高考英语书面表达典例(带详解)

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高考英语书面表达范文及句型

高考英语书面表达范文及句型

[2011·辽宁卷] 假定你是李华,将于今年七月从头星外语学校毕业。

你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。

请给该公司写一封求职信,包括下列要点:1.年龄;2.学习情况及英语水平;3.兴趣和特长;4.性格特点。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.I’m 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. I’m an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English,especially spoken English. I of ten use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time,I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person,I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides,I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.I’m_looking_forward_to_your_reply.Sincerely yours,L i Hua [2011·黑龙江哈九中二模]假设你是Tom,曾在中国学习半年,现已回国。

高考英语14种常见应用文写作模板+高分范文

高考英语14种常见应用文写作模板+高分范文

一、感谢信模板尊敬的XX领导/老师/朋友:首先非常感谢您对于我XXX的关心和支持,您的XX帮助对我产生了深远的影响。

在此特向您表示由衷的谢意。

我将会继续努力,不辜负您对我的期望。

再次感谢您慷慨的帮助。

此致XX敬上二、建议信模板尊敬的领导/机构:我是XX,今天写信是要就XX问题向您提出一些建议。

对于XX问题,我建议……我认为……在改进XX问题的过程中,我愿意尽自己的一份力量……(自己提供的帮助)希望领导/机构能够认真考虑,将我的建议辨证合理的实施。

此致XX敬上高分范文:尊敬的领导/机构:我是十一年级的王小明,今天写信是就学校图书馆书籍更新问题向您提出一些建议。

图书馆书籍更新的速度明显落后于时代发展。

我建议应该引进更多新的文学作品、科学相关的书籍以及各种期刊杂志,这样可以更好地满足同学们的知识需求。

我认为图书馆应该加强对学生们的素质教育,不仅是对书本知识的传授,还有对于道德品行的培养,这样有助于学生们的全面发展。

在改进图书馆书籍更新的过程中,我愿意尽自己的一份力量,积极参与相关的筹划和组织工作,为学校图书馆的建设作出自己的贡献。

希望学校能够认真考虑,将我的建议辨证合理的实施。

此致王小明敬上以上是建议信的模板和范文。

三、记叙文模板开头:让读者了解故事的背景,引起兴趣过程:描述事件的经过,情节的展开结尾:总结事件的教训和感悟,给读者以启示四、议论文模板开头:引出议论的话题,提出自己对于该问题的看法正文:分析问题的各方面原因和影响,提出自己的解决方案或改进意见结尾:总结本文,再次强调自己的立场和建议五、读后感模板开头:简要介绍所阅读的文章或书籍的背景和主题正文:详细叙述阅读过程中的感悟、体会和思考结尾:总结本文,对所阅读的文章或书籍进行评价和展望六、招聘启事模板公司名称:位置区域:通联通联方式/电流信箱:招聘岗位:要求:薪资待遇:……七、求职信模板尊敬的领导:我是XXX,现在正在就业中心求职,得知贵公司正在招聘XX职位。

高考英语增分秘籍-《描述时间和地点》的典例及仿写

高考英语增分秘籍-《描述时间和地点》的典例及仿写

高中作文写作指导--描述《时间与地点》【典例1】会议大约持续了三个小时。

The meeting took approximately/roughly three hours.The meeting lasted three hours more or less.The meeting ended/came to an end about three hours later.It took three hours or so to cover the meeting.[仿写]英文短片播放时间大约2小时。

(1)The English short movie will last about two hours.(2)It took two hours or so to play the English short movie.(3)The English short movie took approximately/roughly two hours. 积累:last持续come to an end结束;终结it takes some time to do sth做某事要花费多长时间【典例2】公园是公众娱乐休闲的地方。

A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves.A park is a place where people rest and relax.A park is a place where people can have a rest and have fun.A park is a public place for relaxation/amusement.[仿写]Green Hill是一个有趣的用来娱乐休闲的地方。

(1)Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and rest in.(2)Green Hill is a fun place where people relax themselves.(3)Green Hill is a fun place for relaxation/amusement.积累:a place for...一个……的地方a place where...一个……的地方(where 引导定语从句)【典例3】他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,往前再走不到20英里就是一个村庄。

高考英语书面表达讲解范文20篇

高考英语书面表达讲解范文20篇

书面表达一、命题形式提纲类书面表达一般有较多的文字提示或说明,要求表达的内容要点大多数以提纲的形式给出,并且比较具体、明确。

可以在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥,因而该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性,能较好地体现英语思维想象能力。

此类书面表达主要有以下特点:1.设题形式:通常会以中文、英文、“中文+英文”、“文字+图画”等形式给出题目要点,要求考生根据所给要点组织语言,按照一定的逻辑顺序将信息表达出来。

2.题目特点:(1)要点明确,范围具体;(2)难度相对较小;(3)属于半开放型作文,考生在完成题目所要求的要点的写作外,还要有自己的发挥。

3.常涉及的体裁:书信/电子邮件、通知、演讲稿、便条、记叙文、说明文、议论文等。

二、写作句式1.基本句型(1) 主语+谓语(不及物动词)此句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。

其特点是:句子的谓语动词能表达完整的意思,这类动词称为不及物动词,后面可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等。

如:She runs in the park.(2)主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语此句式的句型特点为:谓语动词均为实义动词,是主语发出的动作,但是不能表达完整的意思,其后必须跟有一个宾语(宾语可以是名词、代词、动名词或不定式),即动作的承受者,才能表达完整意思。

如:I know her very well.(3)主语+系动词+表语此句式就是常说的主系表结构。

该句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,其中谓语动词需用系动词(主要是be动词),表语多是形容词,也可以是名词、介词短语、页35 共页1 第不定式或分词等。

如:He became a teacher.(4)主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语+直接宾语此句式中的谓语动词必须接两个宾语才能表达完整的意思。

其中一个是表示人的间接宾语;另一个是表示物的直接宾语。

一般情况下,间接宾语在前,直接宾语在后。

如:She gave her mother a present.(5)主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语此句式中的动词虽然是及物动词,但只接一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思,必须再加上一个补充成分来说明宾语,这样才能使意思完整。

高中英语 高考英语作文 例题加范文5篇

高中英语 高考英语作文 例题加范文5篇

高中英语高考英语作文例题加范文5篇1. 假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Mike计划到你所在的城市旅游,请你给他写一封信,告诉他如何安排他的旅行。

要点如下:-参观著名景点-尝试当地美食-了解当地文化-注意交通安全范文:Dear Mike,I'm delighted to hear that you are planning to visit my city! I'm sure you will have a great time here. Here are some suggestions on how to make the most of your trip.Firstly, I recommend visiting some famous tourist attractions, such as the City Museum and the beautiful Central Park. These places will give you a glimpse of the history and natural beauty of our city.Secondly, don't miss the chance to try our local cuisine. Our city is famous for its street food, such as dumplings and noodles. You can also explore some traditional restaurants to experience the authentic flavors of our culture.Thirdly, I encourage you to immerse yourself in the local culture. You can visit local markets and interact with the friendly locals. You may also consider watching a traditional performance or visiting a historical site to learn more about our traditions and customs.Lastly, please remember to prioritize your safety during your trip. Be cautious when crossing the road and always follow traffic rules. It's also a good idea to keep your belongings secure and be aware of your surroundings.I hope you have an amazing time in my city, Mike! If you need any further assistance or have any questions, feel free to reach out to me. Enjoy your trip!Yours sincerely,Li Hua2. 假如你是李华,你的朋友John最近对中国的传统文化产生了浓厚的兴趣,并请你介绍中国传统节日——春节。

高中英语 高考英语作文例题加范文5篇

高中英语 高考英语作文例题加范文5篇

高中英语高考英语作文例题加范文5篇1. 例题:假设你是学校的学生会主席,校园里存在一些常见的问题,如垃圾分类、食堂饭菜质量等。

请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,向全校同学介绍这些问题,并提出解决方案。

范文:Ladies and gentlemen, students and teachers,I am honored to stand here as the president of our school student council to address the common problems we are facing on campus. It has come to my attention that there are a few issues that need to be addressed urgently, namely garbage sorting and the quality of food provided in the cafeteria.Firstly, let's talk about garbage sorting. It is disheartening to see the lack of awareness and effort in this matter. Many of us still throw all kinds of waste into the same bin, causing pollution and harming the environment. I believe it is our responsibility to take action. I propose that we organize more educational campaigns and workshops to raise awareness about the importance of garbage sorting. Additionally, we could place more recycling bins around the campus and provide clear instructions on how to sort different types of waste.Secondly, the quality of food in our cafeteria has been a concern for many students. Some complain about the lack of variety, while others are worried about the hygiene and nutritional value of the meals. To tackle this issue, I suggest establishing a student food committee that consists of representatives from different grades. This committee can gather feedback from students, conduct regular inspections of the cafeteria, and communicate with the school administration to ensure improvements are made. Moreover, we can invite nutritionists to give lectures on healthy eating habits and work with the cafeteria staff to provide more diverse and nutritious options.In conclusion, it is essential for us to address these problems on our campus. By promoting garbage sorting and improving the quality of food in the cafeteria, we can create a healthier and more sustainable learning environment for everyone. Let's work together to make our school a better place.Thank you for your attention.2. 例题:假设你是李华,最近你的英国笔友Tom来信向你询问如何学好中文。

考生必背经典高考英语书面表达12篇

考生必背经典高考英语书面表达12篇

考生必背:经典高考英语书面表达12篇范文(一)辩论发言稿,你可任意选择正方或反方拟一篇发言稿,词数100左右。

话题:家用小汽车普及问题正方反方1.应大力发展、加速普及。

2.可促进国家经济发展。

3.可提高生活质量,方便省时。

4.增加就业机会。

5.其他方面。

1.不宜大力发展。

2.拥挤、堵车、不便宜。

3.噪音、污染、事故多。

4.修路占地多。

5.其他理由。

(一)I'm for that China should make major efforts to develop its car industry and that every family should have one or more cars. With the development of car industry, I believe that this will speed up the development of the national economy. More workers will be employed. With cars, people's life quality will be raised. They will save time and make people more efficient in their life and work. With cars, people can live far from big cities or factories. They can go anywhere they like to. With cars going into every family, our country must be a real modernized country, I believe.(二)I'm against that China should make major efforts to develop its car industry and that every family should have one or more cars. With too many cars on roads, the traffic may be too heavy or even more traffic accidents may be seen. So they will not bring us convenience but trouble. Too much noise and air pollution may make people ill. Widen roads may take up too much land that should have been made use of to support food. A real modernized country will be a wellmerely in cars but in every aspect, I believe.范文(二)众所周知,2008 年奥运会将在北京举行。

高考英语《书面表达》专项练习及答案解析

高考英语《书面表达》专项练习及答案解析

高考英语《书面表达》专项练习一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。

你们想邀请外教Peter参加。

请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下:1.英语戏剧节的活动内容;2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目;3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Yours sincerely, Li HuaDear Peter,The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate.A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made.Yours sincerely,Li Hua二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。

高中英语 高考英语作文 例题加范文5篇

高中英语 高考英语作文 例题加范文5篇

高中英语高考英语作文例题加范文5篇1. 例题:请谈谈你对音乐的看法。

范文:Music plays an important role in my life. It has the power to evoke emotions, uplift my spirits, and provide an escape from the daily routine. Whether I'm sad, happy, or feeling nostalgic, music is always there for me. It not only entertains but also inspires and motivates me. I believe that music is a universal language that transcends cultural boundaries and brings people together. It has the ability to convey messages and emotions that words alone cannot express. Whenever I listen to music or play an instrument, I feel a sense of joy and fulfillment. Music is truly a gift that enriches our lives.2. 例题:请谈谈你对青少年压力的看法。

范文:Teenage stress is a topic that deserves attention. As a high school student, I am no stranger to the pressures that come with academics, extracurricular activities, and social expectations. The intense competition for grades and college admissions can be overwhelming. Many teenagers also face pressure from their parents, peers, and society to conform to certain standards of success. This stress can have negative effects on our mental and physical well-being. It is crucial for schools, parents, and society as a whole to recognize the importance of mental health and provide support systems for teenagers. We need more open conversations about stress, better access to counseling services, and a shift in mindset that prioritizes holistic development rather than just academic achievements.3. 例题:请谈谈你对环保的看法。

高考英语书面表达模板:建议信

高考英语书面表达模板:建议信

Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
[满分范文] Dear Jim, ①What a pleasant surprise to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit! ②As for the two travel routes you’re considering, they’re equally good. ③Anyhow, I suggest the tour to Mount Tai. ④Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it. ⑤Having a trip there will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture. ⑥Of course, mountain climbing takes strength and courage. ⑦Hope that my advice will be of some help to you and that you’ll have a good time in China. Yours, Li Hua
[热点押题]
(练一练)
假定你是李海,你的堂兄李华在国外学习,你们经常用 英文通信。他即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否回国工作征 求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信: 1.建议他回国; 2.你的理由:(1)学有所用,就业容易;(2)照顾父母。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.行文应连贯,内容应完整; 3.开头语与落款已为你写好,不计入总词数。

高三英语书面表达精品范例

高三英语书面表达精品范例

书面表达范文精选假定你是李华,你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺(handcraft)等实践课程。

请你给外国好友John写一封邮件,内容包括:1.你的参与情况;2.你的体会。

Yours sincerelyLi Hua Dear John,I hope you're well! Exciting news from here: our school introduced practical courses this year, including vegetable cultivation and traditional handicrafts.I've embraced both with enthusiasm. Diving into the world of gardening, I've developed a newfound respect for the patience required in nurturing life from seed to harvest. It's been both challenging and rewarding to see my efforts bloom.The handicraft course has been equally enriching, offering me a hands-on experience in preserving our cultural heritage through traditional crafts.These experiences have been incredibly fulfilling, teaching me not just about planting or crafting, but about growth, patience, and the importance of preserving our cultural legacy. I look forward to sharing more about this journey with you.Yours sincerely, Dear John,I hope you're doing well! I’d like to share something exci ting from my school.Recently, my school introduced practical courses on vegetable cultivation and traditional handcrafts, and I've enrolled in both. It’s been a fantastic journey so far. In the vegetable cultivation class, I've learned how to grow vegetables from seeds, which has been incredibly rewarding. It's amazing to see the fruits of my labor literally come to life in the school’s garden .On the handcraft side, I've been exploring the art of making traditional Chinese crafts.This experience has been eye-opening, giving me a deeper appreciation for our cultural heritage. Both courses have not only taught me valuable skills but also instilled in me a greater respect for nature and tradition.I can't wait to show you some of the crafts I've made and perhaps share some fresh vegetables when you visit!Yours sincerely,Li Hua。

高考英语作文20篇含有中国元素的书面表达及范文

高考英语作文20篇含有中国元素的书面表达及范文

一. 太极假如你是李华,你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi),他写信向你求助,请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:1.介绍学太极好处;2.负责联系学习地点和老师;注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Forbes,It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.Looking forward to your coming!Yours,Li Hua二. 毛笔书法假设你是李华,在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字毛笔书法非常感兴趣,写信向你咨询学习毛笔书法的建议。

【高考英语作文】书面表达专题---传统节日、传统文化经典题目及范文

【高考英语作文】书面表达专题---传统节日、传统文化经典题目及范文

高中英语书面表达专题传统节日、传统文化写作经典题目及范文(一)中秋节假定你是李华,打算邀请你在汉留学的英国朋友Leslie与你全家共度中秋节。

写一封邮件告知他相关事宜。

内容包括:1时间(9月13日);2简要介绍中秋节;3你们家过节安排。

注意:1词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Leslie,Yours,Li Hua 范文:Dear Leslie,How’s everything going? It was great when we were playing football together last Sunday.The Chinese traditional festival — Mid-autumn festival is coming soon. I’d like to invite you to our family party. You know, this festival is one of the most importantfestivals in China. Family members will gather together to enjoy moon cakes as well as admire the round moon, both of which represent the unity and happiness of a family. My family plans to have a feast near Yellow Crane Tower, a nice place to admire the beauty of the moon.By the way, the Mid-autumn festival is on September, 13th this year. Hope to see you then!Yours,Lihua.(二)京剧假如你是李华,你想邀请美国好友John观看京剧表演,但John不在家,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.你到John家的目的;2.简要介绍京剧;3.询问什么时候方便,再约时间。

历年高考英语全国卷123真题作文范文(附详细解析)全文

历年高考英语全国卷123真题作文范文(附详细解析)全文

2020年全国卷I你校正在组织英语作文比赛。

请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。

The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us.They may be our teachers,parents or one of our elders.As for me,my father is the person I respect most.My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot in his work,respected by his students.So,in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。

【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文。

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。

2024年高考真题和模拟题英语分类汇编:专题13 书面表达 (解析版) (全国通用)

2024年高考真题和模拟题英语分类汇编:专题13 书面表达 (解析版) (全国通用)

专题13 书面表达2024年高考真题Writing 1【2024全国甲卷】52. 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。

注意:1. 词数100 左右;2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

Development of Transport in ChinaFrom the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _【答案】Development of Transport in ChinaFrom the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high-speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

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高考英语书面表达典例精选1.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John 对刚进入的高中生活不太适应,请你写信告诉他你的想法,内容要点如下:1. 鼓励其广交朋友;2. 积极参加体育活动,强身健体;3. 努力奋斗进入理想大学。

注意:1. 可加入一些细节,使文章更加通顺合理;3. 词数100左右(信的格式已给出,不计入总词数)【答案】Dear John,I'm so pleased to hear that you've been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you.Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other? Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.I believe you'll get used to it soon and wait for your good news.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】这是一道应用文写作,要求学生以李华的名义写一封信给美国笔友John,就他不适应刚进入高中生活不太适应的问题发表自己的看法。

内容包括:1)鼓励其广交朋友;2)积极参加体育活动,强身健体;3)努力奋斗进入理想大学。

写作时,考生要选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。

根据对题目的分析可知,审本文主要使用一般现在时来写作,描述时,学生要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。

难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。

2.假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地音乐厅要举办中国音乐会。

请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:(1)写信目的;(2)个人优势;(3)能做的事情。

注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案】Dr. Sir,Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer.For starters,due to my insatiable curiosity associated with Chinese folk art,I apply to be a volunteer in the hall during my su mmer break in London. In addition, I was born to have the capability to conduct people,and therefore my strength lies in organizing. Last but not least,since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale,it is my duty to maintain a normal order throughout the concert.Judging from what I've stated, you're bound to have a gist of it.But words fail to convey my sincere gratitude if I were chosen to become a volunteer in the music hall.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。

动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。

写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点短语】1.take place发生;2.due to由于;3.apply to应用;4.in addition除此之外【高分句型】1.Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer.译文:听说有一场关于中国音乐的音乐会将在当地音乐厅举行,我想申请志愿者的职位。

(现在分词作状语)st but not least, since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale, it is my duty to maintain anormal order throughout the concert.译文:最后但并非最不重要的是,由于来音乐厅参观的人是全国性的,我有责任在整个音乐会期间维持正常秩序.(since引导原因状语从句,it是形式主语,不定式内容是真正的主语。

)3.假定你是李华,你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》(English Monthly)向读者征集意见。

请你给主编写封邮件,内容包括:(1)自我介绍:(2)说明该报优点:内容丰富;指导英语学习;(3)提出建议:多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。

注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear editor,___________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Editor,I'm so glad to give my personal opinions on my favourite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Students' Union. I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .I want to learn something from the newspaper.I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it's a guide to English learning. By reading it, I can have a good knowledge of what's going on all over the world and I've improved my English reading skills. It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【解析】【思路点拨】写作时,应该注意以下几点:1.人称:题目要求是假设你是李华,请你给你最喜欢的《英语月报》写封电子邮件,给出建议,所以应以第一人称为主;2.时态:以一般现在时为主;3.写作要点:1)自我介绍;2)说明该报的优点;3)提出建议。

4.句子之间和段落之间使用关联词,如For one thing,...For another 等,使句子通顺,全文意思连贯;5.在能力范围内使用亮点词汇和高分句型,以此增加文章的亮点,提升文章的档次;6.书写工整,词数100左右。

【亮点短语】1.be enthusiastic about...对......热心;2.be rich in content内容丰富;3.range from ... to ...范围从......到...... 【高分句型】1.I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .(who引导限制性定语从句)2.Foe one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.(现在分词短语ranging from economy to civilization作状语,表示“伴随”状况)3.It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.(it做形式主语,that从句是真正主语)4.假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom对学习汉语汉语很感兴趣。

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