高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信

范文（来不及打了）
I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
2017-9-15
刘晓
---Thanks---
2017-9-15
刘晓
read some English originals and wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre. But I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I sincerely hope you can help me to make some corrections and give me some advice on writing. Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you? I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking
Would you do me a favor?
结束语 (the closing sentence)
I sincerely hope you can…
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Hope for an early reply
I would be grateful if you could…
Jane Eyre.
non-restrictive clause
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a
reading activity during the summer vocation, where I
read some English originals and wrote a book review.
❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some time
❺ thanks and expectations
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
highly related
❶ ask you a favor
I am writing to ask you a favor. loosely related
I am Li Hua, a student from our school. I am writing
to ask you a favor.
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review
If possible, can I meet you after class On Friday?
Concession
If you are avialable after class on Friday, please tell me and I will meet you in your office. Result
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Supporting + Key
❸ help me correct it / make some corrections
I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me some advice on writing. Being poor in writing, I am worried there might be
二审时态、人称： 时态前后照应人称上下一致；
三审要点： 要点齐全，逻辑清晰
2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
--- 框架
--- 要点分布
--- 逻辑关系
--- 语言（词汇、语法）
（动词、连接成分、可用句型）
3、依据提纲，扩展成文 紧扣提示，适度发挥， 扩展成句，连句成文。
尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。
4、核查文章，适度修改 格式、要点、语言 Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am writing cohesive and logical to ask a favor of you. As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation, where I
Practical Writing
(Request) 应用文-求助信 ---刘晓
折衷式 (Semi-Block Style)
Dear Sir or Madam,
…(Para1)
…(Para2)
…(Para3)
Yours (sincerely), Lihua
2017-9-15 刘晓
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信件写作流程 1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 一审文体： 格式正确，语言得体；
Yours (sincerely), Li Hua
2017-9-15
要点罗列
❶ ask you a favor
❷ sign up for a reading activity and write a book review ❸ help me correct it /make some corrections
I would appreciate it if you could…
2017-9-15 刘晓
求助信
表示求助的常用句式
Would you be so kind as to…?
Is it possible that…?
I sincerely hope that you can…
1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 (1) 文体 求助信 假如你是李华，暑假参加了某 (2) 人称 第一人称 微信公众号（Wechat official 一般现在时 (3) 时态 account）举行的英语原版书阅读 一般将来时 活动，并写了一篇书评（a book 写信目的 review）。现你用英语给外教 (4) 要点 求助内容 Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面 结束语 批改书评，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍活动 2. 提出请求 3. 提议见面时间 original English books 注意： English originals 1. 词数80次左右 2.2017-9-15 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 刘晓
some mistakes.Would you be so kind as to help me make
some corrections? Using a question to be polite
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
Concession
❹ meet after class on Friday/ spare me some timession
As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for an English origial reading activity during the summer vocation. I wrote a book review on my favorite book
2、列出提纲，构建框架结构
Dear …,
…(Para1)
…(Para2) 写信目的 说明困难 介绍活动 请求帮助
根据交流对象 选用称呼和结尾礼语
Dear Sam,
Yours respectfully, Yours truly, Yours sincerely,
提出请求 &约定时间
感谢并期待答复
4、核查文章，适度修改。
格式正确
要点齐全
语言准确
衔接自然
2017-9-15 刘晓
求助信
内容要点：
---写信目的
-->说明困难
-->请求帮助
-->感谢并期待答复
2017-9-15
刘晓
求助信
起首句（the opening sentence）
I’m writing to ask you a fovor.
Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that
I can go to meet you?
3、依据提纲，扩展成文
❺ thanks and expectation
I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your kind reply.
forward to your reply.
2017-9-15 刘晓
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
4、核查文章，适度修改
Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am writing to ask a favor of you.