人物类英语作文
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1、En glish TeaCher
MiSS Tang is my English teacher. She ' S Very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes CatS Very much. And She likes Singing and dancing, too. Her English is Very good. We ofte n play games in En glish classes. She is Very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句
子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
2、friend and I
I ' Ve got a lovely friend at school. HiS nameis Jack. JaCk is 12 years old now. I ' m 11. He ' S older than me. He ' S 150 Cm tall. I ' m 148 cm. He' S taller and stronger. He' S 43 kg and I ' m41 kg. He' S heavier. We Ve got round faces and short hair. BUt my eyes are bigger and my legs are Ionger. OUr favourite colours are White and blue. We like SUmmer best.
WebOth like sports, too. On SatUrdays, We play table tennis. OnSUndays, We play basketball. He ' S good at basketball. BUt I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy We are!
【要领点评】
写法:这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物,就要笔墨均匀,两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友,也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是:找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况,再进行比较,通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。
时态:像此类题目的作文,运用一般现在时即可。
句型:因为涉及两个人的比较,不要忘记使用比较级句型:A+be+比较级+than+B。注意:在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时,应一边列举,一边比较。不要一味指出不同,还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友,一定有共同语言和喜好,共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用,避免枯燥的重复。
例“OUr favourite colours are, ” ,“ WeIike , best ”,“WebOth like , ,too ”,
为突出不同时间做不同运动,用“ OnSatUrdayS , ”,“ OnSUndays, ”,形成鲜明
对比。常使用并列连词and和转折连词but ,使文章读起来更流畅。结尾以How happy We are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐!
3、根据下面提供的内容,写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺,条理清楚,字数不少于50个单词。
Mary是个英国女孩,五年级学生,十二岁。她向别人自我介绍,并介绍她的家庭。她
有个双胞胎姐姐,爸爸是医生,妈妈是老师,她非常爱他们,他们也很爱她。
例文:My name is Mary. I COme from England. I am an English girl. I
ama StUdent. I am in Grade Five. I like myteacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them Very much. They love me, too.
4、题目:My net friend (我的网友)
要求:1。条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写清晰、规范;
2 •要将提示词全部体现在作文中;不得少于50个单词。
提示词:(1)COmPUter (2)net friend (3) talk With each other(互相交谈)
⑷ in the Chat room (在聊天室)(5)talk in English (用英语交谈)(6)good now
例文:My net friend
I am Tony. I a have a COmPUter. I have a net frie nd. HiS n ame is Jack.
He is 12 years old. He is a StUde nt. He likes SUrfi ng the n et. We ofte n talk With each other in the Chat room. We talk in En glish. My En glish is good now. He is a good boy. I like him Very much. Do you Want to have a net Ann
5、王晓兰
北京市育英小学(primaryschool)
六年级四班
年龄:12 国籍:英国(England)
相貌特征:蓝眼睛、黄头发
家庭情况:父亲(医生)母亲(护士)弟弟(5岁)
爱好:唱歌(Singing)、跳舞(dancing )、看电视(WatChing TV )
优点:友好(friendly)、乐于助人(like to helpothers)
例文:My good friend
I have a good friend. Her nameis Ann. Her Chinese nameis WangXiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in YUying Primary School.
She is in ClaSS Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nu rse. Her brother is five years old. SheIikeS dancing, Singing and WatChing TV. She is friendly and She likes to help others. What a good girl!