初三英语 英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优练习题(及解析

初三英语英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优练习题(及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……

注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造｡

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动｡假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受｡

提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: • What did you achieve by working hard?

• What did you do to make it?

• How did you f eel about it?

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.