高中英语作文：新手如何英语写作(以某次高一期中考试为例)

高中英语新高考-新手如何写英语作文（以某次高一期中考试为例）

一、高一写作要重视造句，但造句尽量使用平时阅读中的词块。尤其是高一学生，一旦使用自己的创造性的语言表达，很容易写出汉式英语。本次成绩优秀的学生都是灵活运用教材课文的原句，这也是本次作文考试的导向吧。

二、造句要牢记：

1、简单化思维：把提纲中高大上的汉语表达简化为小学一年级学生的完整句子。例如：第一个要点，要这样简单化：

我们要一天吃三次饭，并且吃健康的食物。

我们要经常锻炼，来保持能量。

我们要早睡早起，睡眠好。

从本质上说，这样的写作无异于翻译，对于高一学生来说，很多人基本句型还很是生疏，这样的控制性翻译写作是很有必要的。

2、句型、词块要抱团

高一学生有时也搞不懂积累的单词短语意义何在，久而久之，就失去了积累的积极性。我的做法是每次输出前，给学生复习一下最近学了哪些句型：

模块一包含：the+比较级；it句型；there句型；so do …的倒装；which非限制；非谓语; not only…but also…;强调句

一共八个，其实真正写作中，也就是它们的组合使用了。

我简要示范一下我上课的步骤：

片段一：

如何表达：定期锻炼，精力充沛

先写最简单的句子：

We should work out regularly. We can keep energetic.

然后考虑一下逻辑：

We should work out regularly so that we can keep energetic.

然后上句型：

We should make it a habit to work out regularly so that we can keep energetic.

最后拓展一下：

… and get into good shape.

片段二：

如何表达：早睡早起，睡眠充足

先写最简单的句子：

We should sleep early and get up early. We should have a good sleep.

上句型：

It is necessary to sleep early and get up early to have a good sleep.

润色：

It is necessary to sleep early and get up early. As we know, the better we sleep, the better we concentrate.

再拓展（结合书上的，从反向写）

+ As a matter of fact, loss of sleep tends to tire us out.

3、奠定初步的逻辑思维

仔细分析：学会沟通，分享感情。我们可以这样建立逻辑：我们可以通过分享感情的方式来

学会沟通。这就是方式状语了。这样就不会是and连接到底了。再如：培养爱好，放松自己。可以这样说：我们培养爱好，以便于可以通过爱好来放松自己。这里面就是一种目的关系。

前面的要点也相同。总之：高一学生要仔细分析自己写作中的逻辑结构，不要全部是and 并列。

三、范文：

The following tips can help.

When it comes to physical health, it is suggested that we have three meals a day on time and eat healthy food. Besides, we should make it a habit to work out regularly so that we can keep energetic and get into good shape. Last, it is necessary to sleep early and get up early. As we know, the better we sleep, the better we concentrate. As a matter of fact, loss of sleep tends to tire us out.

On the other hand, mental health is as important. We should not only learn to communicate with others by sharing our feelings, but also develop hobbies to relax ourselves.

Keep in mind that what counts is health. Following the above suggestions, we are sure to achieve our goal.

本篇文章的特色：

1.建议类的常用句型：

The following tips can help.

it is suggested that…

we should make it a habit to…

it is necessary to…

Keep in mind that…

Following the above suggestions, we are sure to achieve our goal.

2.衔接句型：

b e as important (as…)

When it comes to…

so that…

the more, the more…

Besides,…Last…

As a matter of fact,…

not only…but also…

on the other hand

3.其它词块：

get into good shape

loss of sleep

tend to

tire out

be sure to

achieve the goal