高考英语作文教学完整ppt课件

第二步：理清要点
本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点 是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是谈论 Mr.Green的儿子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的话结尾。 所以，本文要点如下：
1、Mr. Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。
2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜访。
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要求：
1、用间接引语描述如上 幽 默故事。
2、词数为80~100。
分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情： 一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达 意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引 语。
第一步：仔细审题
情景提供的方式是对话，题材是 故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段 幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有简 单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为 80~100。
S: Good morning.
G: Good morning.
S: I haven’t seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?
G: Oh…, I don’t know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn the government’s attention and the police are searching for him.
第五步：检查润色
Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other (← said “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Green’s son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years and wondered (←. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought (←said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.
第四步：连句成篇
Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.
高考英语作文“六步法”教 学
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高考英语作文“六步法”教学
Step1． 仔细审题 Step2. 理清要点 Step3. 译写单句 Step4. 连句成篇 Step5. 检查润色 Step6. 定稿誊写
范例1
题目：Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Green’s. The following is their conversation.
3、他们互致问候早上好。
4、Mr. Smith说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子Tom了， 相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。
5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得 成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。
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第三步：译写单句
1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. 2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. 3.They said good morning to each other. 4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements. 5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.