初三英语作文复习PPT
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初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文专题复习指导(共22张PPT)
Picture 4
“爱心”表现(examples)
1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I usually give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I sometimes help clean up the park.
开头;Nowadays,
a number of middle school students have their own Smartphones. Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily.However, students spend too much time on smartphones, they don't have time to communicate with their friends or family. And using smartphones too much may cause health problems. 结尾：In my opinion, students shouldn't use smartphones. Because it's bad for their health.
另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁 也是要失分的（中考中有1—2分的卷 面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。 解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少 用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少 涂改。
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
2023年中考英语作文课件(共30张PPT).ppt
一、外貌：1. 描述让My你难fa忘v（or帮i助te过你te）a的ch一e件r 事i情s 、M感r.想（Wa体n会g.）、He祝福is（祝ha愿n）dsome and of medium build. 2. My best friend is Linda. She is a beautiful girl with
- instead of/ rather than junk food diet
同类话题： Survey of Pocket Money Spending
§ buy books --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks ---
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成
都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康” 为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性； 保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起； 4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点 不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺， 表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分 )与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所 写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩 （Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。
was XXX who encouraged me. With his help, I can play
basketball as well as he does now.
六、感想（体会） I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend. He always holds on to achieve his dream. That is his best quality I should learn from him. -----I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I should learn form him.感 想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：
- instead of/ rather than junk food diet
同类话题： Survey of Pocket Money Spending
§ buy books --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks ---
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成
都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康” 为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性； 保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起； 4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点 不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺， 表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分 )与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所 写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩 （Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。
was XXX who encouraged me. With his help, I can play
basketball as well as he does now.
六、感想（体会） I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend. He always holds on to achieve his dream. That is his best quality I should learn from him. -----I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I should learn form him.感 想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：
初中英语作文复习PPT幻灯片(PPT45页)
2018年衡阳市书面表达
假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问 有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节， 请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。 注意：1. 80~100词左右。 2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。 3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
阅读一个提升自我能力的好方法 ；既有用又高效
Reading is a good way to improve our ability，it is both useful and effective Reading is a good way to improve our ability，which is helpful and effective
复习和预习对于学习很重要，因为他们在学习 中扮演着关键的作用
Preview and review is important to study，because they play an key role in studying
保护环境很重要，因为自然环境对于我们的日常生活 不可或缺
protecting the environment is important ，for the reason that natural environment plays an important role in our daily life
2. 文中应写出自己的补充的三个观点。
3. 书写工整、语句通顺连贯、词数不少于80。
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community.
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件Title: 9th Grade English Final Exam Review PresentationGood morning, everyone. Today, we will be going through a comprehensive review of the topics covered in the 9th grade English final exam. This presentation will help you understand the key concepts and skills needed to excel in the exam.1. Reading ComprehensionIn the reading comprehension section of the exam, you will be presented with passages to read and questions to answer. Make sure to read the passages carefully and pay attention to details. Look out for key information such as main ideas, supporting details, and author's purpose. Practice reading a variety of texts to improve your comprehension skills.2. VocabularyBuilding a strong vocabulary is essential for success in the English exam. Make use of flashcards, vocabulary lists, and word games to enhance your vocabulary skills. Learn new words and their meanings, synonyms, and antonyms. Practice using the words in sentences to improve your understanding and retention.3. GrammarGrammar is an important aspect of the English language, and you will be tested on various grammar rules in the exam. Review common grammar topics such as verb tenses,subject-verb agreement, pronouns, adjectives, and adverbs. Practice identifying errors in sentences and correcting them. Pay attention to punctuation rules and sentence structure as well.4. WritingThe writing section of the exam will test your ability to express ideas clearly and coherently. Practice writing essays, narratives, descriptive passages, and argumentative pieces. Pay attention to organization, coherence, and clarity in your writing. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly. Proofread your work for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.5. SpeakingIn the speaking section of the exam, you may be asked to present a speech, participate in group discussions, or answer questions orally. Practice speaking English regularly to improve your fluency and pronunciation. Work on your intonation, stress, and rhythm to sound more natural in English. Engage inconversations with classmates, teachers, and native speakers to build confidence in speaking.6. ListeningThe listening section of the exam will test your ability to understand spoken English. Practice listening to different types of audio recordings such as conversations, interviews, lectures, and news reports. Focus on key details, main ideas, and supporting information. Take notes while listening to aid in comprehension.In conclusion, this review presentation covers the essential topics and skills needed for success in the 9th grade English final exam. Make use of the tips and strategies provided to improve your performance and achieve your desired results. Remember to practice regularly, seek help from teachers or peers, and stay focused and motivated. Good luck with your exam preparation! Thank you for your attention.。
人教版初中英语中考作文复习课件(共16张PPT)
will also do some studies to improve my math because I
am a little weak in it. Of course iIt is necessary for me to
do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and
仿写练习：
She always_l_is_t_e_n_s_t_o__s_o_m_e__m_u__s_ic___ to _re_l_a_x___目_的_______ because___m_u__s_ic__is__fa_n_t_a_s_ti_c__. 原因
Miss Cool Mr. Ball
relax study better get some knowledge keep healthy have a rest have fun get good grades …
Group work:Use these sentence patterns(句型) to describe（描述） your school life.
activities classmates subjects teachers
…
I always____________ to _______________ because___________________. It is _________ for____ to __________________.
我市英语教学网开设了中学生论坛请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受以agoodteachermyeyes为题写一篇80词左右的短文
--The ways to improve your writing
宜山一中 周小珠
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语复习课件：写作课(共17张PPT)
Task 1: Warm up
2
2021/6/20
Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me.Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel.
Where can I go?How can I get there? What can I do there?What should I bring?How will I feel?
Do you have any better ways?
5
2021/6/20
Advanced ways to give advice:
It couldn’t be better if …
Nothing is more interesting than …
You are supposed to do sth… 应该
A one-day trip guide for Miss Wan
Task 3 :Improve the writing
I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy.
改变主语，丰富句型结构
灵活选用词汇或靓句，提升句子层次
使用从句，使句子形式多样化
Tip 1A clear topic sting details 细节支撑 right linking words连接词 make a great paragraph.
2
2021/6/20
Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me.Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel.
Where can I go?How can I get there? What can I do there?What should I bring?How will I feel?
Do you have any better ways?
5
2021/6/20
Advanced ways to give advice:
It couldn’t be better if …
Nothing is more interesting than …
You are supposed to do sth… 应该
A one-day trip guide for Miss Wan
Task 3 :Improve the writing
I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy.
改变主语，丰富句型结构
灵活选用词汇或靓句，提升句子层次
使用从句，使句子形式多样化
Tip 1A clear topic sting details 细节支撑 right linking words连接词 make a great paragraph.
中考英语作文讲解(共18张PPT)
However, I think it’s necessary for me to learn physics well. I will spend more time on it and study harder. “ Nothing is difficult to a willing heart.” I believe I can improve it sooner or later.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
九年级英语中考书面表达复习专题课件(共44张PPT)
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：80-100字左右。
第一步：审 要认真审题，明确写
作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求
具体做法：用笔勾画或写下
—— 1:体裁 2:人称 3:时态 4:提示 5: 要求
小组合作互批评分标准 满分20分： (1) 找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1--3分； （2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分； （3）词数不够扣1分； （4）单词拼写错3个扣1分； （5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5--1分； （6）时态用错扣1分； （7）主谓不一致整洁扣2分； （10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3-5分；
书面表达写作技巧 审
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假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。 你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封申请信。
姓名 本人特点 “爱心”表现 加入目的 王林
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身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处 （见图片） 1.… 2. …
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、 反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主 代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用 物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误 用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 Ｍy mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.
中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)
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Common Problems in English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
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Frequent errors in grammar or spelling detract from the overall quality.
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Develop your main ideas and论证details with clear explanations and examples.
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Summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.
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中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
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It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
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动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容（优劣利弊要求几点） 4、思考文章布局（段落、字数、中心句） 5、写作（注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅） 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错（时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误）
Let’s have a try
动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容（优劣利弊要求几点） 4、思考文章布局（段落、字数、中心句） 5、写作（注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅） 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错（时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误）
看 例 文 找 问 题
who only (also)
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主要问题小结
1.审题不清 2.句子结构错误，语言表达不规范，中文式英语 和语法错误现象较严重。 3.谋篇布局能力弱，文章结构不严谨。文章主要 由单个句子堆砌而成，缺乏整体性和流畅性， 缺乏恰当的连词和过渡语。 4.拼写错误较多，书写不规范，潦草，卷面不整 洁。 5.有的学生部分或全部抄袭阅读理解或完形填空 中的内容等。
语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯， 表达基本清楚。
说明： 语言表述：单词拼写、标点符号、大小 写等错误， 每两处扣0.5分，同一错误不 重复扣分。其它情况酌情扣分。 词数（1分）：全文词数不足80个扣1分。 卷面（1分）：卷面不整洁，书写凌乱， 扣1分。 本大题的最后得分如有0.5分，则入为 整数。
初三 英语 作文 复习 一、 二
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1. 个人情况（Personal information）: 姓名、年龄、身高，家庭情况，所在的学校、班 级、工作等 2. 家庭、朋友和周围的人 （Family, friends and people around）: 3. 周围的环境（Personal environments） 4. 日常生活（Daily routines） 5. 学校生活（School life） 6. 兴趣与爱好（Interests and hobbies） 7. 个人情感（Emotions） 8. 人际关系（Interpersonal relationships） 17.语言学习（Language learning） 18.自然（Nature） 9.计划与愿望（Plans and intentions) 19.世界和环境（The world and the 10.节假日活动（Festivals, holidays environment） and celebration) 20.科普知识与现代技术(Popular 11.购物（Shopping） science and modern 12.饮食（Food and drink） technology) 13.健康（Health） 21.热点话题（Topical issues） 14.天气（Weather） 22.历史与地理（History and 15.文娱与体育（Entertainment and geography） sports） 16.旅游和交通（Travel and transport） 23.社会（Society） 24.文学和艺术（Literature and art）
评分意见： 总体评分原则：要点+语言表述（要点归档，语言给分）。 原则上应按照考生所表达的要点数归档。如考生写出所有要点，语言表达好，可打该档最高分；如考生写出所 有要点，但语言错误较多，可降一档（如果错误太多，可取其降档后之低 高线
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21-23 20 17-19 12-16 11 9-10 7-8 6 4-5 2-3 1 0 未能传达与本题相关的任何信息。 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些 单词。 语言错误很多，影响表达。 语言有一些错误，尚能达意。
• 2014央视春晚，一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深受感动。假 设你是九年级一班的李明，你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父 母”英语演讲比赛。演讲内容包括： • 1.讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情; • 2.你对“感恩父母”的认识； • 3.具体的感恩行动（至少两点）； • 4.表明我们要珍惜在学校学习的时间,表达祝福与愿望。 • 注意： • 1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； • 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； • 3. 词数100字左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 • Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents.______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _________________________
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• Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. （扣主题 ）Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents. My parents do many things for me. 1 When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight. I felt so terrible. My mother took me to hospital immediately. She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night. （举例） • My parents give me almost everything. However， （they don’t want to get any reward from me. 2 3 From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. My mother’s birthday is coming, I will make a birthday card for her. I must thank her by studying hard. Time is very important, and it is more valuable than money. As a student ,I should make full use of my time do something useful well .） 4 I hope my parents are in （叙议结合，表达决心）（ good health forever.)（对父母的美好祝愿）