高中英语常见句子错误分析

高中英语常见句子错误分析

1.run-on sentence-串句-

标点使用和连词造成的语义混乱。

Rita decide to stop smoking she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.(wrong)

Rita decide to stop smoking;she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.(correct)

Rita decide to stop smoking. S he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.(correct)

Rita decide to stop smoking, for she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.(correct)

2.fragmentary sentence-破句-

每个句子原则上都应有主语和谓语，否则就不能表达完整的

意思。

1）dependent-word fragments-从属连词引起

After I arrived in Chicago by bus.I checked into a room. (wrong)

After I arrived in Chicago by bus,I checked into a room. (correct)

2）—ing fragment-动词的ing形式引起

I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday. Trying to find

a garage to repair my car. (wrong)

I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday, t rying to find a garage to repair my car. (correct)

I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday, and t ried to find a garage to repair my car. (correct)

3）to fragment-不定式引起

I plan on working over time. To get this job finished. (wrong)

I plan on working over time t o get this job finished. (correct) 4）added-detail fragment-添加细节引起缺少主语或是谓语。He failed a number of courses before he earned his degree. Among them, English1, Economics, and General Biology. (wrong)

Among the courses he failed before he earned his degree were English1, Economics, and General Biology. (correct)

5）missing-subject fragment-少主语

Sarah looked with admiration at the attractive model. And wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning. (wrong)

Sarah looked with admiration at the attractive model,and wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning. (correct)

Sarah looked with admiration at the attractive model. And she wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning.

(correct)

3.faulty parallelism-错误平行结构

She works diligently and at night.(不对等)

1）and who/and which construction-

Tom, who is wise and intelligent, and who is our union representative, has been promoted to foreman.(w)

Tom, who is wise and intelligent and who is our union representative, has been promoted to foreman.(c)

2）correlative conjunction-关联词

He wants either to study English Literature or study W orld History.(w)

He wants to study either English Literature or study W orld History.(c)

3)making a series of parallel-连续平行

When we arrived home, we unpacked our suitcases, took showers, and then we went to sleep after eating our lunch.(w)

When we arrived home, we unpacked our suitcases, took showers, ate our lunch, and we went to sleep.(c)

4)watching incorrect omission-警惕不正确的省略

He always has and always will compete for the highest honor. (w)