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上海市各区2018届高三语文二模试卷精选汇编：现代文阅读一

上海市各区2018届高三语文二模试卷精选汇编：现代文阅读一奉贤区（一）阅读下文，完成第 4-9 题。

（17 分）①一般印象中，人类学家有点像是独行者，他在一个遥远的地方，去经历着不同文化给自己的磨难。

所以，李亦园先生说了这么一段话：“人类学的研究工作有一大特色，那就是要到研究的地方去做深入的调查探索，无论是蛮荒异域还是穷乡僻壤都要住过一年半载，并美其名叫‘参与观察’。

”因而，人类学家的生涯，与孤独寂寞分不开。

人类学家要备尝田野的孤独寂寞，是因为田野工作引起的文化冲击或文化震撼“经常使你终身难忘，刻骨铭心”。

人类学家不仅要承受孤独寂寞和文化震撼，还会时不时陷入一种难以自拔的困境。

马林诺夫斯基在田野中写下的《严格意义上的日记》，有这么一段话对自己的“迷糊状”做了生动的自白：4月7日（1918年）。

我的生日。

我还是带着照相机工作，到夜幕降临，我简直已筋疲力尽。

傍晚我与拉斐尔聊天，谈到特洛布里安德岛人的起源和图腾制度。

……我困惑，我陷入到了那里的生活方式之中。

所有一切都被阴影笼罩，我的思想不再有自己的特征了。

②像马林诺夫斯基这样的人类学家，大凡都．．．要经历冷酷的田野生活，他的日记给人以“羌笛何须怨杨柳，春风不度玉门关”之感。

从一个角度看，他们成为人类学家，与他们遭受的磨难有直接的关系。

马林诺夫斯基之所以是马林诺夫斯基，是因为他离开了家园，离开了波兰和英国，到蛮荒的特里布恩德岛；费孝通之所以是费孝通，是因为他离开了家乡，离开了自己的学院，偕同妻子双双去了大瑶山……为什么这些人类学家非要这样实践他们的人生？要把他们的青春耗费在遥远的穷乡僻壤？马林诺夫斯基在自己的日记里，忠实地表达了作为一个平常人的困惑，他面对过的压抑、无聊、无所适从，也是其他人类学家面对过的。

然而，从事实地研究的人类学家坚信，田野生涯里的种种忧郁，不是没有价值的，相反，它们正是特殊的人类学理解能力的发挥。

③做一个人类学家，要培养一种“离我远去”的能力，到一个自己不习惯的地方，体会人的生活面貌。

2018年上海市各区高三二模语文试卷汇编(作文)

2018年上海市各区高三二模语文试卷汇编——作文【徐汇区】26.当了解信息的途径越来越丰富、方式越来越便捷，人们会更容易获取自己想关注的信息，从而将自己包裹在以个人需求为主导的世界里。

这种现象带给你怎样的思考？请写一篇不少于800字的文章，题目自拟。

【奉贤区】30.阅读以下材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章。

冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗。

达伦多夫在《社会冲突论》中认为，冲突也是解决问题的有效方式。

【青浦区】26.根据以下材料写作现实生活中经常面临着新的开始与旧的结束。

恋旧、怀旧是人之常情，但也有人说“相见不如怀念, 怀念不如忘却”。

如何看待并处理好新的开始与恋旧怀旧的关系是需要智慧和勇气的。

看了上面材料引发了你怎样的思考？请自选一个角度写一篇不少于800字的文章，题目自拟。

【崇明区】27．生活中，我们常常听到这样的抱怨，道理都懂，为什么不按照道理去做。

对此，你有怎样的思考？请写一篇不少于800字的文章。

要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）文体不限，诗歌除外。

【杨浦区】26.世上没有移山的方法，惟一能改变我们和山的距离的途径是：山不过来，我过去。

人们可以持有这样的态度：改变可以改变的一切，适应不能改变的一切。

根据以上材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇文章。

要求：⑴不少于800字。

⑵不要写成诗歌。

⑶不要透露个人相关信息。

【普陀区】26.生活中，我们往往有意无意地和他人进行各种比较。

有人认为这是人性的劣根、烦恼的根源，应该努力避免。

对此你是否认同？请写一篇文章，谈谈你的思考。

要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。

【长宁、嘉定区】26.作文。

（70分）鲁迅先生说过：“贪安稳就没有自由，要自由就要历些危险。

只有这两条路。

”这句话引发了你怎样的思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章，不要写成诗歌。

【宝山区】26.依据下面材料，按要求作文。

有明确的信仰，并不能证明有精神追求的勇气；有精神追求的勇气，却能证明有明确的信仰。

2018届金山区高考英语二模试卷和参考答案及听力原文

金山区2017 学年第二学期质量监控高三英语试卷（时间120 分钟，分值140 分）2018年4 月I. Listening ComprehensionSection ADirections: In Part A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard.1. A. For one week. B. For less than a week.C. For two weeks.D. Hard to say.2. A. Go to her sister ’s wedding ceremony. B. Stay at home.C. Go to George’s birthday party.D. Go to George ’s house-warming party.3. A. 50 dollars. B. 40 dollars. C. 60 dollars. D. 55 dollars.4. A. She feels bored with the idea. B. She thinks ballet is funny.C. She will not go with the man anyway.D. She shows interest in the show.5. A. Snowy. B. Sunny. C. Windy. D. Cloudy.6. A. She hasn’t seen Monet’s paintings for ten years.B. She hasn’t been to the museum for long.C. She has been interested in Monet’s paintings for ten years.D. She used to own one of Monet ’s paintings.7. A. Father and daughter. B. Friends.C. Husband and wife.D. Boss and his employee.8. A. The man is not interested in the game this weekend.B. The man is not interested in the team that will play this weekend.C. The man doesn’t want to mention the game.D. The man is not interested in watching any game.9. A. She would see Ellen at last.B. She saw Ellen for the last time not long ago.C. She has many people to see before Ellen.D. She wouldn ’t like to see Ellen at all.10. A. The woman is sorry for not being able to spend the holiday with the man.B. The man is a bit annoyed because the woman didn’t tell him her plan for the winterholiday.C. The man is sorry about not being able to go to Malaysia.D. The woman is excited about spending the winter holiday in Malaysia without the man.Section BDirections: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversation will be read twice, but the questions will be spoken only once. When you hear aquestion, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one would be the best answer to the question you have heard.Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage.11. A. 70. B. 80. C. 130. D. 15.12. A. On Tuesdays. B. On Wednesdays.C. On Sundays.D. On Mondays.13. A. The English Family club. B. The painting club.C. The sports club.D. The music club.Questions 14 through 16 are based on the following passage.14. A. Because they haven’t as much interest in finding the cure as in space travel.B. Because there are too many kinds of cold viruses for them to identify.C. Because it is not economical to find a cure for each type of cold.D. Because they believe people can recover without treatment.15. A. They reveal the seriousness of the problem.B. They indicate how fast the virus spreads.C. They tell us what kind of medicine to take.D. They show our body is fighting the virus.16. A. It can actually does more harm than good.B. It causes damage to some organs of our body.C. It works better when combined with other remedies.D. It helps us to recover much sooner.Questions 17 through 20 are based on the following conversation.17. A. It lasts till today. B. It lasted about ten years.C. It’ s not mentioned in the conversation.D. It lasts forever.18. A. The commercial success of several boys and girls.B. The funny daily stories that happened to a group of close friends.C. How people in Manhattan made their living.D. American culture, mainly the coffee culture.19. A. It always received positive reviews from the critics.B. It enjoyed a high rate of watching.C. It was used as a tool for English learning all over the world.D. It became a cultural phenomenon.20. A. They may go to the “ Central Perk ” for a cup of coffee .B. They may open a new coffee shop together.C. They may start practicing English with each other.D. They may go to the woman ’ s place to enjoy the show.II. Grammar and VocabularySection ADirections: After reading the passage below, fill in the blanks to make the passage coherent and grammatically correct. For the blanks with a given word, fill in each blank with the proper formof the given word; for the other blanks, use one word that best fits each blank.I was eighteen, summer fading, when my parents drove me to my university apartment. It was my first apartment. ___21___ (walk) my parents solemnly back to their car, I noticed that my mother had tears in her eyes. I ___22___ (struggle) to hold back my own. Such a strong woman was she ___23___ it was rare to see such a show of emotion. At the time, I was rather surprised. Being the youngest of five children, I thought that my parents were accustomed to ___24___ (let) go. But maybe it ’ s something that never gets any easier, ___ 25___ _______ _______ many practice swings you get. As my parents drove off, I realized that they would return to an empty home, ___26___ all of their children leaving to pursue dreams and lives of their own. Their nest, full of love and joy for so long, was now empty. Relishing (憧憬) my new-found freedom, I concentrated on my college life. My parents did their best to give me space to learn and grow, even if I neglected to call or visit. It was a time of “ firsts, ” and a taste of first “ lasts. ”I have recently been playing Travel Frog, a mobile game that has me emotionally ___27___ (influence). In the game you gather resources, send your frog on his adventures and your payoff is, *drum roll please* ... postcards. That ’ s right, postcards. I thought it was a silly, overly-simplistic game at first, but then it started to bring back memories from long ago. While the game lacks the narrative detail or the interactivity of other games, you have a lesson ___28___ (learn) from your itinerant (四处奔波的) “Frog Son”.You do not control when he sets off on his adventures, ___ 29___ can you be sure that your hard work will land you a coveted (梦寐以求的) postcard. This game, however, has emotionally affected many players. They ___30___ (remind) of their parents who restlessly await their return home, their familiar voices, their love. Parents sacrifice a large part of themselves for their children. It is a sacrifice that can only be paid back with love.Section BDirections: Complete the passage with the words given in the table. Each word can be used onlyCan Indoor Plants Really Purify the Air?Plants are very important to human life. Through photosynthesis ( 光合作用), they transform carbon dioxide into fresh oxygen. They are said to ___31___ toxins from the air we breathe —but is this true?One famous NASA experiment, published in 1989, found that indoor plants can clean the air by removing cancer-causing pollutants like formaldehyde and benzene. Later research has found that soil micro-organisms in potted plants also play a part in cleaning indoor air.Based on this research, some scientists say house plants are ___32___ air purifiers, and the bigger and leafier the plant, the better. “ The amount of leaf surface area can ___33___ the rate of air purification, ” says Bill Wolverton, a former NASA research scientist who conducted that 1989 plant study.Other experts, however, say the ___34___ that plants can effectively accomplish this feat is far from conclusive.“There are no definitive studies to show that having indoor plants can ___35___ increase theair quality in your home, ” says Luz Claudio, a professor of environmental medicine and public health at the Icahn School of Medicine at Mount Sinai. There ’no s question that plants are capable of removing volatile chemical toxins from the air “ under laboratory conditions, ” according to Claudio. But in the real world — in your home or in your office space — the notion that putting a few plants together can ___36___ your air doesn’t have much hard science to back it up.Most research efforts to date, including the NASA study, placed indoor plants in small, sealed environments in order to ___37___ how much air-purifying power they have. But those studies aren ’really t ___38___ to what happens in a house, says Stanley Kays, a professor of horticulture at the University of Georgia.In many cases, the air in your home ___39___ turns over — that is, exchanges places with outdoor air —once every hour. “ In most instances, air exchange with the outside has a far greater effect on indoor air quality than plants, ” Kays says.Many people may be disappointed by what Kays said, but the professor also made it clear that he believes house plants are ___40___ — they are not only pleasant living companions, but also provide a number of health benefits. Studies have shown plants can knock out stress by calming the sympathetic nervous system, and can also make people feel happier. More research shows spending time around nature has a positive effect on a person ’ s mood and energy levels.III. Reading comprehensionSection ADirections: For each blank in the following passages there are four words or phrases marked A, B, C and D. Fill in each blank with the word or phrase that best fits the context.What the scientists are saying…The first primate (灵长目动物) clonesFor the first time, scientists have used the technique that produced Dolly the sheep to clone monkeys. The Chinese researchers who produced the two macaques say that having access to genetically identical primates will be a huge ___41___ to medical research. It will give scientists a clearer understanding of genetic ___42___ by enabling them to compare animals who are identical except for one tweaked gene; when ___43___ drugs, it will make it possible to rule out the possibility that variations in outcomes are down to genetic ___44___. But other experts have raised a host of ___45___. The somatic cell nuclear transfer (SCNT) technique involves ___46___ a cell nucleus to a donated nucleus-free egg that is then prompted to develop into an embryo（胚胎）. Although 23 species have been cloned in this way, primates have only been cloned before using a less complex embryo-splitting technique. Similar to the process that creates twins, it can only lead to a very ___47___ number of genetically identical individuals. SCNT can in ___48___ lead to a far larger number of clones, but in the Chinese experiment, the fail rate was very high. The team implanted scores of embryos, but only two monkeys survived beyond a few days. ___49___ to that is the concern that by cloning a primate species, the team has broken down a significant ___50___ on the way to cloning humans.Herbal remedy dangerHerbal remedies such as St. John and ginseng may be ___51___ when used alongside conventional drugs, reports The Guardian. In a review of medical literature, researchers atStellenbosch University in South Africa found several ___52___ of alternative treatments appearing to ___53___ with prescription drugs, resulting in potentially dangerous side effects. In one case, the autopsy (解剖) of a 55-year-old who died while swimming concluded that the ginkgo biloba supplements he had been taking may have ___54___ his anti-seizure ( 防止发作) medicine. Other cases documented patients on statins appearing to suffer complications linked to flaxseed, St. John’s wort and green tea. “ If you are taking herbal remedies, you should ___55___it to your clinician, id one of ” sa the report ’ s authors, Dr Charles Awortwe.41. A. threat B. damage C. benefit D. potential42. A. variations B. diseases C. structures D. factors43. A. manufacturing B. applying C. testing D. prescribing44. A. mess B. differences C. losses D. recombination45. A. concerns B. focuses C. funds D. suspicion46. A. translating B. transferring C. connecting D. reversing47. A. magnificent B. astonishing C. limited D. accurate48. A. theory B. reality C. advance D. addition49. A. Attached B. Related C. Compared D. Added50. A. access B. key C. barrier D. contribution51. A. harmful B. useful C. helpful D. purposeful52. A. methods B. figures C. problems D. instances53. A. deal B. interact C. mix D. identify54. A. put forward B. moved up C. held down D. carried on55. A. claim B. avoid C. classify D. mentionSection BDirections: Read the following three passages. Each passage is followed by several questions or unfinished statements. For each of them there are four choices marked A, B, C and D. Choose the one that fits best according to the information given in the passage you have just read.(A)Cure for tiredness?Staying up late is a potential battle between parents and kids. But the solution could be as simple as changing your meal time.Researchers at the University of Surry, UK, found that delaying meals could help change one of the internal body clocks. Besides a “ master ” cloc k in the brain, there are clocks in other parts of the body. They are usually synchronized according to factors including light.During the study, researchers tested 10 participants to examine the effect of changing meal times on their body clocks. The participants were given three meals – breakfast, lunch and dinner. In the first stage, participants received breakfast 30 minutes after waking. Lunch and dinner followed, after 5-hour intervals. In the second stage, each meal was delayed by 5 hours. Right after each stage, blood and fat samples were collected.Results showed that later meal times greatly influenced blood sugar levels. A 5-hour delay in meal times caused a 5-hour delay in the internal blood sugar rhythms.The discovery showed that meal times are in line with the body clock that controls bloodsugar levels.This is a small study but the researchers believe the findings could help jet lag sufferers and night-shift workers.In a study by the University of Surrey in 2013, researchers explored what happened when a person ’ s body was changed from a normal pattern to that of a night-shift worker’s.After people work through the night, over 97 percent of the body ’rhythmic s genes are disrupted.These findings explain why we feel so bad following a long flight, or after working at night, according to Simon Archer, one of the study ’ s researchers.“It ’s like living in a house. There ’s a clock in every room in the house and in all of those rooms those clocks are now disrupted, which of course lea ds to chaos in the household, ” f ellow researcher DerkJan Dijk told the BBC.Changing meal times didn’t affect the “ master ” body clock –the one controlling when we get sleepy – but it can reset the body clock that controls blood sugar levels.This woul dn’t necessarily cure jet lag completely, but it might reduce the negative effects.A study published earlier this year suggested that just a weekend camping trip could be enough to reset our body clocks. And now this latest research shows regular food schedules could play a key part too.56. What did researchers at the University of Surrey find from their new study?A. Connections between the “ master ” clock and clocks in other parts of the body.B. Changing meal times can be enough to reset one of our body clocks.C. A delay in meal times causes an irregular change in blood sugar rhythms.D. Blood sugar levels are affected by when we eat rather than by our internal clocks.57. Which of the following statements is TRUE about the new study, according to the article?A. The interval between each meal being given was different.B. Blood and fat samples of the two groups of participants were collected.C. Participants were asked to report their feelings after each stage.D. Each meal was served five hours later during the second stage.58. What can we learn from the study by researchers at the University of Surrey from 2013?A. All our body ’ s genes would be disrupted if we worked through the night.B. Our genes often become less active after a long flight or night of work.C. The disruption of one gene could lead to the disruption of other genes.D. A disruption to the body ’ s rhythmic genes can cause people to feel bad.59. According to the article, ______.A. it ’ s impossible to reduce the n egative effects caused by jet lag or night workB. there is more than one way to reset body clocksC. the “ master ” body clock controls all the other body clocksD. a change in meal times can reset the “master”body clock(B)Canada Apprentice (学徒) Loan BasicsThe Canada Apprentice Loan is available to help registered Red Sealapprentices cover the cost of their training.What you need to know●The Government of Canada offers apprentices registered in a Red Seal Trade apprenticeship program up to $4,000 per period of technical training.●You can get Canada Apprentice Loans for up to 5 periods of technical training.●Your loan will be interest-free for up to 6 years as long as you are confirmed as being registered in a Red Seal Trade apprenticeship program.●You do not have to make any loan payments as long as your loan is in interest-free status. Eligibility （资格）To be eligible, you must meet all of these criteria ：●be a Canadian Citizen, Permanent Resident, or Protected Person；●be registered in a Red Seal Trade apprenticeship program that is designated by the province or territory where you are registered as an apprentice ；●be enrolled in block release technical training or the equivalent fulltime technical training with an approved technical training provider;●pass a credit check (required if you are applying for the first time) ．You are not eligible if you：●are a high school student；●are an apprentice registered in the province of Quebec ；●are receiving a Canada Student Loan for the same technical training ；●have been told that you are restricted from receiving a Canada Apprentice Loan or a Canada Student Loan；●have already received funding for 5 periods of technical training ；●have already received 6 years of interest-free status.60. Who will fail to get Canada Apprentice Loans according to the passage?A. An apprentice who used to study in the province of Quebec.B. An apprentice who got the Canadian Citizenship three years ago.C. An apprentice who is looking for an approved technical training provider.D. An apprentice who has been funded for technical training three times.61. Which of the following statements is False according to the passage?A. You can get the loan without paying the interest.B. You can totally get the loan of $20,000 in 5 periods.C. You should be registered in a Red Seal Trade apprenticeship program.D. You have to make some loan payment even though your loan is in interest-free status. 高62. The purpose of the passage is intended to ________．A. promote the business of Canadian banksB. help students in need complete their studiesC. recruit more apprentices for Canadian companiesD. provide apprentices with fund to receive technical training(C)The b attle for women right to vote’sOne hundred years ago, British women were given the vote for the first time. How did it comeabout?The first appeals for women ’ s right to vote in Britain date from the early 19th century. In 1818, in his Plan of Parliamentary Reform, Jeremy Bentham insisted that women should be given the vote. Women at the time had no political rights at all – they were deemed to be represented by their husbands or fathers. The old arguments prevailed. Women, it was said, were mentally less able than men; their “ natural sphere ” was in the home; they were unable to fight for their country, and thus undeserving of full rights; moreover, they simply didn’t want the vote. This was at least partly true. “ I have never felt the want of a vote, ” declared Florence Nightingale in 1867, while Queen Victoria condemned the “ mad, wicked folly of women ’ s rights ” . Even George Eliot was reluctant to back the cause.It wasn’t until the second half of the 19th century that the first campaigning women’s groups were formed. Initially they focused on the lack of education, employment opportunities and legal rights for women (married women, at the time, had no independent legal standing); but the question of the vote gradually became central to their demands –both symbolically, as a recogni tion of women ’ s rights, and practically, as a means of improving women’s lives.However, the women’ s campaigning was still a subject of debate. While most historians agree that the campaigns were initially very effective in mobilizing women and highlighting injustices, a series of mass processions followed; more than 250,000 women protested in Hyde Park in 1908. Many were arrested and ill-treated; prisoners who went on hunger strike were brutally force-fed. Over time they became steadily more militant –smashing shop windows, setting fire to letter boxes, libraries and even homes. The PM, Herbert Asquith, an opponent of women’ s votes, was attacked with a dog whip. Such use of violence was thought, certainly at the time, to have been unfavorable.With the sacrifices of the First World War strengthening support for widening the right to vote generally, women suspended campaigning. More than a million women were newly employed outside the home --in munitions (军需品) factories, engineering works. Crucially, Asquith was replaced as PM by David Lloyd George, a supporter of votes for women. The Representation of the People Act 1918 was introduced by the coalition government and passed by a majority of 385 to 55, gaining the Royal Assent on 6 February 1918. Women over 30, who were householders or married to one, or university graduates, were given the vote.63. Which of the following is NOT the reason why women were not qualified to vote?A. Women were supposed to do housework and serve their husbands.B. Women were too weak to fight against enemies.C. Women had already enjoyed many political rights.D. Women were not as intelligent as men.64. According to the passage, why did women ’s campaigning arouse debat e?A. Because it failed to mobilize women and emphasize injustices.B. Because women were put in prison and abused during the protest.C. Because most women didn ’t want the vote.D. Because all the emotional behaviors were regarded as improper.65. T he word “militant ” (in Line 5, Para.4) probably refers to ______________.A. imposing.B. extreme.C. negative.D. obedient.66. What can be inferred from the passage?A. Women stopped protesting for their vote because they were offered more job opportunities.B. The PM, Herbert Asquith, an opponent of women committed suicide. ’ s votes,C. The first campaigning women groups were formed originally for the sake of legal rights.D. All women can enjoy their right to vote since the introduction of People Act.Section CDirections: Read the following passage. Fill in each blank with a proper sentence given in the box. Each sentence can be used only once. Note that there are two more sentences than you needNo one enjoys the moment. You are stuck at the back of a queue and as those in other lines move ahead and get served, the time to decide arrives. ____67____This question has now been solved by researchers at Harvard Business School. According to what they have found in a new study, they suggest people think twice before switching queues.The research was led by Ryan Buell, an expert in service management. He looked into consumer queuing behavior after working with economists on what is known as “ last-place aversion, the ” discomfort people feel when they kn ow they earn less than others or consider themselves at the bottom of the social pile for some other reason. As a result of this aversion to being the last, when a person finds himself at the end of a queue, he can make decisions that he will later regret.Buell began by observing people at a multi-checkout grocery store and then set up an online survey. People who took part in the survey were told it would take about five minutes. In reality, it took only one minute, but when participants logged in for the survey, they were forced to wait in a virtual queue displayed on the screen. They started at the back and could wait, switch to a second queue or choose to leave.____68____ On average, however, those who switched waited 10 percent longer than if they had stayed put. Those who switched twice ended up waiting 67 percent longer than if they had never moved.“When we join a queue, we tend to make the most rational choice we can, which means joining the shortest queue. ____69 ____ Unfortunately, we can of ten get it wrong, ” said Buell.____70____ After that, the aversion fades. The researcher suggests people have a chat with the person in front so that they can pass the time more comfortably until someone else joinsbehind them. “ Remember that the pers on in front of you was the last until you arrived, so someone will show up if you hang around long enou gh, ” Buell saidIV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.As technology grows, many university instructors are finding ways to guide online learning platforms into their classrooms. Programs such as Blackboard, WebCT and Moodle allow teachers to post reading assignments, PowerPoint presentations, lecture notes and quizzes for students to complete outside of class. While posting lessons online can be friendly to students' communication styles and easily accessible, they also cause disadvantages.One disadvantage is that it may encourage students to depend on technology in the classroom. Instead of physical textbooks, many now bring cellphones to access materials during class discussions. While electronic devices can be valuable learning tools, they also can lead to distractions from learning, such as social networking and online games. It is extremely difficult for students being exposed to multiple electronic tasks to focus or remember key information.A second disadvantage is that online lessons open up potential for cheating. Many instructors require students to complete quizzes, post within discussion groups or submit major assignments online. As a result, there are some students having someone else complete their assignments. A contributing factor is that online assignments are best suitable for those self-motivated, self-directed students. Students who struggle with organization and completing assignments may find it easy to cheat online.In spite of these disadvantages, educators can take steps to make sure students use online lessons responsibly. If instructors are uncomfortable with electronic devices in the classroom, they can require students to print out assignments and readings to reference during sessions. To prevent cheating, teachers can use online assignments as a supplement to traditional in-class work, or create open-ended assignments rather than using assignments like multiple-choice quizzes that have only one right answer. Being familiar with what the platform looks like from a student perspective also can help instructors avoid potential pitfalls.V. TranslationDirections: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.72. 多参加志愿者活动，它能使你成为更好的人。

2018上海各区二模作文解析及范文

2018上海各区二模作文解析及范文【奉贤2018年高三二模作文题】阅读以下材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章。

冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗。

达伦多夫在《社会冲突论》中认为，冲突也是解决问题的有效方式。

课代表说：诚如题干所说，冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗，很多时候这样的对抗不可避免地会带来破坏，但是破坏之后就是新生。

通过对抗，“幸存”下来的一方也许就是解决方法。

素材推荐：1、辛亥革命，结束了中国两千余年的封建帝制，开创了亚洲第一个共和体制。

随着封建帝制的废除，依附于封建帝制的种种丑恶制度也被次第扫除。

民族平等、民权自由、民生幸福的呼声在中华大地回荡。

空前的民主气象，竞办实业的浪潮，形成了生机勃勃的局面。

【2018虹口高三二模】网络流行词“佛系”，最早来源于2014年日本某杂志，指一种怎么都行、无须走心、看淡一切的活法，一切随缘。

该词一出迅速流行，更有不少人自称佛系，有佛系追星、佛系购物、佛系恋爱、佛系员工、佛系学生等种种说法。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对此的思考解析：“佛系”一词自流行以来人们对其一直有两种态度，有人认同“佛系”的洒脱和平和，也有人认为“佛系”其实就是一种逃避的借口，而无论是哪一种都有话可说，有例可证。

1、宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落；去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒——陈继儒《小窗幽记》2、你拥有青春的时候，就要感受它。

不要虚掷你的黄金时代，不要去倾听枯燥乏味的东西，不要设法挽留无望的失败，不要把你的生命献给无知、平庸和低速。

这些都是我们时代病态的目标，虚假的理想。

活着，把你宝贵的内在生命活出来。

什么都别错过。

——奥斯卡·王尔德《道林·格雷的画像》少年法盛唐中国人自古以来面对困厄的出路大抵有两条：一条是唐人的，是用蓬勃的朝气去改造人的处境；另条是晋人的，是用隐逸的志趣去修养人的内在。

没想到，在这个活力四射的盛世，一些自称“佛系”的年轻人似乎悄然转向了第二条路。

2018届金山区高三二模语文答案

金山区2017学年第二学期质量监控高三语文参考答案和评分标准一积累应用10分1．（5分）(1)万钟于我何加焉鱼我所欲也（2分） (2)别有幽愁暗恨生（1分）⑶不识庐山真面目只缘身在此山中（2分）（说明：每空一分，错字漏字多字别字都不得分）2．（5分）（2分）（1）B（来源于朱光潜先生的《论诗的主观和客观》一文，稍有删改）（3分）（2）D（A项“特此通知”一般用于上级对下级，单位对职工，在该句中使用不得体。

B 项“光临”是一个敬辞，对对方到自己这里来表示敬意，只能用于对方，不能用于自己，该句表达不得体。

C项“欠安”是对人生病的婉辞，不能用于自己。

）二阅读70分（一）15分3.（2分）以当今传统故事被改编的现象，用问句的形式（1分），引出本文的话题“故事新编”（1分）。

4.（3分）参考示例：白居易的《长恨歌》传播到日本，紫式部的《源氏物语》受到它的影响，铜壶更衣等女性身上有着杨贵妃的影子；紫式部的创作还受到白居易诗歌的启发，写出了她作为平安时代的日本女性所体会到的痛苦和压抑，产生了新的主题，被奉为经典。

这说明经典作品穿越了时代和地域的区隔，在传播过程中会遭遇改写，在改写过程中会产生新的内涵，以此证明布鲁姆的观点。

（把握观点1分，围绕例子阐述2分）5.（2分）对经典作品如《西游记》的戏说或颠覆式的改写。

6.（3分）D7.（5分）要求：选择《古诗为焦仲卿妻作》中的一个情节，如仲卿求母、兰芝抗婚、夫妻惜别、双双殉情等，进行改编，能体现第⑨段的主要观点（艺术表达有时代印记，在传统基础上有思辨、质疑和改变），合情合理，能自圆其说。

（二）17分8.（3分）表现夜间行车路况之差（1分），引出下文的搭车青年（1分），为后文“我”对青年产生同情做铺垫。

（1分）9.（3分）将被司机狠踩油门的车比作被横刺了一刀的烈马（1分），生动形象地写出了司机狠踩油门之后的车速之快（1分），和“狠”、“疯狂”等词语相照应，表现出司机对搭车青年的提防（1分）。

2018年上海高考模拟考之二模作文题（精选5篇）

2018年上海高考模拟考之二模作文题（精选5篇）第一篇：2018年上海高考模拟考之二模作文题2018年上海高考模拟考之二模作文题汇编1.松江区、闵行区生活中，我们自以为是某个事件的关注者，其实，我们往往不明就里，只凑了个热闹，没过多久就忘记了，成为事件的忽视者。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这种现象的思考。

2.虹口区网络流行词“佛系”，最早来源于2014年日本某杂志，指一种怎么都行、无须走心、看淡一切的活法，一切随缘。

该词一出迅速流行，更有不少人自称佛系，有佛系追星、佛系购物、佛系恋爱、佛系员工、佛系学生等种种说法。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对此的思考。

3.崇明区生活中，我们常常听到这样的抱怨，道理都懂，为什么不按照道理去做。

对此，你有怎样的思考？4.奉贤区冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗。

达伦多夫在《社会冲突论》中认为，冲突也是解决问题的有效方式。

5.黄浦区有人说，人生的麻烦，大多是因为太快说“是”，太慢说“不”造成的。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这句话的思考。

6.金山区我们每个人都生活在别人的眼光关注中。

这些眼光中有鼓励，有肯定，但也有质疑甚至否定，然而，掌控人生的往往是你自己。

7.浦东新区想出新办法的人在他的办法成功以前，人们总是说他异想天开。

针对这种现象，请写一篇文章谈谈你的思考。

8.普陀区生活中，我们往往有意无意地和他人进行各种比较。

有人认为这是人性的劣根、烦恼的根源，应该努力避免。

9.青浦区现实生活中经常面临着新的开始和旧的结束。

恋旧、怀旧是人之常情，但也有人说“相见不如怀念，怀念不如忘却”。

如何看待并处理好新的开始与恋旧怀旧的关系是需要智慧和勇气的。

10.徐汇区当了解信息的途径越来越丰富、方式越来越便捷，人们会更容易获取自己想关注的信息，从而将自己包裹在以个人需求为主导的世界里。

这种现象带给你怎样的思考？11.杨浦区世上没有移山的方法，唯一能改变我们和山的距离的途径是山不过来我过去，人们可以持有这样的态度，改变可以改变的一切，适应不能改变的一切。

【2018上海高考二模】上海市金山区2018届高三下学期质量监控（二模）英语

【2018上海高考二模】上海市金山区2018届高三下学期质量监控（二模）英语金山区2018届第二学期质量监控高三英语试卷（时间120分钟，分值140分）I. Listening ComprehensionSection ADirections: In Part A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard.1. A. For one week. B. For less than a week.C. For two weeks.D. Hard to say.2. A. Go to her sister’s wed ding ceremony. B. Stay at home.C. Go to George’s birthday party.D. Go t o George’s house-warming party.3. A. 50 dollars. B. 40 dollars. C. 60 dollars. D. 55 dollars.4. A. She feels bored with the idea. B. She thinks ballet is funny.C. She will not go with the man anyway.D. She shows interest in the show.5. A. Snowy. B. Sunny. C. Windy. D. Cloudy.6. A. She hasn’t seen Monet’s paintings for ten years.B. She hasn’t been to the museum for long.C. She has been interested in Monet’s paintings for tenyears.D. She used to own one of Monet’s paintings.7. A. Father and daughter. B. Friends.C. Husband and wife.D. Boss and his employee.8. A. The man is not interested in the game this weekend.B. The man is not interested in the team that will play this weekend.C. The man doesn’t want to mention the game.D. The man is not interested in watching any game.9. A. She would see Ellen at last.B. She saw Ellen for the last time not long ago.C. She has many people to see before Ellen.D. She wouldn’t like to see Ellen at all.10. A. The woman is sorry for not being able to spend the holiday with the man.B. The man is a bit annoyed because the woman didn’t tell him h er plan for the winter holiday.C. The man is sorry about not being able to go to Malaysia.D. The woman is excited about spending the winter holiday in Malaysia without the man.Section BDirections: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversationwill be read twice, but the questions will be spoken only once. When you hear a question, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one would be the best answer to the question you have heard.Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage.11. A. 70. B. 80. C. 130. D. 15.12. A. On Tuesdays. B. On Wednesdays.C. On Sundays.D. On Mondays.13. A. The English Family club. B. The painting club.C. The sports club.D. The music club.Questions 14 through 16 are based on the following passage.14. A. Because they haven’t as much interest in finding the cure as in space travel.B. Because there are too many kinds of cold viruses for them to identify.C. Because it is not economical to find a cure for each type of cold.D. Because they believe people can recover without treatment.15. A. They reveal the seriousness of the problem.B. They indicate how fast the virus spreads.C. They tell us what kind of medicine to take.D. They show our body is fighting the virus.16. A. It can actually does more harm than good.B. It causes damage to some organs of our body.C. It works better when combined with other remedies.D. It helps us to recover much sooner.Questions 17 through 20 are based on the following conversation.17. A. It lasts till today.B. It lasted about ten years.C. It’s not mentioned in the conversation.D. It lasts forever.18. A. The commercial success of several boys and girls.B. The funny daily stories that happened to a group of close friends.C. How people in Manhattan made their living.D. American culture, mainly the coffee culture.19. A. It always received positive reviews from the critics.B. It enjoyed a high rate of watching.C. It was used as a tool for English learning all over the world.D. It became a cultural phenomenon.20. A. They may go to the “Central Perk” for a cup of coffee.。

2018二模作文题分析

【静安区】任何社会都不可能有一种人人认同的观念，人们常常会在价值、理想等观念上持不同意见。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你如何与自己观念不同的人交流。

（1）自拟题目（2）很多于800字分析：面对那些和咱们意见不同的人，咱们要秉承宽容平和心态，尊重不同意见、踊跃寻觅一起语言。

碰到不合主动换位试探等。

可是，也不要轻忽，和观念不同的人交流不是一味地包容、妥协，必需要有自己的主见。

素材推荐：1、君子和而不同,小人同而不和。

——《论语》君子能够与他周围的人维持和谐融洽的气氛，但他对待任何情形都有自己的独立观点，而不是人云亦云，盲目附和。

小人那么没有自己独立的观点，尽管常和他人维持一致，但实际并非讲求真正的和谐贯通。

2、欧阳修早年超级赏识王安石的才华，王安石也超级尊重欧阳修，二人同朝为官，相互欣赏相互切磋。

到了晚年，尽管欧阳修和王安石的政见显现不合，可是并无对他们的关系造成阻碍，两人仍然亦师亦友。

当欧阳修归天以后，王安石还作《祭欧阳文忠公函》盛赞欧阳修，无一字贬损。

【闵行/松江】生活中，咱们自以为是某个事件的关注者，其实，咱们往往不明就里，只凑了个喧闹，没过量久就忘记了，成为事件的轻忽者。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这种现象的试探。

分析：（客观缘故）互联网时期，信息更迭迅速，咱们的生活被一个又一个所谓的热点充满着，可是很多时候咱们只是凑个喧闹观望两眼，很少能真正沉下心来去试探、钻研。

（主观缘故）咱们自己浅思维、缺乏独立试探能力、没有探讨精神。

危害：……素材推荐：1、霍金的微博、霍金的归天……喧闹一时，人走茶凉。

霍金知识的核心价值，霍金的精神传承，随着他的归天一并消散。

2、生活的全数意义在于无穷地探讨尚未明白的东西，在于不断地增加更多的知识!——[法]左拉【浦东】想出新方法的人在他的方法成功以前，人们老是说他想入非非。

针对这种现象，请写一篇文章谈谈你的试探。

分析：方法不成功前，是存在失败的可能——被称为想入非非（合理性）但如此的想入非非——意义安在而一味称“新方法”为“想入非非”——危害安在如何办：作为新观点的提出者咱们要坚决、勇敢，作为倾听者咱们那么应该宽容、耐心。

2018年上海高三二模语文汇编（作文）

2018年上海高三二模汇编—作文静安区三、写作70分26.任何社会都不可能有一种人人认同的观念,人们常常会在价值、理想等观念上持不同意见。

请写一篇文章,谈谈你怎样与自己观念不同的人交流。

要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少于800字。

参考答案：略26.（70分）评分标准一类卷（63－70分）基准分67分能准确把握题意，立意深刻，选材恰当，中心突出，内容充实，感情真挚，结构严谨语言流畅，有文采。

二类卷（52－62分）基准分57分符合题意，立意较深刻，选材较恰当，中心明确，内容较充实，感情真实，结构完整语言通顺。

三类卷（39－51分）基准分45分基本符合题意，立意一般，选材尚恰当，中心尚明确，内容尚充实，感情尚真实，结构基本完整，语言基本通顺，偶有语病。

四类卷（21－38分）基准分29分偏离题意，立意或选材不当，中心不明确，内容单薄，结构不够完整，语言欠通顺，语病较多。

五类卷（20分以下）符合以下一项即为五类（1）脱离题意。

（2）文理不通。

（3）全文不足400字说明（1）未写题目扣2分。

（2）错别字1个扣1分，至多扣3分。

（3）标点错误多，酌情扣1－2分。

（4）文面不整洁，酌情扣1－2分；文面整洁美观，酌情加1－2分。

宝山区三写作70分26.依据下面材料，按要求作文有明确的信仰，并不能证明有精神追求的勇气；有精神追求的勇气，却能证明有明确的信仰。

要求：自选角度，自拟题目，800字以上。

二类卷（52－62分）基准分57分符合题意，立意较深刻，选材较恰当，中心明确，内容较充实，感情真实，结构完整语言通顺。

四类卷（21－38分）基准分29分偏离题意，立意或选材不当，中心不明确，内容单薄，结构不够完整，语言欠通顺，语病较多。

(完整版)2018年上海高三二模语文汇编(现代文二)

2018年上海高三二模汇编—现代文二静安区(二)阅读下文,完成第8-11题。

(15分)教授与烟斗（吴小如）①教授叼着烟斗,给我印象最深的是闻一多先生的遗照。

抗战期间我生活在沦陷区,没有到过昆明,因此无缘与闻先生接触。

在我的师辈中,如朱自清、俞平伯、游国恩、沈从文诸先生,有的根本不吸烟,像废名先生更是反对吸烟,连学生吸烟都不敢当着他的面。

②1952年,清华大学中文系的师生合并到北大来,教师队伍中有三位先生是经常叼烟斗的,按照年龄排列,则是吴组缃先生、王瑶先生和朱德熙先生。

这三位先生同我共事都在四十年以上。

今天他们都已成了古人,回忆一下他们吸烟叶、叼烟斗的神情形态,也算是对他们的悼念吧③组缃先生长我十四岁,是我的同宗,但辈分比我大得多。

院系调整之初,包括课堂上听课的学生,望见组缃先生威仪棣棣的庄严神态,都存有敬畏之心,连我这年轻教师也不例外。

久而久之,才发现他是一位貌似严肃、心实慈祥的长者,只是疾恶如仇,不说假话,待人不虚与委蛇,才使人由敬生畏。

组缃先生从不轻易赞许别人,直到晚年,有的学生写了书请他作序或题辞,他仍不随便动笔。

而对于我这同族晚辈,感情却日益深厚。

每逢家乡托人带来茶叶,他知我也是嗜茶者,总让学生顺路送一部分给我。

我有时买一点小礼物或补品去看望他,他并不推辞,却总说所买的东西太昂贵了,破费太多。

我写了书送他,求他指教,他总是认真阅览,然后指出优缺点,不过往往有溢美之辞。

在学生面前他总是为比他年轻的同行们代树威信,为他们说恰如其分的好话,对我更不例外。

不虚夸,不苛责。

几十年来,敬他的心与日俱增,畏惧心理却早为亲切交谈和推心置腹所取代了。

④组缃先生晚年已不吸烟,但在十年浩劫以前,烟斗是不离“手”的。

每次在同他起开会或谈话时,尤其是在他书房里做客,总看到他手上拿着烟斗,不停地在做吸烟前的准备工作。

那就是,用细细的纸捻儿慢条斯理地向烟斗的小孔中缓缓插入,经过转动,再点点拉了出来,为的是把里面的烟油擦净。

2018上海金山二模写作思维讲析（精选5篇）

2018上海金山二模写作思维讲析（精选5篇）第一篇：2018上海金山二模写作思维讲析金山区我们每个人都生活在别人的眼光关注中。

这些眼光中有鼓励，有肯定，但也有质疑甚至否定，然而，掌控人生的往往是你自己。

是什么？有哪些眼光？我们试着分类：鼓励肯定；（前进的动力，赋予自己以勇气与自信，但会不会沉溺于此，不思进取？）（我们都乐于听到鼓励肯定，因此成为我们的依赖，被鼓励与肯定成了我们的目标，进而丧失了我们的独立性。

）质疑否定；（人言可畏的阮玲玉自杀身亡，无数大师都是那个时代的“离经叛道”者；但是质疑有能给前行的人带来反思与警醒）善意的，恶意的；友人的家人的师长的；社会的流言与舆论。

为什么“我们每个人都生活在别人的眼光关注中”？内因（个体的原因）：是自我的不自信，希望获得外在的同情、鼓励、共鸣，从别人的眼光里刷存在感的心态是不理智也不成熟的；缺乏独立，是对外在眼光的一种精神依赖。

究其实质，是自卑和思想的贫瘠。

外因（社会原因，时代原因）：人的社会性决定的。

社会的归属感，群体的价值观成为你的判定标准；勒庞的《乌合之众》，群体中的个体，很容易抛弃自己的智商来换取某种认同感。

为了迎合别人的眼光，放弃自己都人生的独立思考和价值判断。

（这里，与“盲从与逆流”，“不太快说是，太慢说不”等作文都有相关性了！）对于绝大多数人，太快说“是”的原因大体分为两类，其一，惰于思考的心态现成了“ 多接收而少产出”的罐头思维。

当听闻来自权威、群体之声，本能地顺从服从，从而摆脱了个体的卑微弱小，选择与群体趋同，正体现了乌合之众消磨掉个人思考后的群体无意识。

其二，则是没有说“不”的勇气。

人们害怕被质疑反对，认为说“不”的代价太大，没有勇气去发出反抗的声音。

这本来无可厚非，因为在光荣的荆棘路上总不乏真理的殉道士。

殊不知，这份坚持自己想法的困难，从来都不能成为一枚随波逐流的湖石的狼狈借口。

与之相对的，太慢说不，恰是缺少了坚持表达独特尖锐的想法时的自信和勇气。

2018高三语文二模范文(所有区县)

【徐汇】当了解信息的途径越来越丰富、方式越来越便捷，人们会更容易获取自己想关注的信息，从而将自己包裹在以个人需求为主导的世界里。

走出你的认知地图随着科技的发展，人们了解信息的途径越来越丰富，方式越来越便捷。

由古早（？）的报纸、电视变成现今各式各样的新闻客户端、微博、微信，人们会更容易获取自己想关注的信息。

只需要掏出手机，轻轻一点，各色各样的信息涌入眼帘。

生活中遇到什么难题，碰到什么困难，轻轻一点，自有前人解答。

若是搜索不到，在某些平台提问，也有热心人士提供专业指导，或是引领你前往其他地方寻求帮助。

在这样一个信息大爆炸时代，藉此可以满足人的大部分需求。

然而，也正是这样一个信息爆炸的时代，让人们将自己包裹在以个人需求为主导的世界里。

当今社会的巨大压力迫使许多人在虚幻的世界中寻找心灵的慰藉。

各类“毒鸡汤”也就诞生于世。

看到某作家宣扬学历无用论，说自己学历低也有如今的成就，却看不到他把自己的孩子送入当地以严格、升学率闻名的小学。

只看到比尔・盖茨辍学创办微软，却没有意识到他是在确立自己目标后，从哈佛大学自己选择退学，而不是所谓“大学教不出人オ”。

人们往往只关注于事物的一个方面，便草草得出了结论。

被困于自己的舒适圈之中，不愿也不敢踏出去看看外面的世界，被各类顾虑和惰性捆绑，一日日地虚度年华。

我们自然需要打破这样的藩蓠。

正如乔布斯所言：“每个人生来都注定改变世界。

”杨绛先生在受到当时中直部部长林默涵请求她翻译文学巨著《堂吉词德》时，尽管林部长言明她可以从英译本入手进行再译，但她在比较了几种英译本之后，认为若想忠于原作只能从原文翻译。

于是她在三年自然灾害时期坚持每日自学西班牙语，才有了如今的《堂吉河德》的中译本。

若杨绛先生被惰性趋驱使，她自然只会关注到“可以从英译本出发”这一信息，也不会为了精益求精而自学西班牙语，并且会折服于当时的物质条件，那这样一颗译界“明珠”也不会诞生于世。

正如泰戈尔所言：“在叩响无数生人的门后，才能叩响自己的家门。

【全国区级联考】上海市金山区2018届高三二模考试语文试题(解析版)

金山区2017学年高三第二学期质量监控语文试题一、积累应用1. 按要求填空。

(1)万钟则不辩礼义而受之，___________？（《<孟子>二章·________》）(2)______________，此时无声胜有声。

（白居易《琵琶行》）⑶有时候，我们对自己所处的环境，正在做的事反而不及旁人清楚，这就是“当局者迷，旁观者清。

”苏轼的《题西林壁》中的诗句“____________，_____________”说明了这个问题。

【答案】(1). 万钟于我何加焉(2). 鱼我所欲也(3). 别有幽愁暗恨生(4). 不识庐山真面目(5). 只缘身在此山中【解析】试题分析：名句默写分为两大类，一是给出语境的理解性默写，二是给出上句写下句的直接默写。

默写要注意字形，而字形与字义分不开，学生应借助字义来识记字形。

注意重点字的写法。

如“幽”“缘”要理解字义去记忆。

学生记忆的时候应该结合诗句的意思。

2. 依次填入下面一段文字中横线处的语句，与上下文衔接最恰当的一组是诗的情趣都从沉静中回味得来。

感受情感是能入，回味情感是能出。

诗人对于情趣都要能入能出。

单就能入说，；单就能出说，。

能入而不能出，或能出而不能入，都不能成为大诗人，所以“主观的”和“客观的”在诗中是不存在的。

比如班婕妤的《怨歌行》，陆游的《书愤》和李煜的《虞美人》，，入而能出，是主观的也是客观的。

李白的《长干行》，杜甫的《石壕吏》和《无家别》，，出而能入，是客观的也是主观的。

①它是主观的②都是痛定思痛③它是客观的④都是体物入微A. ③①④②B. ①③②④C. ①③④②D. ③①②④【答案】B【解析】试题分析：本题考查语言表达连贯的能力。

解答连贯题最重要的方法就是根据上下文意进行推断。

解答此题，结合“主观的”和“客观的”的顺序分析，①应该在③前面。

结合“陆游的《书愤》和李煜的《虞美人》”等内容分析，是痛定思痛；“李白的《长干行》，杜甫的《石壕吏》和《无家别》”，从小处入手，抒发情感，综合B项正确。

2018二模作文题分析

任何社会都不可能有一种人人认同的观念，人们常常会在价值、理想等观念上持不同意见。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你怎样与自己观念不同的人交流。

（1）自拟题目（2）不少于800字分析：面对那些和我们意见不同的人，我们要秉承宽容平和心态，尊重不同意见、积极寻找共同语言。

遇到分歧主动换位思考等。

但是，也不要忽视，和观念不同的人交流不是一味地包容、退让，必须要有自己的主见。

素材推荐：1、君子和而不同,小人同而不和。

——《论语》君子可以与他周围的人保持和谐融洽的氛围，但他对待任何事情都有自己的独立见解，而不是人云亦云，盲目附和。

小人则没有自己独立的见解，虽然常和他人保持一致，但实际并不讲求真正的和谐贯通。

2、欧阳修早年非常赏识王安石的才华，王安石也非常尊重欧阳修，二人同朝为官，互相欣赏互相切磋。

到了晚年，虽然欧阳修和王安石的政见出现分歧，但是并没有对他们的关系造成影响，两人依然亦师亦友。

当欧阳修去世之后，王安石还作《祭欧阳文忠公文》盛赞欧阳修，无一字贬损。

【闵行/松江】生活中，我们自以为是某个事件的关注者，其实，我们往往不明就里，只凑了个热闹，没过多久就忘记了，成为事件的忽视者。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这种现象的思考。

分析：（客观原因）互联网时代，信息更迭迅速，我们的生活被一个又一个所谓的热点充斥着，但是很多时候我们只是凑个热闹观望两眼，很少能真正沉下心来去思考、钻研。

（主观原因）我们自己浅思维、缺乏独立思考能力、没有探究精神。

危害：……素材推荐：1、霍金的微博、霍金的去世……热闹一时，人走茶凉。

霍金知识的核心价值，霍金的精神传承，随着他的去世一并消散。

2、生活的全部意义在于无穷地探索尚未知道的东西，在于不断地增加更多的知识!——[法]左拉【浦东】想出新办法的人在他的办法成功以前，人们总是说他异想天开。

针对这种现象，请写一篇文章谈谈你的思考。

分析：办法不成功前，是存在失败的可能——被称为异想天开（合理性）但这样的异想天开——意义何在而一味称“新办法”为“异想天开”——危害何在怎么办：作为新见解的提出者我们要坚定、勇敢，作为倾听者我们则应该宽容、耐心。

上海市各区2018届高三语文二模试卷精选汇编：写作专题

上海市各区2018届高三语文二模试卷精选汇编：写作专题奉贤区三、写作（70 分）30.阅读以下材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于 800 字的文章。

冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗。

达伦多夫在《社会冲突论》中认为，冲突也是解决问题的有效方式。

30．作文（70分）评分标准（建议基准分为49分）一类卷（63—70）基准分67分：能准确把握题意，立意深刻，选材恰当，中心突出，内容充实，感情真挚，结构严谨，语言流畅，有文采。

二类卷（52—62）基准分57分：符合题意，立意较深刻，选材较恰当，中心明确，内容较充实，感情真实，结构完整，语言通顺。

三类卷（39—51）基准分45分：基本符合题意，立意一般，选材尚恰当，中心尚明确，内容尚充实，感情尚真实，结构基本完整，语言基本通顺，偶有病句。

四类卷（21—38）基准分29分：偏离题意，立意或选材不恰当，中心不明确，内容单薄，结构不够完整，语言欠通顺，语病较多。

五类卷（20分以下）符合以下一项即为五类：（1）脱离题意。

（2）文理不通。

（3）全文不足400字。

说明：（1）未写题目扣2分。

（2）错别字1个扣1分，至多3分。

（3）标点错误多，酌情扣1—2分。

（4）文面不整洁，酌情扣1—2分；文面整洁美观，酌情加1—2分。

崇明区三、写作（70分）27．生活中，我们常常听到这样的抱怨，道理都懂，为什么不按照道理去做。

对此，你有怎样的思考？请写一篇不少于800字的文章。

要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）文体不限，诗歌除外。

（70分）评分标准一类卷 (63－70分)能准确把握题意，立意深刻，选材恰当，中心突出，内容充实，感情真挚，结构严谨，语言流畅，有文采。

二类卷 (52－62分)符合题意，立意较深刻，选材较恰当，中心明确，内容较充实，感情真实，结构完整，语言通顺。

三类卷 (39－51分)基本符合题意，立意一般，选材尚恰当，中心尚明确，内容尚充实，感情尚真实，结构基本完整，语言基本通顺，偶有语病。