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雅思大作文课件
举例子（exemplification）
• For example, for instance, to illustrate, … Eg. Most parents tend to overuse
punishment in their education of the kids.
For example, only because of the bad performance in primary school, the child of my neighbour was inflicted corporal punishment. In this case, it does nothing but harm to the child’s physical and mental development.
有很扎实的语言功底的考生，写作目标7分或 以上成绩
挑选各种题型的范文简单阅读即可。完 全没必要去研读范文，否则只会误导自己。
• 建议：注重同一话题不同角度的出题 方式，确保自己的展开角度紧扣题目指令。 可精读雅思阅读书籍及国外报刊的议论文， 多积累地道语言和英语国家的文化背景和 实例。考前可尝试实战模拟。
Computer technology：on-line, PC, laptop,broadband Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator;
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雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)
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焦点句
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Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
雅思写作步骤PPT课件
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• 题目5： More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4：转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5：使用并列句、3大从句（名词性从句、 定语从句、状语从句）进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步 思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材： 非教育类和教育类
非教育类：经济（效率；收益和成本） 科技（进步；缺陷） 社会（价值和传统观念；环境；社会关系） 个人（生活方式；基本权利；健康快乐； 行为）
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教育类： 身体健康 学习能力 社会能力和实践经验（与人相处、调节情绪等） 工作能力（动手能力、价值观和道德观、 遵守法律等）
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.
《雅思写作步骤》课件
步骤一：分析题目
分析题目，理解主旨和关键要素。使用思维导图等工具来梳理题目信息，准确把握写作的任务和要求。
步骤二：准备素材
确认主题和论点，收集和整理相关素材。着重研究和补充自己的不足领域， 增加写作的可信度。
步骤三：构思文章
确定文章的结构和组成部分。分段组织思路，逐步展开论述，充分阐述主题 和论据。
步骤四：写作练习
进行多个写作练习，提高写作速度和对文章框架的掌握。针对性地调整自己 的写作方式，提升写作技巧。
步骤五：编辑和修改
重新审视和检查文章质量，纠正文法错误及其他疏漏。调整文章的逻辑和布局，确保文章质量和逻辑连贯。
结论
总结每个步骤的作用，强调这些步骤在雅思写作中的重要性。建议学生多加 练习，掌握技巧，并提升自己的写作能力。介绍雅思写作的步骤，强调每个步骤的重要性，帮助学生提升写 作能力并取得好成绩。
雅思写作步骤
分析题目
通过梳理题目信息，理解主旨和关键要素。
准备素材
确定主题和论点，并收集整理相关素材。
构思文章
确定文章结构，组织思路，详细阐述主题和论据。
写作练习
多进行写作练习，提高写作速度和掌握文章框架。
雅思写作大作文话题及模板及范文 精品 PPT课件
simpler way of life will protect the environment, while
others believe that science and technology can solve
environmental problems. Discuss both views and give
也就是说，从平均值看，名校毕业生的 收入就 已经遥 遥领先 好几倍 ，更不 用说那 些高薪 行业的 实际收 入差距 了。 好的大学，不一定保证每一个人都会有 高收入 ，但他 的确能 够为你 提供通 向高收 入的第 一块敲 门砖。 2 开学季前几天，老家的一个远房表兄传 来消息 ，刚满 17岁的 表侄小 立不愿 意再继 续读高 三，准 备辍学 去打工 。 表兄很是着急，把家族里学历比较高的 我也搬 了出来 ，希望 我能劝 劝小立 。 “我虽然这些年到处打工也挣了一些钱 ，但这 样挣钱 太辛苦 了，我 不希望 他重走 我的老 路，” 堂兄苦 口婆心 ，一再 强调， “你一 定要好 好劝劝 他：不 上学以 后没有 出路。 ” 刚开始我和这位00后表侄在微信上聊的 时候， 非常话 不投机 。 我问他：不想读书是不是觉得功课太难 了？ 他答道：也没有多难，就是不想太累了 ，高考 复习很 无聊。 我劝他：再坚持几个月，苦一阵子熬一 熬就过 去了。 他回答得很干脆：太没劲！考上又能怎 么样？ 现在我 家邻居x x大学 毕业上 班了， 挣的还 没我爸 高呢！ 我再问他：你爸爸现在一身伤病常年要 吃药， 你不是 不知道 吧，还 有，你 爸爸为 了多挣 点钱， 一年到 头在外 面跑， 只有过 年才能 回家一 趟，这 些你也 很清楚 吧？ 他无话可说了。 最后，我实在忍不住，不得不扎他一句 ： “如果现在你连高考都比不过别人，凭 什么以 后你能 比别人 成功？ ” 微信那头
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2. to what extent do you agree or disagree 3. do you think the advantage outweigh the
disadvantage
最理想的结构是： 开头段 +让步段 + 支持段（论点1） + 支持段（论点2） + 结尾段（表明你自己的观点）
6.雅思写作的误区
7.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误，能有效避免吗？什么样的语 法错误是致命的？
8.小作文重要吗？容易写吗？应该怎么复习
9. 怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
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考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文（including task 1 and task2），那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。
disadvantage
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1. discuss both views and give your own opinion
开头段（回应题目+表达自己的观点） + 支持观点1（n个论点） + 支持观点2（n个论点） + 结尾段（表明自己的观点）。
请注意，这个题型是不能用一面倒！
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认真阅读题目，划出关键字，紧紧围绕题目问题和所隐 含的内容去思考
2m到3m写作框架
大作文应该控制在35m写完，小作文应该在18m之内 剩下5m通读小作文和大作文各一遍，看有没有语法错
误
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目标分数为8分，特别是要考到4个8的你， 你不要泄气，终究会成为强者。
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雅思大作文课件
• 建议：要想让自己在写作考试中取得一个 基本分，第一关是要看懂题目。因此，建 议词汇量特别小的考生平时多看考过的考 题，网上有每次的考题回忆，培训课堂一 般都会发放。由于雅思考题话题重现率非 常高，故而熟练掌握以前的题目对应考时 读懂题目会有很大帮助。 •
• 只会使用分4。 • 建议：在背套句的时候，一定要多做 常见功能性句子的填空式练习，并注意词 性的正确使用。不宜写太多长句或复杂句。 以掌握基本句型和话题性词汇为主。凡目 标为5分的考生，备考时应注重题意的理解， 写作基本模板的训练和简单句式的练习， 尤其注意常见单词的词性正确使用。
1.通读题目，了解大意。
当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作，有越 来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑 技术越来越容易获得，也越来越便宜了。 你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势？ ：题中的accessible有不少考生不理解，对 审题的准确性会造成一定影响
2.细读题目，分析句子间的逻辑关系
要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系，关键是能读懂 代词"this"; "it"的具体指代。
• "this"是指第一句话。 • “it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为 了使文章写作方向更为明确，这里可把 it 概括为：the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home
3.再读题目，辨别关键词
区分主题词和限定词，推测考官的出题意图。 • 主题词：Computer technology in working or studying from home • 限定词：positive or negative • 不容忽视的词：easily accessible and cheaper
雅思大作文之教育类话题 PPT课件
teaches the why. It helps people understand why one technique works and where another fails. It shows you the whole forest, builds the context, and helps you set strategy. set a direction for your future education. Theoretical knowledge can often lead to a deeper understand of a concept , understanding the why behind it..
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance.
Current education in China
The existing education system, focus on the results, suppress children’s creativity, learning is considered as a tool to cope with exams, marks are the major standard to evaluate students’ capacity
pass down both academic knowledge and practical experience
passionate love and the feeling of a true family Everything they sacrifice is derived from affection
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance.
Current education in China
The existing education system, focus on the results, suppress children’s creativity, learning is considered as a tool to cope with exams, marks are the major standard to evaluate students’ capacity
pass down both academic knowledge and practical experience
passionate love and the feeling of a true family Everything they sacrifice is derived from affection
雅思大作文概述ppt课件
大作文评分标准
结构是否有逻辑性（Structure） a)引言introduction 涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句 b)主体body 包括足够的论点、论据 c)结论conclusion 重申观点、提出建议或者展望未来
大作文评分标准
二、连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion） 文章段与段，句与句之间的衔接 段落之间的“转”“承”“启”“合” a)表开始：first of all, in the first place, at the
very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等 b)表承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way
雅思写作大作文
第二讲 主题、类型与段落结构
雅思大作文主题归类
1 科技发展主题 The development of science 2 政府的职能和职责 About government 常见考点：宏观政府职能？具体职能？ 3 环境污染和保护 The environmental protection 常见考点：狭义环保+广义环保（动物） 4 当代社会问题 People in modern society 常考考点：经济类，工作类，家庭类…
观点（同意 /不ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ意) 第二段：立论理由一（最大/最重要/最显著
的理由） 第三段：立论理由二 （次大的理由） 第四段：驳论段——反方观点+反驳理由 第五段：结论----重申论点+结语(可选)
雅思写作课件 ppt
总结词
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文，介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况，并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息，要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点，并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一：议论文
总结词
逻辑严密，观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型，要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点，使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二：图表作文
总结词
内容问题
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总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
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详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述，或者逻辑结构不清晰，导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构，掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中，考生需要明确自己的观点和论据， 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外，考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构，如简单句、复 合句和复杂句，使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确，没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文，介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况，并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息，要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点，并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一：议论文
总结词
逻辑严密，观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型，要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点，使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二：图表作文
总结词
内容问题
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总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
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详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述，或者逻辑结构不清晰，导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构，掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中，考生需要明确自己的观点和论据， 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外，考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构，如简单句、复 合句和复杂句，使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确，没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
雅思大作文的结构及写作方法ppt课件
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结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
正文第一段：原因1 正文第二段：原因2 正文第三段：原因3（可省略） 结尾：重申主题，建议措施，展望未来
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引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目， 表明自己的观点，衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
正文第一段：原因1 正文第二段：原因2 正文第三段：原因3（可省略） 结尾：重申主题，建议措施，展望未来
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引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目， 表明自己的观点，衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思大作文的结构及写作方法 (课堂PPT)
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主体段2
另一方面，就业的压力也越来越大。 （举例论证，因果链）
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Secondly, the pressure of employment is becoming greater and greater. Statistics show that in 2007 about one million college graduates failed to find jobs. Most of them held bachelor’s and even master’s degrees. The fact that even well-educated people are confronted with unemployment problems urges children to obtain more skills and become more versatile so as to stay competitive on the job market.
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Nowadays children are growing up in more favorable conditions than ever before. However, they are also faced with much greater pressure than children in the past. As for me, their childhood is indeed less colourful and carefree than that of the children in the past.
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结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
主体段2
另一方面，就业的压力也越来越大。 （举例论证，因果链）
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Secondly, the pressure of employment is becoming greater and greater. Statistics show that in 2007 about one million college graduates failed to find jobs. Most of them held bachelor’s and even master’s degrees. The fact that even well-educated people are confronted with unemployment problems urges children to obtain more skills and become more versatile so as to stay competitive on the job market.
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Nowadays children are growing up in more favorable conditions than ever before. However, they are also faced with much greater pressure than children in the past. As for me, their childhood is indeed less colourful and carefree than that of the children in the past.
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结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
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pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
开头段练习
• 背景：近年来儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。 • The issue of the rocketing average weight of
children has heated up in recent years.
开头段练习
• 焦点：有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式 负责，而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是 导致恼人局面的根本原因。
introduction
题 目A
The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents’ inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?
Lesson five：task two 开头段&审题
Morning
contents
1
开头段写法
2
审题
大作文类型
观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative
advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss both…give your own opinion. 问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?
焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型：
• There is a perception that …, while a counterargument is that…
• One topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to……
before has been paid to …/… have become a controversial issue … • 定义法（需要加个原因）： • The importance of …to ..is a matter for debate. • The influence of …is a subject matter.
开头段练习
• 个人观点：我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。 • My personal view is that both the households
and the society cannot avoid the obligation.
背景句
S1
To introduce the topic in general
Task 2 Introduction (argumentation)
Task 2 introduction
introduction
• The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
• 转折让步型：
• However, some people believe this is …and … should be …as much as possible.
观点句
S 3 Your personal view on the issue
• Personally,… • My personal view is that … • From my point of view,… is of benefits/its benefits
introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
题 目B In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for this, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
• 事实陈述开头法： • （普遍性）It is quite common for sb. s interesting to find that individuals
take different views towards… • （表关注）In recent years, much more attention than ever
开头段练习
• 背景：近年来儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。 • The issue of the rocketing average weight of
children has heated up in recent years.
开头段练习
• 焦点：有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式 负责，而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是 导致恼人局面的根本原因。
introduction
题 目A
The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents’ inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?
Lesson five：task two 开头段&审题
Morning
contents
1
开头段写法
2
审题
大作文类型
观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative
advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss both…give your own opinion. 问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?
焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型：
• There is a perception that …, while a counterargument is that…
• One topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to……
before has been paid to …/… have become a controversial issue … • 定义法（需要加个原因）： • The importance of …to ..is a matter for debate. • The influence of …is a subject matter.
开头段练习
• 个人观点：我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。 • My personal view is that both the households
and the society cannot avoid the obligation.
背景句
S1
To introduce the topic in general
Task 2 Introduction (argumentation)
Task 2 introduction
introduction
• The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
• 转折让步型：
• However, some people believe this is …and … should be …as much as possible.
观点句
S 3 Your personal view on the issue
• Personally,… • My personal view is that … • From my point of view,… is of benefits/its benefits
introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
题 目B In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for this, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
• 事实陈述开头法： • （普遍性）It is quite common for sb. s interesting to find that individuals
take different views towards… • （表关注）In recent years, much more attention than ever