初中英语书面表达练习题

3．书面表达
根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。
基本情况
张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生
兴趣爱好
1.喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为……
2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。
优秀事迹
上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程
未来梦想
1.希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师
第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X的有一个坏处。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.
They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求：
1.文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
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初中英语书面表达练习题
一、英语书面表达
1．近日，某中学“iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
点睛：对立观点式
第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X的第一个原因。They also argue that _____________________________支持X的另一个原因。
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2.每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：…….（举1例）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3.……
家长们Leabharlann Baidu为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增加家庭负担
你的观点
1.……
2.……
注意：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classrooms
【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
2．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。