专四写作命题作文1解读

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专四小作文讲解

专四小作文讲解
错误三:写些不相关的话, 如 I love traveling very much. And I’m glad to hear that you also have some experience in it.
错误三典型例子
“I enjoy traveling very much. It presents us beauty of our country and gives us opportunities to know our society. But I have just visited several places so far. On the one hand, I don’t have so much time; on the other hand, I seldom have opportunities. This time it is an opportunity for me. ” 字数为55 字相当于整个便条所需字数,而此部分 的内容仅涉及写便条人对远足的兴趣,与主要内 容不相关。
格式对 内容完整 语言没有错误 语言得体 字数符合要求 (40 字到80 字之间) 详细见下页的2006年评分标准
2006年便条成绩分析
查资料得知,2006年便条得分情况, 所占比例较大的依次是7 分(31%)、6 分 (28%)和5 分(19%)三个分数段。便条得 满分10 分的有2% ,而得零分的有9% 。该项 目6 分为及格线,说明大多数考生(78%)便 条写作的分数仅在及格线上下徘徊。 详细见图
冠词错误: You’re organizing a excursion for the class.(应改为an) 语序错误: I need to know when will we come back, for I’ll have other things to do on Sunday afternoon. (宾语从句中表疑问也用陈述句语序,应改为 we will) 一致性错误: I’d like to join you, but there’s a few questions I want to ask. (主谓不一致,应改为are) Can I join you to enjoy ourselves? (代词与先行词不一致,应改为myself) 动词形式的误用: I am wonder if I can join you for the excursion. (应改为wonder/am wondering) We can have some games when we are rest. (应改为are having a rest/are resting)

TEM4(2011)作文试卷评析

TEM4(2011)作文试卷评析

英语专业四级考试在线课堂
Note of invitation
邀请便条一般应该包含下面一些内容: The occasion for the invitation When, where, how The reason for inviting the addressee The hope of having the invitation accepted
英语专业四级考试在线课堂
英语专业四级考试大纲写作要求(Part VI: Writing ) 1.测试要求:
(a) 作文 : 根据所给的作文题目、提纲或图表、数据等,
写一篇200个单词左右的作文。能做到内容切题、完整 , 条理清楚, 结构严谨, 语法正确, 语言通顺, 表达得体。 考试时间 35 分钟。 (b) 便条 : 能根据所给提示写50至60个单词的便条、通
TEM4(2011)作文试卷评 析
华东理工大学 颜静兰教授
英语专业四级考试在线课堂
主讲人颜静兰教授简介
英语专业四、八级考试写作阅卷组组长 华东理工大学外国语学院副院长,博士生导师
全国跨文化交际研究会常务理事,上海市分会副会长
上海市外文协会理事,华东理工大学英语演讲辩论中心主任
研究生方向:跨文化交际学、英国文学、英语教学、英语演 讲辩论
便条必须包含两方面的内容: 1. 邀请 2. 如何去
要点: During the summer vacation Your best friend(单数,一个) To your home town Extending your invitation How to get to your home town
英语专业四级考确 2. 语言比较得体 3. 没有大的语法错误 4. 内容符合题目要求

2022专四作文真题及范文解析(18篇)

2022专四作文真题及范文解析(18篇)

2022专四作文真题及范文解析(18篇) 2022专四作文真题及范文解析第1篇2022专四作文真题及范文解析第6篇2022专四作文真题及范文解析第14篇The Internet has penetrated every aspect of daily life and exerted a huge impact on our work and study. For example, Microblogs and Wechat are two forms of new media. Various people, regardless of their age, gender or background, are involved in creating their own microblogs and using Wechat.There has been much controversy over whether the new technology is a boon or a bane. Some people believe that the Internet is a great asset. Modern technology considerably alters the way people communicate with each other. Also, people can now acquire useful information online with a click of the mouse. However, there is a growing concern about the potential drawbacks of the Internet, especially in terms of personal security. For example, WeChat may expose one’s location to strangers by positioning function, cheat one’s friends by faking identity, and lose one’s money in the electronic wallet.Owing to the accelerated pace of contemporary life, people’s work and life are increasingly confined to a narrow space. However, in face of new technology, we should be prudent. One should make sensible use of technology, being a master rather than a slave of it.2022专四作文真题及范文解析第15篇In the life, to be successful, innovation is indispensable, but lack the inheritance, innovation will become like, non-existent. So, they can't succeed. Only can develop their own characteristics, innovative and also good at inheriting predecessors' tradition, will be more successful. Inheritance and innovation is the rain and water relationship, not only inherited like fish without water, again good innovation will also become the castles in the air, there won't be lasting vitality; But only the water without fish seems more show only inheriting no innovation of desolation, lifeless. Only fish and water reunification together, will become angry. As innovation and inheriting perfectly together, will bear fruits of success as well.Innovation is important, but the inheritance is equally important. If you want to succeed, inheritance and innovation is indispensable. _Ask canal that clearly madly, origin._ No inheritance is like, and did not have innovation is a pool, only in the inheritance based on innovation, will really _ Without impurities _.2022专四作文真题及范文解析第16篇With the wide spread of hamburger Restaurant, especially the McDonald and KFC, our children are exposed to these kinds of high calorie , some people worry that if our children eat too much hamburgers, then they would gain weight quite easily. Some peopleargue that hamburgers do no bad to children’s health. Standing on my point of view, I suggest that children shouldn't eat hamburgers. Reasons are listed below.First of all, eating hamburgers leads to fat. It is known to all that all the hamburgers are junk food containing high calorie and high fat while low nutrition. If our children eat them often, then they will be gaining weight easily. What’s worse, they will be dystrophic so as to affect body development.Secondly, eating hamburgers often will cause cancer. Most hamburgers are fried food. It is investigated that if we eat fried food often, then we will be easy to get cancer.All in all, though hamburgers are popular around the world, they are classified into the circle of junk food because it will lead to fat and even cause cancer if our children eat too many. So, we shouldn’t take our children to eat hamburgers.2022专四作文真题及范文解析第17篇Time like running water, quietly walked around us. Yes, time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat, glance left and right of the summer vacation has finally arrived, I like a caged bird fly freely outside. We is the master of the summer vacation in this summer vacation, we can relax. But as for me, we can't get nothing in this summer vacation, every day to travel. Our parents will make sure that our classes, on this day that,mom and dad to take us in the scorching sun of summer. Of course we can't live up to the expectations of my parents and teachers, make this summer have a full and happy. Give yourself _come on_ in the summer vacation.The beginning of the summer vacation, I booked a summer vacation plan: every morning at 7 . start, every day for three days in the summer vacation homework assignments, and then review the phonetic symbol, listening to the phonetic symbol, the phonetic symbol, and then write an English composition, finally back idioms, idioms. But also want to review what we have learnt before, as the saying goes: consider _.Let's have a good this summer, full, happy.2022专四作文真题及范文解析第18篇假设你是李明,你需要针对节假日产生的环境问题给政府写一封信A Letter about Environmental Problems During Official HolidaysTo Whom It May Concern,Iam writing to express my opinion about the current policy on the official holidays,su ch as Spring Festival and Golden Week you might know,some believe it is a go od idea to enjoy a week-long break. For one thing, it provides enough time for people to r efresh their minds and thus to have better preparations for their future work. For another, it will lead to increased tourism and in turn stimulate the development of thelocal econo my.Truly, the past decade has witnessed many advantages of the official holidays, but wes hould never ignore its disadvantages. On the one hand, it may lead to heavy traffic in that a large number of tourists go on traveling during the same Period, thus, it might cause air the other hand,some tourists, with no awareness of environmental protectio n, often drop litter at random so that the scenic spots are polluted and thus it demands a t remendous sum of money to eliminate the pollution. Considering the current grim situation, it is necessary that the authorities concerned s hould take immediate measures to eliminate these disadvantages. Only through these effo rts can we relieve the traffic pressure and at the same time raise people's awareness of e nvironmental protection.Yours sincerely,Li Ming。

日语专四模板作文题目及范文

日语专四模板作文题目及范文

日语专四模板作文题目及范文日语专四模板作文题目,日本文化之美。

日本文化之美。

日本文化是世界上独特而美丽的文化之一。

它融合了古老的传统和现代的创新,展现出了独特的魅力。

在这篇文章中,我将探讨日本文化的美丽之处,并分享一些我对日本文化的看法。

首先,我想谈谈日本的传统文化。

日本的传统文化源远流长,包括茶道、武士道、和服、浮世绘等。

其中,茶道是日本独有的文化艺术,它强调礼仪、纯朴和内心的平静。

在茶道中,人们可以感受到日本人对自然的敬畏和对生活的热爱。

武士道则展现了日本人的忠诚、勇敢和正义感,它是日本历史上的一个重要组成部分。

和服是日本传统的服饰,它不仅美丽优雅,而且蕴含着丰富的文化内涵。

浮世绘则是日本独有的绘画艺术,它以鲜艳的色彩和生动的表现形式展现了日本人的生活和情感。

这些传统文化不仅在日本国内有着深厚的影响,而且在国际上也备受赞誉。

其次,我想谈谈日本的现代文化。

日本是一个充满活力和创意的国家,它的现代文化包括动漫、音乐、时尚、科技等。

日本的动漫作品在世界范围内享有很高的声誉,它们不仅吸引了无数的粉丝,而且对世界的动漫产业产生了深远的影响。

日本的音乐和时尚也备受关注,它们充满了个性和创意,吸引了全球的目光。

此外,日本的科技产业也是举世闻名的,它在汽车、电子产品、机器人等领域取得了许多重大的成就。

日本的现代文化充满了活力和创新,它不断地为世界带来新的惊喜和感动。

最后,我想分享一些我对日本文化的看法。

我认为日本文化之美在于它的包容性和多样性。

日本文化不仅尊重传统,而且积极地接纳和融合外来文化,形成了独特的文化风格。

日本的文化多样性也为人们提供了更多的选择和体验,它让人们可以在传统和现代之间自由地穿梭,感受到不同文化的魅力。

此外,我还认为日本文化之美在于它的深厚内涵和情感表达。

无论是传统文化还是现代文化,日本人都注重内心的净化和情感的表达,他们用心灵去感受世界,用情感去创造美丽。

总之,日本文化之美是多方面的,它融合了传统和现代、包容了多样性和深厚内涵。

14年英语专四作文分析及讲解 正反观点例文

14年英语专四作文分析及讲解 正反观点例文

Should English Majors Study Maths?2014An undergraduate of English at a university, in a recent letter to the university’s president, complained about the mandatory maths classes he had to take. He said that because a language major has little use for maths, he would forget all of his maths lessons soon after taking the required exams. What do you think of his opinion?〖要求〗In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.〖题目分析〗这是典型的立场观点选择题型。

要求学生就“英语专业的学生是否应该学数学”这一问题确立自己的观点,然后进行论证,最后总结全文。

〖写作思路〗该话题通常有如下两种写作模式1.作者观点:英语专业学生应该学数学。

首段提出自己的观点,主体部分逐一列举原因,结尾总结。

2.作者观点:英语专业学生不该学数学。

首段提出自己的观点,主体部分逐一列举原因,结尾总结。

参考范文1 范文点评Recently,argument on whether English majors study maths or not has been hotter and hotter. Different people have different ideas. A part of them believe that math shouldn't be learned .While others think that they should develop maths.In my view,English majors should learn maths.Most of English learners,especially girls, are extremely scared of math. To escape this subject, they always put the reason this way: a language learner hardly uses math, so he shouldn't put much emphasis on math. However, have you ever seen an outstanding person just spending his whole days on one major? The wold-wide-known person Aristotle was famous for his knowledge. Let us image, if he have insisted on just only one subject ,his cognition and capacity are substandard.Nowadays, a great number of companies are seeking for those generalists. If we were well-done in both English and math, shouldn't it become our advantage?On the other hand, a university is not only a place for technical training but a place for entire development .Students in universities are being told for comprehensive knowledge including language, literature, philosophy, science and so on. As an undergraduate majors in English, it can be good to learning mathematics which let us more rational and wise. For English students, English may be used as an implement to earn living, but math can be treated as an entertainment that can boost the quality of life.It goes without saying that people who are proficient in both English and math should be better developed than those concentrated on English. Despite the difficulties of learning math, we should pursue the breakthroughs in our lives. English majors should study maths.参考范文2Recently, there have been some complaints about whether students who major in English should learn math or not, and this has risen to a heated discussion. Students’points of view on this issue vary from one to another. For my part, I don’t think our English majors should learn math in university.First and foremost,English majors will usually find a job as a translator or a 首段:运用正反表态法,列出问题的两个不同观点,一些人赞成英语专业的人学数学,一些人反对,之后引出自己的观点:英语专业的人应该学数学。

英语专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析

英语专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析

英语专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析下面是整理的英语专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析,希望对大家有帮助。

题目1:The Benefits and Dangers of Campus Politics写作要求Nowadays many college students are interested in campus politics, including running for heads of various communities. What are the possible benefi ts and dangers of this enthusiasm for campus politics?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:The Benefi ts and Dangers of Campus PoliticsYou are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammarand appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道分析利弊/差异型的题目,要求分析参与校园政治的利与弊,因此很明显文章中必须包含:1. 概述该现象,指出这样做有利有弊;2. 具体说明好处在哪里,弊端在哪里;3. 重申自己的观点,再次概述利弊点。

专四作文出题详解

专四作文出题详解
专四作文出题详解
作文考试的类型
1)关于自己或者自己周围的情况。例如「私の~」 关于自己或者自己周围的情况。例如「私の~」 例 私の~:家・家族・友人・学校・故郷・村・大学・夢・ 趣味・長所・短所・理想・将来・動物・ペット 上述类型的作文要点是突出了具体性和个性。 上述类型的作文要点是突出了具体性和个性。对 象为生物(「家族・友人・動物・ペット」)时 象为生物(「家族・友人・動物・ペット」)时,先阐述 其整体形象,包括其外观特征。其次写性格, 其整体形象,包括其外观特征。其次写性格,此 时可穿插一些体现其性格的小插曲、具体事件, 时可穿插一些体现其性格的小插曲、具体事件, 进而表达作者对此形象怀有的感情。 进而表达作者对此形象怀有的感情。
私がこれまでに感動したこと・近頃感じたこと・私が 誇りに思っていること・大学生活の苦しいこと・友達 から学んだこと 这类题型的作文是写人生经历。写出有鲜活经历 这类题型的作文是写人生经历。 的文章的方法是,首先要逼真, 的文章的方法是,首先要逼真,写的内容必须能 像浮现在读者眼前一样。为此, 像浮现在读者眼前一样。为此,要栩栩如生地描 写发生的时间、出场人物、事情的经过、结果、 写发生的时间、出场人物、事情的经过、结果、 自己感受到的冲击及受到的影响等。结合主题、 自己感受到的冲击及受到的影响等。结合主题、 题目叙述具体事例时必须确切表明自己的观点、 题目叙述具体事例时必须确切表明自己的观点、 想法、感想、主张等。 想法、感想、主张等。
3)书信
例 高校時代の恩師への近況報告・お礼の手 紙 写信时只要把握住两条即可,一是遵守如 写信时只要把握住两条即可, 下写作格式,二是恰当应用各类敬语。 下写作格式,二是恰当应用各类敬语。
书信的 ②时令寒暄 ④ ⑤结尾寒暄 ⑥结束语 ⑦日期 ⑧署名 ⑨收信人姓名 ③前言

英语专四作文讲解

英语专四作文讲解

英语专四作文讲解When it comes to the Test for English Majors-Band 4 (TEM-4), the essay component is often a source of anxiety for many students. The TEM-4 is a standardized test designed to assess the English proficiency of students who are specializing in English in China. The essay section is a critical part of the exam, as it evaluates a student's ability to express complex ideas in writing. Here's a breakdown of how to approach the TEM-4 essay with confidence.Understanding the Prompt:The first step in writing a successful TEM-4 essay is to thoroughly understand the prompt. Students are typically given a topic and asked to discuss it, often with a specific angle or perspective. It's important to read the instructions carefully and identify the key elements that the essay should address.Planning Your Response:Once you understand the prompt, take a few minutes to plan your essay. This should include:1. Thesis Statement: A clear, concise statement that presents your main argument or perspective on the topic.2. Outline: A basic structure that outlines the mainpoints you will discuss, typically including an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.Writing the Essay:With a plan in place, you can begin writing your essay. Here's a guide for each section:1. Introduction: Start with a hook to grab the reader's attention, followed by a clear thesis statement that previews your argument.2. Body Paragraphs: Each paragraph should focus on one main point that supports your thesis. Use topic sentences to introduce each point, followed by evidence, examples, or explanations. Remember to maintain a formal tone and use proper academic language.3. Conclusion: Summarize your main points and restate your thesis in a new way. The conclusion should leave a lasting impression on the reader and reinforce your argument.Proofreading:After completing your essay, take the time to proofread. Look for:- Grammar and Spelling Errors: These can significantly impact your score.- Coherence and Cohesion: Ensure that your ideas flowlogically and that there are appropriate transitions between paragraphs.- Adherence to the Prompt: Make sure you have addressed all parts of the prompt.Tips for Success:- Practice: Write essays on various topics to become familiar with the process.- Expand Your Vocabulary: A rich vocabulary allows for more precise and effective expression.- Understand Cultural References: Some prompts may involve cultural or historical contexts, so having a broad understanding can be beneficial.- Time Management: The TEM-4 is timed, so practice writing under time constraints.In conclusion, the TEM-4 essay is an opportunity to showcase your English language skills and your ability to think critically. By understanding the prompt, planning your response, and carefully crafting your essay, you can achieve a high score on this part of the exam. Remember, practice makes perfect, so keep writing and refining your skills.。

2023专四作文解析范文(3篇)

2023专四作文解析范文(3篇)

2023专四作文解析范文(3篇) When it comes to whether parents should take their children to spend holidays during term-time, views on the issue vary from person to person. Parents claim that by doing so, they can save a lot of money born of busy school holidays. Educational officials strongly oppose this tendency on the ground that it encourages truancy, which in turn damages a child’s education. From my perspective, the merits of banning term-time holidays outweigh its demerits.To begin with, taking tough measures on this kind of truancy is conducive to the normal teaching process, one of the key elements to guarantee kid’s academic performance. As we know, currently, teachers have the discretion to approve a certain time of absence from school for each child, which is supposed to be for illness and is not supposed to be granted for holidays. By definitely abolishing the right of head teachers to “authorize absence” from the classroom, those teachers can rarely be pestered by parents who want to take children to go on a holiday just to save money, which severely disrupts teaching process. What ‘s more, without strict penalties imposed on the parents who lead to their kid’s playing truant, those parents can gradually view asking for holiday leave as a right. Once this cultural expectation is formed, the level of truancy will dramatically increase.Accordingly, the growing trend of term-time holidays should be banned with no delay. In this way, teachers can impart knowledge without disturbance and parents will be deterred from saving money at the expense of sacrificing their kid’s education.专四专八精选好课暖心助学新东方好老师手把手带学2023专四作文解析范文第2篇2023专四改G已尘埃落定,专四作文取消了原有的小作文(便条),大作文以材料作文为主题,约200词。

专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析

专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析

专四优秀作文赏析及亮点解析篇一:英语专四系列:作文之范文赏析--出国留学的利与弊英语专四系列:作文之范文赏析--出国留学的利与弊题目:Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards写作要求Nowadays more and more students choose to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities. They say that they bene? t a lot from it, though some people argue that there are many hardships and dif? culties. What’s your opinion about it?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Studying Abroad: Hardships and RewardsYou are to write in three parts.In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一个观点选择型的题目,就目前大学生在毕业后选择留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。

浅谈英语专业四级考试作文

浅谈英语专业四级考试作文
本文主要探讨了英语专业四级考试中议论文的写作要点。首先,文章指出写作部分分值的增加意味着对学生语言运用能力的更高要求。在写作过程中,审题是至关重要的一步,正确的审题有助于理清行文思路,避免偏离主题。文章建议考生在列提纲时,应包含所有关键信息和限定信息,以确保文章紧扣主题。此外,了解英语议论文的文体和结构布局也是必不可少的,这有助于考生更有效地组织文章,使其更具逻辑性和说服力。然而,许多学生在备考过程中盲目套用范文,导致文章千篇一律,缺乏新意。因此,文章强调了学生应根据具体题目灵活应对,避免生搬硬套。最后,文章提醒学生注意东西文化差异对ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้篇布局的影响,鼓励学生在写作过程中保持清晰的思路,合理展开论证,以写出高质量的议论文。

第一次写作分析及范文

第一次写作分析及范文

TEM4第一次测验写作部分解析及范文1.总体情况:大小作文均得分较低,反映出同学们基础有所欠缺,平时不重视写作训练,书面语学习得不规范。

2.具体情况:大作文存在问题:1)个别人不写标题,给出了标题的作文一定要把标题抄上去,但是注意不要抄错了,注意大小写,一般来说,名词动词形容词这些实词的首字母大写,连词介词等虚词的首字母小写,但是位于第一个词的首字母,无论是实词还是虚词都要大写,这个错误犯的人不多,大部分同学都写对标题了,在这里仅作提醒。

2)对于该作文“Having a Company before Graduation”的审题,有不同的理解,有的着重对题目进行判断,说题目的说法是对或者是错,或者对错都说,即毕业前开公司创业有好有坏,好坏分别说一下;有的人着重解释毕业前开公司要怎么做,要具备什么条件;上述理解应该说都有道理,这里出现这些差异,主要是题目本身没限定清楚,这个题目可以这样开放地去理解,但是要注意说的言之有理,有根据。

但是极少数同学,没认真看题,反而大谈特谈自己的梦想如何如何,或者是自己想开个什么公司,这就失去了题目的本意,题目的本意是针对全体大学生来说的,不要你过多的说自己的梦想和自己的经营之道。

其实,这一类的题目,个人建议你就做出判断,是对,还是不对,或者有对的方面有不对的方面,然后举出一些你的依据就可以了,我们范文也是这样处理的。

3)非智力因素犯错太多:a书写潦草,卷面邋遢,让人看得头昏眼花,有自杀的冲动;在此,我建议大家,以后尽量把字写好点,卷面弄整洁点,不一定要书写的像印刷体一样,但是尽量写的整洁些,专四阅卷都是大热天,阅卷老师一看你一塌糊涂的试卷,首先就给归类到低分档去了,岂不冤枉?这不是骇人听闻,不相信的话你可以试试。

b 居然有很多同学拼写出现错误,这里不一一列举,实在是不值得一提,不过我敬告各位,拼写错误很丢分的,如果你是阅卷人,你看到一个英语专业的本科生,大二了连单词都写不对,你怎么想?c 标点乱用,一个逗号逗到底!英文中,是不能用一个逗号,链接两个完整的主谓宾结构的,一句话说完了就要是句号,你们自己再检查一下自己的卷子,因为内容太多我来不及一一指出!4)最大问题:结构不明确;请注意四八级的作文,胜在结构,结构清楚,书写工整,没有我说的低级非智力问题,开头结尾写的好,一般这个作文至少可以得一半以上的分,大概七八分,如果表达再顺畅一些,就接近十分了,能有十分就很不错了,总分才是十五分呢,如果再有写得好的长句子,那就可以过十分了。

专四写作命题作文1解读

专四写作命题作文1解读

(三)结尾(conclusion)


结尾部分的开始通常会用一个特别结论句式,如: in general,to sum up,to conclude,all in all等 等。 在200词的文章中,这一部分不宜篇幅过长,最 好用一两句话来总结全文,使其前后呼应。除非 只是一个次要观点,否则不要在这段内提出任何 新见解,但如果题目要求的话,考生也可以在结 论上提出相应的建议、推荐、介绍和解决方法。
My View on Reading Extensively
Reading is important for us. For English majors, extensive reading is a very important way to improve their English. Actually, we get most of our knowledge from extensive reading.
作文评分标准
满分15, 分项可以打0.5分。
1. 思想与表达 2. 语言运用能力 3. 写作规范
1. 思想与表达(Ideas and Arguments):



满分为7分,其中1-2分较差,3分一般,4-5分良好,6-7分优秀。 思想内容:(idea & content) 内容切题 内容充实 观点明确 论据支持观点 有独到见解 表达效果(effectiveness) 表达清晰 有说服力 篇章组织 (Rhetorical Organization) 每段有主题句 句间衔接自然 段间过渡自然 第一部分明确提出观点 最后一部分自然得出结论 段落排列合理
TEM-4 Writing
a)作文 要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也 附有写作提纲) 写一篇200词的短文,能做到内容切题、完整,条 理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当。 作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟。 b)便条 要求根据提示写大约50~60词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格 式正确,语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。

专四作文及讲解模板

专四作文及讲解模板

专四作文及讲解模板英文回答:1. What are the challenges facing the development of China's higher education?China's higher education system has made great stridesin recent decades, but it also faces a number of challenges. These challenges include:Increasing demand for higher education. The number of students seeking higher education in China has increased dramatically in recent years, and this trend is expected to continue. This has put a strain on the country's higher education system, which is already struggling to meet the needs of its current students.Rising costs of higher education. The cost of higher education in China has also been rising in recent years, making it increasingly difficult for students from low-income families to afford a college education.Lack of qualified faculty. China's higher education system is also facing a shortage of qualified faculty. This is due in part to the fact that many of the country's best and brightest students are leaving China to study and work abroad.Limited access to research funding. China's higher education system also has limited access to research funding. This makes it difficult for universities to conduct the research that is necessary to drive innovation and economic growth.2. What are the opportunities for China's higher education?Despite the challenges it faces, China's higher education system also has a number of opportunities for growth. These opportunities include:Growing demand for higher education. The increasingdemand for higher education in China represents a significant opportunity for the country's universities. By expanding their capacity and improving the quality of their programs, universities can meet the needs of a growing number of students and contribute to the country's economic development.Government support for higher education. The Chinese government has made a commitment to supporting higher education. This support includes increased funding for universities, as well as policies that encourage students to pursue higher education.Strong ties to industry. China's universities have strong ties to industry, which provides them with access to resources and expertise. This collaboration can help universities to develop programs that are relevant to the needs of the workplace and to prepare students for successful careers.Internationalization of higher education. China's higher education system is becoming increasinglyinternationalized. This trend is providing Chinese students with the opportunity to study and work abroad, and it is also helping to attract foreign students to China.中文回答:1. 中国高等教育发展面临哪些挑战?中国高等教育近年来取得了长足发展,但同时也面临着诸多挑战。

英语专四作文分析

英语专四作文分析

英语专四作文分析Analysis of English CET-4 Writing。

The English CET-4 writing test is an important part of the College English Test (CET) in China. It assesses students' ability to express their ideas clearly and concisely in written English. In this essay, I will analyze the characteristics of CET-4 writing and provide some tips for improving writing skills.First of all, the CET-4 writing test usually requires students to write an essay on a given topic within alimited time. The topics cover a wide range of issues, such as social problems, environmental protection, and personal experiences. Therefore, students need to be well-prepared in order to write a coherent and well-organized essay.Secondly, the CET-4 writing test emphasizes the use of proper grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure. Students are expected to demonstrate their mastery ofEnglish language skills by using a variety of words and phrases, as well as complex sentence patterns. In addition, they need to pay attention to spelling, punctuation, and paragraph organization in order to convey their ideas effectively.Moreover, the CET-4 writing test requires students to develop their critical thinking and analytical skills. They need to present logical arguments and support their opinions with relevant examples and evidence. Furthermore, they should be able to evaluate different perspectives on a given topic and express their own opinions in a persuasive manner.In order to improve their writing skills for the CET-4 test, students can follow these tips:1. Practice writing regularly: Writing is a skill that can be developed through practice. Students should set aside time to write essays on various topics and seek feedback from teachers or peers.2. Expand vocabulary: Reading extensively and learning new words and phrases can help students improve their writing. They should also pay attention to collocations and idiomatic expressions to make their writing more natural and fluent.3. Study grammar and sentence structure: Students need to review grammar rules and sentence patterns in order to avoid common mistakes and improve the coherence and cohesion of their writing.4. Analyze sample essays: Reading and analyzing well-written essays can help students understand the characteristics of effective writing and learn from the writing techniques used by others.In conclusion, the CET-4 writing test assessesstudents' ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively in written English. By following the tips mentioned above and practicing regularly, students can improve their writing skills and achieve success in the CET-4 test.。

英语专四作文范文解析建议(3篇)

英语专四作文范文解析建议(3篇)

英语专四作文范文解析大全(3篇)How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?Nowadays more and more people are concerned about mental health issue. It is reported that the number of people committing suicide is on the rise. Many of them committed suicide just because of some little frustration such as failing an exam. If they had paid more attention to their mental health, they might not have reacted in such an extreme way.How to keep ourselves psychologically healthy? First, we should adjust ourselves to the new conditions. When we go to a university as freshmen, or go to work in a strange city, we may become nervous because everything is so unfamiliar. The only way out is to adjust ourselves to the new conditions and shake off the anxiety quickly. Second, we should know our-selves well and admit that we are just ordinary people. Knowing that ordinary people may not be good at everything, we can easily accept some small failures in our lives. Third, we should try to share our feelings with friends. By doing this, we are assured that any difficulty can be solved since we are not alone.It is very important for us to be psychologically healthy, and we should pay more attention to our mental health.英语专四作文范文解析大全第2篇Traveling can be wonderful. It introduces us to new experiences, broadens our minds and helps us relax. However, not everyone likes to travel in the same way. Some people prefer to travel alone so that they can do what they like during their trip without having to worry about anyone else. Others like to have a companion to share the experience with. I am one of the latter, because I believe that traveling with someone has many advantages.When I travel with a companion, I have someone with whom to share what I experience. We can talk over the day’s events and discoveries, and this will make them more interesting. In addition, it is often comforting to have a familiar person around when we are in a strange environment. When I am traveling in a foreign country, I may be unable to speak the language or may be confused by the local customs. With a travel companion, I will always have someone to talk and share my feelings with. Finally, a travel companion can make the journey easier and safer. We can help each other to take the journey easier and safer. We can help each other to take care of our bags and get information, as well as keep each other company while waiting in long lines.To sum up, I prefer to travel with a companion rather than travel alone. I believe it adds enjoyment and comfort to may trip. And when we return from our journey, my friends and I can share our wonderful memories.英语专四作文范文解析大全第3篇Just as is revealed in the pictures above, people are generally classified into two types: the pessimistic and the optimistic. We can see in one picture some people, long-faced and downhearted, are counting the nights by the shadows while in the other picture the happy-go-lucky people are enjoying the starry nights. What a contrastive view! Remember, it is not the bad thing that determines our state of mind but the way we look at it matters. (描述点题段) (以小到大)An example that comes to mind is SARS crisis that has recently torn apart and ravaged most of China. Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot. Some people suffered from health damage and still some even lost their lives. And our economy suffers a temporary setback and a slowdown. However, we still have learnt and benefited a lot from it. (举例说明段) 4. First things first, we are more concerned than never before with our health, and the environment we live in. Additionally, we tried and bettered and are still bettering our mechanism to respond to unexpected crises. These and other lessons at the expense of blood, tear, toil and sweat are benefiting and continue to benefit us and generations of Chinese to come. (分析问题段)The best way to overcome the frustrations brought about crises is to always take a positive outlook on life. Just as a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not forgotten are good teachersfor us all. If we can bear in mind sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded. (前瞻感言段)。

2021专四作文分析

2021专四作文分析

2021专四作文分析
段落一重写:
哎,早上这光儿一亮,城市还没完全醒呢。

我就站在这儿窗前,看着外面那片安静的景色,心里头真是热血沸腾啊!这次专四考试,我得好好拼一把,毕竟这可是关系到我未来的一大步啊。

段落二重写:
我写字儿的时候,那笔尖在纸上跳舞似的,留下一串串字儿。

备考这段日子,真的不容易,每一本书、每一道题都像是一座山,
我得一座座去爬。

不过,我知道,只要我肯努力,就一定能翻过这
些山,看到更美的风景。

段落三重写:
有天在图书馆角落,我偶然发现了一本英语写作的书,哎哟,
那可真是个宝藏啊!里面教的东西让我眼界大开,我才发现原来英
语写作可以这么有趣。

我开始尝试各种句式和词汇,想让自己的作
文更吸引人。

嘿,别说,这还真让我写作水平提高了不少。

段落四重写:
朋友们在备考路上,真的帮了我不少忙。

他们给我加油打气,让我更有信心面对困难。

我们经常一起讨论学习方法,互相鼓励。

这种团结互助的感觉,真的让我心里暖暖的,也让我更加坚定自己的方向。

段落五重写:
考试越近,我这心里头就越紧张,但我也知道,这种紧张就是让我更努力的动力。

英语2021专四作文赏析

英语2021专四作文赏析

英语2021专四作文赏析英文:As a language learner, I believe that the ability to communicate effectively in a foreign language is of utmost importance. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to connect with people from different cultures. In my opinion, the 2021 CET-4 English writing section provides an excellent opportunity for students to showcase their language proficiency and creativity.One of the reasons I appreciate the CET-4 writing section is that it allows me to express my thoughts and ideas in a language that is not my native tongue. This challenges me to think critically and find the most appropriate words and phrases to convey my message. For example, in one of the writing prompts, I was asked to describe a memorable travel experience. I vividly recalled my trip to Japan, and I was able to use descriptive language to paint a picture of the beautiful scenery andthe warm hospitality of the locals. This not only allowed me to practice my writing skills but also enabled me to share a part of my life with the readers.Furthermore, the CET-4 writing section often presents thought-provoking topics that encourage me to reflect on various issues. For instance, I was once asked to discuss the impact of social media on interpersonal relationships. This prompted me to consider both the positive and negative aspects of social media and to provide relevant examples to support my arguments. This process not only improved my critical thinking skills but also enhanced my ability to express complex ideas in a clear and coherent manner.In addition, the CET-4 writing section has helped me become more familiar with English idioms and colloquial expressions. Through practicing writing, I have learned to incorporate these idiomatic phrases into my compositions, making my writing more natural and engaging. For example, I have become adept at using idioms such as "a piece of cake" and "hit the nail on the head" to add flair to my essays and make them more interesting to read.In conclusion, the 2021 CET-4 English writing section has been an enriching experience for me as a language learner. It has allowed me to improve my language skills, explore thought-provoking topics, and become moreproficient in using idiomatic language. I believe that this section not only assesses my language proficiency but also encourages me to become a more effective and expressive communicator in English.中文:作为一名语言学习者,我相信有效地用外语进行交流至关重要。

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