获奖课件-高中英语写作公开课
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② We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded.
→ As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.
4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
to 来自百度文库ring it back home.
C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to
do with me.
Here are 3 ways to make sentences:
I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：
1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。
写作中复合句常见的错误
1.只有从句，没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.
→ The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
句子表达有何亮点？
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子
① The hall is different from all other buildings , iwt hisicmhaisdemoafdgelaosfsg. lass.
② The old man thought of his son, tweiatrhstceaamrse comdionwgndforwomn fhroismfahcies. face.
从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英 语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种 句子：
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
=When he heard the news, he was happy.
B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot
4.过多地使用并列句组合信息
① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
→ It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.
请看范例
My English Learning
① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.
Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.
2)借助介词短语做定语
如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身 穿白色茄克。
Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.
→ As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
3)借助介词短语做状语
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。
With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.
4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
to 来自百度文库ring it back home.
C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to
do with me.
Here are 3 ways to make sentences:
I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：
1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。
写作中复合句常见的错误
1.只有从句，没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.
→ The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
句子表达有何亮点？
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子
① The hall is different from all other buildings , iwt hisicmhaisdemoafdgelaosfsg. lass.
② The old man thought of his son, tweiatrhstceaamrse comdionwgndforwomn fhroismfahcies. face.
从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英 语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种 句子：
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.
=When he heard the news, he was happy.
B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot
4.过多地使用并列句组合信息
① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
→ It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.
请看范例
My English Learning
① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.
Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.
2)借助介词短语做定语
如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身 穿白色茄克。
Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.