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Chapter 2 7Cs Principle: Completeness and Conciseness
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7Cs Principle 2 : Conciseness
Completeness
Conciseness
Consideration
Correctness
Clarity
Courtesy
Concreteness
1. 7Cs Principle1: Completeness
Keep in mind the following guidelines to write completely
1) Try to answer all questions asked.
Whenever you reply to a letter containing one or more questions, try to answer all of them--stated or implied.
If you have no information on a precise question at the moment, just say so clearly and sincerely, instead of leaving out the answer.If you have unfavorable news in answer to one or more questions, handle your reply with both tact and honestly.
When saying no, be courteous and polite, but firm.
Eg.1 We can not deliver the goods until May 1. (poor)
We can deliver the goods on May 1.
Eg.2 We regret to inform you that we deny your request for credit.
For the time being we can only serve you on a cash basis.
Dear sirs:
Many thanks for your order of October 12.
After careful consideration, we have come to the conclusion that it would be better for you to approach another manufacturer for the products you desire. To produce the machine required according to your specifications would mean setting up special equipment at our factory. This would not only be impossible to accomplish before the end of this year, but would seriously interrupt our production schedule. We are sorry not to be more helpful, but hope that you will understand our position. Please contact us again. We will be pleased to serve you in the future.
Yours sincerely,
2) V olunteer sth. Extra which, you think, may be of some use to your reader now or in the future. Eg. Do you think it is enough to tell just the prices of the bicycles in the reply?
We are one of the most important importers of bicycles in Lagos, Nigeria, and would like to extend our business relations to you. Would you please let us know the prices of your first-rate bicycles available for export to this country?
3) Check for the 5W2H and any other essentials.
5W2H: Who, What, Where, When, Why, How, How much
eg. In a letter of ordering goods, we must tell clearly:
What(What we want)
When(When we need the goods)
Whom and Where(to Whom and Where the goods to be sent)
How(How payment will be made? How we would like them to be packed and shipped)
How much(How much goods do we need)
For some letters---especially those that bring bad news,
answering the question “why” is of vital importance.
A message that answers the question why is more likely to motivate the correspondent to take the
desired action than the one that does not explain why.
2. 7Cs Principle 2 : Conciseness
Conciseness ------communicating an idea in the fewest words without sacrificing completeness and courtesy.
Guidelines to write concisely
1) Omit trite expression
eg. Not This But This
Please don’t hesitate to write to us Please write us
due to the fact that because
during the year of 2003 during 2003
in the city of London London
in due course soon
for the reason that since; because
in the event that if
this is to advise you 5 wasted words
from the point of view of as
for a price of $200,000 for $200,000
in accordance with your request as you requested; as requested
2) Avoid wordy statements and unnecessary repetition.