新东方雅思写作讲义

雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing 俞伟国

－2009－

雅思考试作文部分题型

课时安排：

Marking System

Essay Writing

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

Structure Report Writing

(From Mat Clark)

近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6:

15%-20% Band7: <5%

Band8 or above: Rare

Key Language Features in Marking System

Task Response:

1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content

2. Adequate Words

3. Position + Supporting Ideas + Development

Coherence and Cohesion

1.Logical overall structure

2.Topic Sentence

3.Cohesive devices

Lexical Resource

1.Accurateness

2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)

3.Variety

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

1.Accurateness

plex Sentence

3.Variety

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Chapter One－Essay Writing

第一章. 议论文完全攻略

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Part One－Introduction

－闪亮开篇－

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Structure of Introduction

1. Background Information

(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)

(2). Public Opinion

(State your position)

2. Statement1．主体背景（Background Information）

(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for

mankind”. However, some people think it made

______________________________,

when

_______________________________________________________________ _

he time,

the

first

for

_____________________________________________________ that it was a great

step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually

_____________________________________________________

Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(笼统概念－缩小范围)

(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved

fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to

do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to

human health.

Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery.

Nevertheless,

some

people

hold

the

methods

used

may

_______________________________________________________________

_____________________________________

Language Skill: Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）

法方（换转型句－三之法方Paraphrase

1 ）(方法2

)

(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers

should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.

Some people hold the opinion that

_______________________________________________________________

________

_______________________________________________________________

_____________________________________

While

some

argue

that

_______________________________________________________________

__________________

_______________________________________________________________

____________________________________

Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3