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(2)今天早上我及时向老师说明了我缺课的原因。 I explained to my teacher the reason in time why I was absent from class this
morning.
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结合括号中的提示,用定语从句完成下面的文章。
I recommend you to visit Mount Tai whose sights are amazing. ⑦任何感兴趣的学生都欢迎参加。
Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.
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⑧我非常珍惜你给我提供的那个和英国学生交流的机会。 I cherish the opportunity very much that you offered me to communicate with
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第4讲 博人眼球的定语从句
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在英语写作中使用复杂的句式是提高表达档次、增加语言亮点的主要 途径之一,而定语从句就是复杂结构中的重要一项。因此,在写作中巧妙地运 用定语从句可为我们的文章“增光添彩”。书面表达中定语从句的常用形 式如下:
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1.使用关系代词that、which、who、whom、whose或as引导的定语从句 典句引领 It is those who have brought happiness to the people that will feel the happiness themselves. 只有那些给别人带来幸福的人,他们自己才感到幸福。 雕词琢句 (1)用定语从句将下列句子整合为主从复合句 ①You are particularly welcome to show up on stage and it will definitely add color and fun to our festival.(2019课标全国Ⅲ)
British students. ⑨去年我参加了在北京举行的夏令营,这不仅开阔了我的视野,也提高了我的 英语口语水平。 Last year, I joined the summer camp held in Beijing, which not only broadened my horizons but also improved my oral English.
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2.使用关系副词where、why和when引导的定语从句 典句引领 The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her mom. 这张图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻,一个小女孩过来迎接她的妈妈。 雕词琢句 (1)After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week (在那 儿你可以待一周).(2019北京)
Hi! Tom,
Nice to read your e-mail today.I notice you've begun to use Chinese idioms and
used most of them correctly.
However,I'm afraid there is (1) one mistake (that/which)I'd like to point out
Anyway,I'm amazed at (5) the progress (that/which)you've made (你已经取 得的进步).
Hope you'll find a job soon. Yours, Li Hua
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2.话题写作 【本期话题】 学校生活 【美句必备】 1.There are various out-of-class activities in our school, of which playing football is my favorite. 我们学校有各种各样的课外活动,其中踢 足球是我的最爱。 2.Students had better participate in some after-class activities, where they can not only promote understanding, but also improve their ability to get along with others. 学生最好参与一些课外活动,在这些活动中,他们不仅可以增进理解,而且 还能提高他们与他人相处的能力。
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(2)用定语从句完成或翻译下列句子 ①I am Li Hua, a student from China who is studying in London (正在伦敦 学习) this summer vacation. (2019课标全国Ⅰ) ② As is known to all/As we all know (众所周知), music can influence our emotions, thoughts and behavior.(2019天津) ③I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition
【写作微练】 根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇英语短文。 1.众所周知,课外活动对学生的健康成长非常重要。 2.我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩,我最喜欢踢足球。 3.它不仅锻炼了我的身体,而且塑造了我的性格。 4.此外,我还结交了很多兴趣相同的朋友。 5.我认为,学生应该积极参加他们喜欢的课外活动。 注意:至少运用三个定语从句。
which will be held in your art gallery (它将在你们的艺术馆举行).(2019课标 全国Ⅰ) ④I would like to interview Zhang Haidi, whose experience has inspired me deeply (她的经历深深地鼓舞了我).
(我想指出来的一个错误).It is the idiom “无所不为”, (2) which means
“do all kinds of bad things” (它的意思是“做各种各样的坏事”). Are you
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doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess (3) the idea that you were really trying to say (你真正试图表达的想法)is that you’ve got nothing to do these days.In that case,you should use “无所事事”.We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad,and “无所事事” to describe (4) the situation where/in which people have got nothing meaningful to do (人们没有有意义的事情可做的情形).Have I made myself clear?
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⑤This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons (借助它我想开阔我的视
野)and gain some working experience. ⑥我建议你游览泰山,它的风光令人惊奇。
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④Material collecting took us a whole week. During it we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. → Material collectiБайду номын сангаасg took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. ⑤I am grateful to Mr. White. Without his help I couldn't have made so much progress in my English study. → I am grateful to Mr. White, without whose help I couldn't have made so much progress in my English study.
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答案 One possible version:
As we all know, out-of-class activities are of great importance to the healthy growth of the students. There are various out-of-class activities in our school, and playing football is my favorite, which has not only built up my body but also shaped my character. In addition, I have made some friends who have the same interest as me. All in all, I think students should take an active part in out-ofclass activities that they like.
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→ You are particularly welcome to show up on stage, which will definitely add color and fun to our festival. ②For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food;it may be similar to your own custom. → For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom. ③Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions. It will benefit them a lot. → Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which will benefit them a lot.