雅思写作技巧.ppt

Current social context:
好处：方便、经济、生命保障（突发事件时）
坏处：隐私（偷拍）、垃圾短信（包括诈骗）、健康、工作/ 休息间陷的模糊
Key idea in the topic:
好处 〉坏处 坏处 〉好处
文章容易流于普通 文章观点较为独特、有力
Preparatory Steps
13 Problems of mobile phone
I know I left too much mess And destruction to come back again
And I caused nothing but trouble I understand if you can't talk to me again And if you live by the rules of "It's over"
IELTS Academic Writing: Task 2
根据题目要求展开论述，观点论据切合题意； 对文中所举的观点充分展开，进行充足的论证； 合理分层分段，论述展开条理清晰，观点与论据之间衔接紧
密； 准确运用语言进行论述，并体现一定的词汇量和句法的多样
性； 运用半正式文体进行写作，论证中使用的语言规范得体。
Or return to where we were
Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door
I'm in love and always will be
IELTS Academic Writing 雅思学术写作
Unit Two
Warm-Up Music
Dido Florian Cloud de Bounevialle O'Malley Armstrong (born 25 December 1971 in London, England) professionally known as Dido (pronounced /ˈdaɪdoʊ/ DYE-doe) an award winning English singersongwriter.
5 minutes for you to brainstorm
5分钟构思 (书面完成)
This is taken from IELTS Academic Writing (14-01-2006).
Pages 126-133 from our textbook.
How to analyze and express?
White Flag 爱你不轻言放弃 By Dido (2003)
White Flag Dido
I know you think that I shouldn't still love you I'll tell you that But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it Where's the sense in that? I promise I'm not trying to make your life harder
Is it similar to the discussion of TV?
From the following aspects Social (incl. family life) Educational Economical (incl. entertainment) ? Environmental?
Then I'm sure that that makes sense
IELTS Academic Writing Campus and Education
March 3rdห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ 2010
Sample Task 2
In Task 2 you will be presented with a point of view or argument or problem. You are required to present and justify an opinion, evaluate and challenge ideas, evidence or an argument, compare and contrast evidence, opinions and implications, or present the solution to a problem. …
Topic One: Mobile Phones
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that these problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone?
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Anything you know about mobile phone?
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Let’s add the points or arguments! Social Physical Economical Educational Environmental Political …
Sample Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
… Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.