很好的考研作文四大模板-(曹其军)
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试作文杀招之一
根据曹其军老师讲稿整理
总原则之一:
应试作文以又臭又长为好:臭——全是废话(改卷老师不会看你的内容的);长——是很多废话的堆积;所以,考研作文要写到280——300字为好。
总原则之二:
要有固定,漂亮的“外表”
分析历年试题,考研出题类型不外乎四种:(问题)单向类、(好现象)单向类、双向类、图表加前三种。
一、(问题)单向格式总共是三段
段一:S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 (S——sentence)共5句话,一共60字左右,下面给出每句话可以套用的格式,这些漂亮的格式是一定要牢记和熟背的!
S1是介绍,固定格式有
1.The past few yearshave witnessed us faced with the issue of……
2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of……
3. Nothing can be more serious than the issue of……
S2+S3运用Flex 技巧进行扩展和包装,这些Flex 技巧在后面具体给出,要熟背!
运用statistics:
According to a recent survey made by Dr. Cao,head of sociology department at Beijing University,70%....;and 30%....
S4 “同一份调查还表明…(又给出另一个数据)
The same survey also shows that +(又一数据)
S5 收尾,与S1呼应,“由此可见,…问题已经非常严重了”
It can be concluded,therefore,that the issue of……has become more and more serious .
段二:120——140字左右
开头:S1 : 10 words
1. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon ,various reasons have been put forward.
2.The above problem may well give rise to some effects as follow.
S2+S3+S4: 50 words
开始列举了,但是千万不要用那些滥词:first,second,firstly,secondly,印象分会降低,要用些漂亮的词,尽可能用短语:
In the very beginning,
+S2
In the first place,
In the second place,In the end,
+S3 +S4
What is more,Last but
S2,S3,S4 在简单阐述了各自一个观点之后,就开始进行Flex扩展,扩展可运用Quotation 或是Example达到增加60——80字:
Quotation:
To illustrate the point,let’s take a look at what …… said in an
article :“。。。。”
所以,整个第二段是核心段,基本结构是:
开头S1(10字)+ S2 扩展
S3 50字扩展共扩展60-80字
S4 扩展
段三(解决方法,suggestions)100 words
S1 15 words
1.We should take immediate measures,for if the present situation continues as before,serious outcome will come up.
2. It is high time that
S2+S3+S4+S5+S6 100 words or so
S2 On one hand,we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid……
S3 Should anyone dare to break the law,he to she should be put into jail for 5 years.
S4 In addition ,our government should put in more money to
protect …….
S5 On the other hand,we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of t he issue of…..
S6 Only through these measures,I firmly believe,will the
above-discussed problem be efficiently resolved.
二、(好现象)单向类
段一介绍60 字
段二分析重要性原因(或结果benefits)
做法
段三结论(要重视)
段一介绍
开头:Nothing can be more outstanding than ……
接下来运用的扩展和(问题)单向类相同
段二分析
开头:The above phenomenon may well give rise to some benefits as follow.
benefits 社会的
经济的
个人的
(3)做法
As the phenomenon is important ,we can approach it in the following ways.
接下来运用扩展技巧
段三结论
重视社会生活(money,awareness)
个人生活(awareness,我的决心等等)
说明:该现象为较大类的,如希望工程,就可以加上社会的重视;较小的如交朋友,信念如明灯,就只用个人生活的做法。
开头:It goes without saying that due attention should be paid to the phenomenon.
三、双向类
(一)A1 VS A2 = contrast “对照”即是一个事物的两方面做比较,如看电视的利弊,出国留学等等,A1好,A2坏;或是A1坏,A2好;