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(2)Using as many sentence patterns as
possible 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型， 要灵活运用诸如定语从句，状语从句， 名词性从句，倒装句、强调句、主从复合 句、非谓语动词等.
不同的人有不同的观点。
1.Opinions fall into three. 2.Different people have different opinions on the question. 3.Opinions are divided on the issue. 4.The opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person. 5.The opinions over the issue whether museums should be free to the public differ from person to person.
As is known to all, … As the saying goes, “…”
Let’s do some exercise.
1. 把从句改为非谓语动词
She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.
合理收费以保持运营17.2%
1.17.2% of the people are in favor of reasonable charge in order to keep them running normally. 2.17.2% believe that, to keep museums running well, museums should charge visitors an entrance fee.
能对他们的学习有负面影响。
6. 俗话说：“有志者， 事竟成。”
Analyse a composition and review how to write argumentation
分析一篇书面表达 复习如何写好议论文
Problems:
1.Omit some points. 内容不完整
2.Chinglish
3.Lack of vocabulary 4.结构不合理，层次不清晰， 行文不连贯
On arriving at the village，we were warmly….
No sooner had we arrived at the village than we ……
Hardly had we arrived at the village when we….
用定语从句连接句子 My favorite writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius.
Not until 7 o’clock did he get up.
As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 句型转换
The moment /The minute / Immediately we arrived at the village, we were…
My favorite writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.
改成状语从句和感叹句 They finished repairing the broken chair together. They felt very happy.
How happy they were when they finished repairing the broken chair together.
3. Using some linking words to make your
writing more logical and fluent (加强连接词的使用)
4.文章结构合理，段落层次清晰。
正反对比类写作题的写作格式
第一段（开头）提出问题
——正方观点 理由
第二段（正文）
——反方观点 ……
When there are too many visitors, museums should not be free to the public.
I think they should not charge visitors, because museums belong to the public. I don’t think they should charge visitors, because museums belong to the public.
1. We have a heated discussion about…
We have had a survey on…
2. Some students think…/ But others are
opposed to…/Others are against…/ Some are in
favor of… 3. It is/was +被强调部分 +that (who) + 剩余部分 4. Only +状语从句/介词短语/副词＋部分倒装 5. 形容词、副词、名词 + as/though + 主语 +谓语,
67.9%支持彻底免费
1. 67.9% of the people hold the view that museums should be free to the public completely. 2. A majority of people (67.9%) support that museums should be free to the public. 3.The number of people who support the opinion that museums should be free to the pubic accounts for/makes up 67.5%.
主句 6.非谓语充当状语的句式
…doing/ done/ to do…，主句
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7. No matter +疑问词+从句…, 主句 8. As long as…,主句 9. As far as I know ( = I think; in my
opinion) , … 10. The reason why… is that … 11. As we all know, …
Tips
1.尽量避免写作中的中文式英语 （Chinglish) 2. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 （高级词汇，句型和语法多样化）
3 有效地使用语句间的连接成分， 使行文连贯
4.文章结构合理，段落层次清晰。 5. 加强阅读，提高词汇
1.Avoid Chinglish in your writing
Correct the following sentences
理由
第三段（结尾）——强调主题或阐述作者个人观点
Let’s enjoy two excellent compositions.
Translation
1. 关于公共场合禁止吸烟我们进行了热烈 的讨论。一些学生认为吸烟是合法的，但是另
外一些学生反对在公共场合吸烟，认为吸烟害 人又害己。
2. 只有改变我们的生活方式才能拯救地球。 3.不管你有多聪明，努力才是成功的关键。 4. 你可以出去，只要你答应在11点以前回来。 5. 我认为学生不能在学校使用手机的理由是这可
There are 67.5% of the people agree it 67.5% of the people approve of/ are in favor of it/are for it /support it.
When the visitors are too many, museums should not be free to the public.
分时段和人群有选择地免费14.9%
1.14.9% of the people approve of free of charge depending on different time. Besides, some special people, such as students, soldiers and the old, can Visit museums for free. 2.Considering some special people like students and the old, museums can be free to them on some special days.
改成倒装句 Though he is wealthy, he works hard.
Wealthy as he is, he works hard.
改成强调句或倒装句 He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock.
It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up.
Tips: 要注意英美人的习惯表达方法， 切忌随心所欲地用中文对照英文进行翻译
2. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 （高级词汇，句型和语法多样化）
（1）使用高级词汇：这里所说的“高级词汇”， 指大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际 应用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词。 to keep museums running well, to keep museums functioning well, A new railway is being built in the city. A new railway is under construction in the city. I can’t find any way to solve the problem. I can’t find any solution to the problem.