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雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文写作技巧及范文一.图表类型饼状图,直方图或柱形图趋势曲线图表格图流程图或过程图程序图二.解题技巧A. 表格图1 横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势2 纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势3 无需将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值,对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的说明:考察例举数字的能力和方法。

注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

B. 曲线图1 极点说明: 对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明2 趋势说明: 对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平3 交点说明: 对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明说明:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会 general classification, 即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。

接下来在分类描述每个阶段的 specific trend, 同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。

注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较 native 的单词和短语来描述 trend。

C. 饼状图1 介绍各扇面及总体的关系2 各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较3 重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的D. 柱状图1. 比较 : similarity2.对比 : difference)3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征E.流程图1.首先说明:做什么工作的过程,目的是什么 2.准备工作 3.按时间/过程先后描述4.结果 5.简单总结说明:注意流程图里的“因果关系” 或每一流程的“承前启后” 关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。

F. 实物/器具工作过程 1.实物的名称,功能 2.基本结构 3.工作过程 4.简单总结G. 综合图1 不求甚解,不拘泥于细节2 分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表3 不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系三.写作结构框架结构1.开头:该图阐述的是______ 的______.共有以下几个部分组成。

雅思小作文写作教学全能版 ppt课件

雅思小作文写作教学全能版 ppt课件

图表作文的文章结构
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction 引题 2.Describing the graph in details 主体
3. Concluding sentences 结尾
时态的使用(重要)
• 文章的起始句作为全文的介绍,说的是图表告诉(show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什么,所以用现在时态;
表示变化程度很小、不明显
Adjectives Slight 轻微的 Slow 很慢的 Moderate 温和的
Steady 稳定的 Gradual 逐渐的
Adverbs Slightly Slowly Moderately
Steadily Gradually
• A decreasing trend in general
比例型(precentage)图表
• 百分比 • 除法、减法比较
• Bar chart, pie chart, table
表达比例常用句
The highest The greatest The lowest The most The smallest Sth. Is the
percentage of … Sth. +句子 proportion of… number of…
• 在文章的主体部分,时态的选择根据图表给出的时间信息 • 具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般将来。
表示趋势的常用表达
趋势变化 上升 下降
不变 波动
动词表达(过去) 名词表达
rose, increased, went up,
A rise, an increa ascended growth, an upward

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文雅思写作小作文模板及范文。

雅思写作小作文是雅思考试中的一个重要部分,它要求考生在有限的时间内写出一篇简短的文章,表达自己的观点和看法。

为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作小作文,下面将介绍一些常用的写作模板和范文,供考生参考。

模板一,提出观点。

首先,引出话题,简要介绍自己的观点;其次,列举2-3个支持自己观点的理由或例子;最后,总结观点,得出结论。

范文一,提出观点。

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to work from home rather than in an office. In my opinion, working from home has several advantages.Firstly, working from home can save commuting time and reduce stress. Many people spend hours commuting to and from work every day, which can be tiring and frustrating. By working from home, they can avoid the daily commute and have more time for themselves.Secondly, working from home can improve work-life balance. With the flexibility of working hours, people can better manage their time and allocate more time to their families and personal interests. This can lead to a happier and more fulfilling life.In conclusion, working from home has many benefits, including saving time, reducing stress, and improving work-life balance. Therefore, I believe that working from home is a preferable option for many people.模板二,对比观点。

雅思小作文流程图的写作方法

雅思小作文流程图的写作方法

雅思小作文流程图的写作方法导读:题目给出的是流程图,就是以图示的方法把一个过程或流程清楚地显示了出来,现在要求考生做的是把该流程图还原成说明文。

由此可见,我们实际上要做的就是看图作文。

而大家都知道,看图作文是我们在小学最初学写作文时的入门做法。

照着图来写,省却了要自己想象和构思的过程,这自然比起写议论文的挑战度要低一些。

所以,大家应该更有信心去对付流程图作文,毕竟实际上所做的是“看图作文”。

流程图写作基本原则流程图作文是以对流程的描述为主的。

全文的安排通常分为两个主要部分:引言段和主体部分。

引言段是用来作简介的,介绍该流程图表示了一个什么什么的过程,常用的句型为主语+谓语+宾语模式。

然后视情况可以多加一句说整个过程可以分为若干个阶段。

引言段只需一段,通常就是这么一二句话。

主体部分是文章的核心部分,主要是说明该流程,所以是说明文式的行文。

主体部分可依照整个流程分成几个阶段而大体相应地分为几个自然段。

主体部分的写作原则如下:1. 把图看懂这是首要前提,理解了流程图表示的是什么以及是怎样的一个过程,才谈得上用文字表达出来。

能否看得懂图取决于几方面的因素:词汇量,知识面,生活经验和常识等。

考生平时要有心地做一下这些方面的积累和准备。

一般来说,流程图是不难看懂的。

万一有些什么地方卡住了,也要大胆地合乎逻辑地去猜测,推想,判断,要灵活机敏。

2. 按图示的顺序写流程图会表示一个过程的流向顺序。

因此,不难按照图示的顺序来写。

若是分成几个阶段的,就按顺序逐个阶段来描述,通常就相应地分成几个自然段落。

3. 将图所提供的词扩展(或串)成句子流程图中会提供一些关键的说明性的词,比如步骤或环节的名称,怎样做,添加什么原料,去掉什么,输送到哪儿等等。

我们就可以直接利用这些关键词写成句子,方法有两类,依照图的情况而分别采用之。

如果流程图比较简短,用扩展的办法,就是以一个关键词为核心词,扩展成一个甚至两个句子,以达到字数的要求。

雅思写作 小作文讲义

雅思写作 小作文讲义

Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, but she only spends 25 per cent of her money on study materials==Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, 20 per cent more than the money on study materials.But: while/however/whereas3. Tomoko spends more on study materials than she spends on clothes.Tomoko’s expenditure on clothes is 10% less than that on study materials.4. Tomoko spends as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together. Tomoko spends almost as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together.5. Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as many as entertainment and clothes.Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as much as on entertainment and clothes respectively.The two pie charts show the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.In 1962: P-phone-35%; C-computer-15%; L-letter-50%In 1982: P-60%; C-30%; L-10%T h e percentages exhibited in the two pie charts compare different means of communication usedin 1962 and 1982. The three media surveyed are: phone, telephone and letter.It is apparent from the left pie chart that letter writing was the most popular form of communication in 1962, taking up 50% of the total. However, its use decreased dramatically after that. By 1982, this figure dropped to only 10%, the smallest of that year’s figure. According to the left chart, we can see that during this same period, the use of phone and computers both increased significantly .In 1962, the use of the telephone just occupied 35% and the computer was the least used form of the three (15%). In 1982, the telephone, with a percentage of 60% , has become the most used form of communication. Similarly, the use of computers doubled to 30% .O verall, we can see some important changes in the forms of communication used during the twod e cades. More and more people appreciate the convenience brought about by the telephone and computer.曲线图曲线图的写作要点:•注意横竖坐标的单位及意义;• 极点说明;• 趋势说明;• 交点说明;•1. 数据的起点In 1960, the proportion of the 15-46 age group stood at approximately 65%, compared to 30% and 5% of other two age groups.在描述数据起点的时候,标准的动词词组是 stand at, 当然我们还可以使用其他动词来引导,比如 begin, start 等。

雅思小作文地图题讲解演示教学

雅思小作文地图题讲解演示教学

雅思小作文地图题讲解一个地图题的开头:The map about the development of the village sufficiently illustrates the way of progress of this area. In this map, we can find four main sectors and two main roads intersected with one railway and one motor way. It seems the overall development of this village has strong connection with the construction of roads.雅思小作文地图题词汇Part 1:表时间流程图和地图题中都可能涉及时间表达。

流程题中,使用较多的是过程时长的表述,而地图题的时间使用则体现为地理变迁的时间变化。

一般在方位选址图题中较少出现。

确切的时间指引,既增加文章的自然和连贯度,也能体现行文的精确性。

常见表示时间的词:in few hours几小时during th e period of …在…期间after 10 days 10天后from…to从…到…between …and在…之间over the…year period在一个…年期间5 years before 5年前a decade earlier几十年前from that moment on从那时起after a while一会since自从since then自从finally最后over the subsequent …years近连续几年例句:The process lasts for up to 7 day s and the products are finally distributed to customers.Part 2:表空间空间表达地图题出现概率较高,但流程图也偶尔出现。

朱宏老师雅思小作文4

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雅思小作文写作方法

雅思小作文写作方法

雅思小作文写作方法雅思小作文写作方法要做到短期内拿下雅思小,你就需要深入了解小作文的类型,写作难点。

图表描述题虽然在形式上复杂多变难以掌握,但是万变不离其宗,语言固定,形式固定,你需要做的就是以不变应万变。

下面就是小编为您收集整理的雅思小作文写作方法的相关文章,希望可以帮到您,如果你觉得不错的话可以分享给更多小伙伴哦!一、寻觅小作文需要表达的重点见到图形表达题,你心中就需要思考这个图形题需要表述的重点在哪里。

作答时先说明再梳理数据。

切不可将文章写成账本式的文字,否则,你就会得到很低的分数。

例如:The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 2000.文章的主句应该对文章要表达的趋势,量的大小作出说明,相关的数据则补充在后面。

雅思小作文考察的精髓还是查看考生的英文表达能力,精简凝练。

你的描述要让阅卷者脑海中浮现出图形的样本,数量和趋势等等相关变量。

如果你能达到以上这些要求,那么小作文本身也就基本上合格了。

二、了解图形的分类规律图形描述题,按照标准图形来分,可以分为line graph (curve), bar chart, pie chart以及table,按照表达重点来分,分为趋势类和大小类,分类依据于题中的时间列表。

一般来说,出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主。

三、准备必要的表达方式1. 与趋势有关的词语:上升(动词):increase, rise, climb, ascend, surge, shoot up下降(动词):decrease, decline, drop, fall, descend, plunge持平(动词):remain stable, keep constant, level o第一文库网ff, flatten out波动(动词):fluctuate, wave, go up and down快速(形容词/副词):considerable/considerably, significant/significantly,substantial/substantially,remarkable/rem arkably, dramatic/dramatically稳步(形容词/副词):steady/steadily, stable/stably, moderate/moderately, modest/modestly缓慢(形容词/副词):slight/slightly, minimal/minimally, marginal/marginally顶点(名词 /动词):peak趋势 (名词):trend/ tendency2. 与大小相关的词语:Outnumber (动词):在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the policeExceed (动词):在数量上超过Triple (动词):变成三倍The figure has tripled.Double (动词):变成两倍The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few years.Mount to (动词):达到Counterpart (名词):对应的另一方,比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts此外,建议考生还应考虑一下题中数据和百分比有没有联系,如果有的话还应添加一些数据所占百分比的语句。

雅思小作文范文--流程图写作详解!

雅思小作文范文--流程图写作详解!

流程图写作雅思小作文范文今天我们就利用一篇经典的考官的雅思小作文范文,来向同学们展示一下关于令大家非常头疼的流程图的写作带给我们的启示:流程图其实一点都不难,掌握好了其中的语法知识点,我们甚至可以拿高分。

雅思写作中,和它联系最为紧密的就是语法。

雅思写作四项评分中,语法作为重中之重被提及。

语法基础不好,难有好作文的形成。

如果一篇英语作文中反复出现低级的语法错误,那么无论你的观点多么吸引人,原本的写作立意多么新颖精彩,生产的都只是一篇有缺陷的英语作文,多会让阅读者对你文章的整体印象打折扣:-一个连基础语法都错误连连的作者,会有能力写出一篇思维严谨的作文吗?读题分析:由于蚕的生命旅程并不是哪一个特定时刻发生的事情,而是一个公认的自然常识。

它是作为一个流程而时时刻刻都在发生的事情,因此采用时态中的一般现在时来表达整篇文字就是最适合不过了考官范文:The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts forup to 6 weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about 3 weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.详细分析:一、首先准备流程图的写作时,先考虑一下文章结构的完整。

雅思作文教案

雅思作文教案

雅思作文教案教案标题:提高雅思作文能力的教学计划教学目标:1. 帮助学生了解雅思写作考试的评分标准和要求。

2. 培养学生在有限时间内组织思路、提炼观点和展开论述的能力。

3. 提高学生的写作技巧,包括词汇选择、句子结构和逻辑连贯性。

4. 培养学生批判性思维和论证能力,提高他们的写作水平。

教学内容和步骤:第一课:了解雅思写作评分标准和要求1. 引入:给学生介绍雅思写作考试的评分标准和要求,包括任务完成度、语言使用、组织结构和词汇表达等方面。

2. 分析评分标准:与学生一起分析评分标准的每个方面,并解释每个方面的重要性和对分数的影响。

3. 练习评分:给学生一篇范文,让他们根据评分标准进行评分,并讨论评分结果。

第二课:组织思路和提炼观点1. 引入:与学生分享一篇雅思作文题目,让他们用5分钟时间列出可能的观点和论据。

2. 讨论观点:学生互相分享自己列出的观点,并讨论哪些观点是最有说服力和相关性的。

3. 编写提纲:引导学生根据讨论的观点编写一个简洁明确的提纲,包括引言、主体段落和结论。

第三课:提高写作技巧1. 词汇选择:介绍一些常用的高级词汇和短语,让学生学会运用它们来丰富自己的写作。

2. 句子结构:引导学生使用不同的句子结构,如倒装、强调句和条件句等,使写作更加多样化和有吸引力。

3. 逻辑连贯性:讲解如何使用过渡词和连接词来使文章的逻辑关系更加清晰和连贯。

第四课:批判性思维和论证能力1. 引入:与学生分享一篇有争议的话题,并引导他们思考不同观点的利弊。

2. 讨论论证:学生分组讨论不同观点的论证方式,并选择最有说服力的观点进行辩论。

3. 辩论练习:组织学生进行小组辩论,让他们运用批判性思维和论证能力来支持自己的观点。

第五课:综合训练和反馈1. 综合训练:给学生一篇雅思作文题目,让他们在规定时间内完成一篇作文,并运用之前学到的技巧和策略。

2. 互评和反馈:学生互相交换作文并进行评价,老师也给予详细的反馈和建议。

雅思作文写作Task-1第二课时—柱状图和饼状图

雅思作文写作Task-1第二课时—柱状图和饼状图

图表作文讲解2:柱状图和饼状图分析思路:1.第一幅柱状图的描述单位是百万,即人数;第二幅则是百分比。

2.第二幅柱状图仅显示了1970年和2000年的信息,而第一幅柱状图显示了1970、1980、1990、2000年的信息。

3.由第一幅柱状图可以看出,从1980年到2000年,结婚人数和离婚人数的变化趋势相似。

4.从第二幅图可以看出,在2000年,结婚和寡居的成年人的比例有所降低而从未结婚过和离婚的比例则有所上升。

范文分析One chart①shows the number of marriages and divorces in the USA in 1970, 1980, 1990 and 2000.The other②shows the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000. 首段概述图表信息,对题目进行改写,注意动词的用法和时态。

➢描述类的常用词有:show/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/indicate;分析思路1.四个饼状图可以分为两组,一组是澳大利亚,一组是法国;2.饼状图由五部分组成:coal, oil, natural gas, hydro power, nuclear power;3.图中的时间是1980年和2000年4.单位是units范文分析The charts①compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost②doubled, ③rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.①对比:compare②翻番:double③从多少增长到多少:rise from……to……In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the①remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro②continued to be another significant2.饼状图。

顾家北手把手教你雅思写作(5 0版)

顾家北手把手教你雅思写作(5 0版)
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作 (5.0版)
读书笔记模板
01 思维导图
目录分析 05 读书笔记
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02 内容摘要 04 作者介绍 06 精彩摘录
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本书关键字分析思维导图
雅思


学习
写作
书信
范文
写作
作文
范文 作文
第章
雅思
雅思
考试
图表
评分标准
书信
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内容摘要
纸质版已经更新至6.0版本,本书可以作为6.0的预备学习内容。全书包括四章和四个附录,适合所有参加雅 思考试的学生。第1章主要讲述雅思写作及学习方法。第2章为雅思大作文(Task 2)攻略。本章从评分标准入手, 通过分析考官范文加以理论印证。以此为依据,介绍大作文(Task 2)的学习要点和本书使用方法。通过22篇高 分范文的精炼过程,完整覆盖了雅思写作题库,并将雅思写作高分应对策略结合实战详细阐述。在后面的章节里 总结了雅思大作文常见语法错误;提供了丰富的句子翻译练习。并总结了雅思大作文考生常问问题和误区。在第3 章里依然紧扣评分标准、分析考官范文,并概括了雅思普通图表作文的写作要点和顺序,详细覆盖所有题型和整 个题库。总结了图表作文学生常问问题以及流程图写作攻略。在第4章书信写作攻略里,仍然用评分标准和考官范 围为起点,讲述信件完成的步骤,各种书信写法,并提供了15篇范文。总结了书信的常用语。附录为词伙一览表、 顾家北老师考场范文、分图表作文范文和分书信作文范文。扫描本书二维码,可以获得配套音频和补充学习资料。
4.3《剑10》考官范 文的分析
4.4雅思普通图表作 文的写作要点和顺序
4.5图表作文其他学 生常问问题的讲解
4.6图表作文常见错 误汇总

雅思写作小作文二

雅思写作小作文二

小作文精讲(一)-------柱状图(bar chart)migrant amphibian seaweed gorilla ocean river stream pool pond lakePest insecticide killer whale sperm whale terrestrial aquatic marine lifeEndanger habit habitat nutrient vegetation vegetarian threatenLog restrict=inhibit=restrain maintain territory territorial generateEmerge connect =depend on=lean on=count on erosion intact HR resource Source nurture nurse discard=abandon vital=important =significant =critical abundant =lush sustain overestimate underestimate preserve strip=depriveFracture hibernate hide+ber+nate decline=fall=reduce=depress legal illegalFragile reproduce 同位语require measure be sufficient toEnsure emphasis emphasize=highlight=stress expansion justified=reasonable Destination include exclude graduate postgraduate一写作思路及技巧1.看清横纵轴分别代表什么。

(多数都是纵轴代表百分比,横轴代表时间,年龄,频度等。

九分学长雅思写作讲义

九分学长雅思写作讲义

九分学长雅思写作讲义
1. 内容涵盖:
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会包括对于雅思写作任务1和任务2的详细讲解。

对于任务1,讲义可能会介绍如何描述图表、流程图、地图等不同类型的数据,并给出范例和写作技巧。

对于任务2,讲义可能会涵盖不同类型的题目,如讨论型、观点对比型、问题解决型等,以及如何构思和组织文章结构。

2. 写作技巧:
讲义可能会介绍一些写作技巧,比如如何避免常见的语法错误、如何使用丰富多样的词汇和句式结构、如何进行段落间的衔接等。

此外,还可能包括如何在有限的时间内高效地完成写作任务,以及如何提高写作的逻辑性和连贯性等方面的建议。

3. 范文解析:
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会提供一些高分范文的解析,分析范文的优点之处,比如论点的合理性、论证的充分性、语言的表
达准确性等,帮助考生了解什么样的表达方式和思路可以得到高分。

4. 常见题型分析:
讲义可能会对雅思写作常见的题型进行分析,比如环境类、
教育类、社会类等,指导考生如何应对不同类型的题目,以及如何
找到合适的论据和例子支撑自己的观点。

总的来说,九分学长雅思写作讲义是一份全面系统的教学材料,旨在帮助考生全面提高雅思写作的能力,从而取得更好的成绩。


望这些信息能对你有所帮助。

剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)教学文案

剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)教学文案

剑10 1-2It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement.To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents.To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.Rather, teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline their young charges, such as detention, withdrawal of privileges, and time-out. Making the punishment fit the crime is a useful notion. Which would see children being made to pick up rubbish they have dropped, clean up graffiti they have drawn, or apologise to someone they have hurt. In these ways responsibility is developed in the child, which leads to much better future behavior than does punishment.剑10 2-1The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The two tables contain sales date for Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004, in five nations of Europe.The first shows low-level coffee sales increasing in all five countries, albeit to widely varying degrees. In two places sales increased by the same small amount: 1.8-2 million euros in Denmark, and 0.8-1 million in Sweden. The increment was slightly larger in Belgium, from 1-1.7 million euros. Meanwhile, in Switzerland sales doubled from 3-6 million euros. Finally, in the UK there was an enormous increase, from 1.5-20 million euros.In the second table, it is Switzerland which stands out as buying far more Fairtrade bananas than the other four countries. Swiss sales figures jumpedfrom 15-47 million euros across these five years, while in the UK and Belgium sales only grew from 1-5.5 and from 0.6-4 million euros respectively. Sweden and Denmark showed a different pattern, with fails in banana sales from 1.8-1 and 2-0.9 million euros.Comparing the two tables, it is clear that in 1999 Fairtrade coffee sales ranged from 0.8-3 million euros in these five countries, while banana sales also mostly cluster between 0.6 and 2 million euros, with Switzerland the outlier at a huge 15 million euros. By 2004, sales figures for both products had risen across the board, except for Sweden and Demark which recorded drops in banana sales.剑10 3-2Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of the global spread of the same products, which are now available for purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that this modern development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide.A country’s history, language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artefacts. If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues, these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the sad disappearance of the manifestations of a place’s character. What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot, or a Fijian kava ritual without its bowlmade from a certain type of tree bark?Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people. The spread of multinational products can often bring in its wake a loss of jobs, as people turn to buying the new brand, perhaps thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to. This eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.Finally, tourism numbers may also be affected, as travellers become disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is boring, and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area do.Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same products, but I say that local objects suit local conditions best, and that faceless uniformity worldwide is an unwelcome and dreary prospect.剑10 4-1The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Salmon begin life as eggs on a pebbly riverbed, hidden among reeds in the slow-moving upper reaches of a river. After five to six months the eggs hatch into “fry”. For approximately the next four years, these baby salmon will live in the lower, faster-flowing waters of their river. During this time they measure between three and eight centimetres in length.By the time salmon reach twelve to fifteen centimetres, they are termed ‘smolt’, and at this time they migrate further downriver into the open sea. After five years at sea the salmon will have grown to adult size, which is between seventy and seventy-six centimetres. They then begin swimming back to their birthplace, where they will lay their eggs, and the cycle starts anew.In summary, the salmon passes through three distinct physical stages as it grows to maturity. Each of these stages takes place in a very different aquatic location. It is noteworthy that the first two stages of this fish’s life occur in a freshwater environment, while the third stage is lived in saltwater.。

语小轩雅思写作完整方法论

语小轩雅思写作完整方法论

语小轩雅思写作完整方法论摘要:1.引言:说明雅思写作的重要性2.主体部分:详细解析雅思写作的四个评分标准a.任务回应程度b.词汇资源c.语法范围和准确性d.表达和连贯3.提升雅思写作成绩的方法a.深入了解雅思写作题型b.积累词汇和表达c.练习语法和句子结构d.学习优秀范文和写作技巧4.结论:总结雅思写作方法论的重要性正文:雅思写作是很多雅思考生认为最具挑战性的部分。

为了在雅思写作中获得高分,我们需要深入了解雅思写作的评分标准并采取相应的策略。

根据雅思写作的评分标准,我们可以将提升写作成绩的方法分为以下几个方面。

首先,任务回应程度是雅思写作评分的第一要素。

这意味着我们在写作过程中要确保回应了题目所要求的内容。

为了达到这个目标,我们需要在写作前仔细阅读题目,理解题意,并在文章中确保每一段都与题目要求相关。

其次,词汇资源在雅思写作中占据重要地位。

要想提高写作分数,我们需要不断地积累词汇,尤其是高级词汇和短语。

这不仅能让我们的文章看起来更丰富,还能展示出我们的语言能力。

在平时的学习中,我们可以通过阅读英文文章、观看英文电影和参加英语角等途径来积累词汇。

接下来,语法范围和准确性也是雅思写作评分的关键。

要想在雅思写作中取得好成绩,我们需要熟练掌握各种语法结构和句型。

此外,还要注意避免常见的语法错误,如时态错误、词性错误等。

为此,我们可以通过做语法练习、参加英语课程和向老师请教等方式来提高语法水平。

最后,表达和连贯是雅思写作的另一个重要评分标准。

一篇连贯、有逻辑的文章能让人更容易理解作者的观点。

为了提高表达和连贯性,我们可以学习一些连接词和过渡句,以使文章结构更加清晰。

此外,还要注意段落划分和主题句的设置。

总之,要想在雅思写作中获得高分,我们需要深入了解雅思写作的评分标准,并采取相应的策略进行针对性的提升。

雅思小作文静态图写作方法

雅思小作文静态图写作方法

雅思小作文静态图写作方法英文回答:The IELTS Writing Task 1 requires candidates to describe and analyze a given static graph or chart. Here are some effective strategies to tackle this type of question.Firstly, it is important to have a clear understanding of the graph or chart. Take a moment to carefully examine the title, axes, and any labels or legends provided. This will help you identify the main trends or patterns in the data. For example, if the graph shows the population growth of a city over a period of time, you can look for any significant increases or decreases.Next, it is crucial to organize your response in a logical manner. Start by introducing the graph or chart and providing a brief overview of the information it presents. Then, move on to the specific details and key features. Useappropriate language to describe the data accurately. For instance, instead of saying "the number of people increased," you could say "there was a significant rise in the population."Furthermore, it is important to compare and contrast the data whenever possible. This will demonstrate your ability to analyze and interpret the information. Use comparative language such as "while," "in contrast," or "on the other hand" to highlight differences. For example, if the graph compares the sales of two different products, you can mention how one product outperformed the other.Additionally, including specific data and figures in your response will make it more credible. Instead of using generic terms like "a lot" or "a significant amount," provide precise numbers or percentages. This will show your attention to detail and enhance the accuracy of your analysis. For instance, instead of saying "the sales increased significantly," you could say "the sales rose by 20%."Moreover, using appropriate vocabulary and grammar is essential to convey your ideas effectively. Avoidrepetitive phrases and strive for variety in your language use. Incorporating idioms or expressions can also make your writing more engaging. For example, instead of saying "the price increased," you could say "the price skyrocketed."In conclusion, approaching the IELTS Writing Task 1 requires a combination of careful observation, organization, analysis, and language skills. By following these strategies, you can effectively describe and analyze agiven static graph or chart.中文回答:雅思写作任务一要求考生描述和分析给定的静态图表。

雅思写作指导:大小作文

雅思写作指导:大小作文

雅思写作指导:大小作文雅思写作指导:大小作文大作文写作指导总结以下逻辑关系题型--->结构--->观点--->句型--->词汇运用恰当的语言去表达个人的思维逻辑。

语言只是辅助工具,思维逻辑才是主线和抢分点。

请不要为了使用某些词汇或句型,而影响我们观点的构思和铺排。

并不是说非得用某些词语才能拿高分。

只要观点清晰,逻辑严谨,比生搬硬套拿来几个单词要强。

何谓题型?其实雅思写作task2题型一般有三大类:report,argumentation 和“report + argumentation” 的结合体。

report:只有三个要素:1. cause2. influence3. solution也就是说,要么就是问你这个现象产生的原因,要么就是这个现象产生了什么样的影响(积极或消极的),要么就是叫你提出解决方案。

通常report类的文体,不会同时出现以上三个要素,只会有一到两个的配搭,即:cause+influence,cause+solution,influence+solution,或只问influence (如下面我写的一篇7分文章,问effects on individuals and societies)。

所以呢,在这种题型底下,它的结构就非常的单一:开头段+ 原因分析段(一般分析3个原因)+ 影响分析段(一个列举3个影响)+ 解决办法段(这些解决办法一定要对应于之前分析的原因或者影响)+ 结尾段。

这个结构是应该视情况而定(as the case may be)argumentation:一般有三种问法:1. discuss both views and give your own opinion2. to what extent do you agree or disagree3. do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage按照我自己的看法的话,其实argumentation就是两种,那就是1 和2/3(因为2和3可以看成同一类)。

雅思写作之小作文(讲义1-2课)

雅思写作之小作文(讲义1-2课)

机密雅思写作之小作文张家铭CHRISSelf-intro 张家铭Chris四级,考研,TOEFL ,SAT ,GRE ,IELTS ,GMAT.微博:@张家铭Chris微信:zjmxhxmm已接受雅思写作TASK 1TASK 2分数目标 6.5-7分范文分析The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. (C11T3W1)范文分析Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (C13T1W2)It is clear that living in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider.I agree with this statement;however I think that anybody coming in another country should respect national culture.In this essay,I would like to outline the social and practical problems.The social problems would be language barrier,which means that a person coming from another country might not be able to speak and understand the language which might be a problem as far a person who is living in a country,and a person who came in the country.Another problem is linked to the language barrier,but it might influence the behaviour of others.An individual who come into the country might offend others with their behaviour or language.For example;some cultures like English people prefer to be very polite and say things differently from other cultures.Therefore,a person who doesn’t know how to behave in a particular culture might offend others around him.The practical problems would be misunderstanding of culture.That means that a person who visits other countries does not understand other culture and he behaves as he wants to.The second practical problem is finding a job.An individual who works in foreign country might not be appropriate for people who he serves.For example if an individual works in a restaurant,the people who live in a country and they were born in that country might not respect and not like the behaviour of a person who works in a restaurant,it might be because,the cultures are different.To summarise,it can be said that there are a lot of misconceptions which people have when they come in a foreign country,and in my opinion and from my personal experience people should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.TASK 11.题型综述2.Task1的段落结构3.趋势的表达4.副词的写法5.常用短语的介绍Task 1 的六大题型题型考点与难点难度星级Pie chart Diversity of describing percentages **Bar chartCombination ****Line/curve chartTrends & classification ***TableHow to list statistics effectively ****diagramWriting sequence& imagination ****map Location/change *****Task1的段落结构1.Opening改写题目2.Body宏观描写:图标整体特征(main feature)微观描写:趋势,关键数值,对比等3.Ending/Conclusion明显特征:图中稳定的一些趋势、特征,极值隐藏特征:合理客观推理信息Opening一:换词:show:describe,illustrate,demonstrate proportion / percentageinformation / datanumber / figurecategories / kinds / types二.换句Opening 句型1As is shown / illustrated / demonstrated in the (1)图的类型,the (2)图的单位(number/amount/percentage/figure) of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间趋势:vary —动态图Differ —静态图(4)图的时间From...to...During...and...within...The graph below shows the difference modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city, in 1950,1970 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.As is shown in the (1)图的类型, the (2)图的单位of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间As is demonstrated in the bar chart, the percentage of travellers to and from work by different modes of transport in one European city varied dramatically from 1950 to 1990.句型2The _____ chart(s) illustrate(s) a clearpicture/overview/information of the characteristics and trends(differentiation/contrast) of _____ .The table below shows the kilometers of route,date opened and passengers per year of the underground railway system in 6 cities.▪The table illustrates the differentiation concerning the length of route, launching year and the annual capacity of the metro system in6 metropolises.句型3▪两图题▪The ____ graph describes data(趋势) about ___ whilst the ____ chart illustrates information about ________.The line graph describes data about water use worldwide while thetable illustrates information about consumption in two different countries –Brazil and Congo.▪剑6 Test 1▪The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Ending/Conclusion写1~2句结论:合理,客观即可1.明显特征:图中稳定的一些趋势、特征,极值2.隐藏特征:合理客观推理信息明显特征1.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.2.what is worth mentioning is that before1989 beef was the most popular food and after that chicken became the most consumed meat.trend四种趋势:涨跌平波上涨下跌平稳波动increase decrease词语说明词语说明common words rise fallgrow declineclimb dropswell sinkPreferred words rocket90plummetsoar60slumpsurge45subsideboom30ebbascend20slidecreep up<10creep downSpecial words accrue小平涨abate小平跌leap大平涨plunge大平跌上升表达例1:意大利的工业产值增长了5%。

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