英语作文与改错训练一

作文专题训练十八

I．短文改错

Mr. Liu Jin, aging 39, is working in a factory in Shanghai as the chemical engineer.

After graduating from the Nanjing University in 1978, he was sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering. Through his hard work for 4 years, he achieved remarkably achievements in scientific research and received doctor’s degree in 1982. A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary as he didn’t accept it. In 1983 he returned to China without some hesitation. He has made up her mind to devote all his life for our country.

II．书面表达

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地点类作文

一、基础积累

1.neighbor与……为邻

2.be made up of/consist of由……组成

3.be located /situated in/near坐落在

4. serve as当……用

5.with /has a history of有……的历史

6. with/has a population of有……人口

7.cover an area of 面积有...8. the third largest city第三大城市9. be famous for以……而著名

10. be well-known for/as因为/作为……而出名11. on its east lies 东边有……

12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方13. be rich /abundant in盛产

14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房子

相关句式；

1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。

2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。

3. Guangzhou, a city with a population

of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了。

4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。

5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿, 而且气候温和。

6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。

描写环境，倒装句是非常经典的句型，如：

(1)Behind the street lies a small river.街道后面有一条小河。

(2)On the top of the mountain stands a 50-meter-high tower. 山顶上矗立着一座50米高的塔。

(3)There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. 卧室里有一张床、一张沙发、一张桌子和一把椅子。

二、范文与改错

London, the most important industrial city of England, serve as the centre of its political, economy and cultural life. Locating in the southeast of England, it covers the area 1580 square kilometers. The weather is changeable so it rains often. People can enjoy the convenience of the means of the transportation, but in a relatively high price. With its beautiful scenery, London attracts visitors to all over the world, leaving us a deep impression.