初中英语作文评分标准及必背优秀范文(整理版)

初中英语作文评分标准及必背优秀范文（整理版）

第四档：（15—13分）语言流畅，语句通顺，合乎逻辑。适当使用连词成分。完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档：（12—10分）语法结构或词汇应用基本准确。使用简单的连词成分。达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档：（9—6分）漏掉一些信息点。有些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。使用简单的连接成分。基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第一档：（5—1分）描述不清楚，内容不连贯。语法结构或词汇错误影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用连接成分。不能清楚的表达写作目的。

2011

假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bob来信询问你的暑假计划,现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。注意： 1. 至少写出你将要做的三件事。 2. 回信至少不少于80词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 所给英语词汇仅供参考。参考词汇：summer; grandparents; relax oneself; housework; visit; old friends and relatives

Hi, Bob,

The summer vacation is coming soon..

After a tiring school year, I’m gong to relax myself. I will spend my vacation with my grandparents. I will stay with them for about three weeks. Of course, I am going to help them do some housework. Perhaps we will take some short trips. Besides, I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives. I think we will have a happy time together. What’s more , I will be a senior student in a new term , so I am going to make some preparations. How will you spend your holiday?

Best wishes.

Yours, Zhang Lin

2012

假设你是赵铭．你班来自美国的交流学生Robert患病住院已有三周．请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：询问病情；介绍班级近期活动或学习情况；表达祝愿。注意： 1．词数80一100词左右； 2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文连贯； 3．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Robert,

It’s three weeks since you were ill. How are you feeling now? We all miss you very much. Recently we have had many activities. We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first prize. The matches were exciting and tough. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity! You didn’t watch them. I hope you’ll get well soon and come back earlier. We’re busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practice a song every day in ord er to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and don’t worry about your lessons. I’ll help you with them.

Best wishes.

Yours ,Zhao Ming

2013

假设你是周浩，你遗失了你的英国籍好友Frank借给你的一本书，请根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信表示道歉，包括以下内容：1. 怎么遗失的；2. 对该书的评价；3. 如何补救；4. 你的教训。注意：1. 词数80 —100词左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Frank，

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week. I like the hook very much and I read it every day and plan to finish it next month. Last night when I came to my room, it wasn’t found anywhere. I will get a new book for you.

Old books are like old friends. Once they are lost，they can never be replaced. I feel sorry for losing the book. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours truly,

Zhou Mao

2014

良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益。要求：1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2）内容完整，书写整齐；3）80词左右； 4）文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

My good habit

My good habit is early to bed and early to rise．Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books in bed．Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 o’clock．The next day I couldn’t get up on time.

I used to be late for school ,and I felt tired in class．It was too bad．With the help of my teacher and my parents, I gave up the bad habit.Ever since then, I go to bed early and get up early .I never go to school late again．As a result , I’m much stronger and doing better in school now．

2015

假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2条）； 2. 你的希望。注意： 1. 注意文章的整体连贯； 2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 80词左右。

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it‟s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we‟d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car. In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!