【新高考】高考英语读后续写： 这些细节描写素材,必须掌握!

高考英语读后续写：这些细节描写素材，必须掌握！

今天和大家分享的是可以运用在读后续写中的细节描写素材，大家赶紧学起来吧！

《考试说明》中评分原则部分规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。参考最高档次第五档（21-25分）的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其它因素，可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下特征：

1. 内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯；

2. 连接成分应用得当，行文结构紧凑一体，与所提供各段落开头语

的衔接紧密合理；

3. 使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语；

4. 词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变（主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句

式、非谓语动词等的使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余）；

5. 词数充分，150词左右。评分细则规定少于130词的，从总分中减

去2分；

6. 拼写准确，英式或美式拼法皆可；

7. 标点合理，使用得当。

读后续写基本是以记叙文为主，而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述，其中包括六个基本要素：时间、地点、人物，事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”（what,

who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。

描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。

在写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。

1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。

2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。

3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。

4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。

More examples:

1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.

2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.

3. I was wild with joy.

4. I was pleased beyond description.

5. She wore a shining smile on her face.

6. Her smile lit up the whole room.

7. She shed tears of joy.

8. She was overflowing with happiness.

9. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.

10. I was floating on air.

1. The result is satisfactory. 结果令人满意。

2. It is difficult to please everybody. 众口难调。

3. There is always a smile of contentment on her face. 她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。

4. She belongs to those who are very difficult to satisfy. 她属于那种极难讨好的人。

5. Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfacti on. 看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。

1. I’m surprised to find you here. 在这里看到你我很奇怪。

2. It’s nothing to be surprised about. 这不值得大惊小怪。

3. To my surprise, he didn’t come yesterday. 令我吃惊的是他昨天没有来。

4. She looked at me in amazement. 她惊奇的看着我。

5. Her appearance fairly took my breath away. 她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。

6. Everyone looked at her in astonishment. 大家都惊讶地看着她。

1. He looks so sad. 他看起来很悲伤。

2. He is no stranger to sorrow. 他生活在悲伤中。

3. His sad story makes her feel pity. 他的悲惨经历使她深表同情。

4. His wife’s dise ase took away his appetite. 妻子的病令他茶饭不思。

5. The news depresses her. 这个消息让她愁苦。

More examples:

1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.

2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.

3. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.

4. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.

5. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.

6. I tried to fight back tears.

7. My eyes were filled with tears.

8. A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.

9. These days he was in low spirits.

1. She was burning with anger. 她怒火中烧。

2. He easily loses his temper. 他很容易发脾气。

3. He was in a rage. 他大发雷霆。

4. She was red with anger. 她因为发怒脸涨得通红。

More examples:

1. I was seized by anger.

2. His anger boiled over.