英语作文的评语

英语作文的评语

mynameisjinjiahong,andmyenglishnameiskaci.i’m14yearsold,37kg.ilikeengl ish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,andba nanas.yesterday,iwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglish.oh,hereisbeautifu l!imakeafriend.hernameismayun.sheisfromhangz hou,she’s10yearsold,andli kesapples.today,i’mveryhappy.班主任评语：

verygood!keepstudyinghard,andibelieveyoucanlearnalothere!mychinesena meis范依昀。

myenglishnameiskate.brown.myfamilynameisbrown.myfirstnameiskate.i’m12yearsold.iamchinese.i’mfromhuzhou.ihavemanyhobbi es.ilikeplayingfo otball,andplayingcomputer.ilikebluebest.ihaveafriend.hernameis蒋姣姣。

shelookshappy,sheislovely.ilikeherverymuch.shelikeswatchingtvandsinging. thereisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,motherandme.myfatherisadoctor, mymotherisadoctortoo.ilikethemverymuch.iamhappyeveryday.mytelepho nenumberis********.welcometomyhome.班主任评语：

verygood!yourhand-

writhingisverynice.todayisthefirstdayofthesummercamp.icouldn’tsleepwell yesterdayevening.maybeifeltalittleuncomfortable.iseldomlivewithothers.a

ndthebedroomisdiffer entformhome.butimetthreenewfriendshere.they’ref riendlyandlovely.afterthebeginningceremony,ihadanexam.thefirstpassage wasalittledifficultforme.somewordsihaven’tlearnbefore.ispentsomeminute sonit.anyway,ithoughtipassedit.intheafternoon,isawtheforeignteacher.hern ameisjane.abeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusa.sheisnotold,just22.butshehadb eentoeurope,beijing.sheletusplaysomegames,becauseshewantedustoknow eachtherquickly.butithinkthegamesisnotinteresting.sosomestudentsdon’tp uttheirheartsinthegame.alsotheteacherspokesoquick lythaticouldn’tunders tandher.班主任评语：beautifulhand-

writing!exceptforsomegrammermistakes,thisdairycouldbeperfect!asforthe class,ithink