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高考英语写作复习公开课PPT学习教案
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2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身
穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with
short brown hair and a white jacket.
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3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
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高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。
语 句 子 ” 。 其实， “ 规范 的英语 句子” 就 是 我们经 常讲的 三种 句子：
some difficult idioms. 第11页/共44页 ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
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写作中复合句常见的错 误
2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身
穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with
short brown hair and a white jacket.
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3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
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高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。
语 句 子 ” 。 其实， “ 规范 的英语 句子” 就 是 我们经 常讲的 三种 句子：
some difficult idioms. 第11页/共44页 ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
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写作中复合句常见的错 误
高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)
Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
高考英语作文公开课
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
Discussion-- 找出这篇作文的错误并改正
2
1 People often say,"A smile can make you ten years younger." Not
helps
only scmanilsemcailen help us forget the unhappy things, but also it help us
hardly...when... 一。。。就。。 Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 2. He is a very good boy.(改为感叹句) What a good boy he is !
高 考 英 语 作 文公开 课
Once I failed in my history exam. I was very sad. Later, I told my grandma this thing and said even though I studied hard, I couldn't achieve high grades . I didn't know what I could do. I couldn’t have passed the exam but for her encouragement. " Don't give up becuase failure is the mother of success." my grandma said .
3
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keep good mood. Once I failed in my history exam. I waraes very sad.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语作文 公开课PPT课件
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• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
课堂公开课英语作文高中
课堂公开课英语作文高中英文回答：As an English teacher, I am thrilled to have the opportunity to share my passion for language learning with my students. I believe that every student has the potential to succeed in learning English, and I am committed to providing a supportive and engaging learning environment where all students can reach their full potential.One of the most important aspects of language learning is communication. In my classroom, I encourage students to use English as much as possible, both inside and outside of class. I provide opportunities for students to engage in pair work, group discussions, and presentations, so that they can practice their speaking and listening skills. I also make use of authentic materials, such as videos, podcasts, and articles, to expose students to real-world English and help them to develop their fluency and comprehension.In addition to communication, I place a strong emphasis on grammar and vocabulary. I believe that a solid foundation in grammar is essential for students to be able to express themselves clearly and accurately. I also believe that a wide vocabulary is essential for students to be able to understand and respond to a variety of texts. I teach grammar and vocabulary in a variety of ways,including through direct instruction, practice exercises, and games.I am also committed to making my classroom a positive and supportive learning environment. I believe that students learn best when they feel comfortable and supported. I create a welcoming and respectful atmosphere in my classroom, where students feel free to ask questions and take risks. I also make an effort to get to know my students on a personal level, so that I can better understand their needs and interests.I am passionate about teaching English, and I am committed to providing my students with the best possiblelearning experience. I believe that all students can succeed in learning English, and I am dedicated to helping them to reach their full potential.中文回答：作为一名英语教师，我很荣幸能与我的学生分享我对语言学习的热情。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
04
Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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We appreciate your apologies and good will, but we hope that you can figure out a good way of settling the
• 1 What is the style of this writing? • 2 Why did they write such a letter? • 3 Who might be the writer and who is the
reader (their relationship)? • 4 How do you think of this letter?
201作主题
具体内容要求
2010 邀请老师演讲（邀请函） 演讲比赛安排
2011 请求学生会帮助（求助信） 咨询预约
2012 竞争参加夏令营（推荐信） 自我推荐；参加意图
全国卷1 作文
Learning Goals
• 1 Learn about "writing" in the latest college entrance examination.
• 2 Have a better idea of what to do in writing part and therefore, conclude some key points about how to do it well.
We’ve talked several times about our daily, weekly and monthly assignments. It is difficult to understand why we have to finish all these stuff through our energetic and lively youth. The mental stress alongside has been disturbing us. This morning all of my roommates got up even before 5 o’clock to recite the passage on Page 25. That is too much for us, considering how valuable these morning hours are.
2015年全国卷1 作文题目
• 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目 拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请 给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 4 The length of the draft is about 400 words, and you had better post it to me before June 28th. Good luck!
• 5 I hope you can seize the chance to improve your writing skill and give me your best passage.
• 2 You can never use too many vivid and complicated words. Remember that you need to hand in the passage before June 28th.
• 3 You are required to hand in the manuscript with approximately 400 words before June 28th.
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 Analyze studets' works and draw a conclusion.
• 4 Enjoy some excellent works and learn from them.
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as our English teacher, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers us. In a word, the endless homework and tests-practice.
2013 请求他人接机（求助信） 人物描写
2014 询问暑假学习计划（咨询信） 活动信息说明
who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 In order to publish my article in it, I hope you use about four hundred words to write a letter, which includes all the information.
• 1 What is the style of this writing? • 2 Why did they write such a letter? • 3 Who might be the writer and who is the
reader (their relationship)? • 4 How do you think of this letter?
201作主题
具体内容要求
2010 邀请老师演讲（邀请函） 演讲比赛安排
2011 请求学生会帮助（求助信） 咨询预约
2012 竞争参加夏令营（推荐信） 自我推荐；参加意图
全国卷1 作文
Learning Goals
• 1 Learn about "writing" in the latest college entrance examination.
• 2 Have a better idea of what to do in writing part and therefore, conclude some key points about how to do it well.
We’ve talked several times about our daily, weekly and monthly assignments. It is difficult to understand why we have to finish all these stuff through our energetic and lively youth. The mental stress alongside has been disturbing us. This morning all of my roommates got up even before 5 o’clock to recite the passage on Page 25. That is too much for us, considering how valuable these morning hours are.
2015年全国卷1 作文题目
• 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目 拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请 给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 4 The length of the draft is about 400 words, and you had better post it to me before June 28th. Good luck!
• 5 I hope you can seize the chance to improve your writing skill and give me your best passage.
• 2 You can never use too many vivid and complicated words. Remember that you need to hand in the passage before June 28th.
• 3 You are required to hand in the manuscript with approximately 400 words before June 28th.
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 Analyze studets' works and draw a conclusion.
• 4 Enjoy some excellent works and learn from them.
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as our English teacher, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers us. In a word, the endless homework and tests-practice.
2013 请求他人接机（求助信） 人物描写
2014 询问暑假学习计划（咨询信） 活动信息说明
who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 In order to publish my article in it, I hope you use about four hundred words to write a letter, which includes all the information.