初三英语 英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优练习题(及解析
中考复习专题 书面表达培优训练(附解析)
中考复习专题书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥2.自身勤奋不够3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴看法与建议：1.作弊有害； 2.要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3.学校应减少考试。
要求：1.字数 80-100； 2.围绕要点可适当发挥； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】写作分析：本文需要就考试作弊这一主题展开讨论。
中考英语书面表达培优卷(word)
中考英语书面表达培优卷（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。
请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。
【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编专项训练100(附答案)及解析
【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编专项训练100(附答案)及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达。
根据下列图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文，要求叙述完整。
1 23 4_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 a.m. We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】这是一篇看图作文，介绍我们在一次爬山过程中保护环境，捡拾垃圾。
【英语】初三英语英语书面表达汇编真题汇编(含答案)及解析
【英语】初三英语英语书面表达汇编真题汇编(含答案)及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。
假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。
要求：1.写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；4. 词数不少于70词。
（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear editor，I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to come．We will give each other gifts and give our best wishes.After that，one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．Yours，Li Ming【解析】【详解】初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达练习题附解析
初三九年级英语(完整版)英语书面表达练习题附解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。
The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study inclass.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________2．书面表达为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother"为主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。
参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to…提示：1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。
初三英语英语书面表达汇编的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析
初三英语英语书面表达汇编的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·合肥市第四十二中学中考模拟）每个人的生命只有一次。
请你以“How to Protect Our Lives”为题，从安全和健康的角度入手，写一篇如何珍惜和保护我们生命的短文，要点如下：1. 交通安全，校园安全2. 健康的饮食和生活3. ... ...参考词汇：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 词数80~100；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
【答案】How to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don't climb trees, don't play dangerous games. Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep.If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。
人教版中考英语专项训练 书面表达培优训练(附解析)
人教版中考英语专项训练书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·北京中考模拟）假如你叫李华，学校英语广播站正在招募主持人。
请你用英文给负责的老师 Sam 写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具体打算做的事情。
提示词语： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示问题：● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are yo u going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英语广播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my or alEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I become a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是围绕一篇演讲稿展开，贴近学校生活，学生有话可写。
初三英语 英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优易错试卷练习题及答案
初三英语英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优易错试卷练习题及答案一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·如皋市实验初中中考模拟）亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。
假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。
注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar e the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua 【解析】【分析】本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。
九年级英语 书面表达培优训练(附解析)
九年级英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·福建中考模拟）亲爱的初三同学，考试来临，毕业在即，你遇到了人生路上的转折点，你的生活、学习平添了一些烦恼和压力。
当前正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力非常重要。
请以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。
开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：内容完整；书写规范；语法准确；语句通顺连贯。
参考词：stress（压力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，helpHow to solve our stressThe entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives thesedays.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。
(英语)初三英语英语书面表达汇编专项训练100(附答案)含解析
（英语）初三英语英语书面表达汇编专项训练100(附答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。
请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。
Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。
初三英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案及解析
初三英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·天津中考模拟）你马上就要初中毕业了，恩师难忘，请你根据下面的提示，向大家介绍你的一位老师（Ms Wang）。
（1） Ms Wang的基本情况：学科、年龄、外貌；（以上内容自拟）（2）老师的特点：严格，与学生相处融洽，和善，耐心，有创造性；（3）你对老师的评价。
参考词汇：对某人严格的 be strict with sb. 创造性的 be creative要求：（1）词数：80〜100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers sin ce I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her classs.She often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的老师。
【英语】 中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)经典
【英语】中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。
内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。
作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。
九年级英语 书面表达培优训练(附解析)
九年级英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·福建中考模拟）书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。
有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。
假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。
Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chi nese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。
【英语】 中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)
【英语】中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。
请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)
中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。
你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。
2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。
100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。
【英语】 中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)经典
【英语】中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。
请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【英语】 中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)(word)
【英语】中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。
请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。
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初三英语英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优练习题(及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。
要点如下：（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。
你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。
（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。
他们希望你们实现自己的理想。
他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……注意：（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造｡某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动｡假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受｡提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud提示问题: • What did you achieve by working hard?• What did you do to make it?• How did you f eel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。
所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。
主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？•你是怎么做到的？•你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。
时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。
注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。
写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。
语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。
写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。
句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。
这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。
表示“越……，就越……”的意思。
3．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步入高中的青少年。
在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。
请你以“_______ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。
要点提示:1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；2. 它使你快乐的理由。
要求:1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
_______ makes me happy【答案】One possible version:Reading makes me happyDuring my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy.Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore.Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】【分析】这是一篇话题作文，以“_______ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。