公开课Polishyourwriting

The Chinese government has recently launched a nation-wide ban on smoking in public, which will come into effect on January 1st, 2011. Aiming at banning smoking in all indoor public locations, the government is going to put up no smoking signs in such places. Among the roughly 350 million smokers, males account for 75%, while females take up 25% Moreover, about 540 million people are being negatively influenced by second-hand smoke. And more than 10 thousand people lose their lives owing to second-hand smoke every year, which indicates the great need to bring the ban into force.
(倒装句) Only when I paid a visit to HongKong did I realize the importance of English.
Conclusion: We can polish our writing by using
the following sentence patterns:
2. His words impressed us so deeply.(主语从句） What he said impressed us so deeply.
3. Zhou Wenjuan is a fast speaker. Nobody can understand her.( 状语从句）
Zhou Wenjuan is such a fast speaker that nobody can understand her.
茂名市第十中学英语科高考备考小组
写作步骤
审题
构思
组织材料
修改
写出初稿
拟定提纲
润色
润色写作的策略
1. 使用较高级的词汇
策
2. 使用较丰丰富富的的句句式式
略
3. 使用恰当的连接词
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Jeremy Lin —New York Knicks (尼克斯队 )star
New York Knicks star Jeremy Lin has not only sparked NBA basketball interest in China, he may also inspire fans to learn English. Not only has New York Knicks star Jeremy Lin sparked NBA basketball interest in China, he may also inspire fans to learn English.
Although Lin is very popular, he still has to improve his strength to compete in the NBA.
Popular as Lin is, he still has to improve his strength to compete in the NBA.
Translate the sentence in varied ways.
我去了香港才知道英语的重要性
(一般句式）I realized the importance of English when I paid a visit to HongKong.
(强调句) It was when I paid a visit to HongKong that I realized the importance of English.
Rewrite the following sentences
1. More and more teachers came in, and the classroom became crowded.（with结构）
With more and more teachers coming in, the classroom became crowded.
名词性从句 状语从句 定语从句 强调句 倒装句 非谓语动词 被动结构 with 结构
Activity 1: Compare two compositions and decide which one is better
The Chinese government had been consider to limit the people who will smoking in public in the beginning of next year. It will acquire public places around China should put on the signs of “Don’t smoke”. And the aim is achieving no smoking in publics. It is necessary to do it base on that about 3.5 million people who were smoker and men accqure 75%, another 25% were women. What’s more, around 5.4 million people die of second-hand smoke, over 1 million people die every year because of this, and that is why reason the government do this conclusion, and hope all Chinese can understand special the smoker.