高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)

The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. when she was young,she learned religion. She’s warm- hearted.
My father bought me a car.
第四种句型：S+V+O+C(补充说明宾语的状态）
I will make you happy. I want her to come. We should keep the classroom clean. She heard him singing.
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
After the students were all in the chemistry lab, the teacher brought out three bottles.
Corn is a very useful plant that can be prepared in many different ways.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
The sun rises. He runs in the park. 第二种句型：S+V+O He plays the piano every morning. I know him very well. They want to go. He stopped writing. 第三种句型：S+V+IO+DO
I admired her. In the future I want become as her a person . From now, I intend to good good study and day day up.
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. she learned religion long before. She’s warm- hearted.
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定语从句
复合句
名词性从句
状语从句
复合句： 复合句(complex sentence) 是由主句＋从句 构成，它是英语中比较复杂的句子结构。一般 来说，英语中一个句子只能有一个谓语，如果 出现两个谓语动词，那么其中一个谓语动词只 能以从句的形式或并列句或非谓语动词的形式 出现。所谓从句是指从属于主句的句子，由从 属连词连接。从句的种类有很多，但根据其性 质和作用可以分为状语从句、定语从句、名词 性从句。
Neither did the naughty boy go home nor did his parents come to search for him.
I was just leaving when the telephone rang.
Not only my father, but also my grandpa got red roses.
He often reads English in the morning.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspaper列句
常用的连词有 and( 同，和 ), when(=and just at this time 就在这时，然后 ), not only…but (also)…( 不仅……而且…… ), neither…nor… （既 不……也不……）等。这类分句之间是顺承关系或并 列关系。如： We bought her a birthday present, and she liked it very much.
I
简单句
III
复合句
II
并列句
Ex：努力学习，你会成功。
1 If you study hard, you will succeed.
2 Study hard, and you will succeed.
连
接
3 Studying hard, you will succeed.
词
连接词
简单句： 只有一个主语（或并列主语）和 一个谓语（或并列谓语）
I admired her. In the future I want become as her a person . From now, I intend to good good study and day day up.
Main problems leading to low scores
表示转折关系的并列句 这类并列句常用but （但是；可是），yet（可是；然 而），while （而）等来连接，后面分句与前面分句之间 有意义上的转折关系。
She said she would be late, yet she arrived on time. Certainly he apologized, however, I won't forgive him. I like tea while she likes coffee.
Guide in Writing
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.
We intend to go US, even if air fares are expensive. The news worried him so much that he didn’t sleep at all for the whole night.
They wrote the notice in several languages so that foreigners could understand it.
Liquid water changes to vapor, which is called evaporation. As everyone knows ,China is a beautiful country with a long history .
定语从句（Attributive Clauses): 由关系代词或关系副词引导的从句，其作
用是作定语修饰主句的某个名词或代词，相当 于形容词，所以又称为形容词性从句，一般跟 在它所修饰的先行词后面。定语从句可分为限 制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句。
Is he the man who/that wants to see you? Please pass me the book whose cover is green. Is this the reason why (for which) he refused our offer?
表示因果关系的并列句
这类并列句常用并列连词so, for等连接，后面分 句与前面分句之间有因果关系。如：
Mother was ill, so father cooked for us instead.
They had often heard of elephants, but they had never seen one , for being blind, how could they? He worked day and night, therefore, he was able to buy the sports car.
Problem1: Chaotic sentence structure(句型结构混乱）
Problem2: Chinglish(汉式英语）
Problem3: Simple sentence，lack of advanced vocabularies(句 式单一，缺乏高级词汇)