2019高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)
2019年高考英语读写类作文讲评 课件38张PPT语文
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get
acquire/attain/obtain
finish
accomplish/complete
like
appreciate/be fond of/prefer
care
concern
consider take…into consideration/account
use
make use of /take advantage of
Most of the injured were young people in their twenties, a majority of them women. There were also college students and children. They were sent to several hospitals for treatment, including Changzheng Hospital, the Shanghai No.1 People’s Hospital, Ruijin Hospital and Huangpu District Central Hospital.
Sandy will be d_____ to see you.
I’m absolutely ______ that you are coming.
bad
Smoking in public is a/an __________ habit.
The weather is ___________.
I found this manner is extremely ________.
Some people prefer to visit some crowded interest of places rather than stay at home for holiday.
2019版高考英语精品课件全国卷2地区通用版：专题十五 书面表达(共225张PPT)
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 punctually adv.准时地 be of great significance 很重要 appropriate adj.合适的
2.出彩结构 First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.(that引导宾语从句, which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 3(2018课标全国Ⅲ) 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括: 1.学校的体育场馆; 2.主要的运动项目; 3.你喜欢的项目。
you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, it������ s vital that you
should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom. In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friend������ s home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
2019年英语全国高考写作课件(全国Ⅱ)写作构思及模板新课标版(共10张PPT)
Dear ______, How are things going? I'm writing to you, telling
_______________. As we know, ____________. When it comes to __________, you __________. Thus we can't go without you.
第一段：目的（puporse）
4. 段落 第二段：比赛信息和赛前准备（main body）
第三段：期待（ending ）
2019年高考全国Ⅱ作文
参考词汇（vocabulary）:
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2019年高考全国Ⅱ作文
第二节 书面表达（满分25 分） 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的 队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2019年高考全国Ⅱ作文
2019年高考全国Ⅱ作文
You are sincerely expected to take part in the match. Hopefully, you can arrange your things properly. If not, please keep me of informed ahead of time. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!
2019全国卷I,II,III高考英语题目和范文+写作指导
2019全国卷I，II，III高考英语题目及范文＋写作指导高考英语：书面表达【2019·全国卷I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。
请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。
_________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ ____Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua.【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。
首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。
高三英语写作专题 申请信课件(共18张)
To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English; as a consequence, it is a piece of cake for me to introduce everything to international friends. Besides, I would like to introduce Chinese paintings ， spread Chinese culture and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. Last but not least, as vice monitor of our class, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.
(3)In addition，I think I can do the job well thanks to my language skills and a good command of English.
此外，由于我的语言技能和精通英语，我认为我能把这项 工作做好。
3．常用结尾句式 (1)I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account/consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导1.全国Ⅰ卷【题目要求】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。
请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。
注意：1．词数100 左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。
【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I ’m L i Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I ’mdelighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I ’m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What ’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot t o e k x e h e i b p i t ti o h n e in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I ’d appreciate it if y i o n u t o c c o o u n l d s i d t a e k r e a t m i o y n.a p p l i c a t i o n Yours,1Li Hua【写作解析】这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
2019全国高考英语作文真题及范文指导(共8套)
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导1.全国Ⅰ卷【题目要求】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。
请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。
【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delight ed to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign tea chers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【写作解析】这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
高考英语基础写作课件-新课标-人教版(2019年11月整理)
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2019高中高考英语写作指导(共19张PPT)
What he did yesterday, by no means, was
satisfactory. 5. There is little hope of winning.
There is little, if any, hope of winning. 第七页，共十九页。
the water is too cold. 2. His words are right.
His words, to some extent, are right.
3. The question deserves thinking over.
The question, from my point of view, deserves
opportunities for promotion. I am in favor of equal rights for women,
especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as
2. 你如此建议的理由；
3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。
第六页，共十九页。
*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that
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2019高考全国Ⅰ卷英语课件
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which it would be if you're away from the
smog of cities-then the air is filled with lifegiving，energizing oxygen. If you exercise out of doors，your body will learn to breathe more deeply，allowing even more oxygen to get to your muscles(肌肉)and your brain.
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高考英语基础写作课件-新课标-人教版(2019年)
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2019全国卷 高考英语应用文写作策略(共39张PPT)
首段写明自我介绍和写信的背景和目的，中间段表明邮件的具体内容 即比赛的信息和赛前需要的准备，结尾段向对方表达鼓励和表明对结果的 期待。除了要包含最基本的内容要点，还需要开放性的构思来添加细节， 比如比赛内容的介绍，可以结合自身平时参加的排球比赛，篮球比赛等。 建议平时训练不同文体的写作，加强构思能力，以合理的逻辑进行展开， 结合自身实际生活和感受才能完成应用文“解决实际问题”的写作任务。
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Good compositions are all alike; every poor composition is poor in its own way.
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—2019年高考英语全国卷作文题及优秀范文资料讲解
—2019年高考英语全国卷作文题及优秀范文资料讲解Ladies and gentlemen,Today, I stand here to share with you my thoughts on success. In my opinion, success is not merely defined by material wealth or fame, but rather by the ability to achieve personal goals, find happiness and make a positive impact on the world.Firstly, success is about setting and achieving personal goals. Each of us has our own dreams and aspirations, and true success lies in the ability to turn those dreams into reality. Whether it is becoming a doctor, a teacher, or an artist, success is measured by the progress we make towards our goals. It requires determination, hard work, and perseverance. Success is not an easy path, but it is a rewarding one. It is the feeling of accomplishment that comes from knowing that we have done our best and achieved what we set out to do.Secondly, success is about finding happiness. Many people mistakenly believe that money and fame will bring them happiness. However, true happiness comes from within and cannot be bought or achieved through external means. Success is about finding joy and contentment in what we do, and living a life that is meaningful to us. It is about pursuing our passions, doing what we love, and finding fulfillment in our work. When we are happy with what we do, success naturally follows.Lastly, success is about making a positive impact on the world. True success is not selfish, but rather it is about using our talents andabilities to make a difference in the lives of others. Whether it is through volunteer work, charity, or simply being kind and compassionate to those around us, success is about making the world a better place. Success is not just about personal gain, but it is about leaving alasting legacy and creating a positive change in the world.In conclusion, success is not defined by material wealth or fame,but rather by the ability to achieve personal goals, find happiness and make a positive impact on the world. It requires determination, hard work, and perseverance. It is about setting and achieving personal goals, finding joy and contentment in what we do, and using our talents to make a difference. So let us all strive for success, not only for ourselves but also for the betterment of society. Thank you.。
高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
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10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
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2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导1.全国Ⅰ卷【题目要求】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。
请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。
注意：1．词数100 左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。
【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I ’m L i Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I ’mdelighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I ’m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What ’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot t o e k x e h e i b p i t ti o h n e in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I ’d appreciate it if y i o n u t o c c o o u n l d s i d t a e k r e a t m i o y n.a p p l i c a t i o n Yours,1Li Hua【写作解析】这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
最新2019年高考英语作文写作指导课件
Step 3 imitate (rewrite) articles （犹如“模帖”）
How to imitate (rewrite) the article?
Sample:
• • • • • What electives to choose 1. 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2. 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3. 以你自己为例 （2007年12月）
• From good books, moreover, they draw much besides entertainment. They gain mental food such as few companions can supply. Even while resting from their labors they are, through the books they read, equipping themselves to perform those labors more efficiently. This albeit they may not be deliberately reading to improve their mind. All unconsciously the ideas they derive from the printed pages are stored up, to be worked over by the imagination for their future profit.
Step 2 recite articles
Step 3 imitate (rewrite) articles
Step 4 create articles
Summary
Step 1 select articles(犹如“选 帖”)
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3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eyes?
What is a good writing？
A good composition
content structurelanguage
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1.I can't understand them when I meet new
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
• 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 • 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
较强的语言运用能力。 • 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
2. Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest. It was held in our school. (使用过去分词)
Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_h_e_l_d___in our school.(12 山东)
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Hua
yours
6.My English level is common and I can't speak∧very
well.
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7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
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8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
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第一档(差)：(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题
要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 • 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备
_I_t_w_a_s__n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _he had read the news in the newspaper _th__a_t_ he knew what had happened.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？
Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.