高中英语概要写作技能策略辅导全文主旨归纳优质课PPT课件
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the main points.
★It helps us write summaries that are
brief and to the point, and in our own
words.
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Steps of paraphrasing
★Read the original carefully and comprehend its meaning wholly and correctly.
happening than try to put it right afterwards.)
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The importance of paraphrasing
★It helps us understand the original
better.
★It helps us grasp the central idea and
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III. Techniques in summary writing
1. Paraphrasing To paraphrase means to completely
and correctly express other people’s ideas in one’s own words.
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Hale Waihona Puke 103. Make an outline that includes the main idea and the supporting details. Arrange your information in a logical order, for example, most to least important or chronological. Your order need not be the same as that in the original, but keep related supporting points together. The way you organize the outline may serve as a model for how you divide and write the essay.
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)

But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
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Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
英语概要写作ppt课件

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21-25 分
16-20 分
11-15 分
1.理解准确,函盖全部要点。 2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。 4.完全使用白己的语言
1.理解准确,函盖绝大部分要点。 2.所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。 3.比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。 4.有个别整句抄白原文
所给阅读材料核对一遍, 看原材料中的要点是否在 概要中都得到了体现,语 句间的接是否符合逻辑, 同时还需要检查句子是否 有错误,时态和语态的使 用是否正确,标点、格式、 大小写是否有误等通过细 致的修正与调整,力争使 文章在各个方面都万无失。
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二,记叙文的概要写作
对记叙文进行概括时,要抓住原文的人物、事件、结果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句, 表达深刻内涵或故事带给人们的启示,在写摘要时也需把故事寓意表达出来。
说明文可用以下开头语: ① According to the passage, we can know根据文章我们可知…… 2 This passage/article is mainly about.这篇文章主要是关于 ③ in the passage, the writer/author mainly tells us在这篇文章中作者主 要告诉我们… ④ A new study found.-个新的研究发现… ⑤ The purpose of the report is to show.这一报告的目的是表明……
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3,认真 审题,注 意表达
(1)确定人称:如果原文是第一人称,在转述时一般要改为第三人称,
(2)确定时态:记叙文以一般过去时为主。若记叙文中有作者从中得 到的“启示”或“意义”等,一般用一般现在时表达
21-25 分
16-20 分
11-15 分
1.理解准确,函盖全部要点。 2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。 4.完全使用白己的语言
1.理解准确,函盖绝大部分要点。 2.所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。 3.比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。 4.有个别整句抄白原文
所给阅读材料核对一遍, 看原材料中的要点是否在 概要中都得到了体现,语 句间的接是否符合逻辑, 同时还需要检查句子是否 有错误,时态和语态的使 用是否正确,标点、格式、 大小写是否有误等通过细 致的修正与调整,力争使 文章在各个方面都万无失。
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二,记叙文的概要写作
对记叙文进行概括时,要抓住原文的人物、事件、结果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句, 表达深刻内涵或故事带给人们的启示,在写摘要时也需把故事寓意表达出来。
说明文可用以下开头语: ① According to the passage, we can know根据文章我们可知…… 2 This passage/article is mainly about.这篇文章主要是关于 ③ in the passage, the writer/author mainly tells us在这篇文章中作者主 要告诉我们… ④ A new study found.-个新的研究发现… ⑤ The purpose of the report is to show.这一报告的目的是表明……
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3,认真 审题,注 意表达
(1)确定人称:如果原文是第一人称,在转述时一般要改为第三人称,
(2)确定时态:记叙文以一般过去时为主。若记叙文中有作者从中得 到的“启示”或“意义”等,一般用一般现在时表达
高中英语概要写作过程指导公开课PPT课件

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高中英语概要写作PPT幻灯片课件

solutions(解决办法), the conclusion(结论)
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概要怎么写?
二、明话题,定顺序,找中心句、高频词、连词,列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段,找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点,再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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概要怎么写?
概要写作(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
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概要怎么写?
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
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概要怎么写?
二、明话题,定顺序,找中心句、高频词、连词,列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段,找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点,再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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概要怎么写?
概要写作(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
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概要怎么写?
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
高中英语概要写作策略 一等奖优秀课件

Tip3: The topic sentence is not necessarily the first sentence or the last one, but it must convey the main idea. Tip4: Omit省略 detailed information.
Para.3
Tip1: Sentences beginning with signal words like “but”, “however”,“actually” etc. are often the focus.
Para.2 the earth came into being
Tip2: Key words are often repeated.Find the logic between atmosphere details and summarize it. water
概要写作 suy?
A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of something, not the details.
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1. 考纲要求
概要写作。提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基 于该短文写出一篇60词左右(少于40或多于80词扣 两分)的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容: 1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况; read for key point/ topic sentences 2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性和独创性; paraphrase/own words 3.上下文的连贯性;
polish
概要写作步骤:
Step 1 定位 Locate the key sentences; Step2 改写 Rewrite the key sentences in your own words; Step3 修改 Add some conjunctions and polish your summary.
高中英语概要写作技能策略辅导之段落主旨归纳优质课PPT课件

the older individual' s freedom and right to work.In my opinion, giving workers
more choices over their retirement age will benefit society and the individual.
invented ships and airplanes, it is now possible for species to meet. There is no time for them to adapt,
but humans continue to combine species from different regions. The world's ecosystems will soon be
require damage to the natural environment. Also, governments need to make
strict rules against destroying natural land and introducing exotic species.
段落主旨句受段落其它句子支撑,和全文主旨关系非常密切。
(2)试一试
• 根据以上所学,你认为以下段落主旨是哪一句?
•
With many young people unemployed or frustrated in low-level positions,
there are often calls to compulsorily retire older workers.However, this can affect
3.实例分析
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件

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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
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Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
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Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
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Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
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Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件

03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件

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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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高中英语概要写作找要点公开课课件

If there is no topic sentence in a paragraph, summarize the key point according to the key words.
How to Get Key Points?
Find the topic sentence for each paragraph.
The last sentence
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and solitary when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.
The first sentence
Scientists find that the hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidences show that the jobless are in poorer health than job-holders. An investigation shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%,the death rate increases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to(可归结为) one point:work is helpful to health.
How to Get Key Points?
Find the topic sentence for each paragraph.
The last sentence
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and solitary when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.
The first sentence
Scientists find that the hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidences show that the jobless are in poorer health than job-holders. An investigation shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%,the death rate increases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to(可归结为) one point:work is helpful to health.
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概要写作微技能之主旨归纳
• 主旨归纳是概要写作的第一步,包括对 全文主旨的归纳和对段落主旨的归纳。
一、全文主旨归纳
• 1. 常见问题 • 直接逐段阅读归纳各段主旨,忽略语篇整体。 • 2. 正确做法 • 全文主旨是语篇的核心,各段主旨正是围绕这一核心展开。概要写
作前从整体阅读文本入手,分析文章结构,理清段间关系,从而把 握全文主旨,有利于下一步各段主旨的确定与支持信息的筛选。
this way, you can admit that you are not always being fair and your anger is not being helpful. You cannot always
control what other people do or what happens around them. But you can control the way you react!
全文主旨受到其它段落支撑,同时影响其它段落主旨。
(2)试一试
• 你能用以上学到的方法归纳下文主旨吗?
•
Retirement is the point where a person stops employment completely.The "standard" retirement age varies from
• 这句话意为:对付愤怒的最佳方法是学会用健康而有助的方式把它表达出来。But it can be very helpful. 说明表达出自己的愤怒很有帮助。文章的第二、三、四段讲几种健康而有助表 达愤怒的方式,第五段则强调了第一句的观点:不要积压愤怒,要表达出来。可以看出其 它几段支撑的都是是首段第一句观点,即愤怒要用合适的方式表达出来,没有进一步说明 表达出愤怒的益处,所以全文主旨在首段第一句,而不是But后的句子 。
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When you are expressing your anger, you should remember to think about the other people who are involved in
the situation. Try to look at the situation from the other person's point of view. Often, when you look at a situation in
3.实例分析
• (1)思一思 • 整体阅读下文,分析文章结构,想一想全文主旨是首段的第一句
还是But后的句子?为什么?
•
The best way to manage anger is by dealing with it directly — you must learn to express your anger in a
healthy and helpful way. Expressing yourself when you are very angry can be difficult. But it can be very helpful.
When you can express your needs, you are taking control of your own emotions. And more importantly, you feel like
you are expressing yourself. It is also important to be clear and direct when you express yourself. You should also
show respect for the other person.
•
Be sure not to blame other people. Blaming other people can lead to arguing and fighting. Instead, you should
express your anger by saying what you are feeling. For example, you should use “I statements”, which are simple
(1)思一思
• 答题解析:本文为总分总结构,首段第一句The best way to manage anger is by dealing with it directly — you must learn to express your anger in a healthy and helpful way.为主 旨句。
country to country, but it is generally between 50 and 70, according to the latest statistics, 2011.However, for a long time,
you are solving the problem. Then you feel better about yourself.
•
But there are things you should remember when you express your needs when angry. First, stay calm when
sentences that state how a person feels. You should not say “You never help me clean the home”! Instead, you
could say “I am angry that you did not offer to help me clean the home”.
•
Don’t let your anger build up inside of you! As a wise man once said, “It's not good for me to hold on to
anger. I am the only one that is really hurting.”
• 主旨归纳是概要写作的第一步,包括对 全文主旨的归纳和对段落主旨的归纳。
一、全文主旨归纳
• 1. 常见问题 • 直接逐段阅读归纳各段主旨,忽略语篇整体。 • 2. 正确做法 • 全文主旨是语篇的核心,各段主旨正是围绕这一核心展开。概要写
作前从整体阅读文本入手,分析文章结构,理清段间关系,从而把 握全文主旨,有利于下一步各段主旨的确定与支持信息的筛选。
this way, you can admit that you are not always being fair and your anger is not being helpful. You cannot always
control what other people do or what happens around them. But you can control the way you react!
全文主旨受到其它段落支撑,同时影响其它段落主旨。
(2)试一试
• 你能用以上学到的方法归纳下文主旨吗?
•
Retirement is the point where a person stops employment completely.The "standard" retirement age varies from
• 这句话意为:对付愤怒的最佳方法是学会用健康而有助的方式把它表达出来。But it can be very helpful. 说明表达出自己的愤怒很有帮助。文章的第二、三、四段讲几种健康而有助表 达愤怒的方式,第五段则强调了第一句的观点:不要积压愤怒,要表达出来。可以看出其 它几段支撑的都是是首段第一句观点,即愤怒要用合适的方式表达出来,没有进一步说明 表达出愤怒的益处,所以全文主旨在首段第一句,而不是But后的句子 。
•
When you are expressing your anger, you should remember to think about the other people who are involved in
the situation. Try to look at the situation from the other person's point of view. Often, when you look at a situation in
3.实例分析
• (1)思一思 • 整体阅读下文,分析文章结构,想一想全文主旨是首段的第一句
还是But后的句子?为什么?
•
The best way to manage anger is by dealing with it directly — you must learn to express your anger in a
healthy and helpful way. Expressing yourself when you are very angry can be difficult. But it can be very helpful.
When you can express your needs, you are taking control of your own emotions. And more importantly, you feel like
you are expressing yourself. It is also important to be clear and direct when you express yourself. You should also
show respect for the other person.
•
Be sure not to blame other people. Blaming other people can lead to arguing and fighting. Instead, you should
express your anger by saying what you are feeling. For example, you should use “I statements”, which are simple
(1)思一思
• 答题解析:本文为总分总结构,首段第一句The best way to manage anger is by dealing with it directly — you must learn to express your anger in a healthy and helpful way.为主 旨句。
country to country, but it is generally between 50 and 70, according to the latest statistics, 2011.However, for a long time,
you are solving the problem. Then you feel better about yourself.
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But there are things you should remember when you express your needs when angry. First, stay calm when
sentences that state how a person feels. You should not say “You never help me clean the home”! Instead, you
could say “I am angry that you did not offer to help me clean the home”.
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Don’t let your anger build up inside of you! As a wise man once said, “It's not good for me to hold on to
anger. I am the only one that is really hurting.”