英语建议信学案

Suggestion Letter
Step1: 高考应用文评分要求
（一）内容要点全面性
（二）应用词汇和语法结构的情况
1. 使用与主题相关的词汇；
2. 能够使用恰当的语法结构。

（三）上下文的连贯性
按照内容要点展开写作，使用恰当的连接词或表达法使文章内容连贯。

Step2: 如何掌握高分技能
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim不知如何规划在中国的大学生活，写信向你寻求帮助。

请你用英语写一封回信。

主要内容包括：
1. 学会自主学习；
2. 学会与人相处；
3. 培养良好的品质。

注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

一、开头简洁又切题
How are you? How is everything going? Have you felt better recently?
In response to your concerns over general arrangements in college, I’m writing to convey some relative suggestions.
Know ing/ Hearing/ Considering that you’re confronted with some questions about the arrangements in college, I’m writing to offer several tips.
二、建议表达5要诀
1. 物作主语
What comes first is to develop an ability of studying on your own. (independent study). (主语从句)
What calls for special attention is to have virtues and basic qualities.
2. “it”作主语
It goes without saying that (不言而喻) having a good social connection with your friends is also necessary.
It is highly recommended to be easy-going and ready to make friends with others.
It might be beneficial if…
It couldn’t be better if…
3. 使用被动语态
Emphasis should be laid on improving your social skills and getting along well with others. For university is a community more than school, the ability of socializing must be strengthened.
4. 使用虚拟语气、倒装等特殊句型
If I were you, I would develop good characteristics in the various activities in the university, for virtues are the basis of a single person. (虚拟语气)
There is no denying that… (there be 句型)
Not only should sb do, but also sb do sth. (倒装句)
5. 提出具体建议
If I were you, I would develop good characteristics in the various activities in the university, for virtues are the basis of a single person.
三、巧设衔接
关联词：Initially / To begin with / What comes first i s…
Moreover / Besides / What’s more …
内容衔接：For university is a community more than school, the ability of socializing must be strengthened.
四、结尾一般表希望
1. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of help to you.
2. If there’s anything more I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to ask me./ email me./ please let me know.
3. I would appreciate it if you could kindly take my suggestions into account/ consideration when making the decision.
Possible version
Dear Tim,
In response to your concerns over general arrangements in college, I’m writing to convey some relative suggestions.
What comes first is to develop an ability of studying on your own, which will have a good effect on your further development. Besides, Emphasis should be laid on improving your social skills and getting along well with others. What’s more, if I were you, I would develop good characteristics in the various activities in the university, for virtues are the basis of a single person.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.
Yours
Li Hua
Step3：Homework
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。

信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。

请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信。

建议内容包括：
1. 课堂上认真听老师讲课；
2. 多和同学和老师用英语交流；
3. 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。

注意：1. 词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考范文
Dear Li Hua,
I've received your letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
My suggestions are as follows. What comes first is to listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Moreover, Emphasis should be laid on the best way to learn English that is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. What’s more, if I were you, I would speak English with my classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. The most important advice is to develop an interest of learning English books.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx。