英语作文 漫画

立意----细节描述
立意1：勇于克服困难
（小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）
立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力
（小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）
立意----细节描述
把图中的内容描述清楚 4 - 6分
过渡句 含义
—— —— 5分
2分
1 描图句
In the picture,… The picture shows that… As can be seen from the picture,
This picture intends to tell us that …… The situation in our society is the same as what the picture portrays. More thoughts can be figured out from this picture From this picture we find (begin to realize) that….. The picture conveys an important message to us. The picture conveys a deep message that… What the picture conveys to us is that…
变化的是：话题
2010年北京卷 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
1. Don’t be too confident in real life. 2. Be honest and modest. 3. Don’t judge a book by its cover.
开放作文的立意
• 1) 两个物象（大树和小草）的对比。大 树虽然强壮，但经不住狂风；小草虽然 弱小，但是很坚韧。内心的力量强大很 重要。 • 2) 尺有所短，寸有所长。每个人都有自 己擅长的一面。不要因为自己在某方面 比别人强，就因此而看不起别人。他人 也有你所不及的地方。取长补短，互相 学习才能自我完善。
Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.
b. 总说-分说(-总说)推进模式 例1：In this picture, we can see two buildings, a
tree, and (the sun). The two buildings are closely
located to each other (are closely standing opposite to each other.). The tree bends in the middle and squeezes its way out of the buildings so as to get more sunshine.
bulidings for barriers and frustrations. On our
way to success, we may be hindered by obstacles. But if we persist and never give up, we can reach to success in the end just as the tree does in the picture.
开放作文
2010年开放式作文 （生活*社会*......） 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
As we can see in the picture,
From the picture I can see …
As is (vividly) shown in the picture ,….
怎样用语言描述图片？
在描述图片时，推荐以下模式：
a. 常量主语推进模式
例1：What an interesting picture it is ! (What a strange picture it is!) A tree is twisted by two closely-located buildings. It bends in the middle. But it struggles (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun).
still struggles all the way up to the air.
过渡句（描述图片---个人看法） 如: This picture tells us that …… What impresses me most about this picture is that....... This picture means that…… The picture makes me think of... This picture shows us that…… The picture reveals the fact that... This picture demonstrates that ……. This picture reminds me of ......
sample 1
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions.
例2：In this picture, we can see two buildings, a tree, and (the sun). The two buildings are located opposite to each other. The tree is
standing between the two buildings and bends in the middle. The sun is shining above the tree. Though twisted by these two buildings, the tree
意义延伸（Icon---Index）
例1：For my part, this picture intends to tell us
how to pursue success in reality, with the tree
standing for "those in difficulties" and the two
What an interesting picture it is! A tree is standing between two neighbouring buildings. The tree is not straight(out of straight, bends in the middle), because it is affected by the buildings. But it struggles (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun).
漫画的画面 细节 漫画的夸张 寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处）
读 图 与 立 意
细节 细节 夸张
寓意
Don’t copy other’s way of solving the problem. Do everything in the right way.
夸张
寓意
The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.
sample2
In the picture we see a tree growing up between two strange buildings. Although in such poor condition, the tree doesn't give up. Like the tree growing there, I believe that we can overcome many difficulties in the future if we are persistent. For us as students we have to solve many problems and work hard in our studies.
开放作文的立意
3）不以外表判断人； 4）坚持真理，刚直不阿； 5）学会适应环境，适者生存； 6）面对不同的形势要学会灵活的改变； 7）遇到困难要学会改变自我； 8）攀登越高，风险越大；
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开放作文评分原则:
以内容和语言定档定分 ◆ 立意明确，逻辑清晰
(立意-----细节描述）
◆ 语言达意
• 得分要点：
观点鲜明、积极健康、理由充分、 思维独特、有创造性
• 写作要领：
内容充实、逻辑合理、发散得当、 语言正确、句式多样、词汇丰富、行文连贯
四、 写漫画性开放作文不变的特点
人称：图片描述用第三人称； 自己观点用第一人称 时态：描图用一般现在时； 解图一般现在时； 议论和联系自己用一般现在时和一般将来时；
Let me take English learning for example . Keep working hard, you will see someone of value, someone who is going to be more successful, someone who is going to win. You will see someone worthy of winning because you have worked for it. In a word, as they say: “ Just do it, never give up”.