2012年12月四级作文范文

2012年12月四级作文Education Pays

写作第一步一定要审题：必须要迅速进入动笔写作的状态，否则时间上来不及！

在审题之后，得到以下信息：一，没有中文说明，我们想怎么写就怎么写。二，有图片，要加上描述图片的“废话”。第三，图片中有单词有数据，字数要是不够，可以凑数第一段：引入现象因为这是图片题，所以先上句“应景”的废话“As we can see from the chart that”，其余的部分直接往上写我们的模版“nowadays, the phenomenon of ……has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future”记得要把原来的“……”换成关键词“Education Pays”，要不就跑题了！

第一段可以写成：

As we can see from the chart given above that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays in the first place but not the degree, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures。

第二段可以有两种写法，即第一种，说明这个“Education Pays”的原因，我给大家了四个原因写上一个就行。第一种写成：现象原因。

Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays. The following one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not an opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life. So they want to get a job as early as possible. But, as matter of fact, as the chart describes, people who have learned more earn more than others. And, in the chart, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn 512 dollars more than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.

在这个段落中，最后一句话，我着重引用了一下图片的数据，比较了一下，没写倍数，那东西一不留神就写错！

第二段也还可以写成：现象讨论，即大家对这个事儿看法不一致。有的人觉得这个事儿对什么好，有的人觉得这个事儿对什么坏！写上就好，因为，无论什么事儿，大家的观点都不是一致的哦！第二段第二种如下：

Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not，as a matter of fact，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, they can earn more money. However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard work.. But most people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits

以上连个段落，大家根据自己的想法写上一个就好了，可别都写，真的写不下的！

第三段，其实万古不变，就是个人观点，观点最好是建议或者对策，照着之前给出的三个，随便写写好了：

To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will be bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it. And it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, made combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future。

一定要注意多次强调的主题词，要在三个段落都重复的！