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4. I have some difficulty in doing… which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
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高中英语书面表达专题：求助信课件 （共17 张）作 文课件 作文指 导优秀 作文专 题课件 中考作 文高考 作文ppt
Writing：
假设你是李华，将代表学校参加下月举办的英语演讲比 赛，尽管你已做了充分的准备，但是仍然感觉面对评委和观 众会紧张，没有自信。请你就此用英语给某英文杂志社的编 辑Mr. smith写一封求助信。 注意： 1.词数100字左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信课件 （共17 张）作 文课件 作文指 导优秀 作文专 题课件 中考作 文高考 作文ppt
Key words:
difficulty/trouble confused/ confusing upset anxious/ anxiety confidence bother
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信课件 （共17 张）作 文课件 作文指 导优秀 作文专 题课件 中考作 文高考 作文ppt
模板：
Dear …, My name is …. I’m writing to ask whether you could do
me a favor. I have much difficulty/ trouble in…. Besides, I’m very
英语求助信ppt课件
Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you
for help. Would you like to ___________ so that / in order that
_________? In the meanwhile / Meanwhile, ___________.
11. 克服恐惧
_o_v_e_r_c_o_m__e__th__e_f_e_a_r_____
12. 取得巨大的进步_m__a_k_e__g_r_e_a_t_p__r_o_g_r_e_s_s___
13. 渴望做某事
be anxiou_s_t_o_d__o_s_t_h_._/__lo_n__g_t_o__d_o__s_th.
5. 面临困难
_b_e__fa_c_e_d__w_i_t_h_d_i_ff_i_c_u_lt_ie_s_
6. 忙于做某事
be busy doing__s_t_h_._/_b_e__e_n_g_a_g__e_d_i_n__d_o_i_ng sth. 7. 为某事做准备 _p_r_e_p_a__r_e_f_o_r__st_h_._________ 8. 集中精力 _c_o_n_c_e_n__tr_a__te__o_n__/_f_o_c_u_s__o_n 9. 学以致用 _p__u_t_…__i_n_t_o_u_s_e___________ 10. 让某人失望 _l_e_t_s_b_.__d_o_w__n_____________
3. 不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。
3. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite
difficult/hard to do sth.
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29PPT【优质课】共32页文档
谢谢！
36、自己的鞋子，自己知道紧在哪里。——西班牙
37、我们唯一不会改正的缺点是软弱。——拉罗什福科
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢，但是我从不后退。——亚伯拉罕·林肯
39、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
40、学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。——孔子
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共 29PPT【优质课】
16、人民应该为法律而战斗，就像为 了城墙 而战斗 一样。 ——赫 拉克利 特 17、人类对于不公正的行为加以指责 ，并非 因为他 们愿意 做出这 种行为 ，而是 惟恐自 己会成 为这种 行为的 牺牲者 。—— 柏拉图 18、制定法律法令，就是为了不让强 者做什 么事都 横行霸 道。— —奥维 德 19、法律是社会的习惯和思想的结晶 。—— 托·伍·威尔逊 20、人们嘴上挂着的法律，其真实含 义是财 富。— —爱献 生
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课件
Seek-help letter
----求助信
写作步骤： ➢Step Ⅰ：写信的目的 ➢Step Ⅱ：说明困难，请对方帮忙 ➢Step Ⅲ：表达期盼之情
Key words:
difficulty/trouble confused/ confusing upset anxious/ anxiety confidence bother
4. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
模板：
Dear …, My name is …. I’m writing to ask whether you could do
4. Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for h件
1. I'm eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
3. I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and badly need your help.
4. I have some difficulty in doing… which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Sample：
Dear Peter, How is everything going? I have been in
----求助信
写作步骤： ➢Step Ⅰ：写信的目的 ➢Step Ⅱ：说明困难，请对方帮忙 ➢Step Ⅲ：表达期盼之情
Key words:
difficulty/trouble confused/ confusing upset anxious/ anxiety confidence bother
4. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
模板：
Dear …, My name is …. I’m writing to ask whether you could do
4. Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for h件
1. I'm eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
3. I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and badly need your help.
4. I have some difficulty in doing… which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Sample：
Dear Peter, How is everything going? I have been in
高考英语卷书信写作复习 求助信教学课件 (共19张PPT)
Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua
1.习作修改并背诵：
假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民 (native American)文化习俗的论文，但国内有关的英语 参考书较少。请给你的美国笔友Mike写封信，请他帮 你买几本这方面的书。内容包括：
As to the ________(expensive) of books and postage, I will transfer them to your account via online banks. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
On the one hand, … /On the other hand,...
write the model in groups
Please write the model of a letter of advice in groups .
Apply
Dear Joan, I am Li Hua, one of your students. Plan to participate in
the English Speech Contest to be held in our school in next week which topic is about “I Have an Ideal University”, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
3. 寻求帮助
a_s_k_f_o_r_h_e_l_p_/__se_e_k__fo_r__h_e_lp_
4. 遇到一些问题 _e_n_co_u__n_te_r__so_m__e_p__ro_b__le_m__s
1.习作修改并背诵：
假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民 (native American)文化习俗的论文，但国内有关的英语 参考书较少。请给你的美国笔友Mike写封信，请他帮 你买几本这方面的书。内容包括：
As to the ________(expensive) of books and postage, I will transfer them to your account via online banks. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
On the one hand, … /On the other hand,...
write the model in groups
Please write the model of a letter of advice in groups .
Apply
Dear Joan, I am Li Hua, one of your students. Plan to participate in
the English Speech Contest to be held in our school in next week which topic is about “I Have an Ideal University”, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
3. 寻求帮助
a_s_k_f_o_r_h_e_l_p_/__se_e_k__fo_r__h_e_lp_
4. 遇到一些问题 _e_n_co_u__n_te_r__so_m__e_p__ro_b__le_m__s
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
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4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
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My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
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4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费 课件高 中英语 作文-— -求助 信写作 共29张PPT
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
高中英语 应用文写作 求助信课件
Para.3 表达感谢，希望得到帮助
补充细节：如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早 日回复。
连词成句：I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Looking forward to your early reply.
[C例ou] l我d y想ou知g道iv你e m是e否so能me为ti我ps推on荐…几?首/ W比o赛ul用d y的ou诗p。lease offer me some advice on…?
Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?
常用句式
1. 开头 (1) 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./ I'm writing to ask for your help. (2) 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。 Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.
常用语块
(6) 忙于做某事 be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth (7) 急需/迫切需要 in urgent need of (8) 专业指导 professional guidance (9) 学以致用 put…into use (10) 让某人失望 let sb down
典 题 示 例 (2021年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教 George写封邮件求助，内容包括：
补充细节：如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早 日回复。
连词成句：I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Looking forward to your early reply.
[C例ou] l我d y想ou知g道iv你e m是e否so能me为ti我ps推on荐…几?首/ W比o赛ul用d y的ou诗p。lease offer me some advice on…?
Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?
常用句式
1. 开头 (1) 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./ I'm writing to ask for your help. (2) 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。 Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.
常用语块
(6) 忙于做某事 be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth (7) 急需/迫切需要 in urgent need of (8) 专业指导 professional guidance (9) 学以致用 put…into use (10) 让某人失望 let sb down
典 题 示 例 (2021年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教 George写封邮件求助，内容包括：
2019版高考英语写作攻略讲义：3求助信 含解析
1．技法点拨(1)题型特点及写作步骤在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并向对方求助。
具体写作步骤如下：第一部分：点明身份及写信目的。
第二部分：论述所遇问题。
第三部分：对别人的帮助表示感谢并盼回复。
(2)写作注意事项①态度诚恳，言辞恳切：向别人征求意见，尤其是向长辈或者是自己不熟悉的人征求意见的时候，态度一定要诚恳，语气要委婉，让对方感到你的诚意。
②思路清晰，表述明白：语言要简练、流畅，层次分明，表述清楚，以便让对方一看就能明白你提出的问题，并能有针对性地给你提出意见和建议。
③正确把握时态，保证语言准确性：写英文求助信的原因就是目前自己在某一方面存在困难，因此应用一般现在时表达文意，当然描绘自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时表达文意。
(3)句式积累自我介绍My name is ...; I'm writing to you for some help.谈及自己所面临的困难I'm writing a letter to you to get some help about ...I have met much difficulty in ...请求对方做某事的表达Would you like to ... so that ...?In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ... so that ...Also, I'd like you to ...2．经典范文[2016·全国卷Ⅰ]假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。
给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ _[标准范文]Dear Ms Jenkins，I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like you to do me a favor.To get some working experience, I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. However, my English is limited. Worse still, I don't even know much about the format of a personal resume. Therefore, I'm writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and suggestion. You can correct any mistakes you find in them.Looking forward to your reply. And I'd be really thankful.Yours，Li Hua 3．写作模板Dear ________，I am writing to formally request to ________ (请求的内容). The reason for ________ is that ________ (给出原因). I ________，so I ________ (给出细节). I would also like to request ________ (提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me at ________ (联系办法)．I look forward to a favourable reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 4．仿写演练假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。
高考英语写作复习：求助信(薄弱学生适用 ) 课件
Useful expression
8. 迅速的答复 a prompt reply 9.尽早 at your earliest convenience 10.感谢 be grateful to sb. for sth. appreciate vt.
Para 1
写信背景+写信目的
写信背景+写信目的
Para 3 表达感谢+期待回复
Useful expression
1.请某人帮忙
6.做某事有困难
2.遇到一些困难 7.伸出援手
3.付出巨大努力 8.迅速的答复
4. 进展甚微
9.尽早
5.更糟糕的是
10.感谢
Useful expression
1.请某人帮忙 ✓ ask sb a favor ✓ be eager for one’s help 2.遇到一些困难 come across some problems 3.付出巨大努力 make great efforts to do sth. 4. 进展甚微 make little progress
假定你是某校高中生李华，在最近几次英语 考试中，写作部分得分较低。请给你的英国 笔友Jim写封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点如下： • 1.自己的困难和困惑； • 2.希望得到帮助
因为我最近几次写作分都很低(get low scores)，所以我写信向你求助。
写信背景和写信目的
因为我最近几次写作分都很低(get low scores)， 所以我写信向你求助。 I got low scores in writing recently, so I’m writing to ask for your help.
高考英语应用文专题——求助信 A Letter for Help
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章 （如时态，主谓一致等）
It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候)
__H__o_w__i_s__e_v_e_r_y__t_h_in__g__g_o_i_n_g__w_i_t_h__y_o__u________?
I came here last month and I find my courses 描述困难
interesting. But I have some difficulties with notemaking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
点明目的
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in
your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
Para 1
Tom上个月来到北京学习， 询问Tom的生活和学习情况。
提纲 （提取信息） Para 2
我将去参加英语演讲比赛， 在……等方面遇到了困难。
求助，感谢
Para 3 打算赛后去看Tom
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
Step
2：提笔
Dear Tom,
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
B.描述困难
我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
1. _I_h_a_ve__s_om__e_d_if_f_ic_u_lt_y_/_t_r_o_u_b_le_i_n_d_o_in_g_…___ _(b_e_c_a_u_se__…_)______________________
高三英语二轮复习应用文求助信写作课件
此外，我会很感激如果你能...以便...。
What’s more / Moreover, I would appreciate it if you can ...so that..
句4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部
以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。
Moreover, lacking some equipment, I would appreciate it if you can
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guidance on advertising the concert.
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求助信写作
求助信 第二段-请求建议/征求帮助
因此, 我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导g if you could give me some practical guidance on....
总结③使用礼貌性表达使文章更加真诚恳切，
达到社交效果
Part 3
求助信语言框架·第三段
求助信写作
求助信 第三段-表达感谢与期待
“求人型”结尾：如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。
知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。
Knowing that you are expert in /
have a good command of /have experience in....,
I wonder if you could do me a favour / help me with...
What’s more / Moreover, I would appreciate it if you can ...so that..
句4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部
以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。
Moreover, lacking some equipment, I would appreciate it if you can
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guidance on advertising the concert.
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求助信写作
求助信 第二段-请求建议/征求帮助
因此, 我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导g if you could give me some practical guidance on....
总结③使用礼貌性表达使文章更加真诚恳切，
达到社交效果
Part 3
求助信语言框架·第三段
求助信写作
求助信 第三段-表达感谢与期待
“求人型”结尾：如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。
知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。
Knowing that you are expert in /
have a good command of /have experience in....,
I wonder if you could do me a favour / help me with...
2019高考英语一轮高分计划之作文分类指导课件：9应用文写作——求助信
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作文分类指导(九) 求助信
【审题导引】
1．本文请求对方为你审读你所写的申请信和简历是否符合基本要求。直接提
出，不可拖泥带水。 2．要点必须完整，而且语气应诚恳有礼。句式和用词上应考虑变化和多样 性，因为越是简单的内容，越是难以写出文采来，因而就越是难以得高分。 3．因是目前的问题，故时态多以现在时为主，包括现在进行时。
①I have met much difficulty in...
②Do you have some good advice on... ③I would like to know how I can... 3．请求对方做某事时一定要语气委婉，态度谦恭。应用过去时代替现在时， 用问句代替祈使句。如： ①Would you like to...so that...? ②I beg you to...so that... ③Could you spare some time to...
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作文分类指导(九) 求助信
【参考范文】 Dear Ms Jenkins， I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part –time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But it is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don't even know if there is something to pay attention to. Therefore, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you could give me some advice. I would be very grateful if you could help me. Looking forward to your reply. And I'd be really thankful. Yours， Li Hua
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学案(三) 求助信
[题型技法]
(学一学)
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要 请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当 描述自己得到帮助后例]
(悟一悟)
(2016· 全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华， 暑假想去一家
外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外 教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format)。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[满分范文] Dear Ms Jenkins， ①I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. ②I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. ③However, I'm not sure about the words and format. ④Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. ⑤Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? ⑥Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? ⑦Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. ⑧I'd be most grateful if you could do me a favor. ⑨I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua
2．寻求帮助常用语： (1)Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help. 面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。 (2)In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ... so that ... Also, I would like you to ... 同时，我恳求你……以便……我也想让你…… (3)I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar. 我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
3．结尾部分常用语： (1)I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。 (2)I will appreciate any of your help. 我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。
[热点押题]
(练一练)
[阅卷评点] ③表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙述提 到了一定的高度，很好地为下句做了铺垫。 ④therefore 关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯 通，而且突出了写信目的。 ⑤Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型， 用得 恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词 attached 作定语， 使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。 ⑥Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的 意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。 ⑧这是文章提档次的句子。 most grateful 道出了作者希望 得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也显示了作者较高的语言运用 能力。
You know, my parents don't allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends. They think I should make full use of every minute to work on my lessons. However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can relax myself after a week's hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. I know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I don't know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and develop a good relationship with them. Would you please offer me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Charlie， How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed. I am writing to ask you for help.
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语：
(背一背)
(1)My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help. 我叫……，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。 (2)I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor. 我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
假定你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生 争吵。你决定给外国的笔友 Charlie 写一封信，向他求助。内 容包括： 1．谈谈你目前遇到的问题； 2．针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。 注意：1.词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie， How are you getting along?
[题型技法]
(学一学)
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要 请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当 描述自己得到帮助后例]
(悟一悟)
(2016· 全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华， 暑假想去一家
外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外 教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format)。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[满分范文] Dear Ms Jenkins， ①I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. ②I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. ③However, I'm not sure about the words and format. ④Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. ⑤Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? ⑥Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? ⑦Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. ⑧I'd be most grateful if you could do me a favor. ⑨I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua
2．寻求帮助常用语： (1)Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help. 面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。 (2)In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ... so that ... Also, I would like you to ... 同时，我恳求你……以便……我也想让你…… (3)I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar. 我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
3．结尾部分常用语： (1)I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。 (2)I will appreciate any of your help. 我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。
[热点押题]
(练一练)
[阅卷评点] ③表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙述提 到了一定的高度，很好地为下句做了铺垫。 ④therefore 关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯 通，而且突出了写信目的。 ⑤Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型， 用得 恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词 attached 作定语， 使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。 ⑥Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的 意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。 ⑧这是文章提档次的句子。 most grateful 道出了作者希望 得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也显示了作者较高的语言运用 能力。
You know, my parents don't allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends. They think I should make full use of every minute to work on my lessons. However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can relax myself after a week's hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. I know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I don't know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and develop a good relationship with them. Would you please offer me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Charlie， How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed. I am writing to ask you for help.
[增分佳句]
1．开头部分常用语：
(背一背)
(1)My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help. 我叫……，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。 (2)I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor. 我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
假定你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生 争吵。你决定给外国的笔友 Charlie 写一封信，向他求助。内 容包括： 1．谈谈你目前遇到的问题； 2．针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。 注意：1.词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie， How are you getting along?