雅思写作如何改写题目

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雅思四段式作文范文

雅思四段式作文范文【篇一：雅思写作四段式】雅思写作四段式1. 写开头段第一段：三句话sentence 1. background information (general statement) 背景介绍 (可有可无)sentence 2. rephrase the topic (thesis statement) 改写题目，转述话题。

（必不可少）sentence 3. personal opinion or brief description of the main body 亮明观点或首段先不写明观点，只做主体呈现，留到结尾段再表明。

简洁的开头段，不错的选择；开头段与结尾段很重要，但主体段里的实质论证最核心的判分依据。

2. 主体部分，中间段落第二段：进攻段，论述心有所倾的一方。

第一句：概括你倾向的一方观点（若与首段最后一句重复，可省略）。

第二句：提出此观点第一个分论点（本段reason 1）。

第三句：对第一分论点合理展开支持（reason 1 的展开支持句supporting sentence）。

第四句：提出此观点的第二个分论点（本段reason 2）。

第五句：对第二个分论点合理展开支持（reason 2 的展开支持句supporting sentence）。

相应写出第六句（第三个分论点，即reason 3）与第七句（reason 3 的展开支持）。

（根据需要，可有可无）注：1. 展开支持句是主体段落最能体现考生论证实力部分，要丰满、充实、有说服力；2. 主体段落的分论点不宜过多，否则有堆积之嫌；3. 但各分论点的展开支持句不怕多，合理、逻辑地道展开支持，使论证有说服力。

第三段：让步段，论述不太倾向的一方。

第一句：概括此观点。

第二句：提出此观点第一个分论点（本段reason 1）。

第三句：对第一分论点合理展开支持（reason 1 的展开支持句supporting sentence）。

第四句：提出此观点第二个分论点（本段reason 2）或者提出reason 1的不严密之处，进一步弱化让步段的观点。

雅思写作Task1-地图完美版

雅思写作-地图第一段：改写题目主要句式：图表名称+动词+描述主题+时间图表名称：The diagram/map/picture动词：show/illustrate/give information about/indicate描述主题：1. The development/change of 某地方。

2. How +某个地方+changed/developed. 3. The development/the change that has taken place +某个地方。

举例子：1.The maps show the development of Stokeford village over an 80 years period from 1930 to 2010.2.The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism.3.The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed/planned/projected/expected site design for the year 2024.4.The diagrams show West Park Secondary School at three different stages in its development: 1950, 1980 and 2010.第二段：总结主要特征。

一般来说选取一两个最重大的变化特征。

或者从全局来看，描述最显著的变化。

同时还可以从地图功能的变化阐述其主要变化，比如说可以容纳更多学生，转变成居民区了，或者是旅游／娱乐设施完善了。

主要句式：1. It is clear that +某地方+has changed considerably with the construction of some new facilities.It is clear that the island has changed considerably with the introduction of tourism.2.数量+new features can be seen in the second diagram.Six new features can be seen in the second diagram.3. The main developments are that + 句子（描述一个或两个重大变化）The main developments are that the island is accessible and visitors have somewhere to stay.4. It is clear that the main change for+ 时间It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building.It is apparent from the pictures that the village has become increasingly populated over this time frame第三，四段细节描述（动词enlarge, widen, divide, replace, move, convert, relocate, demolish, renovate, extend , develop, modify）主要句式（下列句式中A,B 为建筑物）1. 位于be located/situated/sitedChorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area.A 位于B （城镇）的东方/西方/南方/北方A is/ lies/ is located/ is sited to/in the east/west/south/north part of B方位的表达和介词的搭配A be built/located to the east/north/south/west(southeast, southwest, northeast, northwest) of BA be built/located in the west/north/south/west part of BA be built/located to the left/right (hand side) of BA be built/located beside/next to/adjacent to/behind/in front of/ in the front of/ opposite to B2. 被建造be constructed/builtA motorway was built to the east of the villageA second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field3. 被改建成be turned to/converted toA large area behind the school was turned into a playgroundThe farmland has been converted to residential building.类似句式：The area+ 方位描述+be +建筑物The area behind the houses was farmland.4. 被拆除be demolished / dismantled / removedThe house had been demolished in order to make way for（腾出空间，让路）a small car park and an additional school building,5. 连接connect/linkThere is also a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant.类似表达Footpaths connect the huts6. 被分离be separated/divided1.The two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field.2.The original playground was divided into two.7. 保持不变No changes be made=remain unchanged1.No changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.2. The school building remained unchanged8. 被扩大be extended/enlarged=increase in size1.The primary school opposite（opposite 做介词而非动词）the post office has been extended to include two new buildings2.The school has increased in size9. 被缩小be reduced in size／shrink(shrank, shrunk)9. 分叉split off/branch off1.Two new roads split off from the main road2. A new road to the south-west of the school braches off from the main road and extends out to the river.10. 道路两边的建筑描述1. Both new roads are accompanied by a small number of new houses on either side.2. A number of new properties were attached to the road heading south.11.道路的描述A railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.12.表现有建筑和规划建筑的改变(Proposed, current, future, existing, planned, it is expected that, at present, it is anticipated that, prospective)1.The current entrance to the gallery is on the right hand side of the building and visitors pass through a large lobby before entering the gallery itself. One of the proposed changes is to allow entrance on to the main exhibition area, where an existing entrance will be widened.2.At present, the exhibition rooms are divided into three separate areas. According to the plans, the dividing walls will be removed and one large exhibition space will be created.3. In addition, the gallery will gain an education center. This area will replace the existing lobby, which will also be enlarged to create a more functional space with large table and seating.4. To replace the current straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of the living room.5. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed.12. with 的用法（适用于高分学员）1.Two footpaths split off from the main road, with the eastern-facing road replacing old farmland. (先描述一个变化，用with接名词+现在分词（主动）或过去分词（被动）描述这一变化的详细内容)2. The farmland was converted to residential purpose, with a number of new houses attached to the road heading south.上课案例讲述和练习OG test3 Task1第一段：改写题目第二段：总结学校扩大了，停车场被建造和扩大了。

雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练

雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练A理论部分：雅思小作文概论1、文章结构：主要分三部分：i。

introductory sentence；ii。

body paragraph;iii.Concluding sentence具体讲：第一段introductory sentence只要写一句话，交待图形（如the line graph， pie chart等等），描述对象(如图表描述的是the number of tourists visiting England），地点(如the US, the UK等）以及时间（如between 1988 and 1997等等）；另外要注意的就是第一段不能和图表上方已给的句子太过相似！否则，会失分的！第二部分一般写1~3段，这要视情况而定。

这部分主要就是对比不同的数据，如相似或相同的数据；某个数据是另一个数据的2倍;某个数据所占比例最大或最小等等。

最后一段concluding sentence也只要写一句话,主要是总结图表的整个趋势。

2。

文章的效果。

很多学生会发现小作文的例文特别简单（尤其是剑桥书里提供的）。

原因很简单，这个report 的目的就是要让university lecturer了解某个事物的发展趋势,所以写出来的文章必须结构清晰、易懂，绝对不能太复杂,也不要把每个数据都描写出来,只要描写有代表性的，重要的数据即可.以下为雅思小作文的四个基本步骤第一步：改写题目通过同义词转换在短短的1分钟内就写好作文的第一段。

举例:The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from 1983 to 1992.题目中划线的单词都可以进行同义转换:graph—figure， show—illustrate， percentage-proportion， major-key, from…to…—between…and…,第二步：分析时态1. 图表小作文大部分时候使用过去时态,因为出现的数据一般都是以往的统计数据，过去的情形和现在的情形很有可能完全不一样,因此用过去时态比较恰当。

雅思小作文开头改写技巧

雅思小作文开头改写技巧一、改变句子结构，例如将主动句改为被动句。

使用同义词替换例如将“The chart shows the percentage of people who use different modes of transportation to go to work.”改写为“Different modes of transportation used to go to work are presented in the chart, with the percentage of people using each mode.”二、通过转变它的句式来改写，例如将长句改为短句。

1.替换表达方式例如将“In this report, we can see the number of students who passed the exam in each subject.”改写为“The table demonstrates the amount of students who passed the exam in each subject.”2.增加细节或解释性信息例如将“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing.”改写为“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing. This may be due to the factthat more and more people are choosing to drive to work, causing a decrease in the number of public transportation users.”3.采用反面论证例如将“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has increased significantly over the past few decades.”改写为“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has NOT increased significantly over the past few decades.”雅思小作文开头段的改写需要根据实际情况选择合适的方式，同时需要注意保持句子的准确性和流畅性。

雅思小作文改写题目

雅思小作文改写题目英文回答：Task 2: You have rented an apartment from a letting agency. There was a problem with the hot water system, so you called the agency to report it. However, they have not responded to your request yet. Write a letter to the agency expressing your dissatisfaction and outlining the actions you would like them to take.Letter:Dear [Letting agency name],。

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the lack of response to my request for assistance with the faulty hot water system in my apartment at [address]. I reported the issue on [date] and have not received any communication from your agency since.The absence of hot water has been a significant inconvenience for me, particularly during these cold winter months. I have been unable to take showers, wash dishes, or perform other essential tasks that require hot water. The lack of hot water has also affected my ability to sleep due to the cold showers.I understand that emergencies can occur and that there are times when it may take longer to resolve issues. However, I believe that the lack of communication from your agency is unacceptable. I have made multiple attempts to contact you by phone and email, but my requests have gone unanswered.The actions I would like you to take to resolve this matter are as follows:Send a plumber to my apartment as soon as possible to repair the hot water system.Compensate me for the inconvenience I have experienced due to the lack of hot water.Improve your communication channels to ensure that tenants receive timely responses to their requests.I trust that you will take this matter seriously and take swift action to resolve the issue. If I do not receive a satisfactory response within [number of days] days, Iwill have no choice but to consider other options,including contacting the relevant regulatory authorities.Thank you for your attention to this matter.Sincerely,。

灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）

灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）第一篇：灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题雅思考试时很多考生候遇到过这种情况，在考试前准备了很多大作文需要的素材和材料，但奇怪的是真正到了考场，碰到某些题目这些素材好像就没有用了，心情就变的紧张起来从而影响正常的发挥。

根据笔者这几年所积累的教学经验，雅思大作文绝大多数情况下出题还是比较常规和正常的，但也确实存在着某些偏题或者难题、怪题（大家不用紧张，雅思怪题和难题出现的频率不高）。

于是今天朗阁海外考试研究中心的雅思培训专家就给大家介绍一下如何应对雅思大作文偏题怪题。

Example 1 Advertising encourages people to buy in quantity rather than promoting itsquality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?广告鼓励人们购买大量的产品而不是促进提升产品的质量。

你同意还是不同意？其实这道题目是典型的广告类题目：考生拿到这个题目，首先要读三遍，理解题目本质的含义。

广告的本质之一其实就是帮助卖家(selling agencies)或者厂商(manufactures)提升产品知名度(increase the brand reputation),从而打开市场(explore the wider markets), 提升产品的销售额(boost the sales rates),怂恿或者引领消费者购买更多的产品(encouraging and leading the consumers to spend their salaries to purchase large quantities of products), 所以考生从正面来回答(agree)的话，就可以从以上这些角度来入手，写起来应该不难。

而且考生们还要知道厂商或者销售商是付钱给广告商的(advertisement agencies receive payment from manufacturers）, 如果人们买得多，对广告商本身也有好处。

雅思写作备考：小作文改写技巧

雅思写作备考：小作文改写技巧对于许多有留学打算的考生来说，雅思考试是必须通过的一道关卡。

写作是雅思考生普遍失分较多的一个部分，雅思写作由时长20分钟的客观描述性小作文和时长40分钟的主观议论性大作文组成。

今天，店铺就来讲解一下雅思小作文应该怎么写，希望这篇文章可以帮助到大家。

雅思写作备考：小作文改写技巧一、高级改写的定义高级改写和低级改写的“词-词”对换不同，它注重的是“词-句”之间的互换。

二、高级改写的核心高级改写的任务就是将“展示”(show/ present)后的"词"换成"宾语从句。

"e.g. The graph shows the consumption of....改成 The graph shows how ...三、高级改写的句型而这里高级改写用到的宾语从句有两种：(1)…how … had changed…(2)…how…were varied…四、高级改写的步骤说到这儿，Coco给大家列出做高级改写4个步骤，为方便大家记忆，我把它归结为“十句主持”，请务必记牢：(1)十(时)：判断时间段还是点;(2)句：选宾语从句是how...had changed还是how...were varied;(3)主：how后面的主语要根据题目中“展示”的宾语和图的抬头确定;(4)持(词)：句子里面的词按照低级改写法要求，能换就换。

现在我们来做一道题目：(1)十(时)：判断是时间段还是时间点这题写明是between 1979 and 2004,所以确定是时间段。

(2)句：因为是时间段，所以选 how...had changed也就是说，上一个图应该配how...had changed...宾语从句。

(3)主：确定how后面的主语(根据题目中“展示”后的宾语和图的抬头确定描写对象)从题目中，我们可以看到“展示(show/give informationa on)”后面的宾语是 the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat,所以宾语从句应该补充成：how the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat had changed ......(4)持(词)：尽可能地“词-词”对换把除了how ... had changed 以外的词能变则变，最后得出完整的P1S1应该为：The line chart(原本是graph) unfolds(原本是shows) how(原本是词)the consumption of fish and some different categories(原本是kinds) of meat had changed in a Europeanstate(原本是country) from 1979 to 2002(原本是between...and...).五、高级改写的练习好啦，大家对给小作文写个华丽丽的开头已经有个初步印象，coco这里发几道习题给大家巩固技巧：The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000 (剑7test4).The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by for different modes of transport(剑8test4).The chart below shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002(剑7test1).雅思写作范文：慈善是否应该国际化Task：Some people believe that charity organizations should give aid to those in greatest need, wherever they live. Other people believe that charity organizations should concentrate onthe people in their own country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为，慈善组织应该给予那些最需要帮助的人，无论他们住在哪里。

英文作文修改示范

英文作文修改示范1. I love traveling. Exploring new places, experiencing different cultures, and meeting new people are some of the things that excite me the most. Whether it's a bustlingcity or a serene beach, each destination has its unique charm that captivates me.2. Food is another passion of mine. Trying out local delicacies and experiencing the flavors of different cuisines is always a delightful adventure. From street food to fine dining, I enjoy every bite and savor the culinary delights that each place has to offer.3. Music is my escape. Whether I'm feeling happy, sad, or just need some relaxation, music is always there for me.I enjoy a wide range of genres, from pop and rock to classical and jazz. Each song has its own story to tell, and I love getting lost in the melodies and lyrics.4. Sports bring out my competitive side. Whether it'splaying soccer with friends or watching a thrilling basketball game, the adrenaline rush and the sense of camaraderie always make it an enjoyable experience. Sports not only keep me fit but also teach me valuable lessons about teamwork and perseverance.5. Books are my windows to different worlds. I love getting lost in the pages of a good novel, immersing myself in the characters' lives and their journeys. Reading allows me to expand my imagination and gain new perspectives on life.6. Nature is my sanctuary. Whether it's hiking in the mountains or strolling through a peaceful garden, being in nature rejuvenates me. The beauty and tranquility of the natural world remind me to appreciate the simple joys in life and to take care of our environment.7. Learning is a lifelong pursuit for me. I believethat there is always something new to discover and learn. Whether it's through formal education or self-study, I enjoy expanding my knowledge and challenging myself to growintellectually.8. Helping others brings me fulfillment. Whether it's volunteering at a local charity or lending a helping hand to a friend in need, making a positive impact in someone's life is incredibly rewarding. It reminds me of the importance of kindness and empathy in our world.9. Creativity is my outlet. Whether it's painting, writing, or trying out new recipes in the kitchen, expressing myself through creative outlets allows me to tap into my inner thoughts and emotions. It's a way for me to unwind and find a sense of fulfillment.10. Lastly, spending quality time with loved ones is priceless to me. Whether it's a simple gathering at home or a fun outing, being surrounded by the people I care about brings me joy and happiness. Building and nurturing relationships is an essential part of my life.In conclusion, my passions and interests span across various aspects of life. From travel and food to music andsports, each brings its own unique joy and fulfillment. Embracing these diverse interests allows me to lead a rich and fulfilling life.。

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇1）场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon.2）一些人的观点（some people’s opinion）,这局部在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3）个人观点，这一局部在有些文章的开头首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少到达250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。

因此总结出大作文开头的方式通常有以下几种情况：1）题目中包含了背景信息（phenomenon）,有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。

这种情况下最保险的方法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达（paraphrase）,可以做：主动语态换成被动语态主谓宾换成主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like puter science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree转换成The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blamethis on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as puter science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

雅思小作文开头段改写诀窍

改后：The following chart describes the percentage of diverse types （同义词替换）of poor families （改变关键词的位置和词性）in Australia in 1999.
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图表作文开头段常用替换
give, describe, demonstrate, outline,
名词和从句之间的相互转换
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate) unemployment rates how unemployment rates changed
开头段的写法：改写 / 转述题目同义替换 1. 同义词替换 2. 关键词词性、位置的转换。 3. 时间、地点的改写。 between A and B during the period from A to B 地点改写（具体概括） 4. 名词和从句之间的相互转换。 N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate)
indicate, reveal, present, illustrate,
offer / provide an overview of…,
compare
show: (10种)
proportion: percentage, share
Information:
4.types:
Sole parent
21%
Couple with children

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略雅思写作考试大作文中，经常会要求大家描述是否同意所给出的观点，有时候也会出现讨论类的题型。

接下来小编为大家介绍一下雅思写作考试重点题型的解题攻略，希望能帮助我们提高雅思写作分数，进行更全面的备考。

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略1、愿意不同意型愿意不同意便是在方框中最终一段会显示信息“to what extent(有多大的水平) do you agree or disagree”.有时将会不容易显示信息“do you agree or disagree”,可是要是见到“to what extent”,基础后边跟的便是对方框內容的改变.愿意不同意的优秀作文有3种写法.假如你愿意方框内的观点,那麼给2-三个主体段,表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”有哪些益处,并进行2-3句表述 .这时开头结尾必须彻底说明你十分愿意这一观点.假如你不同意方框内的观点,那麼给 2-三个主体段 ,表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”为何不太好,并进行2-3句表述 .这时开头结尾必须彻底说明你十分不赞同这一观点.大部分,新手们搞不懂许多得以支撑点论点论据的原因得话,能够采用这类保持中立的写法,表明这一观点具有好的,也是有不太好的.去除开头结尾,这类保持中立写法一共是两个主体段,每一个主题风格段最少两个论点论据 .第一个主题风格段表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”有哪些益处 .因此主体段1：益处1, 进行3句表述益处2,进行3句表述.随后另一个主题风格段可以说：虽然你认为有益处,可是这类作法還是有一些地区并不是非常好.随后表明一下哪一方面不太好：不好一,2-3句表述不好2,2-3句表述.这时开始能够说明“你认为这一观点有所不同”,随后末尾严格执行“这一观点有所不同”.之上是彻底不疾不徐型的作法.这类作法你的末尾只需严格执行有所不同就可以了.自然,即便是保持中立,你也能够有一定的偏重 ,例如你将会感觉方框中的观点益处更多一些.如果是那样的话,你能给优势的主体段写长一些,或是将这一主体段一拆为二,变为两个主体段,每一个主体段写一个论点论据.随后写缺陷的主体段就只留一个,可是缺陷的主体段還是必须两个论点论据,但是你能无须写的那麼长.这时开始说明“你认为这一观点有所不同”, 末尾严格执行“这一观点有所不同”,可是你觉得这一观点益处更多一些 .(假如你更偏重好药方)如同那样：开始：观点有所不同主体段1：优势--优势1 论述主体段2：优势2 论述主体段3：缺陷--缺陷1 论述,缺陷2 论述末尾：观点有所不同,益处大量假如你偏重不太好的一方,那麼就把缺陷的主体段写长,优势的主体段减少,随后末尾改为你觉得这一观点弊端大量.2、多边探讨型说白了“多边探讨”,在方框内最终一段显示信息的便是“discuss both views and give your opinion”,而方框内想要你探讨的內容必定是有二种观点,即赞同派和反对党.碰到这类种类的优秀作文,二种观点你务必都探讨,要是没有写到在其中一种,“ Task response ”这一项会罚分.针对得出的观点,你能表达彻底赞同,还可以只赞同在其中一部分 ,而另一部分抵制.大部分2个观点中有一个观点或多或少都一些并不是很恰当的地区 .因此,去除开头结尾：第一个主体段 ,表明某一个观点中赞同或不赞同的层面.第2个主体段 ,表明另一个观点中赞同或不赞同的层面.第三个主体段 ,实际表明自身的观点 .假如自身的观点与某一方的观点合乎,那麼能够将自身的观点融进进来,将你愿意的观点变为两个主体段,随后撤销独立表明自身观点的主体段 .如果你觉得这二种观点与你的观点都一些并不是很合乎的地区,那麼你能在第三个主体段实际表明自身的观点 .例如上边这一事例：你读题的情况下毫无疑问会想：最好是的方法是提升体育设备吗?毫无疑问,体育设备的提升是能够提高身心健康,可是是最好是的方法吗?应当并不是的.因此第一个主体段你可以写“体育设备的提升是能够提高身心健康”这一论点论据,随后得出 2-3语句表述.随后第2个主体段中反驳“体育设备的提升并不是最好是的方法”这类观点,得出 2-3语句实际表明为何.(这时表明了第二种观点) 第三个主体段举例说明表明“也有别的提升身心健康的方法”.(这时表明了第二种观点)开始能够复述这二种人的观点,还可以立即说明自身的观点 . 末尾则务必说明自身的观点 .大部分这就是多边探讨的整体方式.3、多种问与答型多种问与答实际上是问与答的全新升级(这类作文类型经常包括“是啥缘故有哪些对策处理”这类问与答组成).针对这类种类的文章内容,去除开头结尾, 第一个主体段写第一个难题 ,第2个主体段写第二个难题就可以.开始只需简易表明第一个难题就可以.例如这一事例,你可以说：“There are a lot of factors may contribute to job satisfaction.”(筱槿写的是非常简单的书写,考試的情况下不可以像筱槿那样彻底照搬)雅思写作：大作文首段的三要素要素之一： Restatement of the Topic大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题，在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。

雅思大作文首段改写

雅思大作文首段改写In the contemporary world, the importance of English as a global language cannot be overstated. It has become a vital tool for communication, business, and education. As a result, the International English Language Testing System (IELTS) has emerged as a prominent examination that assesses the English proficiency of non-native speakers. One of the critical components of the IELTS is the writing task, specifically the argumentative essay, which requires test-takers to present their viewpoints on a given topic.The introductory paragraph of an argumentative essay plays a crucial role in setting the tone for the rest of the essay. It is the first impression that the reader gets, and it can significantly influence their perception of the writer's argument. Therefore, it is essential to craft a compelling and engaging introduction that captures the reader's attention and provides a clear overview of the essay's main points.To begin with, the introduction should start with a hook that grabs thereader's interest. This could be a thought-provoking question, a surprising fact, or a compelling statement that relates to the topic. For example, if the essay is about the impact of social media on society, the introduction could start with a question like, "How has social media transformed the way we communicate and interact with each other?"Next, the introduction should provide some background information on the topic to help the reader understand the context of the argument. This could include a brief overview of the issue, its significance, and why it is worth discussing. For instance, the introduction could mention that social media has become an integral part of our lives, with billions of people using platforms like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram to stay connected with friends, family, and the world.After providing the necessary background information, the introduction should present the writer's thesis statement. This is a clear and concise statement thatoutlines the writer's main argument or viewpoint on the topic. The thesisstatement should be specific, focused, and arguable, leaving no room for ambiguity. For example, the thesis statement for the social media essay could be, "Whilesocial media has undoubtedly revolutionized the way we communicate, it has also given rise to several negative consequences, such as the spread of misinformation, cyberbullying, and privacy concerns."In addition to the thesis statement, the introduction should also provide a roadmap of the essay's structure. This involves briefly outlining the main points that the writer will discuss in the subsequent paragraphs. The roadmap should be organized and logical, guiding the reader through the essay's argument in a coherent and persuasive manner. For example, the introduction could mention that the essay will explore the positive aspects of social media, such as its abilityto connect people and facilitate information sharing, before delving into the negative consequences and suggesting potential solutions.Furthermore, the introduction should be written in a formal and academic tone, using appropriate language and vocabulary. The writer should avoid using colloquialisms, slang, or overly simplistic language, as this can undermine the credibility and seriousness of the argument. Instead, the writer should strive to use a wide range of vocabulary and complex sentence structures to demonstratetheir proficiency in English and their ability to articulate their thoughts effectively.Moreover, the introduction should also incorporate emotional elements to engage the reader and make the argument more relatable. This could involve using descriptive language, anecdotes, or personal experiences to evoke emotions and create a connection with the reader. For example, the introduction could include a personal story about how social media has impacted the writer's life or a vivid description of a situation where social media played a significant role.In conclusion, crafting a compelling and effective introduction for an IELTS argumentative essay requires careful thought and planning. It involves creating ahook to capture the reader's attention, providing background information on the topic, presenting a clear thesis statement, outlining the essay's structure, using formal and academic language, and incorporating emotional elements to engage the reader. By following these guidelines, test-takers can set the stage for a persuasive and well-structured essay that effectively communicates their viewpoint on the given topic.In the subsequent paragraphs, the writer should delve deeper into the main points outlined in the introduction, providing evidence, examples, and analysis to support their argument. Each paragraph should focus on a single point, with a clear topic sentence that introduces the main idea and subsequent sentences that elaborate on it. The writer should also ensure that the paragraphs are well-organized and logically connected, with smooth transitions between them to maintain the flow of the argument.Furthermore, the writer should pay attention to the coherence and cohesion of the essay, using appropriate linking words and phrases to connect ideas and create a sense of unity. This can involve using words such as "however," "in addition," "on the other hand," and "therefore" to show relationships between ideas and guide the reader through the argument.well-rounded end, ensuring that the reader feels that the essay has effectively conveyed its purpose and message.。

雅思写作五大疑惑解答

雅思写作五大疑惑解答雅思写作五大疑惑解答雅思写作是最难以把握的，因为没有绝对的正确答案。

为了帮助大家更好地备考雅思写作，下面是yjbys网店铺提供给大家关于雅思写作五大疑惑解答，希望对大家的备考有所帮助。

1. 考官是怎么改卷子的?标准是怎样的?所谓知己知彼，百战百胜，所以考官是怎么改卷子的，他以什么为标准的评分是雅思作文尤为重要的一点。

在悉尼大学语言中心工作。

他改作文的模式非常非常的mechanical，他说考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文(including task 1 and task2)，那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。

在这五分钟里，他就死死地盯着评分规则，从task response, coherence and cohesion, lexical resources, grammatical range and accuracy这四个方面评分。

而且让我无比深刻的是：雅思是一门语言能力考试，它侧重于测试学生的语言表达能力，而不是思维能力。

记住：关键是语言表达。

2. 雅思写作7分是什么样的概念?(a)task responseaddresses all parts of the taskpresents a clear position throughout the reponsepresents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus首尾都要回答问题，允许泛泛而谈。

这就是说，我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻，关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。

这就是剑桥雅思的魅力，它要考你的不是你的思维能力，而是你的语言表达能力。

哪怕在ridiculous的观点，只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达，你也可以同样得7分。

雅思写作之题目改写技巧

雅思写作之题目改写技巧一、题目改写8大技巧1.直接改写直接改变题目中的个别词或短语，使其意思发生变化。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“现代科技的利与弊”。

2.提问式改写将陈述句变为疑问句，或将疑问句变为陈述句。

例如，将“手机的利与弊是什么？”改为“你认为手机的利与弊是什么？”。

3.换词法使用同义词或近义词替换题目中的词汇或短语。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“智能手机的利与弊”。

4.句式变化1改变句子的语序、句型或结构，使表达方式更加多样化和丰富。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“智能手机的优点和缺点”。

5.归纳总结对题目的内容进行归纳和总结，将其变为一个更具有概括性的问题。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“现代科技的影响与挑战”。

6.分解问题将一个复杂的问题分解为几个小问题，使其更加易于理解和回答。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“手机对个人生活的利与弊”和“手机对社会生活的利与弊”。

7.增加细节在题目中增加一些细节或条件，使其更加具体和明确。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“使用手机对健康的利与弊”。

8.抽象概括将具体的问题抽象化或概括化，使其具有更普遍的意义和适用性。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“科技发展的利与弊”。

2二、改写题目时需要注意的4点：1.保持题目的主题和核心意思不变，不要偏离题目的本意；2.改写后的题目要符合语法和语义规则，不要出现语法错误或语义不清的情况；3.尽可能使用多样化的表达方式，避免重复使用相同的词汇或短语；4.注意保持题目的简洁明了，不要过于复杂或冗长。

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《剑桥雅思七》写作例文的修改和讲解

《剑桥雅思七》写作例文的修改和讲解近来,我在国内出版的雅思书籍和相关网站看到介绍《剑桥雅思七》TEST 2的一篇Band 7.5写作例文,但都没有将文中的具体错误加以更正,这样对广大雅思考生英语水平的提高是无益的.本人现将该文的错误予以更正并作出详细讲评,供广大考生研习.文章题目如下:Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.《剑桥雅思七》原书写作例文如下:Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimising the number of crimes committed.If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.A person killing in self-defense can not be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next. In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.There has to be fixed punishment for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions.An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is competition law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger.Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.《剑桥雅思七》一书提供的雅思考官对该文的点评:该文论证清晰、观点明确、用词和句型丰富多样,除个别地方外,基本准确.但该文的段落分配不够合理,有的段落连接显得混乱.此外,没有明确的结论也是该文的一个不足.以下是经我改正过的范文:To date, imposing a fixed punishment for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments for and against the execution of penalty.On one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on potential criminals. Individuals will think twice before committing an offence if they know that they will be subjected to a certain punishment if convicted of a given crime. In addition, this deterring effect also helps to enhance social stability and security through minimising the number of crimes committed. On the other hand, if people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result in criminals getting away with their crime and a high level of injustice could be caused by the subjective approach of different courts.There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws should also foresee certain cases of exemptions. One example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is the competition law under which a person held liable for a crime will be convicted to pay a fine according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for exemptions, in some countries thieves stealing food during a period of famine are exempted from punishments.Therefore, in my opinion, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for the measurement of punishment. A person killing in self-defense can not be compared to a serial killer who moves from one victim to another. Perhaps a balanced approach could be a perfect way to ensure legal justice and equality.修改讲解:第一段:1. 原文第一句Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue不如改为To date, imposing a fixed punishment for each type of crime has been a debatable issue更符合英语逻辑和书面表达习惯,而且加上to date显得更为自然些.2. 原文第二句表达显过于wordy, 改为There are many arguments for and against the execution of penalty较为简练,而且避免了fixed punishment重复使用.第二段:1. 原文第一句中的on society 说法有些过于笼统,现改为更为具体的potential criminals.2. 原文第二句表述有些不够流畅,改为Individuals will think twice before committing an offence if they know that they will be subjected to a certain punishment if convicted of a given crime. 原文的will be subject to a certain punishment 改为will be subjected to a certain punishment更为常见.第四段:1. 该段原文的最后一句中的result into 应该为result in才符合英语惯用.第五、六段:将原文第五六段放到文章结论段更符合行文逻辑.原句中an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way改为a balanced approach could be a perfect way to ensure legal justice and equality 更为简练、准确.第七段:原文provide后的for 应删掉.第八段:原文第一句的where用在这里不准确,liable of 应改为liable for.第九段:原文中的thiefs应为thieves, taking into consideration the distress and hunger用在这里从修辞角度讲指代不够明确.另外,原文段落过多,显得十分松散.通过合并或调整一些段落,改后的作文更加紧凑,同时也修正了原文缺乏结论段的败笔.。

雅思作文写作Task-2-第四课时—观点类

第二句话：改写题目（点名论题）
很多考生在这里容易犯两个错误：一是照抄题目，二是句子过长。解决方法如下：
1、改写题目，而不是照抄题目。
例：Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training?
Another reason can be seen by everyone is that_______________.就理由进行解释___________________For example，____________________
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also ina position of advantage because_________________. Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B，I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious。Such as________________。
Sentence 3:personal opinion or brief description of the main body
第三句话：个人立场或者中间主体部分的简单概述
观点类的文章中，第三句话有两种写法：
一种是阐明自己的立场（也就是具体支持或者反对哪一方面）；
支持：As far as I know, its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.
IELTS大作文讲解：agree & disagree/what's your opinion类作文

雅思小作文必备技巧，避开低分误区！

雅思小作文必备技巧，避开低分误区！很多考生在完成雅思小作文时，都觉得替换题目中的描述对象很难，甚至有时不得已会重复原题中的语言，大多数考生只能背诵一些常见词汇的替换。

这篇文章可以教给各位同学三个方法来攻克这个困难!首先，请各位同学阅读下面的小作文题目，并且考虑如何替换题目中的描述对象：The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.到底如何替换呢?方法一: 不要忘记A of B如果觉得替换有困难，千万不要无数次地重复原题中的语言，因为重复的文字是不算在总字数中的不难看出，题目的描述对象是the CO2 emission，二氧化碳的排放量，我们不妨用A of B 的形式进行替换，变成the emission of CO2。

这个方法非常简单，虽然不能在词汇上拿到高分，但是能够帮助基础薄弱的考生避免重复题目。

方法二: 分词做后置定语分词做后置定语有两种，比起方法一难度会更高一些。

01 过去分词做后置定语仍然以the CO2 emission为例，考生们先确定CO2是否可数，答案是不可数。

对于不可数名词数量的描述，通常用amount，那么再考虑CO2与emission之间的关系是被动，emission的动词形式是emit，那么组合起来就是the amount of CO2 emitted, emitted是过去分词做后置定语。

我们来做个练习，请各位考鸭用这个方法写出下面题目中描述对象的替换：The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and2004.答案：the amount of fish consumed。

雅思小作文地图题范文

现在停车场改成了一个剧院。

The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。

The number of homes in Town A is likely to double(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )又可为：It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that…..)细节变化地图每个细节变化都要提到，不要忽视一个细节语态雅思小作文地图题写作用被动语态，因为叙述的是一个事实，被动语态表达的更加的清晰，准确。

如： 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院：A new hospital was established in Town A in 2000.2014年开始，流程图与地图题的频率已经于其他图表题的频率不相上下，甚至有超过他们的趋势，2014年截止9月20日地图题已经考了4次，流程图也是4次。

你还在备考时忽略这两种图吗？地图题句式总结：1. A lies/is situated in/is located in/on/to the east of B.A 位于B的东面2.A covers an area of about….square meters/ hectares.A的面积大概有。

平方米/公顷A covers a small area in 1980.在1980年 A的面积很小。

3.A, which used to be located in…., is replaced by….原本位于。

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