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评价
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Writing skills & steps
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Allen Stewart, ① an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate. ② He thinks that it is never too late to learn to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. ③ He got his degree in 1936, later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine. ④ He decided to study law in his eighties, and he received the master’s degree in 2006 , which was his third degree. ⑤ In 2012, he received his fourth degree by networking, who won praise for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. ( By Jackie Yi 2012广东)
• 3. 生日、出生地 (birth/age) • …, (who was) born in …, is a… • 4. 家庭背景（family background） • … was born into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷 的/富裕的家庭 • as a child of … years old, he…还是个……岁的 孩子时 • his/ her father was very strict with him… 父亲 对他//她严格要求 • spend his childhood in …在……度过了他的童 年 • live a happy/hard life生活很幸福/艰苦
影响
成为"感动中国"的人物(Moving China hero).
① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born into a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland.⑤ He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero.
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Related vocabulary
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1. 外貌（appearance/look） good-looking相貌英俊的 funny-looking外表可笑的 ugly-looking丑陋的 ordinary-looking 外貌平平的 white-haired白头发的 near/far-sighted 近/远视的 charming有魅力的 fashionable时尚的 slim 苗条的 fat胖的 lovely 可爱的
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2. 性格气质（character） kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的， bad-tempered 坏脾气的， a strong will很强的意志力， naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的， hard-working/diligent 勤奋的，
•6. 主要事迹（main events） •serve as做……工作 •devote oneself /one’s effort/one’s life to; be devoted to 致力于 •make up one’s mind to do/be determined to do 决心做 •have a gift/talent for / be gifted/talented in 有 ……的天赋
经历
尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 5. 教育背景（schooling / education background） • be admitted to …university考取……大学 • graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 • receive/get a doctor’s degree获取博士学位 • go abroad for further studies 出国深造 • When at college, he majored in French/he was a French major. 读大学时他主修法语
同位语 身份与 生平
尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
省略句
②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age 定语从句 of 3. 状语从句 ③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs.
• 2. 描写外貌：巧用with短语。如： • My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛，留 着长发). • 3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓 语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： • (1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award ( 其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称 号). [定语从句]
• (2)In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录并获 得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth. • [分词短语] • (3)Not only does he show interest in science (他 不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. [倒装句式] • 4. 评估：尽量运用短语。如： • Lei Feng set a good example to us (给我们树立 了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他).
Jay Chou(周杰伦)
分词结构 • ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
Just guess the man Described in the following sentences
Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 7. 成就(achievement) • excellent /outstanding /remarkable出色的 • be good at/ do well in… 擅长 • famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外 著名的 • make great/rapid progress in 在…取得很大/快 速进步 • overcome many difficulties/go through hardship克服困难 • set a good example to为……树立好榜样 • speak highly of… 高度赞扬… • be honoured as…被授予……
Commonly-used sentence patterns
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• 1. 介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文 章简洁。如： • (1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. [同位语] • (2)Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving ( 一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. [同位语] • (3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985(他1985年 出生于美国马里兰州), Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语]
Basic Writing-Character introduction
•作文背诵
请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.
出 生 1923年5月,香港.
经历
1,7岁丧父,家境贫困; 2,1955年后,经营建筑(architecture),航运,石油等,成为 国内外知名人士; 3,改革开放 (the reform and open policy) 以来,先后捐 资支持教育,文化,体育,和福利事业款项达100多亿港元.
ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
评价
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Writing skills & steps
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Allen Stewart, ① an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate. ② He thinks that it is never too late to learn to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. ③ He got his degree in 1936, later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine. ④ He decided to study law in his eighties, and he received the master’s degree in 2006 , which was his third degree. ⑤ In 2012, he received his fourth degree by networking, who won praise for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. ( By Jackie Yi 2012广东)
• 3. 生日、出生地 (birth/age) • …, (who was) born in …, is a… • 4. 家庭背景（family background） • … was born into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷 的/富裕的家庭 • as a child of … years old, he…还是个……岁的 孩子时 • his/ her father was very strict with him… 父亲 对他//她严格要求 • spend his childhood in …在……度过了他的童 年 • live a happy/hard life生活很幸福/艰苦
影响
成为"感动中国"的人物(Moving China hero).
① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born into a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland.⑤ He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero.
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Related vocabulary
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1. 外貌（appearance/look） good-looking相貌英俊的 funny-looking外表可笑的 ugly-looking丑陋的 ordinary-looking 外貌平平的 white-haired白头发的 near/far-sighted 近/远视的 charming有魅力的 fashionable时尚的 slim 苗条的 fat胖的 lovely 可爱的
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2. 性格气质（character） kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的， bad-tempered 坏脾气的， a strong will很强的意志力， naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的， hard-working/diligent 勤奋的，
•6. 主要事迹（main events） •serve as做……工作 •devote oneself /one’s effort/one’s life to; be devoted to 致力于 •make up one’s mind to do/be determined to do 决心做 •have a gift/talent for / be gifted/talented in 有 ……的天赋
经历
尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 5. 教育背景（schooling / education background） • be admitted to …university考取……大学 • graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 • receive/get a doctor’s degree获取博士学位 • go abroad for further studies 出国深造 • When at college, he majored in French/he was a French major. 读大学时他主修法语
同位语 身份与 生平
尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
省略句
②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age 定语从句 of 3. 状语从句 ③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs.
• 2. 描写外貌：巧用with短语。如： • My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛，留 着长发). • 3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓 语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： • (1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award ( 其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称 号). [定语从句]
• (2)In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录并获 得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth. • [分词短语] • (3)Not only does he show interest in science (他 不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. [倒装句式] • 4. 评估：尽量运用短语。如： • Lei Feng set a good example to us (给我们树立 了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他).
Jay Chou(周杰伦)
分词结构 • ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
Just guess the man Described in the following sentences
Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 7. 成就(achievement) • excellent /outstanding /remarkable出色的 • be good at/ do well in… 擅长 • famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外 著名的 • make great/rapid progress in 在…取得很大/快 速进步 • overcome many difficulties/go through hardship克服困难 • set a good example to为……树立好榜样 • speak highly of… 高度赞扬… • be honoured as…被授予……
Commonly-used sentence patterns
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• 1. 介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文 章简洁。如： • (1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. [同位语] • (2)Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving ( 一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. [同位语] • (3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985(他1985年 出生于美国马里兰州), Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语]
Basic Writing-Character introduction
•作文背诵
请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.
出 生 1923年5月,香港.
经历
1,7岁丧父,家境贫困; 2,1955年后,经营建筑(architecture),航运,石油等,成为 国内外知名人士; 3,改革开放 (the reform and open policy) 以来,先后捐 资支持教育,文化,体育,和福利事业款项达100多亿港元.