高一英语基础写作

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日记就像一位特殊的亲密朋友， 解释说明 分享我的痛苦与快乐； special 特殊的 close 亲密的 share my sorrow and happiness. The diary is like a special and and it can shares close friend who shares my my sorrow happiness. sorrow andand happiness.
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• I have written a lot of compositions ,and one of them has got me win the first prize in the recently recent school composition competition • 句子中有recent，recently，lately等表示 “最近，近来”意义时，句子要用现在完 成时
• Since i was ten years old, i have kept writing diary. I set down the main things that happened to me during the day with 定语从句 my ideas in 强调句结构 my diary every night before i went to bed.It is because i can share sorrow and happiness with my diary that the diary seems to be my special and close friend.Besides/ 另外friend )，Keeping The diary is like aadditionally( special and close who a diary my also helps improve my writing 动名词做主语 shares sorrow and happiness. ability.I wrote many excellent 定语从句 one of which has got me win compositions, the first prize in recent composition competition.
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坚持写日记还促进了我写作水平的 提高， keeping a diary improve 促进 writing ability. Keeping a diary also helps improve my writing ability.
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• 我写了许多优秀的作文，其中一篇还获得 最近学校作文比赛一等奖。
动名词作主语 Keeping a diary • Keeping writing a diary also improve improves my writing skill/ability . • Keep a diary 写日记 • 动名词作主语，相当于单数，句子时态是 一般现在时，谓语动词要加“s” • Writing • Written • Writing skill/ability 写作能力
表达的多样性
• The diary is like a special and close friend for it can share my sorrow and happiness.
• 表达“好像，似乎，”：as if, seem to be….
• The diary can share my sorrow and happiness as if it is my special and close friend. • The diary seems to be my special and close friend for it can share my ……. • 句型多样性： • The diary seems to be my special and close friend who can share my sorrow and happiness.(定从) • It is because the diary can share my sorrow and happiness that(强调句)it seems to be my special and close friend.
keep writing dairy
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我从十岁开始这一习惯 Since i was ten years old have done Since i was ten years old, i have kept writing diary.
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( 我每天晚上睡觉前就把当天发生的 ) 主要事情和我的看法写在日记中； • set down .......in my diary. • main things that happened during the daytime • I set down the main things that happened during the day with my ideas in my diary every night before i went to bed.
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• I set the main things that happened to me during the day with my idea/thought ideas/thoughts • down in my diary every night before I went to bed.
• excellent 卓越的，优秀的 • the first prize 第一名
• in recent composition competition. • 现在完成时 • I wrote many excellent composition and one of it has got me win the first prize in recent composition competition. • i wrote many ......, one of which has got .......
set sth. down:当sth.为第三人称时，放在 set down 之间； set down sth.:当sth.为其它，或较长时， 应该放在set down 之后
句型的多样性
• I set down the main things that happened to me during the day with my ideas in my diary every night before I went to bed. • I didn’t go to bed until I set down the main things that happened to me during the day with my ideas in my diary every night. • not……until ……
基础写作
unit one
• 请以"Dairy,My Favorite Friend"为题， keep writing 用五句话写一篇短文，包括下面全部信 息。 dairy (2) • 1.我每天晚上睡觉前就把当天发生的主 要事情和我的看法写在日记中； (3) ( •(1) 2.我从十岁开始这一习惯；日记就像一 位特殊的亲密朋友，分享我的痛苦与快 ) 乐； •(4) 3.坚持写日记还促进了我写作水平的提 (5) 高，我写了许多优秀的作文，其中一篇 还获得最近学校作文比赛一等奖。
• The diary is likes like a special and close friend and , it can share my sorrow and happyness. happiness
Like v. 喜欢； prep.像
两个句子间不能用“，”直接连接，应加上 “连接词”