高考英语作文范文及点评全国甲卷

高考英语作文范文及点评全国甲卷2022高考英语作文2021高考英语作文2020高考英语作文●2022高考英语作文点评及范文(全国甲卷)第二节书面表达你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性;2. 保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________第一段：作用：开篇。

要求：开门见山，点名主题，篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。

Do you have idea about June 8? It is not only the college entrance examination to Chinese senior school students, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans.第二段：作用：文章主体内容。

要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全。

篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子。

The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more,to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection. Finally, green initiative, green life, not to the ocean, sewage, hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, be a small guard to protect the blue land.第三段：结尾段，作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。

要求：概括，得体。

篇幅2行左右，1-2个句子。

The theme of Ocean Day 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem".Hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.作文答题纸一共13行，字数分布要均匀。

〖参考范文1〗Do you know June 8, which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chinese youngsters, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans?The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more,to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection.Do you agree with me? If so, let’s hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.(160)点评：文章用了中规中矩的手法，和读者用疑问句进行交流，倡议书内容交代的比较自然流畅。

〖参考范文2〗Today is June 8, World Oceans Day, whose theme of 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem".The world is developing too fast to care for its health. It is our pity to sacrifice the harmony of ocean to achieve economic development：the polluted oceans, the dying marine creatures, the destroyed undersea resources, etc, are all crying for our help. It is high time that we strengthen the study of Marine knowledge and enhance the awareness of Marine protection. Deepen the understanding and understanding of Marine mothers, effectively enhance the awareness and responsibility of protecting the blue land, and strive to be a small expert in protecting the Marine ecological environment.Let’s return the mermaid to a clean ocean, and make their life more happy. (145)点评：文章用了比喻类比的手法，采用了现实生活中破坏海洋的危害为例子，说明海洋保护的重要性。

最后以还给美人鱼一个美丽的家园为比喻，表达美好期盼。

>>>●2021高考英语作文题目及范文第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华。

你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。

请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。

邮件内容包括：1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ _范文：Dear Chris,Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented onthe English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.Yours,Li Hua>>>●2020高考英语作文全国3卷题目及范文假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧，写一封邮件给外教Miss Veans，请他指导你们。