2020高考英语复习资料 教师版三维设计 M8U3
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(一)课前自主学习
Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意
1.gallery n.画廊,陈列室,展览馆
2.birthplace n. 出生地;发源地
3.shadow n. 阴影,影子;阴暗处
4.dormitory n. 集体宿舍
5.wrinkle v t.& v i. (使)起皱纹
n. 皱纹,皱褶,皱痕
6.acute adj. 锐角的;强烈的;(疾病)
急性的;灵敏的;敏锐的
7.being n. 身心;存在;生物
8.ankle n. 踝,踝关节
9.chef n. 厨师,(尤指)主厨,厨师长10.aluminium n. 铝
11.spray v t. 喷,喷洒,向……喷洒
n. 喷剂;喷雾;浪花
12.cube n. 立方体,立方形
13.rectangle n.[纵联1]长方形,矩形
14.helicopter n. 直升机
15.canal n. 运河;灌溉渠
16.medium n. (艺术创作的)材料,形式;媒介,传媒adj. 中等的
17.oil painting n. 油画
Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形
1.scenery n.[纵联2]风景,景色,风光
2.reward n. 回报,报酬,奖励
v t. 奖励,给以报酬
3.dip v t.& v i. 浸,蘸
4.calculate v t.& v i. 计算;推测
5.accommodation n. 住处;住宿,膳宿;和解,调解6.abstract adj.
n.[纵联3]抽象的摘要,概要
7.commit v t.& v i. 全心全意投入;犯罪,犯错;承诺,保证8.suite n. (旅馆)套房;一套家具
9.passer-by n. 路人,过路的人
10.souvenir n. 纪念物,纪念品
11.output n. 产量,输出量;输出
12.consensus n. 共识,一致的意见
13.cloth n. 布料,织物;(一块)布
14.slice n. 薄片,切片
15.pillow n. 枕头
16.scholarship n.[纵联4]奖学金
Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变
1.architecture n.建筑;建筑学→architect n.建筑师;设计师
2.starry adj.布满星星的;像星星的,明亮的→star n.星星
3.agent n.代理人,经纪人→agency n.代理机构
4.changeable adj.多变的,易变的→change v t.改变n.变化
5.admission n.(机构、组织等的)准许加入,进入权;承认;入场费→admit v t.承认,准许进入,允许加入
6.disgusting adj.令人不快的,令人厌恶的,令人愤慨的→disgust v t.使厌恶→disgusted adj.厌恶的
纵联1.各种图“形”
①triangle 三角形
②rectangle 矩形
③cube 立方形
④square 正方形
⑤circular 圆形
⑥trapezoid
梯形 ⑦pentagon
五边形 ⑧polygon
多边形 纵联2.迷人的“景色”
①scenery
自然风景 ②scene
场面;景色 ③view
景色 ④sight
景象;视野 ⑤landscape
风景;风景画 ⑥outlook
景色 纵联3.常见英语反义形容词面面观
①⎩
⎪⎨⎪⎧ abstract 抽象的concrete 具体的 ②⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧ positive 积极的negative 消极的 ③⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧ optimistic 乐观的pessimistic 悲观的 ④⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧
active 主动的passive 被动的 纵联4.攻克后缀“-ship ”常用词
①friendship
友谊 ②scholarship
奖学金 ③leadership
领导地位 ④relationship
关系 ⑤hardship
苦难 ⑥workmanship 手艺;工艺
单元话题——艺术
子话题1艺术创作
①studio 画室
②draft 草稿;草图
③sketch 草图;素描
④shade 暗影
⑤foreground 近景
⑥background 背景
⑦figure 画像
⑧pigment 颜料
⑨frame 画框
⑩canvas 画布
子话题2艺术鉴赏
①inspiration n. 灵感;启发
②insight n. 洞察力
③technique n. 技巧
④visual adj. 视觉的
⑤reflection n. 反射;映像
⑥creative adj. 有创造性的
⑦grace n. 优雅;魅力
⑧elegance n. 典雅;高雅
⑨unique adj. 独特的
⑩abstract adj. 抽象的;深奥的
⑪extraordinary adj. 非凡的
⑫vivid adj. 生动的
⑬represent v. 象征;体现
⑭precious adj. 宝贵的;珍贵的
⑮treasure v. 珍爱;珍藏
⑯masterpiece n. 杰作
⑰feature n. 特征;特色
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一)阅读中的词汇应用
1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ阅读七选五)Small color choices are the ones we're most familiar with. They're the little spots of color like throw __❶__(pillow), mirrors and baskets that most of us use to add visual interest to our rooms. Less tiring than painting your walls and less expensive than
buying a colorful sofa, small color choices bring with them the significant benefit of being easily __❷__ (change).
Medium❸color choices are generally furniture pieces such as sofas, dinner tables or bookshelves. Color choices in this range are a step up from the small ones in two major ways. They require a bigger commitment❹than smaller ones, and they have a more powerful effect on the feeling of a space.
①用所给词的适当形式填空:pillows
②用所给词的形式填空:changeable,意为“能改变的”。
③选择加黑词在句中的意思:__A__
A.中等的B.媒介C.传导体
④写出加黑词在本单元的同根动词:commit,短语commit sb. to doing sth.意为“承诺某人做某事”。
2.(2009·重庆高考阅读D)As if to stress its cultural role,Liverpool has more museums and __❶__ (gallery) than most cities in Britain.At Walker Art Gallery, I was told that it has the best collections of Victorian __❷__ (paint) in the world, and is the home❸of modern art in the north of England.However, culture is more than galleries.Liverpool offers many music events.As Britain's No.1 music city, it has the biggest city music festival in Europe, and its musicians are famous all over the world.Liverpool is also well-known for its football and other sports events.Every year, the Mersey River Festival attracts thousands of visitors, making the city a place of wonder.
①用所给词的适当形式填空:galleries
②用所给词的适当形式填空:paintings,意为“绘画”。
③写出加黑词在本单元的近义词:birthplace
高考采撷(二)写作中的词汇应用
(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)
1.(2016·四川高考书面表达)随着百花盛开,我认为春天拥有一年中最美丽的景色。
(scenery)
With_hundreds_of_flowers_bursting_into_bloom,_I_think_spring_has_the_most_beautiful_s cenery_in_a_year._
2.(2015·陕西高考书面表达)我承诺会全身心地为英语文化节做好服务。
(commit)
I_commit_myself_to_serving_English_Festival_with_all_my_heart.
(二)课堂重点释疑
1.calculate vt.& vi.计算;推测
(1)calculate that/wh-clause计算……;预测……
calculate on/upon 依靠,依赖;期待,指望
be calculated to do sth. 故意做/打算做/可能做某事
It is calculated that ... 据估算……
(2)calculation n. 计算
[练通]
单句语法填空
①We calculate on having fine weather next week.
②Too much of modern life is rushed and stressful, and neither is calculated to_do (do) you any good.
③Laboratory work needs not only accurate measurements but also correct calculation (calculate).
完成句子
④Have_you_calculated_what a holiday in France would cost?
去法国度假的开销有多大,你算过没有?
⑤It_is_calculated_that the number of students who are studying in middle schools is decreasing.
有人推测在中学就读的学生数量在逐渐减少。
[写美]
⑥(2010·广东高考书面表达)据统计,最近有3.5亿人吸烟,其中男性占75%,女性占25%。
It_is_calculated_that_there_are_350_million_people_smoking_recently,_in_which_the_male _hold_75_percent_and_the_female_hold_25_percent.
2.commit vt.& vi.全心全意投入;犯罪,犯错;承诺,保证
[记牢]
(1)commit an error/a crime/suicide做错事/犯罪/自杀
commit oneself to (doing) sth.
专心致志于;承诺/保证(做)某事
(2)committed adj. 尽心尽力的;尽责的;效忠的;坚定的
be committed to (doing) sth.
承诺/全身心地投入(做)某事
(3)commitment n. 承诺,保证;花费;投入,忠于
make a commitment作出承诺
单句语法填空
①He was a good man who was committed (commit) to his family as well as to his work.
②If you are serious about our relationship, you should make a commitment (commit).
③I took the College Entrance Examination and committed myself to getting (get) into college.
完成句子
④If you commit_yourself_to your study, you'll succeed one day.
如果你专注于自己的学业,终有一天会取得成功。
⑤He committed_an_unforgivable_error in handling this business.
他在处理这一业务时犯了一个不可原谅的错误。
⑥The government is_committed_to_greatly_developing_education in the country.
政府决心要大力发展本国的教育事业。
[写美]
⑦(2015·陕西高考书面表达)我专心致志学习英语,有良好的英语知识,因此被选为英语课代表。
I_commit_myself_to_learning_English_and_have_a_good_command_of_English,_so_I_am_ elected_as_assistant_of_my_English_teacher.
3.reward n.回报,报酬,奖励vt.给以报酬,奖励
[记牢]
(1)reward sb. with ...用……报答/回报某人
reward sb. for (doing) sth. 因(做)某事奖赏某人
(2)in reward (for ...) 作为(对……的)报酬
as a reward for ... 作为对……的报酬
give/offer a reward to sb.for sth.
为某事而给某人报酬
(3)rewarding adj.值得做的;报酬高的;有益的
[练通]
单句语法填空
①I had a sense of accomplishment, because I had worked hard to deserve the new game as a reward for my efforts.
②Make the extra effort to impress the buyers and you will be_rewarded (reward) with a quicker sale at a better price.
③When asked for his views about his teaching job, Philip said he found it very interesting
and rewarding (reward).
完成句子
④He rewarded_us_with a lot of money for helping him.
对于我们的帮助,他大加酬谢。
⑤The owner has offered_a_reward_for the recovery of the stolen goods.
失主已经悬赏寻找被窃物品。
[写美]
⑥(2015·四川高考书面表达)作为对我的帮助的回报,我希望你能帮助我提高英语口语。
As_a_reward_for_my_help,_I_hope_you_can_help_me_improve_my_spoken_English.
4.accommodation n.住处;住宿,膳宿;和解,调解
[记牢]
(1)make/provide accommodations for为……提供食宿
(2)accommodate v t.供应,供给;使适应;
向……提供;容纳
accommodate to sth. 顺应/适应(新情况)
accommodate sb./oneself to sth. 使某人/自己适应某事
accommodate sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物
[练通]
单句语法填空
①Some animal and plant species cannot accommodate to the rapidly changing conditions.
②He will accommodate me with the use of his house while he is abroad.
③I realize that you don't have to worry about food or_accommodations (accommodate) because they're all provided for.
完成句子
④The hotel can provide_accommodations_for 500 guests.
这家旅馆可为500人提供膳宿。
⑤I know how to accommodate_myself_to new circumstances.
我知道怎样使自己适应新的环境。
[写美]
⑥(2014·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我还想知道我要支付多少课程费用,是否包括膳宿。
I'd_also_like_to_know_how_much_I_have_to_pay_for_the_class_and_whether_accommod ation_is_included.
5.dip vt.& vi.浸,蘸;浏览
[记牢]
dip ...into ...把……浸入到……
dip ... in ... 把……浸入……中
dip into 把手伸进;浏览/翻阅(书、杂志等)
[练通]
单句改错
①It's the kind of book you can dip now and again.dip后加into
②She dipped a hand in the jar of candies and pulled one out. in→into
完成句子
③Parents are asked to dip_into_their_pockets for new school books.
家长被要求自掏腰包买新课本。
④At a primary school, I saw in one class a student dip_his/her_feet_in_ink and make a painting out of footprints.
在一所小学里,我在一个班里看到有一个学生用脚蘸上墨水画了一幅脚印的画。
[写美]
⑤(2011·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)首先,它涵盖了国内和国际新闻,这样,只要简单地浏览页面,我就能了解一周内发生的所有重要事情。
First,_it_covers_both_national_and_international_news_so_that,_by_simply_dipping_into_t he_pages,_I_can_learn_all_important_things_that_have_happened_during_the_week.
[词汇过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1.The authority must make suitable accommodation (食宿) available to the family.
2.Current employment laws will be changed to reward (奖励) effort and punish laziness.
3.The large drop in industrial output (产量) this year came as a big shock to the local government.
4.Lucy has a(n) acute (敏锐的) eye for fashion, which makes her a very good shopping companion.
5.Some people say beauty itself is abstract (抽象的). Do you agree?
6.It was his brother who committed (犯罪) the murder.
7.Television is a very efficient medium (媒介,传媒) for spreading information.
8.Cooperstown, New York, is said to be the birthplace (发源地) of baseball.
9.Sometimes they just drive slowly down the lane enjoying the scenery (风景).
10.The scientist could not calculate (计算) when the spacecraft would reach the Jupiter.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.He dipped the brush into the thick white paint and began to paint the wall.
2.There's nothing more rewarding_(reward) than putting smiles on the faces around you.
3.Above, I could see only a strip of starry_(star) sky, so close were the walls of the canyon.
4.I needed to accommodate myself (I) to the new schedule.
5.The young men tried to enter a nightclub, but were refused admission (admit).
6.The weather here in summer is so changeable (change). Please take an umbrella when you go out.
7.The project is on such a gigantic (庞大的) scale that the cost is hard to_calculate (calculate).
8.They are looking for someone with a real sense of commitment (commit) to the job.
Ⅲ.单句改错
1.Though I'm busy, I've committed myself to take the task for at least the coming year. take→taking
2.He made great contributions to the local education and was rewarded to the title “Saluting Rural Teacher”.第二个to→with
3.Though I was successfully rescued in the end, the disgusted scar would be with me forever.disgusted→disgusting
4.In this time and age, we should change to accommodate ourselves into the society.into→to 5.I buy a newspaper on my way home, and sometimes I dip in it on the bus. in→into
Ⅳ.句型转换/完成句子
1.He was a good worker who was devoted to his family and work.
→He was a good worker who was committed to his family and work.
2.In reward for his bravery, the soldier was given a gold medal.
①As a reward for his bravery, the soldier was given a gold medal.
②The soldier was rewarded a gold medal for his bravery.
3.The eye can accommodate_itself_to_seeing objects at different distances.
眼睛能自动调节以便观看远近不同的物体。
4.The sun seems to dip_into_the_sea every evening.
每晚太阳好像沉到海里去了。
5.It_is_calculated_that the loss was over one million dollars.
据估计,损失超过了一百万美元。
(一)课前自主学习
1.upwards_of在……以上,大于,超过2.be_off_to 动身去……
3.cut_up 切碎
4.lay_out 布置,设计;铺开,展开5.cut_sth._out_(of_sth.) (从……)剪出,剪下6.have_a_go_(at)[串记1]试一试
7.put_on 上演;穿上8.experiment_with_...[串记2]用……做试/实验9.range_from_...to_... 从……到……(变化) 10.in_addition 而且,另外
11.so_far 到目前为止
12.be_eager_to_do_sth. 渴望做某事
13.instead_of 代替;而不是
14.make_a_reservation[串记3]预订
15.try_out 试验,试用
16.be_made_out_of 由……制成,用……制成17.be_typical_of 是……特有的;是典型的……18.build_up 增强;积累,增多19.come_on_the_market 上市,投入市场
20.act_as 担任,充当
[同根短语串记]
串记1.“have”相关常用短语
①have a go (at) 试一试
②have trouble (in) doing sth./with sth.做某事有困难
③have sth. in common with ...与……有共同之处
④have a word with sb. 与某人谈一谈
⑤have words with sb. 和某人吵架
⑥have a good command of 掌握;精通
串记2.“v.+with”短语速记
①experiment with 用……做试/实验
②meet with 遇见,碰上
③agree with 同意
④associate with 与……交往
⑤deal/do with 处理;对付
⑥compete with 与……竞争
⑦live with 与……一起生活
串记3.“make+a+n.”短语荟萃
①make a reservation 预订
②make a difference 有影响,有区别
③make a contribution 做贡献
④make a mistake 犯错误
⑤make a noise 发出噪音
1.through the use of colours, light and shadows
通过色彩、光线和阴影的运用
2.a wide variety of_subjects各种各样的主题
3.float on the surface of the pond 漂浮在池塘的表面
4.commit his whole being to painting 全身心投入绘画
5.gain admission to the Beijing School of Art
被北京艺术学校录取
6.anything and everything 任何东西
7.arrange it_in the style that you want 布置成你想要的风格
8.draw the outline of_the picture 画出图案的轮廓
1.Hardly had we left the dormitory the next morning when we realized we had left our map
in the room.
第二天早上,我们刚离开宿舍,就意识到我们把地图忘在房间里了。
2.Had_you_come with us, I guarantee you would have enjoyed Europe too.
如果你和我们一起来的话,你也会喜欢欧洲的。
3.After his graduation, this project was exhibited in art galleries all over China, making_him_famous_nationwide.
他毕业后,该项目在中国各地的美术馆中展出,这使他闻名全国。
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一)阅读中的词块和句式(完成句子)
1.(2013·重庆高考阅读A)I took my purse and keys and rushed to my car. But suddenly I began to doubt about the dentist. What kind of dentist would be_so_eager_to (如此急于……) treat someone at such short notice? Why wasn't he as busy as the others?
2.(2013·山东高考阅读D)Sparrow failed to grow for another two years, until a new CEO, Carl Pearson, decided to build_up (扩大) its market share.
高考采撷(二)写作中的短语和句式
(根据提示翻译句子)
1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)另外,你最好带一些礼物,例如一本书或一个中国结。
(in addition)
In_addition,_you'd_better_bring_some_gifts,_such_as_a_book_or_a_Chinese_knot._
2.(2015·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)下周六上午8点,我们去附近的养老院陪老人们过重阳节。
(be off to)
We_are_off_to_the_nearby_nursing_home_at_eight_next_Saturday_for_the_Double_Ninth_ Festival.
(二)课堂重点释疑
[短语集释]
1.cut up切碎;使伤心,难过
[记牢]
cut down 削减;砍倒;缩短某物;降低
[练通]
介、副词填空
①The flood cut the villagers off from the rest of the world.
②Could you cut my meat up for me please, Daddy?
③Tony, mind your manners! Don't cut in while others are talking.
④If we fail to sell enough goods, compared with last year, we will have to cut down production.
完成句子
⑤Cut_up_the_carrots before you put them into the pot.
把胡萝卜放进锅里前要切碎。
⑥Nothing was more San Francisco than the street that cut_through its heart.
旧金山最具代表性的就是那条贯穿于市中心的街道了。
[写美]
⑦(2010·安徽高考书面表达)然而,如果我不得不放弃其中之一,我会关掉电视,而不是关掉手机或切断互联网。
However,_if_I_had_to_give_up_one_of_them,_I_would_turn_off_the_TV_rather_than_swit ch_off_my_cell_or_cut_off_the_Internet.
2.lay out布置,设计;铺开,展开;把……打昏;花钱
[辨清]写出下列句中lay out的含义
①She laid out all her new clothes on the bed.铺开,展开
②The gardens were laid out with lawns, flower beds and fountains.布置,设计
③With one blow he laid his attacker out. 把……打昏
[记牢]
lay sb. off裁员,解雇某人
lay down 放下;中断(工作);制定(条例或原则)
lay sth. aside 把……放在一边;储存
[练通]
单句语法填空
④My parents live a simple life in order to lay aside enough money for my higher education.
⑤True love is when you care enough about another person that you would lay down_your life.
完成句子
⑥Some are former state employees who entered the private sector because
they_were_laid_off or underemployed.
有些人过去在国企任职,他们因下岗或无正式工作而进入民营企业。
⑦He is always hard up because he doesn't_lay_out_his_money_wisely.
他总是没钱,因为他不会精打细算。
[写美]
⑧(2012·陕西高考书面表达)9月10日下午,一些同学用纸花和气球布置教室,另一些同学去买蛋糕、饮料和水果。
On_the_afternoon_of_September_10,_some_of_the_classmates_laid_out_the_classroom_wit h_paper_flowers_and_ballons,_and_others_went_to_buy_cakes,_drinks_and_fruits.
3.have a go (at)试一试
[记牢]
have a go at (doing) sth.尝试(做)某事
have a go at sb. 指责某人,数落某人
at/in one go 一下子,一举,一口气
be on the go 十分活跃,非常忙碌
[练通]
单句改错
①Dick wanted to have a go at solve the problem.solve→solving
②Do you like to have many projects on a go at one time?a→the
完成句子
③No matter how difficult it is, he is determined to have_a_go_at_the_experiment.
不论困难有多大,他都决心去尝试一下这个实验。
④There were about 10 young people standing round him, all waiting to_have_a_go.
大约有十个年轻人把他围起来,个个都等着试一下。
⑤The boss had_a_go_at Jack for his being late for work.
老板因为杰克上班迟到而指责他。
[用准]go作为名词,表示“尝试”时是可数名词,常加不定冠词,有时也用复数,其复数形式是goes;当表示“活力”时,为不可数名词,如full of go“精力充沛”。
[写美]
⑥(2012·江苏高考书面表达)不要以自我为中心,试着体谅别人。
我们必须学会冷静和明智地处理冲突。
Don't_be_self-centered_and_have_a_go_at_being_considerate._We_must_learn_to_handle_ conflicts_calmly_and_wisely.
[句式集释]
1.hardly ... when ...“一……就……”
[教材原句]Hardly had we left the dormitory the next morning when we realized we had left our map in the room.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)I had_hardly_got_home_when it began to rain.
我刚到家就开始下雨了。
(2)Hardly had_he_seen_me_when he ran away.
他一看见我就跑了。
(3)Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.
=No_sooner_had_he_arrived_than she started complaining.
他刚一到,她就开始抱怨起来。
[析用法规则]
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2018·北京高考写作佳句)No sooner had they arrived at the tea house than the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.(要点句)
(2)(2015·北京高考写作佳句)Hardly had he sat down at a table when he began to show us the basic skills of making dough figurines.(要点句)
2.现在分词(短语)作结果状语
[教材原句]After his graduation, this project was exhibited in art galleries all over China, making_him_famous_nationwide.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)The fire lasted nearly two days, leaving_nothing_valuable.
大火持续了将近两天,几乎没剩下什么值钱的东西。
(2)It has rained for over ten days, causing_the_river_to_rise.
下了十多天雨,致使河水上涨。
(3)The man hurriedly returned home, only_to_find he had left his key in the office.
这个人急急忙忙地回到家,结果发现他把钥匙落在办公室里了。
[析用法规则]
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2018·北京高考写作佳句)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, turning out to be extremely rewarding.(要点句)
(2)(2017·江苏高考写作佳句)Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.(要点句)
[词块、句式过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.选词填空
have a go at, put on, try out, cut sth. out (of sth.), cut up, lay out, build up, range from ... to, upwards of, be off to
1.My son asked me to let him have_a_go_at the heavy box.
2.He cut_up the meat on the plate and began to eat.
3.The method seems good, but it needs to be tried_out.
4.The garden is laid_out in a formal pattern.
5.They decorated it with stars cut_out_of silver paper and candles.
6.It's important to build_up his confidence little by little.
7.The total cost of the project would be upwards_of $240 million.
8.They would be_off_to Shanghai to visit a friend of theirs.
9.Ages of the children in this school range_from three to eighteen.
10.The band are hoping to put_on a UK show before the end of the year.
Ⅱ.完成句子
1.The sun began to rise in the sky, bathing_the_mountain_in_golden_light.
天空中太阳开始升起,使山脉沐浴在金色的阳光中。
2.No_sooner_had_I_heard_the_knock than I opened the door.
我一听到敲门声,就马上去开门了。
3.When my manager told me I would_be_laid_off,_my mind went blank.
当经理告诉我将要被解雇时,我大脑一片空白。
4.Brian was_terribly_cut_up when his father died.
布莱恩的父亲去世时,他极其悲痛。
5.They hurried to the station, only_to_find their train had gone five minutes before.
他们匆匆赶到车站,结果却发现他们的火车已于五分钟前离开了。
Ⅲ.分步写作
假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom来信询问你在高中时选择艺术的原因,请据此给他写封回信。
要点如下:
1.第一次被带去美术馆看展览印象深刻,对绘画产生了兴趣。
2.在高中选择学习艺术并立志当一名画家。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数;
2.尽量使用本模块的知识点;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Glad to receive your letter.
That's all I want to tell you. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua 第一步:准确审题,理行文脉络,拟写作要点
本文属于应用文写作中的普通书信,时态以过去时为主,人称为第一人称。
文章应分三个层次:一是回应对方的来信,引出本文内容;二是说明曾经的经历使我喜欢上艺术;三是点出我在高中时选择学习艺术,立志成为一名画家。
要点1:在你的信中,你问我为什么在高中时选择学习艺术。
(choose to do)
In_your_letter,_you_asked_me_why_I_chose_to_learn_art_at_Senior_High.
要点2-①:我被带到美术馆去看展览。
(exhibition)
I_was_taken_to_art_galleries_to_watch_exhibitions.
要点2-②:有很多种画,诸如山水画、肖像画、水彩画。
(a wide range of)
There_were_a_wide_range_of_paintings,_such_as_landscapes,_portraits_and_watercolours.
要点2-③:让我印象最深的是一幅名为《父亲》的油画。
(impress)
What impressed me most was an oil painting named Father.
要点2-④:我对绘画产生了兴趣。
(develop)
I_have_developed_an_interest_in_painting.
要点3-①:高中时我选择学习艺术,立志成为一名画家。
(aim to do)
At_Senior_High_I_chose_to_learn_art_and_aimed_to_be_a_painter.
要点3-②:我仔细观察周围的事物,并努力把它们画出来。
(observe)
I_observed_things_around_me_carefully_and_tried_to_paint_them_out.
要点3-③:我的梦想一定会实现。
(realize)
My_dream_will_surely_be_realized.
第二步:添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼
要点的提炼已经比较全面,只是相互间相对松散,逻辑不大连贯。
为了使文章更顺畅,可以对要点进行适度拓展。
例如要点2-①添加先行词the first time,并用上when引导的定语从句来强调当时的经历;要点2-③可用which引导的定语从句以及remind sb. of高级表达指出印象深刻的原因;要点3-③可添加confidence,并将原句拓展为同位语从句。
拓展2-①:我记得第一次被带到美术馆去看展览时的情景。
(the first time, when引导的定语从句)
I_remember_the_first_time_when_I_was_taken_to_art_galleries_to_watch_exhibitions.
拓展2-③:让我印象最深的是一幅名为《父亲》的油画,它让我想到了我的爷爷。
(which 引导的定语从句,remind sb. of)
What_impressed_me_most_was_an_oil_painting_named_Father,_which_reminded_me_of_ my_grandfather.
拓展3-③:我相信我的梦想一定会实现。
(confidence, that引导的同位语从句)
I_have_the_confidence_that_my_dream_will_surely_be_realized.
第三步:连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡
本写作可采用总—分—总式结构组织全文。
首段可用Now I'd like to tell you something about it.引出下文,用still, but, since then, meanwhile等词汇作好文章的衔接过渡。
Dear_Tom,_
Glad_to_receive_your_letter._In_your_letter,_you_asked_me_why_I_chose_to_learn_art_at_ Senior_High._Now_I'd_like_to_tell_you_something_about_it.
I_still_remember_the_first_time_when_I_was_taken_to_art_galleries_to_watch_exhibitions. _There_were_a_wide_range_of_paintings,_such_as_landscapes,_portraits_and_watercolours,_but _what_impressed_me_most_was_an_oil_painting_named_Father,_which_reminded_me_of_my_ grandfather.
Since_then_I_have_developed_an_interest_in_painting.At_Senior_High_I_chose_to_learn_a rt_and_aimed_to_be_a_painter._Meanwhile,_I_observed_things_carefully_and_tried_to_paint_th em_out._I_have_the_confidence_that_my_dream_will_surely_be_realized.
That's_all_I_want_to_tell_you._Looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
Yours,
Li_Hua。