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雅思写作步骤PPT课件

雅思写作步骤PPT课件

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• 题目5: More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4:转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5:使用并列句、3大从句(名词性从句、 定语从句、状语从句)进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步 思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材: 非教育类和教育类
非教育类:经济(效率;收益和成本) 科技(进步;缺陷) 社会(价值和传统观念;环境;社会关系) 个人(生活方式;基本权利;健康快乐; 行为)
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教育类: 身体健康 学习能力 社会能力和实践经验(与人相处、调节情绪等) 工作能力(动手能力、价值观和道德观、 遵守法律等)
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.

雅思写作小作文PPT PPT课件(共19张)

雅思写作小作文PPT PPT课件(共19张)
雅思 写作
王中祺/Sonny Wong
雅思写作小作文部分精讲
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王中祺老师简介:
英语经贸翻译硕士,工商管理硕士,毕业于北京外国语大学和对外经贸大学, 英语专业八级、翻译二级。曾就职于北京海淀外国语实验学校初高中部,新东方、杰 克斯爱德专职雅思托福英语老师,环球雅思、励学国际兼职雅思托福英语老师,曾任 中石化胜利油田区高级英语翻译。翻译类代表作:《把男孩培养成男孩》(译著); 教学类代表作:《2015-2016雅思阅读真题精选解析集》。
主干: 1. Behaviorists suggest that 行为主义者认为
定语从句翻译的基本步骤:
1. 切分句子,确定主干。
其他成分:
2. the child will experience greater intellectual development.
2. 确定词义,直译意群。
3. 调整语序,润色译文。 4. 通读译文,查缺补漏。
行为主义者 认为 抚育,抚养 1. 切分句子,确定主干。
an environment where there are many stimuli 刺激,刺激物,促进因素(stimulus的复数) which develop his or her capacity for appropriate 发展 能力 适当的,恰当的,合适的 经历 development. 更大的 智力的
responses // will experience greater intellectual development.
系统性 权威性 全面性
翻译考试例题解析
Example Analysis for Translation Examination
词汇突破: 定语从句翻译的基本步骤:

雅思大作文写作PPT课件

雅思大作文写作PPT课件
the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. 题目中给出双方观点,要求分析正反方观点后做出结论 Some say ……Others argue that ……What is your opinion? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Express some reasons for both views and give your opinion. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
indicates limitations in range of vocabulary
vocabulary
The answer includes attempts at Attempts complex
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complex sentence forms, but…… sentences but these
+正评价nevertheless, there are tend to be less accurate
examples of accurate complex
structures (6分)
其他 总分
Less than 250 words
(5+5.5+5+5.5)/4=5.25 ≈ 5.5
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高级雅思英语写作精品PPT课件

高级雅思英语写作精品PPT课件

Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Testing Points
Tests the ability to: ❖ describe & interpret graphic data ❖ describe stages of a process ❖ describe an object or event or
Brainstorming/Expanding the ideas Classifying/Grouping Choosing the main ideas and theme (well-
developing the main points & discarding weak points)
❖ Discuss both views and give your opinion ❖ Causes and solutions or causes and
consequences ❖ What’s your opinion ❖ Do you agree or disagree? or to what extent
Create a logical flow (ordering & ranking) Outlining the structure Draft the key words, thesis statement and

雅思小作文写作教学(全能版)ppt课件

雅思小作文写作教学(全能版)ppt课件
IELTS Writing Task 1 图表作文
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共有5种图形
1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
As…
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• Slightly more Nissan cars are sold in America than Hyundai/Kia. • Twice as many Honda vehicles are sold in the US as GM.
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流程型(procedure)图表
Otherwise
In addition
Further more
Meanwhile
while
At the same time
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First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.

雅思写作公开课-写作ppt课件

雅思写作公开课-写作ppt课件

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2. to what extent do you agree or disagree 3. do you think the advantage outweigh the
disadvantage
最理想的结构是: 开头段 +让步段 + 支持段(论点1) + 支持段(论点2) + 结尾段(表明你自己的观点)
6.雅思写作的误区
7.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误,能有效避免吗?什么样的语 法错误是致命的?
8.小作文重要吗?容易写吗?应该怎么复习
9. 怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
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考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文(including task 1 and task2),那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。
disadvantage
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1. discuss both views and give your own opinion
开头段(回应题目+表达自己的观点) + 支持观点1(n个论点) + 支持观点2(n个论点) + 结尾段(表明自己的观点)。
请注意,这个题型是不能用一面倒!
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认真阅读题目,划出关键字,紧紧围绕题目问题和所隐 含的内容去思考
2m到3m写作框架
大作文应该控制在35m写完,小作文应该在18m之内 剩下5m通读小作文和大作文各一遍,看有没有语法错

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目标分数为8分,特别是要考到4个8的你, 你不要泄气,终究会成为强者。
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雅思大作文的结构及写作方法ppt课件

雅思大作文的结构及写作方法ppt课件
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结构:四段或五段
引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景), 改写复述题目,表明自己的观点,衔接 下文。
正文第一段:原因1 正文第二段:原因2 正文第三段:原因3(可省略) 结尾:重申主题,建议措施,展望未来
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引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景),改写复述题目, 表明自己的观点,衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

雅思写作G类攻略课件

雅思写作G类攻略课件
For this reason, I think it is generally a good idea to encourage children to take up paid jobs.
Most high level jobs in the government are done by men. Some people believe that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
重点段:分析强势分论点 X 3 【1】: Topic Sentence
Despite the benefit, problems should not be neglected.
【2】+【3】: Main Idea 1 + Development (Reason) Firstly, the practice is not economical compared with modern ways of building.
Conclusion To conclude, taking up paid work brings both benefits and risks to children. However, when certain conditions are met, all the potential problems can be solved in a proper way.
Conclusion 主体定性
To conclude, the suggestion to build all new buildings in a traditional way is beneficial to enhance a city’s cultural identity.

雅思写作(lesson2)课件PPT资料64页

雅思写作(lesson2)课件PPT资料64页

首段 – 首句
The above figure indicates the amount of fulltime teachers of regular schools in China between 1960 and 1990.
首段 – 首句
请写出本图的第一句话:
This graph shows the number of full-time teachers of regular schools in China during 3 decades from 1960 to 1990.
下降:decrease, fall, drop, decline, go down, reduce, slump
不变:level off at /level out at; maintain, remain stable, steady, stay constant, maintain the same level
The subway station witnesses a steady increase in the number of people from approximately 300 at 6 a.m. to 450 at 8 a.m.
The time from 6 a.m. to 8 a.m. witnesses a steady increase in the number of people from about 300 to 450.
幅度大:dramatically, suddenly, significantly, sharply, steeply, rapidly
幅度中等 :moderately, gradually, steadily 幅度小: slightly, slowly, minimally

雅思写作小作文词汇和思路PPT课件

雅思写作小作文词汇和思路PPT课件
数据类: 1. table 表格图 2. line chart /line graph曲线图(线状图) 3. bar chart 柱状图 4. pie chart 饼状图
非数据类:process diagram 流程图
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三. 图表作文写作步骤
(一)审题: 1.看清图表类型 2.先读题干信息,后读图表信息 3.读线状图时看清横纵轴的含义 4.看清楚单位,在写作的时候抄进文 章
be a likeness, be a similarity, equally,
大体相同,相似:
more or less alike,
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roughly the same,
show great resemb第l2a6页n/共c9e5页,
6. 不同:
be different = be of great difference be different from … be distinguished from… be contrary to … differ from …, vary from… be a dissimilarity, be a variation A, unlike / as opposed to / as distinct from B, has…
4.少于…
less than…, fewer than… under…, below…, within…,
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5. 相同和相似:
相同
be identical with/ be the same as …
The same is true of ... …也有同样情况, 也适用 于…
In the same way, In like manner, be equal to…

(精品课件)雅思写作开头(慎小嶷)+状语从句+paraphrasePPT演示课件

(精品课件)雅思写作开头(慎小嶷)+状语从句+paraphrasePPT演示课件

• 请问,它们是你心中的“无敌长难句”嘛??
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• 该项标准明确地告诉雅思考生:除了语法的正确性之外,重点考察带从句的 复合句的应用。 • 5分标准:试图使用复合句 • 6分标准:简单句和复合句的混合使用(a mix) • 7分标准:使用多种多样的复合句(uses a variety of complex structures) 那么什么才称得上多种多样呢?三种以上在英语中才能叫做a variety of,所以 我们的作文中要写出四种不同的从句,比如:一篇作文中至少要写出宾语从句、 定语从句、状语从句和主语从句。
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• “The question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is wrong, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. However, once the age of reason(原因,理智) is reached, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour...”
如此之多剑桥实例全都包含有I 的使用,甚至有一些旗帜鲜明使用 WE。 因此,虽然我们在国外大学里写专业论文时确实应该努力避免使用这两个词,但是在写雅思议论文时,没有必 要对适度使用 I 或者WE “如履薄冰”了。
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KISS is an acronym([ˈækrənɪm]首字母缩略词) for "Keep it simple, stupid" as a design principle noted by the U.S. Navy in 1960.The KISS principle states(说明) that most systems work best if they are kept simple rather than made complicated; therefore simplicity should be a key goal in design and unnecessary complexity should be avoided.

《雅思写作》课件

《雅思写作》课件

如何备考雅思写作
熟悉考试形式和评分标准
了解考试的具体要求和评分标准,有助于考 生更有针对性地进行备考。
练习写作
多写多练,培养写作手感,提高写作速度和 准确性。
积累词汇和句型
扩大词汇量,掌握更多的高级词汇和句型, 提高表达的准确性和丰富性。
请教老师或专业人士
向老师或专业人士请教,获取有针对性的指 导和建议,帮助自己更好地备考。
培养批判性思维,提高文章深度
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对不同观点保持开放的态度, 不轻易接受或拒绝某种观点, 而是进行深入分析和思考。
学会提问和质疑,针对某种观 点提出合理的问题和质疑,进
一步推动思考和讨论。
掌握逻辑推理和辩证分析的方 法,能够从多个角度审视问题 ,提出全面、客观的观点。
通过阅读、讨论和写作等方式 不断提高自己的批判性思维能 力,使文章更具深度和说服力
例如,使用“significant”代替“important”,使用“varied”代替
“different”。
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避免重复使用同一词汇
通过同义词、近义词或上义词进行替换,增加文章词汇的丰富性。
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注意词汇的准确性和正式程度
确保所选词汇符合雅思写作的要求,避免过于口语化或过于生僻的词汇

复杂句式构造和变换技巧

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模拟试题与范文欣赏
模拟试题示例及解析
模拟试题一
讨论现代科技对人们社交方式的影响。
模拟试题二
分析国际旅游业的利与弊。
解析
该题目要求考生就现代科技对社交方式的影响进行讨论。 可以从社交媒体的普及、在线交流的便捷性、虚拟社交的 利弊等方面展开讨论。
解析

雅思小作文开头段改写诀窍ppt课件

雅思小作文开头段改写诀窍ppt课件
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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
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how N. + V. (change / fluctuate)
unemployment rates
图表作文开头段的写法
开头段的写法:改写 / 转述题目
同义替换 1. 同义词替换 2. 关键词词性、位置的转换。 3. 时间、地点的改写。 4. 名词和从句之间的相互转换。
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1. 同义词替换。 (关键词词性、位置的转换。)
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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate)
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1 The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
时间改写:
between March 1993 and March 1999
during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.
地点改写(具体
概括)
in the U.S. and Japan:
in two different countries
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I know I left too much mess And destruction to come back again
And I caused nothing but trouble I understand if you can't talk to me again And if you live by the rules of "It's over"
Then I'm sure that that makes sense
IELTS Academic Writing Campus and Education
March 3rd, 2010
Sample Task 2
In Task 2 you will be presented with a point of view or argument or problem. You are required to present and justify an opinion, evaluate and challenge ideas, evidence or an argument, compare and contrast evidence, opinions and implications, or present the solution to a problem. …
IELTS Academic Writing: Task 2
根据题目要求展开论述,观点论据切合题意; 对文中所举的观点充分展开,进行充足的论证; 合理分层分段,论述展开条理清晰,观点与论据之间衔接紧
密; 准确运用语言进行论述,并体现一定的词汇量和句法的多样
性; 运用半正式文体进行写作,论证中使用的语言规范得体。
Topic One: Mobile Phones
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that these problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone?
5 minutes for you to brainstorm
5分钟构思 (书面完成)
This is taken from IELTS Academic Writing (14-01-2006).
Pages 126-133 from our textbook.
How to analyze and express?
Current social context:
好处:方便、经济、生命保障(突发事件时)
坏处:隐私(偷拍)、垃圾短信(包括诈骗)、健康、工作/ 休息间陷的模糊
Key idea in the topic:
好处 〉坏处 坏处 〉好处
文章容易流于普通 文章观点较为独特、有力
Preparatory Steps
Is it similar to the discussion of TV?
From the following aspects Social (incl. family life) Educational Economical (incl. entertainment) ? Environmental?
Sample Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
… Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
White Flag 爱你不轻言放弃 By Dido (2003)
White Flag Dido
I know you think that I shouldn't still love you I'll tell you that But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it Where's the sense in that? I promise I'm not trying to make your life harder
Or return to where we were
Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door
I'm in love and always will be
13 Problems of mobile phone
IELTS Academic Writing 雅思学术写作
Unit Two
Warm-Up Music
Dido Florian Cloud de Bounevialle O'Malley Armstrong (born 25 December 1971 in London, England) professionally known as Dido (pronounced /ˈdaɪdoʊ/ DYE-doe) an award winning English singersongwriter.
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Anything you know about mobile phone?
12arguments! Social Physical Economical Educational Environmental Political …
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