雅思写作同意与否7分范文

∙同意与否两边倒

Para. 1 引出话题

Para. 2 同意段（观点及理由）

Para. 3 不同意段（观点及理由）

Para.4 我的观点（同意/不同意）

Students from rural areas often find it difficult to get access to university education, so people think universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2010年6月5日考题)

∙开头段

S1: Today it is not uncommon to see that rural students have difficulty in getting access to higher education. (背景)

S2: People hold contrasting views on whether this group of students should be granted certain privileges on campus. (争议话题)

S3: As far as I am concerned, village children and urban ones should be treated equally. (态度)

∙主体段1

S1: On the one hand, it cannot be denied that it is more difficult for village children to accustom themselves to the college life, so special assistance from universities is necessary. (主题句)

S2: Firstly, providing easier courses might benefit students from rural areas greatly because their academic foundation is not as solid as their urban classmates.

S3: Only in this way can they quickly adapt to the college environment.

S4: Secondly, offering other forms of assistance such as loans, scholarships, or part-time jobs can ensure their successful completion of the college education.

∙主体段2

S1: On the other hand, treating every student equally, whether with

a rural or urban background, would be considered advantageous in

the long run. (主题句)

S2: To begin with, all men are created equal and society does not give privileges to anyone.

S3: So it is better for them to get well-prepared for the fierce competition.

S4: Otherwise, rural students might bury their head in the sand before it is too late to return to the harsh reality.

S5: In the second place, giving village children privileges may damage their confidence and self-esteem, and weaken their interest in study.

S6: By contrast, it is better for the government to place more emphasis on and invest more capital in the education of rural areas. 结尾段

To sum up, although there might be some merits of giving privileges to rural students on campus, treating all students equally benefit in the long run. (衔接手段+让步+重申观点)