英语漫画作文指导
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/describes that… What it describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon among people who … • The caricature vividly reflects a social phenomenon that…
• Without any previous notice, a documentary dominated headlines and social websites on Feb 28.
• Under the Dome, a 103-minute documentary selffunded by former news anchor Chai Jing, was released on websites . It has rapidly pushed the public awareness about air pollution and encouraged people to join in efforts to make a difference.
苏州市2015届 高三零模作文
As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas.________
As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas. They are looking out of the same window, but one of them has drawn nothing but the bars which block his view, while the other has painted the beautiful scenery in
market we are looking forward to is around the corner.
Suggested version:Para 2
It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the Internet provides us with a place where we can communicate with different people, in which case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us. Besides, pressure from study drives us to seek excitement on the Internet. Also, parents, busy with their work, spare little time to stay with their children, resulting in the less communication.
• Recently ,the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.
Make at least four simple sentences.
A boy is occupied in chatting on the Internet. He refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy. She is depressed.
Step 2 : Interpret its implied meaning
What’s behind the cartoon? Think twice.
A picture is worth a thousand words.
Reveal related factors.
• Some useful sentence structures: • The picture shows/ indicates/implies
Para. 2
• What the picture conveys here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.
Under the Dome
最近中国的空气质量引起了广泛的关注。请 阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求： 1. 简要描述漫画内容； 2. 简要分析产生这种现象的原因； 3. 针对以上现象谈谈你自己的看法（至少两点）。 参考词汇： 口罩mask； 雾霾haze
One Possible Version：Para. 1
Outer appearanຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidue
Inner qualities
Basic elements of a good composition
Writing process
Step 1: Describe the cartoon
Step 2: Interpret its implied meaning
Step 3: Voice your opinions about the phenomenon
should be taken. On my personal note,… From my perspective,… For my part,…
Only when people work together can we ensure…
Only in this way can…. Only with joint efforts may we believe that the better
• Useful sentence structures: As is vividly shown/ portrayed/depicted/ illustrated
/indicated in the picture, ..... As can be seen in the picture, ......
the distance. ︳The message conveyed here is clear:
“What you see depends on the way you look at the world.” Positive thinking leads to positive action and reaction. In order to experience more happiness, we may need to
Combine the sentences.
As is vividly portrayed in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed.
Step 3: Give your opinions about the phenomenon
• Find out some solutions.
• Some useful sentence structures: As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures
Suggested version:Para 3
As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures should be taken by parents and children. In terms of children, we should cut back on the time when we play computers and be aware of the importance of communication with parents. In addition, parents and children should exchange their ideas and feelings regularly. Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about.
Standards of grading
Grade 5: (21-25) Grade 4: (16-20) Grade 3: (11-15) Grade 2: (6-10) Grade 1: (1-5)
paragraphs handwriting
Sentence patterns Words&Phrases Conjunction
Step 1 :Describe the cartoon
What’s in the cartoon? Observe it carefully and find some key information: ----People ; things; words ;actions; feelings ...
change our way of thinking. ︳At the start of Senior Three,
I woke up every morning feeling depressed, thinking of the much schoolwork to do. My friend Lee came to me and made me realize the best part about schooling—time spent together with classmates fighting for dreams. Ever since then I have learnt to look at my daily life from a different angle and cherish what I have. Change the way we view the world, and we’ll change our life.
• Without any previous notice, a documentary dominated headlines and social websites on Feb 28.
• Under the Dome, a 103-minute documentary selffunded by former news anchor Chai Jing, was released on websites . It has rapidly pushed the public awareness about air pollution and encouraged people to join in efforts to make a difference.
苏州市2015届 高三零模作文
As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas.________
As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas. They are looking out of the same window, but one of them has drawn nothing but the bars which block his view, while the other has painted the beautiful scenery in
market we are looking forward to is around the corner.
Suggested version:Para 2
It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the Internet provides us with a place where we can communicate with different people, in which case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us. Besides, pressure from study drives us to seek excitement on the Internet. Also, parents, busy with their work, spare little time to stay with their children, resulting in the less communication.
• Recently ,the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.
Make at least four simple sentences.
A boy is occupied in chatting on the Internet. He refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy. She is depressed.
Step 2 : Interpret its implied meaning
What’s behind the cartoon? Think twice.
A picture is worth a thousand words.
Reveal related factors.
• Some useful sentence structures: • The picture shows/ indicates/implies
Para. 2
• What the picture conveys here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.
Under the Dome
最近中国的空气质量引起了广泛的关注。请 阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求： 1. 简要描述漫画内容； 2. 简要分析产生这种现象的原因； 3. 针对以上现象谈谈你自己的看法（至少两点）。 参考词汇： 口罩mask； 雾霾haze
One Possible Version：Para. 1
Outer appearanຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidue
Inner qualities
Basic elements of a good composition
Writing process
Step 1: Describe the cartoon
Step 2: Interpret its implied meaning
Step 3: Voice your opinions about the phenomenon
should be taken. On my personal note,… From my perspective,… For my part,…
Only when people work together can we ensure…
Only in this way can…. Only with joint efforts may we believe that the better
• Useful sentence structures: As is vividly shown/ portrayed/depicted/ illustrated
/indicated in the picture, ..... As can be seen in the picture, ......
the distance. ︳The message conveyed here is clear:
“What you see depends on the way you look at the world.” Positive thinking leads to positive action and reaction. In order to experience more happiness, we may need to
Combine the sentences.
As is vividly portrayed in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed.
Step 3: Give your opinions about the phenomenon
• Find out some solutions.
• Some useful sentence structures: As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures
Suggested version:Para 3
As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures should be taken by parents and children. In terms of children, we should cut back on the time when we play computers and be aware of the importance of communication with parents. In addition, parents and children should exchange their ideas and feelings regularly. Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about.
Standards of grading
Grade 5: (21-25) Grade 4: (16-20) Grade 3: (11-15) Grade 2: (6-10) Grade 1: (1-5)
paragraphs handwriting
Sentence patterns Words&Phrases Conjunction
Step 1 :Describe the cartoon
What’s in the cartoon? Observe it carefully and find some key information: ----People ; things; words ;actions; feelings ...
change our way of thinking. ︳At the start of Senior Three,
I woke up every morning feeling depressed, thinking of the much schoolwork to do. My friend Lee came to me and made me realize the best part about schooling—time spent together with classmates fighting for dreams. Ever since then I have learnt to look at my daily life from a different angle and cherish what I have. Change the way we view the world, and we’ll change our life.