高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件 PPT
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(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
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talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
英语：如何写好建议信ppt课件
汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
2
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？
样题分析 第一人称
一封信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
write a letter for advice
1
假如你叫孙军，是兴海中学的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政府应采取措施, 主街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.
so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构
通拥挤的状况
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
一般现在时
3
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next/near/beside to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street…
推荐句型：There be+并列句
Standing next to a primary school, our school
2
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？
样题分析 第一人称
一封信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
write a letter for advice
1
假如你叫孙军，是兴海中学的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政府应采取措施, 主街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.
so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构
通拥挤的状况
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
一般现在时
3
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next/near/beside to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street…
推荐句型：There be+并列句
Standing next to a primary school, our school
高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 PPT课件 图文
______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
Firstly, it would be better if you __ta_ke_C_h_in_es_e_co_u_rs_e_s.___ Secondly, it would be a good idea for you to
w_a_tc_h _TV_a_n_d _re_ad_b_o_ok_s_, n_e_ws_p_ap_e_rs_a_nd__m_ag_a_zin_e_s.___ Thirdly,you can also benefit a lot from
=tell 用短语来代替单词
要 点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法
多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成 接 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 词 条理清楚。
如何做到词汇，句型的高级化 和语法多样化
in fact besides
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear _P_et_er_____，
(I am very happy to hear from you.) I am writing to express my views concerning/ with regard to _h_o_w__to__le_a_r_n_C__h_in_e_s_e_w__e_ll_. First of all , Thank you for trusting me. Meanwhile, It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
（1）should • Sb ought to do sth. • Sb be supposed to do sth. • Why not do sth? • It is beneficial for you to do sth. • If I were you, I would do sth. • It is high time that sb did sth.
（5）beautiful • attractive 吸引人的，迷人的 • appealing* 吸引人的，迷人的 • fascinating* 吸引人的，迷人的 （6）difficult • challenging 有挑战性的 （7）important • vital 重要的，必不可少的 • significant* 至关重要的 • essential* 必要的
写一封信
建议：如何解除对高三 生活的担忧
一般现在时
开门见山，表明写作意图。在本 段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自 己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的 目的及原因。
委婉地提出建议及改进措施， 或提出忠告。
礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。
the form of a suggestion letter
Greeting, Dear … ,
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
从我观点看来… • From my point of view,..
从我观点看来… • As far as I am concerned,…
就我而言 • Personally,…
在我看来,…
适当运用模板
建议信开头常用句式：
I am very happy to hear from you.
I am very glad to hear that you want to ask some advice / suggestions about ..
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
（8）we • We teenagers….我们青少年… • We middle school students…我们中学生… • We English learners …我们英语学习者… （10）very • extremely 极端地 • surprisingly 令人惊讶地
（9）In my opinion,/ I think … • From my perspective,…
（2）want • sb plan to do sth. • sb would like to do sth. • sb can’t wait to do sth. • sb desire to do sth. 渴望做某事。 • sb has a great desire to do sth. （3）like sth • sb be fond of sth/doing sth. 喜欢… • sb is crazy about sth/doing sth. • sb fall in love with sth. sb爱上sth。
Secondly, you ought to make proper 定语从句 schedules for your studies and life.
.倒装 Thirdly, you need to learn to solve your problems actively. When faced with 状语从句 difficulties in your life, you can always ask your teachers or classmates for advice,
（4）good • great / wonderful • excellent棒极了的，极好的 • fantastic棒极了的，极好的 • brilliant棒极了的，极好的 • fabulous棒极了的，极好的 • superb棒极了的，极好的 • terrific 棒极了的，极好的 • meaningful 有意义的 • educational 有教育意义的
I am writing to express my views on/ concerning …
You have asked for my advice with regard to /on… and I will try to make some suggestions.
Thank you for trusting me. It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
least … In a word/ In conclusion…
4） Translations. 将要点的内容翻译成地道的 英文句子，组句成篇（打草 稿）
5）检查，修改，誊写。
副词
形式主语句型
Actually, it is common for most students
to be anxious about the busy and tough
Signature Alice Major
建议的构思（拓展）
⑴ 说明建议的内容(要点)； ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因； ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对
方感受。
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
高二年级学生Lucy 1.保持自信和乐观。
因担心无法适应忙 原因： 是实现目标的基础。 碌的高三生活而写 2. 列好时间表
结尾常用句式：
I hope that my opinions / suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions / opinions .
school life of Senior Three, so you
needn’t worry too much. My advice is
as follows.
连词
and, so, or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个ent and optimistic,
_le_a_rn_i_n_g_a_n_d_s_in_g_i_ng__C_h_in_e_s_e_s_o_n_g_s__. Finally, it is essential that you should_m_a_k_e_m_o_r_e_f_ri_e_nds
Body:
1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions
3rd part:
ask the receiver to consider the suggestions and take them
Complimentary close(结束语), Yours sincerely
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
Firstly, it would be better if you __ta_ke_C_h_in_es_e_co_u_rs_e_s.___ Secondly, it would be a good idea for you to
w_a_tc_h _TV_a_n_d _re_ad_b_o_ok_s_, n_e_ws_p_ap_e_rs_a_nd__m_ag_a_zin_e_s.___ Thirdly,you can also benefit a lot from
=tell 用短语来代替单词
要 点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法
多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成 接 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 词 条理清楚。
如何做到词汇，句型的高级化 和语法多样化
in fact besides
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear _P_et_er_____，
(I am very happy to hear from you.) I am writing to express my views concerning/ with regard to _h_o_w__to__le_a_r_n_C__h_in_e_s_e_w__e_ll_. First of all , Thank you for trusting me. Meanwhile, It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
（1）should • Sb ought to do sth. • Sb be supposed to do sth. • Why not do sth? • It is beneficial for you to do sth. • If I were you, I would do sth. • It is high time that sb did sth.
（5）beautiful • attractive 吸引人的，迷人的 • appealing* 吸引人的，迷人的 • fascinating* 吸引人的，迷人的 （6）difficult • challenging 有挑战性的 （7）important • vital 重要的，必不可少的 • significant* 至关重要的 • essential* 必要的
写一封信
建议：如何解除对高三 生活的担忧
一般现在时
开门见山，表明写作意图。在本 段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自 己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的 目的及原因。
委婉地提出建议及改进措施， 或提出忠告。
礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。
the form of a suggestion letter
Greeting, Dear … ,
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
从我观点看来… • From my point of view,..
从我观点看来… • As far as I am concerned,…
就我而言 • Personally,…
在我看来,…
适当运用模板
建议信开头常用句式：
I am very happy to hear from you.
I am very glad to hear that you want to ask some advice / suggestions about ..
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
（8）we • We teenagers….我们青少年… • We middle school students…我们中学生… • We English learners …我们英语学习者… （10）very • extremely 极端地 • surprisingly 令人惊讶地
（9）In my opinion,/ I think … • From my perspective,…
（2）want • sb plan to do sth. • sb would like to do sth. • sb can’t wait to do sth. • sb desire to do sth. 渴望做某事。 • sb has a great desire to do sth. （3）like sth • sb be fond of sth/doing sth. 喜欢… • sb is crazy about sth/doing sth. • sb fall in love with sth. sb爱上sth。
Secondly, you ought to make proper 定语从句 schedules for your studies and life.
.倒装 Thirdly, you need to learn to solve your problems actively. When faced with 状语从句 difficulties in your life, you can always ask your teachers or classmates for advice,
（4）good • great / wonderful • excellent棒极了的，极好的 • fantastic棒极了的，极好的 • brilliant棒极了的，极好的 • fabulous棒极了的，极好的 • superb棒极了的，极好的 • terrific 棒极了的，极好的 • meaningful 有意义的 • educational 有教育意义的
I am writing to express my views on/ concerning …
You have asked for my advice with regard to /on… and I will try to make some suggestions.
Thank you for trusting me. It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
least … In a word/ In conclusion…
4） Translations. 将要点的内容翻译成地道的 英文句子，组句成篇（打草 稿）
5）检查，修改，誊写。
副词
形式主语句型
Actually, it is common for most students
to be anxious about the busy and tough
Signature Alice Major
建议的构思（拓展）
⑴ 说明建议的内容(要点)； ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因； ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对
方感受。
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
高二年级学生Lucy 1.保持自信和乐观。
因担心无法适应忙 原因： 是实现目标的基础。 碌的高三生活而写 2. 列好时间表
结尾常用句式：
I hope that my opinions / suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions / opinions .
school life of Senior Three, so you
needn’t worry too much. My advice is
as follows.
连词
and, so, or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个ent and optimistic,
_le_a_rn_i_n_g_a_n_d_s_in_g_i_ng__C_h_in_e_s_e_s_o_n_g_s__. Finally, it is essential that you should_m_a_k_e_m_o_r_e_f_ri_e_nds
Body:
1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions
3rd part:
ask the receiver to consider the suggestions and take them
Complimentary close(结束语), Yours sincerely