高考英语基础写作-太空是否值得探索课件

• Today, our class had a discussion, which talk about if the seeking of the space have a worthwhile.
• Those who are in favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages.
• on my views, I think the seeking of the space is worthwhile to do it.
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• WThheethdeirscthuessspioacneoefxspeloerkaitniogn twhoertshpwahcilee • Is space exploration worthwhile?
百分数后用of连接名词
sb agree with sb/sb’s idea
of是介词，后用名词或者动名词
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写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时, 注意句子结构,尤其是主句,从句结构要清晰, 复杂,主句,状语部分要用恰当,不要逐句翻译.
找出错误，修改 标注出你认为他/她写得好的句子
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• The discussion of seeking the space
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• For example, the satellite was used to communication and the whether forecast, also the seeking could make the earth full of energy.
• Is space worth exploring?
• Today, our class had a discussion, which talk about if the seeking of the space have a worthwhile.
• discuss sth discussion on/about sth
• For example, the satellite was used to
communication and the whether
forecast, also the seeking could make
the earth full of enaergy.
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• But some students who disagreed with it said: “ Maybe the seeking is right, but it’s too far to know it in our daily life, the money used to seeking the space should be useds the deal with the starvation and the pollutions.
传播，天气预报等；2.有望解决地球能源
短缺问题.
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1.There are 30% of the students think that space is worth exploring.
30% of the students think that space is worth exploring.
that是从句标记，要有主语
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3. And had 30% the students are agree the idea of explore space.
30% of the students agree with
the idea of exploring space.
错误诊断：have的用法错误
基础写作的评分标准
句子内容的完整性(Completeness)
句子结构的正确性(correctness) 句子结构的复杂性(Variety) 句子内容的连贯性(Coherence)
内容 5分 语言 7分 连贯性 2 分
书写 1分
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• 处理词语 写出句子 连接句子，变身复句。 • 1. 某事值得做 sth is worth doing • 值得(花费金钱，时间) worthwhile • 2. 日常生活 daily life • 3. 饥饿 starvation • 4. 卫星 satellite • 通讯传播 communication • 5. 天气预报 weather forecast • 6. 能源短缺 energy shortages
错误诊断：there be 句型使用错误. 中国式英语
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2. 70% students think that is worthwhile to explore space.
70% of the students think it is worthwhile to explore space.
错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用of, of之后的 名词要有the
• be in favor of 赞成 claim 声称，宣称 • Those who are in favor of (赞成)
exploring space claim that it has a lot of advantages.
• 70% of the students who are in favor of exploring space claim that it has a lot of advantages.
• it is worthwhile to do sth
• Recently, we have had a discussion on
whether it is worthwhile to explore space.
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• Those who are in favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages.
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• 写作内容：
• 最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得” 这一话题展开了一场讨论.请你根据下表
提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论 的情况。
• 30%的同学反对：1. 离我们及我们的日常 生活太远 2. 浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以
用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。
• 70%的同学赞成：1. 已使用卫星进行通讯