成都高新大源学校书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

成都高新大源学校书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达训练

1．朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;

2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；

3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的

要求：

1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密

2. 词数80-100

3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friend

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。

【点睛】

人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +

（straight/curly） hair / （big/small）eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种

衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

2．书面表达

“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”

----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》

“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”

----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》

“We are all running very h ard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”

----President Xi Jingping

以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：

1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；

2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；

3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；

4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：

1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；

2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser

As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何