雅思大作文利弊类写法 PPT
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《雅思写作》课件-2024鲜版
《雅思写作》课件CATALOGUE 目录•雅思写作概述•雅思写作任务类型与技巧•文章结构与段落展开方法•词汇、语法和句式运用指导•观点陈述、论证和批判性思维培养•模拟试题与范文欣赏01雅思写作概述CHAPTER雅思写作考试形式与要求考试形式雅思写作考试分为两部分，第一部分为图表作文（Task 1），第二部分为议论文（Task 2）。
字数要求Task 1要求考生写至少150字，Task2要求考生写至少250字。
时间限制Task 1的建议用时为20分钟，Task 2的建议用时为40分钟。
评分标准及考生常见问题评分标准考生常见问题如何备考雅思写作熟悉考试形式和评分标准积累词汇和句型练习写作请教老师或专业人士02雅思写作任务类型与技巧CHAPTER1 2 3理解图表信息选择重要信息使用适当的语言和结构图表作文写作技巧明确观点提供充分的论据逻辑清晰030201议论文写作技巧混合题型应对策略分别应对识别题型针对不同类型的题目，采用不同的应对策略。
例如，对于包含图表和议论的题目，可以先描述图表，然后提出观点并进行论述。
整合信息03文章结构与段落展开方法CHAPTER引言段写作方法开门见山背景介绍提出疑问论证方法运用举例、对比、因果等论证方法，充分阐述主题句。
主题句每段开头明确主题句，概括该段主要内容。
过渡与衔接使用过渡词和衔接手段，确保段落间逻辑清晰、连贯。
正文段落展开策略结尾段总结技巧重申观点01展望未来02简洁明了0304词汇、语法和句式运用指导CHAPTER高级词汇选用及替换建议使用具体、生动的词汇01避免重复使用同一词汇02注意词汇的准确性和正式程度03复杂句式构造和变换技巧使用从句和复合句变换句子结构注意句子的流畅性和简洁性避免常见语法错误确保主语和谓语在人称和数上保持一致。
注意动词的时态和语态的正确使用，避免混淆。
正确使用标点符号，避免句子结构的混淆和歧义。
例如，避免使用双重否定、注意冠词的正确使用等。
雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)
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焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
英语利弊优劣话题表达课件
读写任务 (2011佛山二模) 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词 左右的英语短文。 A gap year(休假学年), also known as year abroad or year off, is a year during which students take time off and do something other than schooling, such as travel or work. The gap year is most commonly taken before starting university. The practice of taking a gap year developed in the UK in the 1960s.
[罗列弊端] But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are in good quality. [你的观点] Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line far outweigh negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop on line.
aspects. To begin with, ... In addition, ...
3. Just as the old saying goes, there is no garden without weeds, and so does... On
高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
coin has two sides. It still has its negative aspects. Firstly，……Secondly，…… What’s more，……
有关利与弊作文的写作模板
• 个人观点 Through the above analysis, I am in favor of…/ am a big supporter of…/approve
In my opionion, people can travel abroad if possible. But it depends on a person’s finance and health whether to travel abroad.
高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
B类只说“弊”的方面 缺点、不足之处、不利因素。 (1) (做)某事的不利因素显而易见。 The drawbacks/disadvantages of doing sth. are obvious/ apparent.
(2) (做)某事有好些不利之处。 There are several negative aspects/ weaknesses of doing…
Everyone smiles every day. Smile has a lot of advantages. Firstly,smile can reduce our pressure. In addition,smile helps us develop close relationship with other people. Last but not least, smile can help us keep healthy. In my opinion, ...
有关利与弊作文的写作模板
• 个人观点 Through the above analysis, I am in favor of…/ am a big supporter of…/approve
In my opionion, people can travel abroad if possible. But it depends on a person’s finance and health whether to travel abroad.
高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
B类只说“弊”的方面 缺点、不足之处、不利因素。 (1) (做)某事的不利因素显而易见。 The drawbacks/disadvantages of doing sth. are obvious/ apparent.
(2) (做)某事有好些不利之处。 There are several negative aspects/ weaknesses of doing…
Everyone smiles every day. Smile has a lot of advantages. Firstly,smile can reduce our pressure. In addition,smile helps us develop close relationship with other people. Last but not least, smile can help us keep healthy. In my opinion, ...
雅思写作大作文话题及模板及范文 精品 PPT课件
simpler way of life will protect the environment, while
others believe that science and technology can solve
environmental problems. Discuss both views and give
也就是说，从平均值看，名校毕业生的 收入就 已经遥 遥领先 好几倍 ，更不 用说那 些高薪 行业的 实际收 入差距 了。 好的大学，不一定保证每一个人都会有 高收入 ，但他 的确能 够为你 提供通 向高收 入的第 一块敲 门砖。 2 开学季前几天，老家的一个远房表兄传 来消息 ，刚满 17岁的 表侄小 立不愿 意再继 续读高 三，准 备辍学 去打工 。 表兄很是着急，把家族里学历比较高的 我也搬 了出来 ，希望 我能劝 劝小立 。 “我虽然这些年到处打工也挣了一些钱 ，但这 样挣钱 太辛苦 了，我 不希望 他重走 我的老 路，” 堂兄苦 口婆心 ，一再 强调， “你一 定要好 好劝劝 他：不 上学以 后没有 出路。 ” 刚开始我和这位00后表侄在微信上聊的 时候， 非常话 不投机 。 我问他：不想读书是不是觉得功课太难 了？ 他答道：也没有多难，就是不想太累了 ，高考 复习很 无聊。 我劝他：再坚持几个月，苦一阵子熬一 熬就过 去了。 他回答得很干脆：太没劲！考上又能怎 么样？ 现在我 家邻居x x大学 毕业上 班了， 挣的还 没我爸 高呢！ 我再问他：你爸爸现在一身伤病常年要 吃药， 你不是 不知道 吧，还 有，你 爸爸为 了多挣 点钱， 一年到 头在外 面跑， 只有过 年才能 回家一 趟，这 些你也 很清楚 吧？ 他无话可说了。 最后，我实在忍不住，不得不扎他一句 ： “如果现在你连高考都比不过别人，凭 什么以 后你能 比别人 成功？ ” 微信那头
雅思大作文概述ppt课件
大作文评分标准
结构是否有逻辑性（Structure） a)引言introduction 涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句 b)主体body 包括足够的论点、论据 c)结论conclusion 重申观点、提出建议或者展望未来
大作文评分标准
二、连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion） 文章段与段，句与句之间的衔接 段落之间的“转”“承”“启”“合” a)表开始：first of all, in the first place, at the
very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等 b)表承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way
雅思写作大作文
第二讲 主题、类型与段落结构
雅思大作文主题归类
1 科技发展主题 The development of science 2 政府的职能和职责 About government 常见考点：宏观政府职能？具体职能？ 3 环境污染和保护 The environmental protection 常见考点：狭义环保+广义环保（动物） 4 当代社会问题 People in modern society 常考考点：经济类，工作类，家庭类…
观点（同意 /不ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ意) 第二段：立论理由一（最大/最重要/最显著
的理由） 第三段：立论理由二 （次大的理由） 第四段：驳论段——反方观点+反驳理由 第五段：结论----重申论点+结语(可选)
雅思写作课件 ppt
总结词
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文，介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况，并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息，要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点，并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一：议论文
总结词
逻辑严密，观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型，要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点，使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二：图表作文
总结词
内容问题
01
总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
02 03
详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述，或者逻辑结构不清晰，导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构，掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中，考生需要明确自己的观点和论据， 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外，考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构，如简单句、复 合句和复杂句，使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确，没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文，介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况，并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息，要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点，并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一：议论文
总结词
逻辑严密，观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型，要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点，使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二：图表作文
总结词
内容问题
01
总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
02 03
详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述，或者逻辑结构不清晰，导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构，掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中，考生需要明确自己的观点和论据， 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外，考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构，如简单句、复 合句和复杂句，使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确，没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
好处坏处英语作文写法PPT课件
along with national economy. A bright
future is awaiting us if we make good use
of private cars.
2020/10isadvantages of Private Cars
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All in all, we can safely come to the
conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.
The past twenty years witnessed the fast
development of the automobile industry
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• Those who are in favor of private cars claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, the development of private cars will contribute a lot to national economy as a whole. Secondly, for individuals who own a private car, they will no longer have to wait for the crowded bus. Last but not least, people can go sight-seeing to neighboring scenic spots on weekends in their own cars.
说明利弊型.ppt
1. 各种各样的叁考书给 学生学习提供了一定的 帮助
2. 但过分地依赖教叁会 带来许多的负面效应
3. 我认为……
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Nowadays students constantly find themselves flooded with all kinds of reference books. Reference books are of no harm. Generally
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9.However, the negative aspects are also apparent/ obvious/ evident. To begin with,…. To make matters worse,…. Worst of all,…
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10.The side effects … has exerted on human being can be classified as follows. First, …Second,… In
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5. …is playing an increasingly important role in people’s lives.
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五、 说明事物弊端 常用的句式。
1.However, … just like anything else, has its negative side as well.
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week’s hard work, we have plenty of recreational opportunities. We can read to our heart’s content, go sightseeing , and play games with our friends.
2024届高考英语论述利弊写作课件
语言表达：用简或句子 结构
确定主题和观点
列出利弊
收集相关资料和信息
列出利弊，进行比较和分析
组织语言，表达清晰明了
组织结构
引言：介绍论述利弊写作的目 的和重要性
正文：分析论述利弊写作的技 巧和方法
结尾：总结全文，强调论述利 弊写作的关键点
注意事项：提醒学生在写作过 程中需要注意的事项
汇报人：
标题：实例三：网络的利弊
背景介绍：网络的发展和普及，对人们的生活和工作带来了巨大的影响。 网络的好处：方便快捷的信息获取，丰富的娱乐资源，促进全球化交流等。 网络的弊端：网络成瘾，隐私泄露，网络欺诈等问题。 实例分析：以某个具体的网络应用为例，分析其利弊，并探讨如何合理使用网络。 结论：网络是一把双刃剑，需要我们正确使用和管理。
语言表达：语言 流畅，语法正确
逻辑性：论点与 论据相符，论证 有力
创新性：观点新 颖，有自己的见 解
确定观点
明确立场：在写 作前要明确自己 的观点，避免模 棱两可或摇摆不 定的立场
收集证据：收集 相关证据或数据 来支持自己的观 点，增强说服力
逻辑清晰：在论 述过程中要保持 逻辑清晰，避免 出现跳跃或混乱 的思维
建立段落间逻辑关系： 各段落之间要有明确的 逻辑关系，使文章结构
清晰、有条理。
结尾总结或归纳：在文 章结尾进行总结或归纳， 强调文章的中心思想，
加深读者印象。
问题四：语言表达不准确
词汇使用不当：在论述中使用了不恰当的词汇，导致意思表达不准确。 语法错误：句子结构不正确，时态、语态等方面存在错误。 句子衔接不畅：句子之间的衔接不够自然，影响阅读和理解。 缺乏逻辑性：论述内容缺乏逻辑性，观点之间没有形成有力的支撑关系。
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charging traffic jam fees will definitely help ease the pressure of heacy traffic 收取交通阻碍费用一定可以帮助交通压力
during the busy traffic time, it is a wise attempt to encourage drivers to pay a certain amount of fees to perfect currrent traffic condition.
In some cities, governments have tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?
In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh disadvantages?
压力
✓ exert a really positive impact on 对于...施加利好的影响 ✓ decrease the incidence of 减少...发生的机率
mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion 缓解交通拥堵的压力 release of exhaust gas 废弃的释放 ruin the drivers' moods 使司机的心情变坏 purify the air and reduce the noise 净化空气，减少污染
Differences between countries have become less evident, so we can enjoy the same films, brands and TV programs. To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
more financial budget could be allocated to perfecting the traffic condition
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可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
写作21角度
CETS FPR ✓ 4个C: cooperation; competition; culture; communication ✓ 7个E: economic; economic; education; efficiency; environemnt; emotional
merit: 1. personalized Demerit: 1. lack professional knowledge 2. lack communication with peers
Nowadays more and more jobs and tasks are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Do these effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects? Positive: 1. higher efficiency 2. safety Negative: 1. unemployment rate
advantages 1. broaden one’s horizons, TV programs, BBC discovery, 2. improve the life quality, purchase goods of famous brands, Zara, H&M, Disadvantages 1. cultural diversity, lose one’s own characteristics, competition 2. too boring for citizens,
Positive 1. alleviate traffic congestion
negative 1. inconvenience, drawbacks of public transport 2. negative influence on the economy
✓ is a tiresome business 是一件很让人心烦的事情 ✓ the prevalence of various public transport 各种公共交通工具的普及 ✓ serious tracffic congestion=severe traffic jam=a heavy traffic严重交通堵塞 ✓ driving permission 交通通行费 ✓ should be charged应该被收费 ✓ the rush hours 上下班的高峰期 ✓ drive through 乘车穿行 ✓ impose much pressure upon the drivers economy countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? Adv: 1. better relaxation 2. loyalty, Disadv: 1. companies may suffer losses, 2. career prospect
during the busy traffic time, it is a wise attempt to encourage drivers to pay a certain amount of fees to perfect currrent traffic condition.
In some cities, governments have tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?
In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh disadvantages?
压力
✓ exert a really positive impact on 对于...施加利好的影响 ✓ decrease the incidence of 减少...发生的机率
mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion 缓解交通拥堵的压力 release of exhaust gas 废弃的释放 ruin the drivers' moods 使司机的心情变坏 purify the air and reduce the noise 净化空气，减少污染
Differences between countries have become less evident, so we can enjoy the same films, brands and TV programs. To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
more financial budget could be allocated to perfecting the traffic condition
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CETS FPR ✓ 4个C: cooperation; competition; culture; communication ✓ 7个E: economic; economic; education; efficiency; environemnt; emotional
merit: 1. personalized Demerit: 1. lack professional knowledge 2. lack communication with peers
Nowadays more and more jobs and tasks are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Do these effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects? Positive: 1. higher efficiency 2. safety Negative: 1. unemployment rate
advantages 1. broaden one’s horizons, TV programs, BBC discovery, 2. improve the life quality, purchase goods of famous brands, Zara, H&M, Disadvantages 1. cultural diversity, lose one’s own characteristics, competition 2. too boring for citizens,
Positive 1. alleviate traffic congestion
negative 1. inconvenience, drawbacks of public transport 2. negative influence on the economy
✓ is a tiresome business 是一件很让人心烦的事情 ✓ the prevalence of various public transport 各种公共交通工具的普及 ✓ serious tracffic congestion=severe traffic jam=a heavy traffic严重交通堵塞 ✓ driving permission 交通通行费 ✓ should be charged应该被收费 ✓ the rush hours 上下班的高峰期 ✓ drive through 乘车穿行 ✓ impose much pressure upon the drivers economy countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? Adv: 1. better relaxation 2. loyalty, Disadv: 1. companies may suffer losses, 2. career prospect