写作练习一(写作教学指导)

写作练习一

【写作任务】

班里进行英语写作比赛，要求将小红帽的故事用英语写出来。请写一篇短文参加比赛。

【思路点拨】

1. 定基调

体裁：记叙文

时态：一般过去时

人称:第三人称

2. 列提纲、写句子

列提纲写句子

故事的开头Once upon a time, there was a girl called Little Red Riding Hood (小红帽). One day her grandma was sick. Her mom was very busy. (1)_____________(她独自去看外婆).

故事的发展When she was walking in the forest, she met a wolf. She didn’t know he was bad. She told him about Grandma.

(2)_____________(狼如此饿以至于他想吃掉女孩和她外婆). Then the wolf came up with an idea. He asked the girl to pick flowers for Grandma while he went to Grandma’s house to eat her. After that, (3)_____________(他穿上外婆的衣服并躺在她的床上). As soon as Little Red Riding Hood arrived, the wolf suddenly caught her and ate her.

故事的结尾In the end, a hunter (猎人) passed by and saw this.

(4)_____________(他射死了狼) and saved Little Red Riding

3. 巧衔接

讲述故事时，可按照时间顺序展开。如可用表示时间的词语once upon a time, one day引入故事；用when, then, as soon as叙述故事的发展；用in the end引出故事的结尾。这些词语的使用使故事情节紧凑、脉络清晰。

4. 成篇章

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答案

2. 列提纲、写句子

(1) She went to see Grandma alone

(2) The wolf was so hungry that he wanted to eat the girl and her grandma

(3) he put on Grandma’s clothes and lay in her bed

(4) He shot the wolf

4. 成篇章

高分范文:

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Little Red Riding Hood. One day her grandma was sick. Her mom was very busy. She went to see Grandma alone.

When she was walking in the forest, she met a wolf. She didn’t know he was bad. She told him about Grandma. The wolf was so hungry that he wanted to eat the girl and her grandma. Then the wolf came up with an idea. He asked the girl to pick flowers for Grandma while he went to Grandma’s house to eat her. After that, he put on Grandma’s clothes and lay in her bed.As soon as Little Red Riding Hood arrived, the wolf suddenly caught her and ate her.

In the end, a hunter passed by and saw this. He shot the wolf and saved Little Red Riding Hood and Grandma.