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2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
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talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】共45页
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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本命 就永远 只能是 死水一 潭。 34、当你眼泪忍不住要流出来的时候 ，睁大 眼睛， 千万别 眨眼!你会看到 世界由 清晰变 模糊的 全过程 ，心会 在你泪 水落下 的那一 刻变得 清澈明 晰。盐 。注定 要融化 的，也 许是用 眼泪的 方式。
35、不要以为自己成功一次就可以了 ，也不 要以为 过去的 光荣可 以被永 远肯定 。
高考英语书面表达---建议信 写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)
【完美版】
31、别人笑我太疯癫，我笑他人看不 穿。(名 言网) 32、我不想听失意者的哭泣，抱怨者 的牢骚 ，这是 羊群中 的瘟疫 ，我不 能被它 传染。 我要尽 量避免 绝望， 辛勤耕 耘，忍 受苦楚 。我一 试再试 ，争取 每天的 成功， 避免以 失败收 常在别 人停滞 不前时 ，我继 续拼搏 。
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
高考英语建议信ppt课件
Welcome
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题，可以用以下开头：
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
英语建议信模版精品PPT课件
I trust you will take my suggestions into account.
Dear___,
You do not have to devote all your time to…
There is a suggestion as to… I suggest that…
结尾段常用的句型：
I hope that these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations will be helpful/ useful/ beneficial.
写作指导
2.该任务是半开放式的书面表达，因此作 者要开阔思路，发挥想象。作者可以通过 列提纲的方式归纳写作要点，比如：1） 培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法； 3）勤学好问，多实践。
3. 作者要注意对信息进行整合，并运用丰 富的词语和恰当的句式，避免句式单一， 以提高文章的得分点。
Dear Friends,
I would be happier to…
I would be ready to further discuss this matter.
Please inform me when you have made a decision.
I am looking forward to your reply.
1.合理安排建议信的内容结构
写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问 题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己 的建议能够对对方有所帮助）
2.掌握建议信的语言特点
语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具 体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是 多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接
3.熟悉建议信的常用句型
首段常用的句型：
Dear___,
You do not have to devote all your time to…
There is a suggestion as to… I suggest that…
结尾段常用的句型：
I hope that these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations will be helpful/ useful/ beneficial.
写作指导
2.该任务是半开放式的书面表达，因此作 者要开阔思路，发挥想象。作者可以通过 列提纲的方式归纳写作要点，比如：1） 培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法； 3）勤学好问，多实践。
3. 作者要注意对信息进行整合，并运用丰 富的词语和恰当的句式，避免句式单一， 以提高文章的得分点。
Dear Friends,
I would be happier to…
I would be ready to further discuss this matter.
Please inform me when you have made a decision.
I am looking forward to your reply.
1.合理安排建议信的内容结构
写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问 题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己 的建议能够对对方有所帮助）
2.掌握建议信的语言特点
语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具 体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是 多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接
3.熟悉建议信的常用句型
首段常用的句型：
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
【课件】英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)
Chinese words more easily. What’s more, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学 好中文。请你根据下列要点写 回信。
• 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中 文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
• take a Chinese course
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, you had better show your friendliness to others.
It is good for your to make friends. 两个简单句
First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.状语从句
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
英语建议信PPT课件
I hope these suggestions will help you.
yours,
Bookworm
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点评：
1.该句Here is some advice that may be helpful to you的使用使文章过渡自然，并 且切入主题。
2.过渡词语first; second; in addition的准 确使用，使文章层次清晰，结构严谨。
Suggestions, thanks and hope
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Thanks for your consideration. I’m looking forward to/ Look forward to ___.
Yours______,
_______
Signature
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写作训练
假设你是高三17班的李华，最近你发现学 校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写 园地（English Reading and Writing Space)的编辑投稿反映该现象，并提出自 己的建议。
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写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
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3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
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Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. First, developing an interest in English is important, and seeing simple English movies or listening to English songs are good ways to make you l9
yours,
Bookworm
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点评：
1.该句Here is some advice that may be helpful to you的使用使文章过渡自然，并 且切入主题。
2.过渡词语first; second; in addition的准 确使用，使文章层次清晰，结构严谨。
Suggestions, thanks and hope
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Thanks for your consideration. I’m looking forward to/ Look forward to ___.
Yours______,
_______
Signature
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写作训练
假设你是高三17班的李华，最近你发现学 校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写 园地（English Reading and Writing Space)的编辑投稿反映该现象，并提出自 己的建议。
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写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
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3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
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Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. First, developing an interest in English is important, and seeing simple English movies or listening to English songs are good ways to make you l9
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• 递进关系： furthermore；what’s more； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；
英语建议信
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信的模板
Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Hua
• Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice
on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to write to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes
Li Hua
练习
• 假如你是李华，从你的美国朋友Peter来信中得 知，他一直因为自己身体太胖而苦恼，请你用 英文给他写一封Email，提出你的建议。主要 内容包括：
• 1.保持饮食平衡，不要吃的太多； • 2.适量运动； • 3.不吃垃圾食品。 • 参考词汇：过重overweight 名词；
保持饮食平衡keep a balanced diet
（1）提出写信的原因 第一段 或提出对方面临的问题
（2）过渡句引出建议
第二段
(3) 提出第一条建议； (4) 第一条建议的理由； (5) 提出第二条建议及理由； (6) 提出第三条建议及理由
第三段 (7) 总结并表达本人的愿望
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
First, you should attach great importance to listening carefully in class and taking notes. Second, what worries me is that many students copy the homework, which is bad for their study. So you must make up your mind to do it by yourself. Besides, it is of great importance to practice listening and speaking every day. Only by practicing more can we learn English better. The last but not the least, you’d better read more articles after class. It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your English.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向 你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列 要点写回信。
• 要点： 1. 参加中文学习班。
2. 看中文书刊和电视。 3. 学唱中文歌曲。
4. 交中国朋友。
注意：1. 词数120左右
2. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on ______________________________
_______________________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________
First, why not…..? If you do this,…../ First, you’d better ….. Otherwise, you will…..
Secondly, you should/can…. Then / That way
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if…. By doing this,… ●Para3
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：
1. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 2. 课后认真独立完成作业 3. 每天进行英语听说练习 4. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
建议信模板
●Para 1
I’m sorry to hear that…../I’m sorry you are having trouble in…… however, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you./ I am sorry to hear that you ….. so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to ●Para 2
As far as I am concerned, practice makes perfect. Only when you try your best will you have a good command of English.
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
积累好词好句
• ①have trouble learning English • ②with the purpose of • ③attach great importance to listening • ④what worries me is that many students
copy the homework, which is bad for their study. • ⑤make up your mind to do • ⑥it is of great importance to do
I do hope you will find these ideas useful./I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you.
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble learning English, so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to learn it better.
积累好词好句
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better.
Only when you try your best will you have a good commandocabulary that helps you improve your English.
英语建议信
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信的模板
Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Hua
• Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice
on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to write to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes
Li Hua
练习
• 假如你是李华，从你的美国朋友Peter来信中得 知，他一直因为自己身体太胖而苦恼，请你用 英文给他写一封Email，提出你的建议。主要 内容包括：
• 1.保持饮食平衡，不要吃的太多； • 2.适量运动； • 3.不吃垃圾食品。 • 参考词汇：过重overweight 名词；
保持饮食平衡keep a balanced diet
（1）提出写信的原因 第一段 或提出对方面临的问题
（2）过渡句引出建议
第二段
(3) 提出第一条建议； (4) 第一条建议的理由； (5) 提出第二条建议及理由； (6) 提出第三条建议及理由
第三段 (7) 总结并表达本人的愿望
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
First, you should attach great importance to listening carefully in class and taking notes. Second, what worries me is that many students copy the homework, which is bad for their study. So you must make up your mind to do it by yourself. Besides, it is of great importance to practice listening and speaking every day. Only by practicing more can we learn English better. The last but not the least, you’d better read more articles after class. It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your English.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向 你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列 要点写回信。
• 要点： 1. 参加中文学习班。
2. 看中文书刊和电视。 3. 学唱中文歌曲。
4. 交中国朋友。
注意：1. 词数120左右
2. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on ______________________________
_______________________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________
First, why not…..? If you do this,…../ First, you’d better ….. Otherwise, you will…..
Secondly, you should/can…. Then / That way
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if…. By doing this,… ●Para3
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：
1. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 2. 课后认真独立完成作业 3. 每天进行英语听说练习 4. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
建议信模板
●Para 1
I’m sorry to hear that…../I’m sorry you are having trouble in…… however, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you./ I am sorry to hear that you ….. so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to ●Para 2
As far as I am concerned, practice makes perfect. Only when you try your best will you have a good command of English.
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
积累好词好句
• ①have trouble learning English • ②with the purpose of • ③attach great importance to listening • ④what worries me is that many students
copy the homework, which is bad for their study. • ⑤make up your mind to do • ⑥it is of great importance to do
I do hope you will find these ideas useful./I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you.
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble learning English, so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to learn it better.
积累好词好句
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better.
Only when you try your best will you have a good commandocabulary that helps you improve your English.