
高中英语作文建议信公开课(共17张PP T)
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
difficulty in learning English. ②I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning environmental protection.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
高中英语作文建议信公开课(共17张PP T)
高中英语作文建议信公开课(共17张PP T)
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）找到适合的学习方法；
3）勤学好问，多实践。
词数100左右
高中英语作文建议信公开课(共17张PP T)
Dear Friends, From the forum, I’ve learned that many
students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have