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高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
史上最全高考英语作文讲解PPT课件(167张PPT)
英语高考任务型写作评分标准
一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、 同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
写作指导
写作步骤
一、分析材料 二、列出要点 三、补全信息 四、翻译句子 五、整合成篇 六、修饰加工 （添加合理信息，比如：具体时间、地点， 情感信息，喜欢，感激，等）
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响 理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连 贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考专题书面表达写 作指导
Basic Writing & Task Writing
【基础写作】 15—13分：信息内容完整，句子结构准确，句 型多样，连贯性好： 12—10分：信息内容完整，句子结构基本准确， 注意到句型的多样化和连贯性； 9—7分：信息内容基本完整，句子结构基本准 确，有一些小差错，但意思表达基本清楚； 6—3分：信息内容不够完整，意思表达不清楚， 但是，有一些跟主题无目关的句子； 3一0分：仅写出个别与主题相关的句子：并有 一些语法差错； 每超出要求—个句子扣3分(本部分给分多作品有了中文译文，并被拍摄 成电影
列出要点：
1、狄更斯，英国小说家，出生，1812.2，逝 世，1870.6 2、少年时，家庭困难，被迫做童工 3、喜欢写作，创作……作品 4、受….影响， 作品反应……现实 5、依然受欢迎，翻译成中文，拍成电影
补全成句，翻译句子
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、 同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
写作指导
写作步骤
一、分析材料 二、列出要点 三、补全信息 四、翻译句子 五、整合成篇 六、修饰加工 （添加合理信息，比如：具体时间、地点， 情感信息，喜欢，感激，等）
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响 理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连 贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考专题书面表达写 作指导
Basic Writing & Task Writing
【基础写作】 15—13分：信息内容完整，句子结构准确，句 型多样，连贯性好： 12—10分：信息内容完整，句子结构基本准确， 注意到句型的多样化和连贯性； 9—7分：信息内容基本完整，句子结构基本准 确，有一些小差错，但意思表达基本清楚； 6—3分：信息内容不够完整，意思表达不清楚， 但是，有一些跟主题无目关的句子； 3一0分：仅写出个别与主题相关的句子：并有 一些语法差错； 每超出要求—个句子扣3分(本部分给分多作品有了中文译文，并被拍摄 成电影
列出要点：
1、狄更斯，英国小说家，出生，1812.2，逝 世，1870.6 2、少年时，家庭困难，被迫做童工 3、喜欢写作，创作……作品 4、受….影响， 作品反应……现实 5、依然受欢迎，翻译成中文，拍成电影
补全成句，翻译句子
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
高考英语作文课件ppt
要点二
Writing
Keeping a diary in English, writing English compositions, etc. to improve writing ability
要点三
Speaking
Practicing English conversation with teachers or classes, joining English corners, etc. to improve English listening and speaking ability
On site response and time management strategies
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Time management
Mastering the time management skills of the exam, dividing the time for each question, and not spending too much time on one question
The content criteria include the relevance and depth of the content, as well as the logicality and coherence of the ideas expressed
The structure criteria include the organization and development of the ideas, as well as the clarity and coherence of the overall structure
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Overview of English Composition
高考英语作文 公开课PPT课件
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• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
高三英语作文公开课 PPT课件(共23张)
一个好的段落要有丰富的句式
1.感叹句 2.倒装句 3.强调句 4.省略句 5.With 结构 6.定语从句 7.各种名词性从句 8.各种状语从句
利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采
1.感叹句 e.g. How disappointed he was! 2.强调句 e.g. It was the young boy that helped the old man. 3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can we solve the problem. 4.省略句 e.g. Come to me if necessary 5.定语从句 e.g. The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned. 6.名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.
3.If you work hard, you will make rapid progress.(祈使句+and） Work hard and you will make a rapid progress. 4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing 形式） Singing and laughing, they went back to school
Ladies and gentlemen,
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people .It used to be poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before. Now It is taking on a new look.
高考英语真题作文PPT
高考英语真题作文PPT1. Well, let me tell you about my experience in the English exam. It was quite challenging, to be honest. I had to answer multiple choice questions, write essays, and even do some listening and speaking tasks. It was a real test of my English skills.2. One thing that really stood out to me was the time pressure. I had to think quickly and make decisions on the spot. It was a bit stressful, but I tried to stay calm and focused. Time management was key in making sure I could finish all the tasks on time.3. The reading comprehension section was particularly tough for me. I had to read long passages and answer questions about them. Sometimes, I had to infer the meaning of words or phrases based on context. It required a lot of concentration and attention to detail.4. Writing the essays was another challenge. I had tocome up with ideas, organize my thoughts, and express myself clearly. It was a test of my writing skills and creativity. I tried to use a variety of vocabulary and sentence structures to make my essays more interesting and engaging.5. Overall, the English exam was a test of my language proficiency and critical thinking skills. It pushed me to think outside the box and communicate effectively. It was a valuable experience that helped me improve my English abilities and prepare for future challenges.。
高考英语作文(ppt课件)
only good rewriting. 3. When in doubt, refer to
Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
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8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
The Beauty of Writing
学习交流课件
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Why is writing so tough?
Input
Output
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高考作文高分卷的特点
外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清 楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当， 卷面整洁。
结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为 3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的 主题。
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8. 进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
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8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
The Beauty of Writing
学习交流课件
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Why is writing so tough?
Input
Output
学习交流课件
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高考作文高分卷的特点
外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清 楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当， 卷面整洁。
结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为 3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的 主题。
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8. 进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)
书面表达五步法
• Step1：审题 • Step2.抓要点 • step3.写草稿 • Step4.修改、整合 • Step5.抄写
• 第二节 写作（满分25分） • 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国 朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假 里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： • 1.未及时回信的原因； • 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志 愿者等）。 • 注意：1. 词数120-150；2. 可适当增加 细节，以使行文连贯。
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时，你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西，而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋，天才在于积累 －－华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样，多用则灵，不用则废 －茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗？但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 －－屠格涅夫 13、成功＝艰苦劳动＋正确方法＋少说空话 －－爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹 －《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶，才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人，永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码，能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18．暗自伤心，不如立即行动． 19．挫折时，要像大树一样，被砍了，还能再长；也要像杂草一样，虽让人践踏，但还能勇敢地活下去． 20．随随便便浪费的时间，再也不能赢回来． 21．成功是优点的发挥，失败，是缺点的积累．
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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第五步：检查润色
Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other (← said “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Green’s son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years and wondered (←. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought (←said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.
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要求2、词数为80~100。
分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情： 一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达 意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引 语。
第一步：仔细审题
情景提供的方式是对话，题材是 故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段 幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有简 单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为 80~100。
第二步：理清要点
本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点 是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是谈论 Mr.Green的儿子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的话结尾。 所以，本文要点如下：
1、Mr. Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。
2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜访。
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高考英语作文“六步法”教学
Step1． 仔细审题 Step2. 理清要点 Step3. 译写单句 Step4. 连句成篇 Step5. 检查润色 Step6. 定稿誊写
范例1
题目：Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Green’s. The following is their conversation.
3、他们互致问候早上好。
4、Mr. Smith说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子Tom了， 相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。
5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得 成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。
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第三步：译写单句
1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. 2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. 3.They said good morning to each other. 4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements. 5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.
第四步：连句成篇
Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.
S: Good morning.
G: Good morning.
S: I haven’t seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?
G: Oh…, I don’t know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn the government’s attention and the police are searching for him.