2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)_(_) (3).ppt
(完整版)2018高考英语全国卷3(附答案)
2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结東后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题15分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例:How much is the shirt?A. £19.15B. £9.18.C. £9.151. What does John find difficult in learning German?A. Pronunciation.B. V ocabulary.C. Grammar.2. What is probable relationship between the speakers?A. ColleagueB. Brother and sister.C. Teacher and student.3. Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train.4. What are the speakers talking about?A. A restaurant.B. A street.C. A dish.5. What does the woman think of her interview?A. It was tough.B. It was interesting.C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白。
每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
2018届高考英语一轮课标通用课件:专题19 书面表达 精品
考纲 内容
高考 考点
高考示例(原题号)
2017 全国Ⅰ、全
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提纲 类
2016 全国Ⅰ、全 国Ⅱ、全国Ⅲ 2015 全国Ⅰ、全 国Ⅱ 2014 全国Ⅱ
2013 全国Ⅰ、全
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考查频度 命题趋向
通过对近五年高考英语
书面表达试题类型的分
析,考查内容从传统的单
考点一
考点二
考点三
试做真题 透析真题 高手必备 萃取高招 对点精练
By the way,you’d better get a brief idea of the history of the Tang Dynasty beforehand so that you can have a better understanding of the poems that we will learn. Best, Li Hua
第五部分 写作
专题十九书面表达
对于英语写作这部分,我主要想和大家分享三点:第一, 打草稿;第二,使用复杂句式和高级词汇;第三,卷面整洁, 书写优美。 每次做书面表达题,我都会留下至少半个小时。当然具 体留给写作的时间因人而异,但我还是建议大家至少留 足二十分钟。认真审读题目要求后,我会首先打好腹稿,明确自己 要写的大致内容,然后在草稿纸上列出内容要点并尝试把关键的句 式用英文写下来,最后便可以在答题纸上正式作答了。可能很多同 学会有这样的疑惑:到底写作文要不要打草稿呢?根据我的经验,打 草稿是必需的:一来可以帮我们理清写作思路,二来可以避免在答 题纸上留过多的修改涂抹痕迹,影响卷面整洁度。但为了节约时间, 我们大可不必把全部内容都打好草稿,而是只需列出提纲和复杂句 式即可。
2018年高考英语全国卷3(附含答案解析)
2018年高考英语全国卷3(附含答案解析) -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结東后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题15分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例: How much is the shirt?A. £19.15B. £9.18.C. £9.151. What does John find difficult in learning German?A. Pronunciation.B. Vocabulary.C. Grammar.2. What is probable relationship between the speakers?A. ColleagueB. Brother and sister.C. Teacher and student.3. Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train.4. What are the speakers talking about?A. A restaurant.B. A street.C. A dish.5. What does the woman think of her interview?A. It was tough.B. It was interesting.C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白。
2018届高三高考英语专题复习课件:写作微课堂 (共174张PPT)
(2015·天津高考)I am Li Jin,president of the Student Union from Chenguang Middle School.
尽管我们大规模地建设道路、公路,但是由于近年来 日益增长的汽车数量,对于这个问题还有很大的提升空间 。
(2014·安徽高考)This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方式,不会伤害到别人或 自己。
(2015·四川高考)So I am quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
因此,我有信心帮助您学好普通话。(形容词作表语) 5.定语——名词的修饰语 定语是用来描述名词或代词的品质与特征的修饰语, 它常和名词构成名词短语。可以用作定语的有:形容词、 名词、代词、数词、副词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词 短语和从句等。
首先,作为一名学生,最重要的是学习,因此你们所
3.不一定复杂的复合句 复合句由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成。主 句是全句的主体,通常独立存在,从句则只用作句子的一 个成分,不能独立。复合句中的从句包括定语从句、状语 从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同 位语从句)。 (2015·广东高考)DNA test,a new technique,which is tested by analyzing saliva sample(定语从句),appears in the foreign medical industry.
2018高考英语(人教) :第3部分 写作技能培养 第一讲 明白句子成分 写出准确的简单句 (共28张PPT)
4.The meeting held yesterday was important.
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5.Every day he was forced to work from morning till night.
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第三部分 第一讲
第一讲 明白句子成分 写出准确的简单句
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第三部分 第一讲
Ⅰ.八种句子成分
句子由各个组成部分构成,这些组成部分叫作句子的成分。句子的成分可
分为主语、谓语、表语、宾语、定语、状语、补语、同位语。弄清句子成分有 英 语
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利于在短文写作中写出正确的句子;有利于在语法填空题型中对考点的判断;
宾语是动作的对象或承受者,一般位于及物动词和介词的后面。可以用作
宾语的有:名词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词和从句等。
①I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for
environmental protection. (2016·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
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我知道你摄影技术很好,而且你总是想为环境保护做些事情。(名词作宾语)
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②I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.(2015·浙江高
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我设法说服我的同学们接受我的想法。(不定式作宾语)
2018届高考英语一轮(课标通用)课件专题19_书面表达_(共316张PPT)
学霸有招 高手洞考 高手锻造
考纲 内容
高考 考点
高考示例(原题号)
2017 全国Ⅰ、全
国Ⅱ、全国Ⅲ
书 面 表 达
提纲 类
2016 全国Ⅰ、全 国Ⅱ、全国Ⅲ 2015 全国Ⅰ、全 国Ⅱ 2014 全国Ⅱ
2013 全国Ⅰ、全
国Ⅱ
考查频度 命题趋向
通过对近五年高考英语
书面表达试题类型的分
考点一
考点二
学霸有招 高手洞考 高手锻造
考点三
试做真题 透析真题 高手必备
萃取高招
对点精练
考点一提纲类 Writing 1(2017全国Ⅰ) 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封 邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.内容:学习唐诗; 3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
考点一
考点二
学霸有招 高手洞考 高手锻造
考点三
试做真题 透析真题 高手必备
萃取高招
对点精练
【参考范文】 Hi Leslie,
I’m glad that you have made great progress in Chinese learning.You know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language.But you are so confident and never give up whenever you meet with difficulties.I’m sure you will succeed through your hard work.
析,考查内容从传统的单
2018英语高考全国卷三(附含答案解析)
绝密★启用前2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标III卷)英语注意事项:1. 答卷前,考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。
2. 回答选择题时,选出每小题答案后,用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。
如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号。
回答非选择题时,将答案写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
3. 考试结束后,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结束后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话,每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳答案。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例:How much is the shirt?A.£19.15.B.£9.18.C.£9.15.1.What does John find difficult in learning German?A .Pronunciation. B. Vocabulary. C. Grammar.2.What is the probable relationship between the speakers?A. Colleagues.B. Brother and sister.C. Teacher and student.3.Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train.4. What are the speakers talking about?A.A restaurant.B.A street.C.A dish.5.What does the woman think of her interview?A. It was tough.B. It was interesting.C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白,每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
2018高考英语(人教) :第3部分 写作技能培养 第六讲 写好开头和结尾,实现升级策略 (共24张PPT)
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It is high time that the government took proper steps to solve traffic problems.
该是政府采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
第三部分 第六讲
4.引用名言法——结尾用名言总结全文
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you will enjoy more your stay here. 不管怎样,有不同的文化,就有不同的习俗,如果你能“入乡随俗”,就
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(开门见山法) 2.上周日,我和同学们去了香山公园。
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Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the Xiangshan Park. _______________________________________________________( 故事背景法)
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I'm waiting for your early reply.
我期待你的早日答复。
第三部分 第六讲
2.表示感谢法
I would be grateful if you could consider my application. 如果你能考虑我的申请我将不胜感激。 I must thank you again for your generous help. 我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。
当谈到如何成功时,很多人或许会想到谚语“有志者事竟成”。
第三部分 第六讲
3.列举实例法——通过一个实例或现象引出话题
2018高考英语全国卷3(附答案)
2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结東后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题15分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例: How much is the shirt?A. £19.15B. £9.18.C. £9.151. What does John find difficult in learning German?A. Pronunciation.B. Vocabulary.C. Grammar.2. What is probable relationship between the speakers?A. ColleagueB. Brother and sister.C. Teacher and student.3. Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train.4. What are the speakers talking about?A. A restaurant.B. A street.C. A dish.5. What does the woman think of her interview?A. It was tough.B. It was interesting.C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白。
每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
(完整版)2018高考英语全国卷3(附答案)
(完整版)2018高考英语全国卷3(附答案)2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结東后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题15分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项.听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题.每段对话仅读一遍。
例: How much is the shirt?A。
£19。
15 B. £9.18. C。
£9.151。
What does John find difficult in learning German?A。
Pronunciation. B。
Vocabulary。
C。
Grammar。
2. What is probable relationship between the speakers?A。
Colleague B. Brother and sister. C. Teacher and student。
3. Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train。
4. What are the speakers talking about?A。
A restaurant. B。
A street。
C. A dish。
5。
What does the woman think of her interview?A。
It was tough. B。
It was interesting. C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22。
5分)听下面5段对话或独白。
每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
2018年高考英语全国卷3(附含答案解析)
2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。
录音内容结東后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题15分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例: How much is the shirt?A. £B. £.C. £1. What does John find difficult in learning German?A. Pronunciation.B. Vocabulary.C. Grammar.2. What is probable relationship between the speakers?A. ColleagueB. Brother and sister.C. Teacher and student.3. Where does the conversation probably take place?A. In a bank.B. At a ticket office.C. On a train.4. What are the speakers talking about?A. A restaurant.B. A street.C. A dish.5. What does the woman think of her interview?A. It was tough.B. It was interesting.C. It was successful.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分分)听下面5段对话或独白。
每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。
听每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读各个小题,每小题5秒钟;听完后,各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。
2018高考英语(人教) :第3部分 写作技能培养 第一讲 明白句子成分 写出准确的简单句 (共28张PPT) (1)
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elderly people. (2016 ·北京高考书面表达)
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所有人对收到那些意想不到的礼物都非常高lly, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must
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现在网络投票非常流行。(动名词作主语)
②The most obvious problem in our class is lack of interaction and teamwork.
(2015·广东高考读写任务)
我们班最明显的问题是缺少互动和协作。(名词短语作主语)
第三部分 第一讲
该句式就是常说的主系表结构。此句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,谓语动
词需用系动词(主要是 be 动词),表语多为形容词,也可以是名词、介词短语、不定
式及分词等。
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①I should be available any time after school next week.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) 语
精准高考
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第三部分 写作素能培养
第三部分 第一讲
在英语写作中,学生最大的困扰是无法写出正确的句子,而传统“以考代
练”的训练模式收效甚微。要从根本上提高英语写作水平,必须从认识句子的
构成要素开始,先明白各种句子成分,会写基本的简单句,再写好各种高级复 英 语
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杂句,最后写出完美的精彩文章。
五、定语——名词的修饰语
定语是用来描述名词的品质与特征的修饰语,它常和名词构成名词短语。
可以用作定语的有:形容词、名词、代词、数词、副词、不定式、动名词、分
2018年全国卷3英语
2018年全国卷3英语2018年全国卷3英语作文题目是关于李华写信给外国朋友Tom,邀请他来中国旅游,并参加中国的文化活动。
以下是一篇可能的范文:Dear Tom,I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to invite you to visit China and participate in some cultural activities.China is a country with a rich history and culture, and there are many interesting places to visit. For example, the Great Wall is a must-see, and you can also visit the Forbidden City, the Terracotta Warriors, and many other famous landmarks. In addition, China has a diverse cuisine that you should definitely try, such as dumplings, noodles, and Peking duck.During your visit, I would also like to invite you to participate in some cultural activities. We can attend a Chinese Opera performance,watch a dragon or lion dance, or try some Chinese painting or calligraphy. These activities will give you a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and traditions.I am sure that you will enjoy yourself no matter where you go or what you do in China. I look forward to your visit and the opportunity to show you the beauty of China.Best regards,Li Hua。
2018高考英语应用文写作精品PPT课件 图文
2017年6月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英 国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点; 3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1.词数80字左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2016年10月浙江省高考应用文
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。 请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 介绍自己: 2. 告知到达时间: 3. 询问应做何准备. 注意: 1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
be a huge success.
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appreciated!
Yours,
Dear
一.
Chris,
应用文的样文赏析8分
I'm Li Hua. I intend to organize a trip. I'll invite my
祝贺信
XXX
询问信
请假条
告知函
倡议书
失物招领 (标题) Found
(署名)
寻物启事 (标题) Lost
(署名)
书面通知 (标题) Notice (署名)出通知单位/个人
口头通知 Ladies and gentlemen, /Boys and girls/……, may I have your attention please?
应用文写作
---基于结构、内容和语言的视角
绍兴市第一中学 叶建映
2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解PPT演示课件
• If you are willing to join us, I will send the training program to your email box.
Don’t hesitate to put forward your advice, which will definitely become our
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• Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. In order to promote enthusiasm for scientific
activities and discover talents in this field, a competition, the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, intended for teenagers across the whole nation, is going to be launched in Tianjin Children’s Palace at the end of July. I am convinced that it is a wonderful stage for competitors to show their talents.
scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children’s palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile. • I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points as well as double our achievements. • If you are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin
2018年高考英语全国卷3(附答案)
AWelcome to Holker Hall & GardensVisitor InformationHow to get to HolkerBy Car Follow brown signs on A590 from J36, M6。
Approximate travel times:Windernere—20 minutes, Kendal—25 minutes,Lancaster—45 minutes,Manchester-1 hour 30 minutes.By Rail: The nearest station is Cark-in—Cartmel with trains to Carnforth, Lancaster and Preston for connections to major cities &airports.Opening TimesSunday-Friday(closed on Saturday) 11:00am—4:00pm,30th march-2nd November.Admission ChargesHall&Gardens GardensAdults:£12.00 £8.00Groups: £9.00 £5。
50Special EventsProducers’ Market 13th AprilJoin us to taste a variety of fresh local food and drinks. Meet the producers and get some excellent recipe ideas.Holker Garden Festival 30th MayThe event celebrates its 22nd anniversary with a great show of the very best of gardening, making it one of the most popular events in gardening.National Garden Day 28th AugustHolker once again opens its gardens in aid of the disadvantaged。
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dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
"我们一起研究高考"
英语高考第II卷
第二节 书面表达(25分)
近几年来,在新课标试卷中,书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文,但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向,没有限制 具体内容,属于半开放式的提示;考 查应用中的书信,话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关,考生会觉得有话可 说,有利于考生的自由发挥。
高考英语评分原则:
plans to compete. 4) I floerfgt ot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokset us much money to buy one.
改错
1.I can't understand them when I meet new
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing?
Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) (内容要点一个也不能丢,如果人家给的是文字 提示,可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4,如果人 家给的是图,那要先看懂图的意思,六个图都 要看看再动笔,不要看了一个马上就写。)
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Hua
yours
6.My English level is common and I can't speak∧very
well.
average
it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
二、感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing? How to catch the experts' eyes?
What is a good writing?
A good composition
content
structure
language
Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too chreoawvdye. d. 2) There ihsas a highway connected with
Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40,but she still
This village is very small, which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
is
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时,应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英, 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)
_I_t_is__s_u_g_g_e_st_e_d__th__a_t __the conference be put off.
5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点,即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
第一档(差):(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题
要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
• 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。 • 6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
along
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
havEensgtluisdhievdery well.
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确