2020南京高三三模英语作文指导与解读：勇士的理解

冲刺阶段写作文，要在造句上下点功夫，我的经验是：过于复杂的复合句尽可能少一些，因为熟练地驾驭长难句的能力是大部分中学生不具备的，建议用介词短语来代替，即：主干部分+介词短语（in…of短语；by doing; instead of…; rather than…），复合句基本就是一个简单的which…，非谓语动词也就是一个。我认为这些足够了，关键是用词上多锤炼一下，四种修辞：反问句；比喻句；对比句；虚拟句（otherwise, would have done）。至于倒装句和强调句不要太俗套，譬如only in this way can we…这种没啥意思的。

官方范文

A mother explains to her daughter why she leaves home to fight against the virus monsters like ordinary heroes, sparking her ambition to fight like a soldier. (27 words) Personally, heroes refer to people from all walks of life who perform their duties faithfully whatever the situations. They play an irreplaceable role in any critical moment. Dangerous and urgent scenes can bring out their best, such as courage, responsibility and commitment.

Heroes in my heart are my teachers. After the outbreak of the virus, they rise to the challenge of live streaming lectures and grading assignments online. Not only do they have to adapt themselves to the new teaching model but they make enormous sacrifices as well. Besides, serving as the essential role of imparting knowledge to their students, they offer immediate assistance in terms of mental relief and comfort.

To conclude, those who do their own parts whole-heartedly deserve our credit and admiration. (125 words)

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建议大家多记几句马斯克的名言，因为这个人不同于其他名人，最近的火箭发射又成功了，他作为典型的敢于拼搏、创新，还有对人类命运的使命感等优秀品质，可以作为很好的例子：

1. 'If something is important enough, even if the odds are against you, you should still do it.' 如果一件事情对你很重要，即使成功的概率很小，你也应该去做

2. '(Physics is) a good framework for thinking. ... Boil things down to their fundamental truths and reason up from there.' 物理是思想的框架。。。。追索到事情的本质，再从那里思考下去

3. 'The first step is to establish that something is possible; then probability will occur.' 只有首先看到事情的可能性，才会有发生的机会

4. 'It's OK to have your eggs in one basket as long as you control what happens to that basket.' 只要你能左右一颗树的未来，那么你是可以在那棵树上吊死的

5. 'Persistence is very important. You should not give up unless you are forced to give up.' 坚持很重要，永远不要放弃，除非不得已

6. 'You want to have a future where you're expecting things to be better, not one where you're expecting things to be worse.' 每个人都幻想将来会更好，而不是更糟

7. 'It is a mistake to hire huge numbers of people to get a complicated job done. Numbers will never compensate for talent in getting the right answer (two people who don't know something are no better than one), will tend to slow down progress, and will make the task incredibly expensive.' 雇佣许多人去做一件复杂的事，往往是错误的。数量永远不如质量(三个臭皮匠不一定比一个诸葛亮强)，人多降低效率，增加成本。

9. 'If you go back a few hundred years, what we take for granted today would seem like magic –being able to talk to people over long distances, to transmit images, flying, accessing vast amounts of data like an oracle. These are all things that would have been considered magic a few hundred years ago.' 其实我们现在拥有的一切，在几百年前都是不可思议的魔术奇迹

10. 'My biggest mistake is probably weighing too much on someone's talent and not someone's personality. I think it matters whether someone has a good heart.' 我犯下的最大错误是过度看中人的才能而不是人品。我认为拥有一颗善良的心至关重要。

11. 'When I was in college, I wanted to be involved in things that would change the world. Now I am.' 我在大学的时候，一直想参与做能够改变世界的事情。而现在我就在做这样的事情

12. 'I think it's very important to have a feedback loop, where you're constantly thinking about what you've done and how you could be doing it better. I think that's the single best piece of advice: constantly think about how you could be doing things better and questioning